Things I hate about Damini - Pri's pov

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Posted: 14 years ago

There're so many things I hate about you

I can't possibly list them all.

You're fiery and impulsive, and

you just drive me up the wall.

 

I hate it when you get perverse,

When you yell till your throat is sore.

I hate your insulting tone, it's true,

But I hate your tears more.

 
I hate it when you say you need no help

I hate that you're so headstrong

I hate when you don't act like a girl

I hate it when you prove me wrong.


I like nothing about you

You aren't sweet or shy or kind

You're not the girl I wanted

Yet I can't get you out of my mind

 

I hate your eyes, your smile

Hate your pretty hair

I hate that look on your face

that says you really care

 

I hate that there are boundaries,

That we are not to cross.

I hate that you've become

my anchor in this chaos.

 

I've seen how much it affects you

when I suddenly pull away.

I hate myself for hurting you

But it's just better this way... 

 

I can't afford to fall for you

But I have, and that's my curse

Now I have to get away

Before things get any worse.

 

There will come a time, very soon,

When you'll know I've been untrue. 

But when you mourn your broken heart,

know that mine's broken too...

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This is for everybody who wanted a poem from Prithvi's point of view... Thanks for liking the other one, ppl. Love y'all!
 
Sorry for the atrocious rhyming. Will try to write a more intense poem next time...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Atrocious?

In which world?!

This is beautiful!!! There was a previous one? Oh no.. I missed it... Whats the name i want to read that one too!!

OMG. I cant get over how lovely this is... I love poetry.. And this is gorgeous.. BRILLIANT! 👏

 
--molii<33--
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sugar.n.spice14

Atrocious?

In which world?!

This is beautiful!!! There was a previous one? Oh no.. I missed it... Whats the name i want to read that one too!!

OMG. I cant get over how lovely this is... I love poetry.. And this is gorgeous.. BRILLIANT! 👏

 
--molii<33--

 
Awww.... thanks so much! 🤗
 
I don't generally write poetry, which is why I'm so doubtful about this...
 
The first one is called 'Things I hate about Prithvi'. It's from Dams pov...
 
Thanks for replying!
 
 
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Posted: 14 years ago
it was superb diya ....👏 keep it up .......👍🏼 i juss luved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
@ bugger
 
I'm so glad you liked it!!!
Thanks a lot...
 
p.s. May I call you bugs?
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: diya86

@ bugger

 
I'm so glad you liked it!!!
Thanks a lot...
 
p.s. May I call you bugs?

 
ohhh ....i wud like if u call me bugs .......everyone here call me tht only 😆😆😆...bugger seems wierd i know ....😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: diya86


[P ALIGN=CENTER]There will come a time, very soon,


When you'll know I've been untrue.


But when you mourn your broken heart,


know that mine's broken too...




Brilliant!

" know that's mine broken too" (my fav) can be interpreted in several ways. Curious to know what you intended to mean when you wrote it down? (thoughts that came to my mind--> a.your heart's mine and therefore in a way your broken heart is my broken heart b. mine will break because yours is broken c. mine will break because I've let you down d. all of the above e.erm . . .           I am clearly losing it!I'll stop now) 😳 Edited by doop4 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: doop4

" know that's mine broken too" (my fav) can be interpreted in several ways. Curious to know what you intended to mean when you wrote it down? (thoughts that came to my mind--> a.your heart's mine and therefore in a way your broken heart is my broken heart b. mine will break because yours is broken c. mine will break because I've let you down d. all of the above e.erm . . .           I am clearly losing it!I'll stop now) 😳

  
It was supposed to have all those connotations... I'm so glad you got it!!! Pri's not only guilty he'll cause her heartbreak, but he'll feel her pain and that will break his heart too...
 
@ losing it - Don't worry, you're perfectly fine. Just a little PriDa-obsessed like me...😉
 
Thanks for replying!
Edited by diya86 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Diya, it was dope, raw dope..And it was like a ruby at it's most beautiful..
Could imagine Prithvi thinking all those things about Damz..

Atrocious, atrocious, atrocious? 😲 Your rhyming is fine, pal..And some poem, that..I feel embarrassed when people are kind enough to call my ramblings poems, because I can't rhyme to save my life..😳 But this was quite a poem..⭐️

Keep up the wonderful work..Can relate to everything that comes out of your mouth, or rather keyboard..:-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
diya..... it was brilliant...it was so⭐️
i could visualise pri going thru that in his mind.... ahhhhh..
fab girl🤗