FF-- Lamhey note on pg 50 dec 23

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Posted: 14 years ago

Ok friends I m back with my story thx for liking my 1 story KHWAISH

 
Well this story is about friendship love trust emotions and a pure bond of eternal love and friendship

 

PS***this story is bit bold if anybody have any objection pls let me know

 

LAMHEY

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khetey hai har lamhey ki apni alag daastan hoti hai apni hi ek baat hoti hai lamhey to bas ek sapna hota hai hum nahi jantey ki agley lamhey kya ho par phir bhi hum har lamha ko jeeney ki koshish kartey hai ussey ek khoobsurat haqeeqat bananey ki poori koshish kartey hai

 

Lamho ka kya hai kabhi woh apney saath yaadey latey hai kabhi tanahi kanhi ruswai par phir bhi hum un lamho ko jeetey hai is koshish main ki shayad koi lamha apney saath woh le aaye jiska intezar ho

 

My story revolves around the lives of two main characters PREM & HEER

 

 

Character:

Juneja family:

Gayatri- Prem mother

Lalit- Prem father a successful businessman

Prem- rich, handsome young bachelor who achieve everything he is a player or Casanova person

 

 

Sinaha:

Heer-a down to earth rich sweet natured girl with a little secret

 

Other character:-

Preet-Prem friend typical playboy Prem business partner and best buddy

Meher-Heer friend care a lot for heer as she know the deepest secret of heer

 

Other character r introduced as the story moves on

Lamhey hai in dono ki zindagi ke har lamhey ki jo apney saath bahut se rang le kar aaya kabhi khushi ke to kabhi gam ke

Part1 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1218252
 
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Part 9 &10
 
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Posted: 14 years ago

LAMHEY

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Waqt ki apni raftar hoti hai aur lamho ki apni hum dono main se kisi ko bhi rok nahi saktey par tab kya karey jab dil chahey ki yeah waqt aur lamha yuhi ruk jaye

 

We can see 1 beautiful room where everything is arranged by so much love and passion it look like the room owner has good taste in selecting things

 

One girl is sleeping in that room is decorated with fresh flowers and soft toys

 

Morning light r coming through white curtains

 

Somebody was knocking lightly on room door but that girl is still sleeping so the person on other end knocks loudly this time

 

All this sound force the girl to wakeup and open the door

 

We cannot see the girl face because her face was covered by hairs

 

That girl was wearing baby pink color nightdress we can say that girl does not like to getup like this with all that sound

 

And another girl enter in that room

 

Two girl-kitni dair tak so rahi ho time ka tumehey khuch andaza hai

 

1 girl-sorry yaar raat main kafi dair tak work kar rahi thi time ka khuch nahi pata chala

 

2girl-yaar tumahra khuch nahi ho sakta tum itna dair work karogi to apna dhayan kab rakhogi

 

1 girl-Meher bas kar na rakhti to hoon main apna khyal aur na bhi rakhu to tum to ho hi mera khyal rakhney ke liye so chill

 

And woh window ki taraf jati hai aur window open karti hai aur turn karti hai

 

We see a beautiful fair girl with light golden hairs

 

Meher-Heer tujhsey koi nahi jeet sakta chalo ab jaldi se tayar ho jao sab humara wait kar rahey hai

 

Well that girl is Heer 22 yrs old a pretty down to earth rich sweet natured girl

 

And the other girl is Meher her best friend jiskey saath woh apney US waley ghar main rehti hai

 

Well Heer has no family Heer ke mom dad ki death 2 saal pheley 1 car accident main ho gayi thi Sinaha r well know business family but Mr. and Mrs. Sinaha ke baad business main khuch prob aayi to Heer ne yeah business sambhal liya woh business sambhalney ke saath saath studies bhi complete kar rahi thi

 

Heer sab ke samney to bahut khush rehti par uskey bahut kareebi log jantey thai ki uski zindagi main kitna dard hai

 

Meher bhi uskey saath hi apna MBA ka course complete kar rahi thi and Meher hi thi jo uskey close friend thi jo uski zindagi ke dard se waqif thi

 

Heer-Meher mujhey darr lag raha hai pata nahi kal ki meeting main kya hoga yeah contract humarey company key liye kitni imp hai tum janti ho

 

Meher-Heer tumney is contract par kafi hard work kiya hai trust me yeah contract tumehey hi milega

 

Heer-hope so

 

Meher-aacha ab jao jaldi fresh ho jayo we r getting late for college

 

Aur woh fresh honey ke liye chali jati hai

 

 

aaye tab tak kahi aur dekhtey kya ho raha hai

 

1 office hai jahan koi work kar raha hai

 

Well we cannot see his face as file samney hai

 

However, he was wearing a business suit aur uskey hairs bahut gelled thai

 

Tabhi uskey room pai knock hoti hai

 

voice-come in

 

Manager-excuse me sir aap ko kal ki meeting ka yaad dilana tha

 

Voice-well mujhey yaad hai

 

Manager-sir woh yeah project humari company ke liye kafi profitable hoga aap kahey to main details send kardo

 

Voice-nahi it ok I know yeah project homey hi milega kyun ki PREM JUNEJA new har na nahi sekha

 

 

the man is PREM JUNEJA he is a successful business man and a handsome young bachelor he has won the young achievers award usney kabhi zindagi main har nahi dekhi thi jo bhi woh chahta ussey hasil karta

Edited by Shruti11 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
i m making a fresh PM list for lamehey so anyone want to get pm pls tell me i sent 1 pm to all my khwaish reader but now new list 😉Edited by Shruti11 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice start shruthi
ALL THE BEST for our LAMHEY
and i hope is ff be bahuth achi taraf se popular hongi jaise kwaish hua
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
plz add me in ur pm list
its nice dear
tc bye
 
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Posted: 14 years ago
i like ur update

plz add me in ur pm list as i dont want to miss any of its update

 

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow di
new ff
loved the first part
add me too
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey shruthi,
 
interesting story line....Do add me to ur pm list....I might not be able to comment on time for each chapter since i will be busy nxt two months...i have family coming over .....but i will try to read the updates and once i'm free will surely comment
 
luv
Angie
 
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow lovely update dear..thanks a ton!⭐️
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey shruti,
nice FF...
liked the intro and first part...
plz add me to your pm list...
 
regards,
Suhana.