FF:Ajab Heer ki Gazab Kahaani (C12-P68) aug 21

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hello Everyone..
How are you?
I hope all of you're having good time..
Ok getting to the point..


Here's a new FF titled as

AJAB HEER KI GAZAB KAHAANI

This FF will be on Premeer and Meet.....
Hoping you'll support us with this..
b/w i didn't see apkgk yet so this one's not based on that definetly....

Briefing shortly... Lalit and Balraaj are childhood friends. After his marriage Lalit moves to Canada while Balraj settles in Delhi. Lalit and Balraj talk over the phone everyday updating each other about their daily activities. Lalit decides to move back to India and informs Balraj about that. Balraj feels happy and tells him to come soon. Lalit informs his family about his decision and finally make preparations to go back to his motherland..

Characters

Prem Juneja


Heer Mann





Preet



Meher Mann


Karan Mehra




INDEX

CHAPTER1- PG1
CHAPTER2- PG5
CHAPTER3- PG9
CHAPTER4- PG15
CHAPTER5- PG22
CHAPTER6- PG27
CHAPTER7- PG37
CHAPTER8- PG44
CHAPTER9- PG49
CHAPTER10-PG56
CHAPTER11-PG62
CHAPTER12- PG68
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Posted: 14 years ago
hiii guyss....😊
herez the first part..
today me and kavya were discussing abt r ffs and suddenly this one came to r mind...
hope u all will like it..😊


CHAPTER-1


----Canada----
JUNEJA MANSHION---


Prem: arre preet jaldi kar kitna waqt lagayega..


Gayatri: Pata nahi kya kar raha hai itni der se upar. Hum late ho rahe hain..


Lalit:patha nahi kab sudherega yeh ladka..


Prem: Bauji aap yeh kya kehrahe hain??? Preet sunega toh kitna bura lagega usse kabhi time pe aaya hai kya jo aaj aayega. Bauji mere khayal se hume dusari flight pakad ni chahiye India jaane keliye ya phir usse yaheen chod kar hume chalejana chahiye warna
aaj toh flight jaroor miss ho jayega.

 

Preet enters from behind.

Preet: Prem bhaiya aapko meri itni taarif karne ki jaroorat nahi hai lo mein aagaya.waise aap hamesha mere peche hi kyun padte hai...


Prem: Kyun ki woh ladka jo sabko pareshan karta hai usse chedne main mujhe bahut mazaa aata hai.

Prem gives him a wild smile...


Lalit hits Preet on his head saying
Lalit: Itni der kya kar raha hai tu??


Preet: Bauji packing kar raha hoon aur kya. Aapne ek hafte pehle bataya ki hum India jaa rahe hai hamesha keliye..aur ek hafta mein sari packing kaise karlete...matlab kar sakta hoon lekin meri kitni appointments fix hogaye the.. aur mein unhe cancel kaise kar sakta hoon...isliye aapko mujhe ek mahine pehle bata dena chahiye tha..agli baar kahi jaane ki program banana ho tho ek mahine pehle mujhe batayiye ga warna mein nahi aapaonga..


Lalit: Haan tu toh bada collector hai aur teri appointments...........


Prem: Preet shayad mein ne tumhe kal raat pub ke bahar dekha tha.. tum kisi ladki ke saath..woh teri secretary hai kya????


Prem is all smiling as he knows what his bauji will do now. Preet gives an annoying look to prem.


Lalit: Toh yeh hai tumhari jaroori kaam. Lalit hits preeet continuously on his head... Preet stops him


Prem: Bauji hum late ho rahe hain flight miss ho jaayega..


Lalit: haa haa...is nalayak ke chakar mein padkar mein flight ke bare bhool hi gaya..chalo sab...
Preet grabs Prem's arm and says.

 

Preet: PB aap humesha dad ke samne mere raaz kyun kolte hai...app ki waje se dad humesha mujhe dante hai..


Prem(smiling): Preet mein ne kaha na tujhe chedne mein mujhe bahut mazaa aata hai..

 

Preet: Itne hasiye mat mujhe bhi ek na ek din chance zaroor milega aapko chedne keliye uss din main bhi aapko bataonga Preet Juneja kya hai...


Prem: Sapne dekhana achi baat nahin hoti Preet

Prem leaves from there and sits in the car.

 

Lalit: Ooyeee....aakar gadi mein baitega yaa nahi. Pehle se hi itna der kar diya ab din mein hi sapne dekh raha hai wahaan kada rehkar nalayak...

 

Preet:aa raha hoon bauji...

Even though prem teases Preet, he loves him a lot. He is the younger one in the family prem's 'pyaraa bhai'. Same with preet he loves his PB so much they share a great bonding though lalit scolds preet all the time he too loves him a lot. For lalit and gayatri their two sons are like their two eyes.The flight landed on time....

Lalit searches for his childhood friend Balraj Maan. Lalit can do anything for his friend's sake same is the case with Balraj. Balraj is a successful business man in India. He has two daughters' heer and meher.Heer is the elder one. Both of them also share a good bonding as prem and preet and they also tease each other. Lalit finally sees balraj and started shouting..


Lalit: Ballu....ballu..


Preet whispering to prem...


Preet:yeh bauji achanak mere jaise kyun behave kar rahe hai???


Prem is smiling at preet's comparision for bauji to himself. Lalit goes to Balraj shouting his name. Both of them hug each other.


Lalit: Kaisa hai tu??


Balraj: Mein teek hoon.,,tu kaisa hai??aur bhabhi ji kahaan hai..

Gayatri: Mein yaheen hoon bhai saab


Preet goes to Lalit and asks him
Preet: Bauji aaj aap achanak mere jaisa kaise ban gaye..


Lalit: kyaaa???


Preet: Woh aaj aapne poore airport mein shor machadiya na "ballu ballu" kehke..usually shor machana toh mera kaam hai..


Lalit understood that his son is teasing him.

 

Lalit:chupkar..ballu yeh hai mere nalayak beta preet..


Preet says hello to his dad's friend.


Balraj:aur prem kaha hai???


Gayatri: Pata nahi abhi tak toh yaheen tha...

Preet: Lo PB aagayein


Lalit: Prem kaha hai tu??


Prem: Bauji mein luggage check karne gaya tha..aap busy the na apne porane dost se milkar..


Lalit: Haan mein Balraj ko itne salon baad mil raha hoon toh sab kuch bhool gaya..
ballu yeh mera bada beta Prem. Prem touches balraj's feet and takes his blessings...
Lalit turns to preet

Lalit: Seek apne bhai se kuch.


Preet: Bauji agar mein bhi prem bhaiya ki tarah ban gaya na toh aapko tang kaun karega...


Everyone laughs and Lalit starts hitting preet.


Balraj: Arre lallu ab bas bhi kar. Kyun bachare ko bevajah maar rahe ho.


Preet: Aaise kahiye uncle..


Lalit: Preet tu...


Balraj cuts lalit saying..


Balraj: Arree lallu yeh meri beti Meher..


Meher: Namaste uncle...


Balraj: Meher yeh....


Meher: Papa mujhe pata hai yeh gayatri aunty haina...namaste aunty...kaisi hai aap??


Gayatri: Mein teek hoon beta...


Preet slowly says to prem...

Preet: PBshayad yeh bhi mere type ki hai.uske dad ki poori baat nahi sunti..


Preet and Prem laugh. Preet is happy as finally he found someone who is just like him.
Meanwhile Balraj introduces Meher to Prem. They both say 'hello' to each other. Balraj turns to Preet to introduce Meher to him...


Balraj: Meher yeh...


Preet: Uncle agar aap boora na mane toh mein apna introduction khud dena chahta hoon...


Balraj says yes..


Preet: Hello meher i'm preet aur...


Lalit: Aur yeh duniya ka number one nalayak hai...


Meher: Haan uncle aapne bataya tha na mujhe yaad hai...


Preet gives a shocking look to Meher as he didn't get such a response till now whenever he introduces himself to a girl.Meanwhile everyone is laughing at Preet while he gives an angry look to everyone.


Balraj: Meher Preet se maafi maango tumhe aise nahi kehna chahiye tha..


Preet gives a victorious smile as if he has won an Olympic medal...

 

Lalit: Meher kyun maafi maange usne aise kya kehdiya...aur tu yeh sab chod aur yeh bata ki heer beti kaha hai??


Balraj: woh uski dost ki shaadi ke liye gaayi hai ek haphte mein aa jayegi...


Lalit: Tumne usse bataya tha na hum aane wale hai..


Balraj: Lallu batane ka mauka nahi mila...wahaan woh itni busy hai phone par bhi teek se baat nahi ho pa rahi hai...

Lalit: Acha...koi baat nahi..


Meanwhile prem and preet are talking about meher.


Prem: Tujhe ek baat bataon preet....yeh jo meher haina woh teri type ki nahin balki meri type ki hai...usse bhi meri tarah tujhe tang karna pasand hai...


Preet frowns at Prem and Prem starts laughing looking at Preet.

Preet: Yaheen sari baatein karenge ya ghar jaane ka koi iraada bhi hai??? Mujhe bohut bhook lagi hai...


Balraj: Haan chalo sabhi..


While going out Meher says sorry to Preet and both of them become friends...
Prem helps the driver to put luggage in the car while Preet and Meher are busy chatting...
Prem, Preet and Meher are coming in one car while Balraj, Lalit and Gayatri in another.
Prem is sitting in the front seat while Preet and Meher occupied the back seats. They are busy chatting with each other all along the way. Both of them were happy to find the other similar person. All of them finally reach home.

plzz leave ur comments...
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Posted: 14 years ago
HEY GREAT part please continue i cant wait till prem and heer meetand thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey
Great Nice update
thankz for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome loved it cant wait till you update continue asap thanks for the pm me
Posted: 14 years ago
wow........another FF...........first chapter was awesomeeeeee......⭐️.........👏.........can't wait for the next part.............😃.........
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Posted: 14 years ago
great story

cant wait 2 read more



thanx 4 the pm


update soon



KAmal
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey,

 
 that was nice! loved the first part!! update soon!!!!!!!!!
 
       -Luv Pari
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey really nice ff plzz keep it up and update soon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago

hey really nice ff keep it up and update soon and thx for the PM