Hi guys! here i'm with my fic.In the beginning story may sound as in parts...as if disconnected.... but will be even and sorted as it progresses. Please read the 'NOTE' on page 4. Guyz some of u were not able to open pg.5....so posting on pg.6 again....😊
Cadets rush to the site of ambush to save their Mentor,their Captain Rajveer.But return with Naina in shock,Huda in critical condition,and each one of them having heart wrenching site of burning jeep of capt.Rajveer imprinted in their minds....A visual.....
They can never forget all their lives!A visual that is going to haunt them for their lives.
haaye we dasso main kee karaa.
Dil mile bina hi tut gaye,
Hath jude bina hi chutt gaye
kee likhe ni lekh kismat ne..."
when she didn't respond, he continued...
"
Kamaal ki baat yeh hai ki usske paas bhi koi jawaab nahi tha....", said Abhi trying to be sarcastic."
Waise galati tumhari nahi hai...aksar gaddaro ke paas aise sawaalon ke jawaab nahi hote...", he said fiddling with the gun."
Waise iskeliye toh tumhe kaafi achchi training mil gayi hogi naa? Hain naa? I mean tumhare saare apne.....sab issi raaste par toh chale hai..."It stabbed him million times to utter further...But he had to do this for her sake. Hardening his expressions and keeping his tone as accusatory as possible, Abhi added,
"
Tumhara bhaai....GADDAR....!!"Naina's face started hardening.....
"
Aur tumhara Mentor...", Abhi continued sarcasm and mock evident in his voice, " Tumhare BELOVED..... Captain Rajveer singh Shekhavat, a BLOODY MURDERER !!"Naina turned to him fiercely....her eyes burning with anger....
" Kitne khoon kiye unhone? Do? atleast Do ke baare mein toh hum jaante hai....ek senior officer ke sarr pe bandook taanke, bhari dopahar, a cold blooded murder! Aur uske pehle waala khoon
?"Naina was shivering with fury....
"
Captain Naveen singh Ahluwalia kaa khoon? Koi kaise apni dost ki chaati pe bandook rakh sakta hai? kaise? kaise trigger daba sakta hai? Ek baar..do baar...TEEN BAAR..!!"Her eyes welled up....
"
Dard hua hoga na Naveen ko? did he enjoyed it??? Hum aapke maa baap ko phone karna chahate hai aur badhaai dena chahate hai, Badhaai ho Mr. & Mrs. Ahluwalia... aapki beti bhi ussi raaste pe chalna chahti hai,jispar aapka beta chala tha... aapka beta bhi gaddar tha aur aapki beti bhi...."Naina couldn't take more.... she snatched the gun from abhimanyu and pointed it at his temple....
"
Mera bhaai gaddar nahi tha..." , she said shivering with fury...
The Heart wrenching cry of Naina that night was heard by every nook and corner,every tree,leaf,flower,by every person of KMA.
Kee likha ye yaar kudrat ne...
katta mein kee we din,teri saun tere bin...
Main to jeeya naa mara..."
jag soona soona laage
jag soona soona laage
koi rahe naa jab apna.
Jag soona soona hai toh
ye kyun hota hai
jab yeh dil rota hai
roye sisak sisak ke hawayein
jag soona laage chann se jo tute koi sapnaa."
All the cadets were sent to detention centre where they were left to wrath of Major Bharghav.
Naina once attempted of comitting suicide.....
Originally posted by: Shaina_b
Nice character sketch!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏thanx....
Navin's body was completely damaged and they had recognised it only because it had Navin's taveez and kada!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔
Naina had cried a lot seeing these things!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
She now treasured these things as they were most precious to her!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Poor Naina!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Navin's dead body with damaged face used to haunt her!!!!!!
I am sure Navin is alive and that wasn't his body at all!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊well how can u be so sure dear????😛
damn cool
]awesome
superb
update soon
Thanx sumaiya😊Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Prologue was nice. Cud feel the pain of Raj's death again (it may hurt but u did a gr8 job). And u portrayed Naina's agony really well. Pls continue soon n Thnx 4 the PM.
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