ff/(MN)ONE DAY SHOTS/'Just Another Day' pg145-NEW! - Page 48

Originally posted by: debby

Hey!!
That was an amazing read... Since bonding between Mayank and Nupur is invisible in the show, its always good to read something to that effect. Plus, you did a wonderful job with the scene, bringing in his Dad. So his Dad was his antithesis? Irresponsible.. incompetent.. hmm... makes sense to see Mayank do all he can to keep Mum happy.
Loved the 'walked happily ever after..' part. I am a sucker up for happy, into-the-sunset kind of endings.. LOL.
Great job, keep PMing me when you write more! 😃

Originally posted by: Love_RM_MAYUR

u rock...i hvent read everything bt jtna padha na utna awesome tha.....i will read everything sooon

Originally posted by: raveenamc

omg awesome!!!!!

can you plz add me to ur pm list????

Originally posted by: luv-myur

Hey,

Firstly i want to thank u 4 PMing me. Tis was the first PM u probably did it by mistake but i enjoyed reading all of it 4m the beginning 2day.

My Very First Date--The sweetest date. Am glad Mayu's plan got ruiend and enjoyed how they spent time 2gether on their 1st date. That was more realistic and sweet. U hit the top by showing that just being 2gether n understanding each other is perfect n much more than just showing the love through giving/showing through impressive stuff.

Ego or Confusion-Their fights r always enjoyable, b it in this part or any other part of u'r ff. Their little scene in the college bench,very nice and i like how Nupur was blushing and shy when samrat came. Samrat knows. Nice. Again here u hit the top by showing that u shouldn't let misunderstandings/ego create distances btw each other.

First Kiss-Mayank n Gunjan scene was a v. nice jeja-sali bonding, v.nice. Nupur n Shilpa bonding is awsome. Enjoyed how Maynk told his mom and how Nupur had opened up n huged Shilpa. Perfect saar n bahu. Love that relationship, plz no bad stuff btw them ever. Their 1st kiss, just adore Mayank's goodness especially how he asks her whether he can kiss her-totally adore it.

Cant Live Without You-Here u hit the top by showing that physical attraction n lust is not the essence of true love/relationship but rather the intent of the heart and the true standards/intentions 4m within.

Shopping For You-Aunty, Nupur bonding is great and u added gunjan too, that was nice. Mayank showed up and also gave her a gift that she would enjoy eventhoug he dosen't really smile at the fact that she likes srk. Shows how much he cares 4 her happiness. Nupur n Mayank's shirt scene was sweet.

Will Always Be There For You- Love Nupur's reaction n her caring side. Nupur n Shilpas relationship is also highlighted in the one scene that u incorporated in. Again Mayank's caringness is highlighted. Totally cherished the fact that Mayank poured out his heart in front of Nupur. Their walk was v.nice. Their ice cream scene-cute.

As a whole, i enjoyed reading every part of the ff. Loved all of it the emotion, the relationship depth, the underastanding, the childishness, the eye locks, and everything they share. Thanku v.much for the long updates. Long is alwas a treet 4 the readers, at least 4 me. Plz do continue and PM when u update.

Thank u very much

Originally posted by: naina_mayur

BY GOD!!!!

VERY VERY BEAUTIFUL....WAS SMILING D WHOLE TIME WHILE I WAS READING IT....THNX 4 MAKIN MY DAY!!

pm me if possibl wen u update next k????

Originally posted by: robbieluvr

wow yaar it was beautifully written

i swear

God i love ur writing style

everything was just sooooo good

do write more

and let me know