4th August Written Update - Rishta for Hiten

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey guys, its me again doing today's update, sorry for the delay again my comp is being really slow.
 
Brief update
    Hiten is searching for Khemi, they cross paths but Hiten doesn't see her.
    Taru tries to throw a girl out of their house Toral but she is a family friend's daughter who had come to invite them for a party DM wants Toral and Hiten's rishta Taru is nice to Champkali in a way DM goes to the village to invite Santo to the party. Nanaji tells Santo to return before DM knows about the divorce Khemi sees Hiten and goes from the Dhaba Kanji takes Khemi to his house.
  • Kaddu finds out that Duggu and Santo knew each other before her Rishta with him from Monghi.

 

Detailed update

Hiten is searching for Khemi, going upto people with her photo. He asks for tea at a dhaba. Khemi is at the place where Hiten is looking for her. Hiten turns and looks in the direction of Khemi but doesn't spot her as a cyclist drives past and Hiten walks away. Khemi goes to the Dhaba and asks for a job, when a women asks her where has she come from.

Khemi: From a village near by. I don't want to get paid but I just want two meals and a place to stay, that will be enough, will I get the job.

 

Taru is on the swing: Chote Log (again) their job is to annoy us bar log as if its in their blood. All these Wagela's (Santo, Khemi and Kanji) they have all ruined my sleep.

She stops some girl

Taru: Oi where are you going?

Girl: Wo me me..

Taru: What's with the me me me' Is this your relatives house? Is this a place of charity for you chote log? You just keep on coming, now leave

Girl: but'

Taru: We gave our charity a few days a go now leave.

She pushes the girl out.

DM: Motiben, who are you getting mad at?

Taru: Nothing, just chote log, I will deal with it, no idea where they come from, these beggers.

Girl: Chill Taru aunty chill, its me I knew you all won't recognise me but I know you all I have heard a lot about you from papa, sorry uncle to just butt in like this but I came straight from rehearsal that's why I am in these clothes. Actually I am here to invite you all for my papa's birthday. Don't you recognise me, its Toral Somal Bhai's daughter.

DM and Taru shocked

Taru: Toral, Somal Bhai ki ladke, I didn't recognise you in these clothes. I am always with these chote log, these beggers keep on coming.

Toral: Its ok, fai's are like these even my one if she likes someone she likes them, and those she doesn't like she doesn't spare them. Anyways the party is a surprise so all of you lot have to be at shiv resort by 7. ok? And no excuses you will all have to come! Ok?

DM: We will all come. But stay have tea and food.

Toral: No, I can't I have to sort out stuff for tonight and invite other people. Some other time.

She takes Ashiward from DM and Taru and leaves.

DM: In the future be more careful recognise the person before scolding but it's a good thing you have seen the girl

Taru: Meaning?

DM: I am thinking of speaking to Somal Bhai, about Toral and Hiten's rishta.

Taru: Super

 

Next day, Taru is doing the Pooja.

Taru: What DM has thought for Hiten in very good

Champkali walks past Taru in front of her.

Taru: When a cat walks past it is bad luck but what's the difference between you and a cat? Its ok you go, I will shower once more.

Champkali: It's a mistake benba

Taru: Duffer, come her,

Champkali puts her hand on her cheek

Taru: What are you looking at a snake hasn't poisoned you, make puran puri tonight ok?

What's wrong why are you acting like I have slapped you, here have some Prasad.

Champkali: Benba, we are chote log

Taru: I will slap you, why do you remind me, here take the Prasad.

Champkali takes it and is confused.

 

New Servant(still don't know her name): Champkali, what's wrong? Why is your face like that?

Champkali: Something has happened to Benba, why is she giving me Prasad? Her head isn't right.

New Servant laughs: How can I tell you, she use to give chote log a lot of name especially Kanji Wagela.

 

DM comes to the village and he sees Santo making pots. He watches her

DM: Chorki

Santo: Malik you? Sorry I wasn't paying attention

DM: Its ok, you were paying attention to your work, why are you wearing those clothes?

Santo: Malik, I was working so they would get dirty, when did you come?

DM: When you were making the second one since then.

Santo: You have been here that long standing

DM: Yes, I was watching you work. Teach Birwa some day.

Santo goes all sad.

Nanaji comes: Malik, come in.

DM: Jai Shree Krishna. Sit here. Any news on Khemi?

Nanaji: No

DM: I wonder where she has gone? Don't worry we are looking for her. Chokri, I wanted to speak to you, its not right time to speak of this but we have to socialise, Somal Bhai has invited you to a party tomorrow night so be ready I will come a collect you, that isn't a problem is it kaka?

Nanaji shakes his head

DM: I didn't want to go with her but if I don't take her Somal Bhai will ask question after question. I will drop her off as soon as it ends.

Nanaji: Yes Malik.

DM: Do you know Toral, his daughter?

Santo:: Nahi, Malik

DM: She has kept' what do you call it in English, surprise party?

Santo: What is that?

DM, he tries to explain it to her then asks for tea. And listen wash your hands. Kaka whatever has happened Khemi is not at fault, Hiten is young he doesn't understand relationships, don't worry everything will be fine

Santo brings the tea.

DM: Nice tea, its been a while since I have drunken tea by your hands.

Nanaji to himself: I don't think Malik knows about the divorce yet.

DM: Ok I shall leave now. He leaves

Nanaji: There is still time, everything can be fine as Malik doesn't know about the divorce, return before it is too late. (God Bless you nanaji.)

She hugs her nanaji.

 

At the Dhaba a man is giving instructions

Hiten arrives back there again: One cup tea.

Khemi is bringing the tea to him dhan dhan dhan

She notices Hiten but he is looking at her photo.

Khemi: ha Kudo Amma, Hiten here now what do I do. What if he sees me?

Khemi: Chotu give this tea to that man,

Chotu: I am working

Khemi: Here take it

Khemi runs from there.

Khemi: I am safe now but for how long? Then a hand touches her shoulder she is shocked.

Khemi: Kaka you? (Its Kanji)

Kanji: Here you dropped this. It's a necklace

 

Flashback

Hiten: I have brought this for you Khemi,

Khemi: But Hiten this is'

Hiten: This is not real gold when the Mahiyavanshi bahu is chosen, a necklace is put around her neck, its not real but there is gold water on it

Khemi: Shh! This is your love for me and it is more precious to me than gold.

 

Kanji: What's wrong? Here take it. I thought I would return it to you.

Khemi: Kaka wait, there isn't much work here but if you have any work please let me know, I don't want pay, I just want food and a place to stay.

Kanji: There isn't anyone in your house.

Khemi: Nahi, parents passed away I am alone

Kanji: You were saying you have a masi?

Khemi: I didn't know masi is out of town and I don't want to be a burden on anyone.

Kanji: Lying is not a good thing but I am understanding there is a reason, don't worry if you don't want to tell me.

Kanji: I live alone, in my house, you can stay there and make roti's my stomach will be filled and so will yours. Come on.

 

Kaddu comes to Santo's place.

Kaddu and Monghi are talking

Monghi: Come sit

Kaddu: Monghi, I have come to meet Santo

Monghi is upset: Santo and Nanaji have gone out, they are looking for Khemi bena, I wonder when she will be back

Kaddu: Don't worry she will be back soon, I shall leave.

Monghi: No stay, I will bring water.

Kaddu: Tell Santo, I came, cause its Somal Bhai's party papa sent some clothes and jewellery. Give it to Santo, don't worry I will send someone else to bring it later.

Monghi: You came alone, Shaskank Bhai didn't come with you?

Kaddu: Nahi, its nice to here Shaskank Bhai from your mouth. You are talking like you know him, from before?

Monghi: Yes, look at this I have know him from before you were married. I know him and so does Santo bena.

Kaddu to herself shocking how Santo has never mentioned this to me before

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks Nikita. Sounds like an interesting episode and also the pace seems to have picked up again.
 
Khemi goes to stay with Kanji, Kaddu comes to know of Shanky-Santu knowing each other from before, a new girl for Hiten and DM still not knowing about the current status of his marraige and the divorce papers. All situations are very interestingly poised. Good work by the writers at the current point in time.
Posted: 14 years ago
thnks ...

the servant's name is jhamku jobaputra.....

suggestion:
 use duffod instead of duffer ....makes it more authentic...๐Ÿ˜Ž
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh no...I hope Hiten doesn't return until he finds Khemi
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks for the update
 
seems like a good pace is picking up
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanx a lot .....Gr8 update ...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Nice update, Nikita. Thanks alot๐Ÿ˜ƒ