Poem on PriDa scenes today

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Posted: 14 years ago
The PriDa scene today stirred me to write this out.


Kingie and queenie today were fantabulous 😍

First and foremost they both looked gorgeous 😍

Queenie bumped into Kingie and dropped the candle 😲

They looked besotted with each other from any angle. 😍

 

Queenie accidentally set that awful couch on fire 😲

While queenie watched filled with dread 😲

Kingie moved fast to quell the blaze before it spread 😍

Oh what a day, I finally got my heart's desire. 😍

 

No wonder poor confused queenie did not know what to do πŸ˜•

"I will go with you" she said ' an offer he could not refuse

Queenie held the candle while Kingie fixed the fuse 😍

With all his talents Kingie is an electrician too 😍

 

Our queen was busy admiring our king 😍

The lights came on and she did not show any reaction 😍

At our kingie she stood and stared 😍

Her heart in her eyes, her soul completely bared. 😍

 

Kingie blew out the candle naughtily ☺️

Watching our queen gaze at him merrily πŸ˜‰

That chaloo guy knew the effect he had on her πŸ˜‰

Poor queenie, she tried to hide it, oh why did she even bother πŸ˜†



Back into the bedroom they went

Kingie could not sleep on the couch queenie burnt

So he offered to sleep in the hall instead

Queenie would have none of that and

Invited him back into the bed instead. β˜ΊοΈ ☺️ ☺️

 

Queenie awakens to bright sunlight

Kingie is slumbering away holding her tight ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Kingie was holding her around the waist ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

She pulls away carefully and runs to the washroom in haste. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

 

In the washroom she analyzes the situation

" I love him but I don't have time to answer a question"

She forgets her towel and steps outside

She runs into kingie who hits her blindside. πŸ˜‰

 

His love for her he does confess 😍

We love each other he does profess 😍

"Why are we still living apart

I cannot stay away from you anymore"

He says, god this guy is smart. 😍

 

He touches her and caresses her face ☺️☺️☺️

Queenie stands frozen in place ☺️☺️☺️

It looked like he had a kiss in mind ☺️☺️☺️

And this time not the "forehead" kind ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

 

Until they got interrupted by that insect venomous 😑

Oh my god why does that creature have to be so cantankerous 😑

Just  imagine if she had walked in on them when they were kissing 🀣

That mausi person by now would surely have gone missing 🀣

If she had lived to tell the tale that this 🀣

You think she would have survived that, please 🀣


Why do we PriDaholics have to be the ones to suffer 😭

If you disagree, I beg to differ

We have been patient all along 😳

We don't mind waiting a little more long 😳

We are hoping for a treat soon 😳

A treat that would have us over the moon

Valentine's day is coming in a couple of weeks πŸ˜‰

Could you please, pretty please fulfill our PriDa dreams. 😳

              ~ Jhanavi


Sorry for the ramble πŸ˜•

Could not stop myself 😳

Jhan πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 14 years ago
Jhan ( am taking the liberty of calling you Jhan if you don't mind),
 
You are Awesome. Everytime I read your posts, I am amazed. You are Phenomenal - truckloads of talent girl.πŸ‘ πŸ‘
 
That was Fantastic. The poem so captured everything - the Prida scene update and how most of us felt. And all this in verse !!!!!!
 
Thank You for a Great Great Great Post.
 
Still in Prida land. And thank YOU for helping me stay there for a li'll longer 😳 πŸ˜³
 
- Jakhushi.
 
 
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Posted: 14 years ago
Jhan...πŸ€—....that was freaking gorjus girl...πŸ‘πŸΌ...even thou I aint a PriDa fan I loved them today...❀️....they were really good BUT ur poem was better babes...πŸ€—....totally rhymed and was awesome....😳....

fantabulous...
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey jhan ...............this poem was cute, simple yet adorable................loved itπŸ€—
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Posted: 14 years ago
Jhan, πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—!! That's for u for making me relive the PriDa moments again!! I tell u girl those scenes were like a dream come true-i ignored the whole epi and just watched those scenes, will watch the rest later!!! loved ur line about Prithvi being an electrician too!!! I know that Mausi interrupted at the wrong moment, well at least they had the door closed this time!! Imagine if they had kissed and Mausi saw, her reaction would be similar to the one in ur Joru ka Ghulam FF, w/ the kanta ben music in the back πŸ˜† 🀣!!! If only, but at least we got our "almost kiss" na πŸ˜‰!!! K me back to gushing and having my goofy smile!! PriDaland time!!! 😍 😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
very good jhaan.

i cud totally imagine all the scenes again.
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey jhan.......that was marvelous dear⭐️⭐️⭐️...u described the whole prida scene in this poem😍😍😍....that was awesomeπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘.....i simply loved itπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ....thanks for the wonderful poemπŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Jhan...et tu..
 
yep i could not help myself today too..
 
πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 14 years ago
jhan yaarrrrrrr tooo good......lovely poem

we had damsel saying darasal this time.... it seems tat pri's ways are rubbing off damz [offo itnni jaldh he sangat ka assar]☺️


this mausi is the limit......how can someone b so eeeoooo...disgusting

but its not at all there fault...i blame u πŸ˜‰ ...u gave them the idea...tat 
"prida ❀️was sharing an intimate ☺️scene n mausi has to tapkofii"😑....jus kiddin

they CUT-COPY-PASTED ur ff dear
jhan this time write a hottt-intimate-sensuous scens so tat we can get the sameπŸ˜‰




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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome dawesome Jhaan!!!πŸ‘....hayye that almost kiss made me heart stop....sheesh only if they got more closer before the knock!!..😍....but yea i will wait patiently for something more Bg!!