Poem-Advice for us,Prithvi, Damini, CVs/StarOne/PH

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Posted: 14 years ago
Damini
Girl I want you to quit apologizing
I am sick and tired of you doing
that day in and day out
your character is in danger of obliteration
it is being damaged beyond recognition
You were bold and sassy
demanding and bossy
what we see is a shadow of your former self
come on girl please be yourself
lose the long sleeved blouses and the sarees
get into some jeans 😉
get on toofan and ride like the wind
this ban to do that you must rescind
While you are at it, bring out many a bottle 😉
Shoot them down riding in the saddle 😉

i loved it when you were  tripping all over the place
those were the days when that used to be the case
your hubby will not let you fall
once you are in his arms, the rest is up to y'all 😉

that old woman is a snake in the grass
her boy is uncouth and crass
that girl is just plain bad news
This is all information you can really use
Give up trying to stop them when they leave
How long in their goodness will you believe
Kick them out and lock the door 👍🏼
peace and harmony in GM this will restore. 😳
                    ~Jhanavi



Prithvi
Kingie Kingie what happened to thou
when will god wisdom on thee bestow
you consider those instruders your family
then who the heck is Damini to you exactly
how can you be so blind and stupid
your actions make all of us livid
i always thought Damini was lucky to have you
now I wonder what that poor dear did to deserve you
wake up and smell the coffee beans
figure out what your marriage to you means
I always figured you were clever
You have been succesfully turned you into a loser
take off the blinkers and open your eyes
you have married a woman who is very wise
listen to her, pay her heed
else you will lose everything indeed
dude, those relatives of yours are evil
that aunt of yours is in league with the devil
that cousin of your is a lecherous creep
whose designs on your wife run really deep
that girl they dragged with them is also mad
she wants your brother Sameer real bad
Save your real family before it comes to harm
Do not fall for the intruders' charm
otherwise you will pay a heavy price
in your effort to be kind and nice
kick them out, this opportunity you must seize
Therein lies the road to happiness and peace 😳
              ~Jhanavi



CVs/Star One/PH
The advice that Prithvi and Damini received
was with you in mind actually conceived
you are ruining their characters beyond repair
thinking of this I fall into a pit of despair
Your intention was to give the TRPs a boost
Instead the chickens will now come home to roost
Forget the ifs and buts
This track is driving us nuts
in an effort to new viewers gather
lose us loyal viewers would you rather
these 3 intruders are getting on our nerves
could you please give this track the closure it deserves
As if we did not have enough troubles
we now have to deal with body doubles
morale is running low and patience is wearing thin
to watch the show we need to find strength from within
there was a time when we rued that time flew too fast
now we wonder how much longer the episode will last
bring back the LNMDJ magic and charm
you need to apply some soothing balm
to the wounds that you have on viewers inflicted
so much so that many of us are really conflicted
show us some nice PriDa, Savni and Varni scenes
all six bonding will be a pleasure indeed
we need the couples to spend some quality time together
but they must also spend time with just each other
Please remember this and keep this in mind
or else there are no diehard fans, you will find
it will be a sad day indeed, if that becomes a fact.
Let us make sure it does not come to that
we know our demands are not hard to meet
could you kindly make an effort to complete
this request of ours for all our sakes
and then whatever turns LNMDJ takes
we will definitely stick with you
like a combination of fevicol, quickfix and glue

             ~Jhanavi



Plea to all LNMDJians
I know this track is not what we want
We don't even know how long this will last
But we have to stay committed to the show
I am sure the dark clouds that hang low
will part to reveal sunshine bright
we just have to hold on for the duration
of this track with all our might
I know that we are all tired of this track already
but come on let us hold steady
support each other through this all
just like we did each time before if you recall
they will heed out cries for sure
we just have to be patient a little more.

    ~ Jhanavi

Thank you for being kind enough to listen to my rant
Sorry if I bored you, but I had to get it out
I apologize for making you read 4 long poems at once.
Please feel free to add in your comments and get all the angst out 😳
Jhan 😃





 

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Rach. thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
 
Loved the poems Jhan ! I seriously wonder how do you even come up with  such PUR-FECT rhyme schemes in all your poems !
 
 
Lovely work ..... some one go and show this to the actors and tell them how much we religiously follow lnmdj and hate to see it moving in a different dimension!
 
Nevertheless, fab post Jhan !
 
Yeh track rahe na rahe par tere poems ki factory kabhi bandh nahin hogi ! 👍🏼
 
 
Rach 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Jhaaan...🤗

I am so glad  you went ahead and wrote this...🤗

word to everything you have said..👏.

i am waiting waiting waiting waiting for my PriDa... not the one on screen right now...Damz apologizing all over, Pri putting his mausi over her... god...😡

there used to be a time when i used to wait for monday desparately...no more...patience is wearing thin.. in fact hanging by a thread....

I want my PriDa back... intense not the gharelu kind...

-- Mru
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Posted: 14 years ago
Excellent poems Jhan, our rhyme Queen!!! Loved all three!! i want my PriDa scenes back with PriDa maintaining their original characters, and this PTC clan had gotta disappear asap!! totally with u with that one about the epis not being enough and now can't even bare them with the PTC around, i haven't even watched Mon epi yet--and this is coming from the girl who would watch it as soon as it was up on YT!! Hope the CVs don't disappoint us further and give us the good old LNMDJ days back with some awesome PriDa scenes!! Thanks for another great poem-trific post Jhan!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
u r jus *Talent Unlimited*
wot a set of rhymes. 👍🏼
one need not see da episodes...
however can understand da jist jus by reading ur post.
register urself @ www.FactualPoem.com/awesomeness

skorpion 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Cant agree more Jhan!! CVs do read her poem & spare us with the horrors of the current track!


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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome post Jhan!!!!! honestly.. i havent even watched yesterday's episode!!!! the witten update was enough for me! what exactly are the CVs playing at! showing prithvi as spineless and damini as the ever humble bahu... who's only job is to consent to the wishes of darling mausi and say sorry! this is not prida! CVs listen up.. this track is not working! it was bad news from the start! we are the fans..! we know what we fell in love with, and this BT stuff is most certainly not what the essence of the show was! its high time you accepted that and put some serious effort to get the show back on track!
 
Love,
Maham
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Posted: 14 years ago
Jhanvi, it amazes me as to how do you it every time..👏👏👏 ..Love u for this ......that was beautifully weaved....
 
Just amazing.....all the three of 'em.....simple thoughts... beautifully essayed....and brilliantly rhymed...
 
⭐️
 
That was the VOICE of die hard LNMDJ fans....Prida fans....
now if there is a different set of people with different expectations....
....never the twain shall meet.😭
 
CVs please listen to the VOICE .....Prida is just nor Prida anymore.....
Give us back our show
Give us back our Prida....Savni and Varni...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Liv2laugh -
 
WOWW!!!!! You are sooooooo Talented. 👏 👏 👏👏
Lovely poems which captures exactly what we feel. That was so cool.
 
I hope for all the dejected fans, somebody who can do something reads this and decides to do something about it. I am sure once they read this, they are bound to be inspired 😃 - I have full faith in the talent that you have just exhibited.
 
-Jakhushi.
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Posted: 14 years ago
really a wonderful post hope the cvs read it n realise