Humrazz PART 3 PAGE 5 new update

hello friends
i m here wid prithvi sanyo ff
hope u all like it
Edited by nitali - 14 years ago

character sketch


Prithviraj Raichand

25 years old , young, handsome , intelligent, sabhi ladkiya inpe mari hai , a successful business man.

Parvati Raichand

50 years old mother of prithvi , sweet , smart , supporter of truth , very caring and a lovely mother and wife

Rajvardhan Raichand

 55 yrs old , husband of Parvati and father of Prithvi
very strict but a loving father and a caring husband
inhe gussa bhaut aata hai lekin inke gusse mai inka pyaar bhe chupa hai .
inke ilava he is fun loving , enjoys every moment of life
and he cannot trust any 1 easily

Suhani Raichand

20 years old , doing her bcom second year , naughty , loves her family and friends specially her brother prithvi and love troubling him a lot

Rajesh Raichand

Rajvardhan's brother . 4 years younger to him
understanding , sweet naughty , bacho k sath bache ban jate hai ,

Romella Raichand

Rajesh Raichand's wife , unpredictable , at times good but even bad
aaj tak koi inhe samaj nahi paya even her husband

Varun Raichand

21 yrs old , super naughty , inn janab ne Suhani ko aapni hawa laga dii . ye inn he k waghe se Suhani itnee shetan hai , ye aaur Suhani jab sheetaniya karte hai tab aache aacho ki chutti kar dete hai

Daddu

86 years old , Raichand empire k malik . 3 years ago his wife died since then every 1 take care of him bcoz after his wife's death he got a  siver heart attack and was on d death bed but becoz d prayers he was saved
hei s d sweetest member of d family and shatniya karna inhe se sekha hai Suhania nd Varun ne



Edited by nitali - 14 years ago

HUMRAZZ PART 1

At the Raichand's office

1 Man " Tall ,handsome ,smart" Apne cabin se bhar nikla uske sath uski assistant bhar niklee , catching 2 files. He instruct her something and now moving towards d staircase . We can here noise of his boots "Tak tak tak tak" . then suddenly his cell rings " SHARBATEE SAPNO MAI AAP HAI...MAKHMALI NEENDOO MAI AAP HAI...AAPKA EHASAS HAI...KOOB HAI AAUR KHAS HAI " . Inke hat phele apne cort k pocket mai jate hai then in d left pocket and den to d right .now he finds his mob kept in his right pocket of his pants. . inhonne apna cell liya which was ringing " SHARBATEE SAPNO MAI AAP HAI...MAKHMALI NEENDOO MAI AAP HAI...AAPKA EHASAS HAI...KOOB HAI AAUR KHAS HAI "  and attendedn d call
samne se eek sweet innocent voice ne bola " prithvi
Now we can c his face

[ Prithviraj Raichannd son of parvati and rajvardhan raichand]
While start talking on d phone he climbs down d staircase
Prithvi - hey my jaan bolo kya hua?
girl- PRITHVI !! meri samaj mai nahi ata ki mai sirf thumara name leti hu and aap hume phechan lete hai!!!
Kaise???!!!
Prithvi-Jaise tum mughe phechan leti ho mere name na bolne par bhee.
Girl blushes and now we can c her red smiling lips

Girl -prithvi tum bhee na
Prithvi smiling like a swet inocent child
Prithvi- bolo phone kyoon kiya ? koi prob hai kya ? kuch hua to nahi?
Girl - arre !!! baas baas baas itnee questions eek sath!! ??? itnee questions eek sath poochoge to mai javab kaise  karongi???
so 1st of all hume kuch nahi hua and koi prob nahi hai so dont worry
-Prithvi- to phone kyoon kiya?
Girl- phone kyoonkiya matlab..mai thume ..sorry aapko phone nahi kar satki kya ???
Prithvi- nahi nahimaine ye kab kaha ki phone mat karo. mai to ye kehe raha hu ki ..
girl- ki...
prithvo-jabhi aapka dil mughe yad kare to.....
tooo ... ( PRITHVI THINKING WHAT TO SAY)
Girl- atak gaiye na.. :D :D
(PRITHVI WHILE TALKING CAME OUT AND WENT TOWARDS HIS CAR AND NOW HE IS DRIVING )
Prithvi- Jee nahi ...to mai kya kehe raha tha ki...
Girl- Ki...
Prithvi-KI ....agar uss dil ko meri yaad sataiye to apni aakhe band kar k hume yaad kar lena , hum apke samne hazir ho jaiyange and ye hmara wada hai aapse...
GIRL QUIETLY LISNING TO HIM AND BLUSHING
 Prithvi-kya hua chup kyoon ho ?
Girl- bas aise hee..
Prithvi- bas aise he matlab?
Girl - matlab ....hum aapkee bato mai kho gaiye...
den d girl said
waise prithvi kar aa rahe ho i m missing u
Prithvi- madam miss usse kiya jata hai jo aapke paas na ho lekin hum to aap he k hai and humesha aapke sath hai
girl - (again blushing but this time tribally ) now while talking to prithvi some bad incidents switch in her mind which makes her quite
(PRITHVI NOW REACHED HALF WAY TO HIS HOME)
Prithvi - Kya hua phir se chup kyoon ho ?
Girl - ( ALMOST GETS A MILD SUDDEN SHOCK AND ANSWERS )  NA NA NAHI.. WO K .. K ..KUCH NAHI ... WA WA WO..MA .. MA .. MAI BHAS A.. A .. AISE HE... ....( THIS GIRL WHOM HE IS TALKING TO HAD A PROBLEM WHENEVER SHE SAD OR SOME OR IF SUDDENLY SOME BAD INCIDENT YAD AAYA YE HAKLANEE LAGTI THEE..)
Prithvi - kya hua jaan bolo
Girl -K.. K..Ku..Kuu... Kuch Nahi .P P.. Pre..Pri.. Prithvi a..aaur Ki.Ki. Kitna Time Lagaga ta ..ta.. thume...
Prithvi- Bas 5 min
Girl- "jaldi"
prithvi smilingly said mai aa raha hu
Girl to prithvi again- prithv
Prithvi - Yup
Girl - MUAHHH!!!!!!!
PRITHVI SHOCKED ON HER REACTION AND NOW HE SPEED UP HIS CAR AND CHANGED HIS PATH AND DRIVING VERY FAST
GIRL NE PHIR KAHA
" PRITHVI !! ( IRRITATINGLY) TUM BHE KAMAL KARTE HOO
PRITHVI - SUDDENLY TUME KYA HUA
GIRL- MAINE THUME KITNE BAR KAHA HAI KI CAR KO HIGH SPEED MAI MAT CHALAO AGAR THUME KUCH HO GAYA TO.THUME PATA HAI NA THUME KUCH HO JAYAGA TO HUM ...HUM MAR JAIYANGE... :( :( :(
PRITHVI - SHHHH... AISE BATIYE NAHI KARTE... MUGHE KUC NAHI HOGA .. TUM JO HO MERE SATH....AND THUME KUCH HO JAYE YA MUGHE KUCH HO JAIYE YE TO KHUDA KO BHE MANZOOK NAHI HOGA....
( PRITHVI NE JO TURN LIVA THA WO USKE GHAR JANE KA SHORT CUT THA SO HE REACHED HOME EARLY.HE PARKED HIS CAR AND HEAD INSIDE D HOUSE)
GIRL AFTER LISTNING TO HIM SHE SMILED AND SAID
"OK PRITHVI TUM SAMBHAL KAR AANA MAI PHONE RAKTHI HU.
 HA EEK AAUR BAAT HUM KHEHNA BHOOL GAIYE THA....[glow=red,2,300]I LOVE U[/glow] "
PRITHVI WAS ABOUT TO SAY SOME THING KI PHONE BAND HO GAYA.
DEN PRITHVI SMILED NAUGHTY AND ENTER D HOUSE.Edited by nitali - 14 years ago

sounds nyc

hey its gud keep updating n pm us wen u ud it okis

superb wonderful update.

Originally posted by: gunjankapoor

sounds nyc

 

character sketch is gud

 

starting is gud..do continue n pm me!!

 

thanks gunjan
and shure y not i will pm u whenever 1 will update d parts

Originally posted by: khushi909

hey its gud keep updating n pm us wen u ud it okis

shure khushi i will pm u whenever i will update d parts
and thanks for liking it

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

superb wonderful update.

loved the intro, character sketches ,part1.

It's very interesting.

loved conversation between prithvi and that girl.

I guess that girl is sanyogita.

hey tumne aise place mein aake end kyuon kia, now continue soon.

thanks for lovely update.

thank u rakhi je............
may b u r right...
thanks for loving d convo je....
hehe😉 ......yes je offcoz i will continue je....so if u want to know dat place more , stay tuned ...coz i 'll brb with update 2 soon................

Originally posted by: nitali

thank u rakhi je............
may b u r right...
thanks for loving d convo je....
hehe😉 ......yes je offcoz i will continue je....so if u want to know dat place more , stay tuned ...coz i 'll brb with update 2 soon................