TUJHE PE DIL QURBAN:Epilogue PG:107 - Page 73

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Posted: 15 years ago
that was nice part.

do continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Great n cute part..
Waiting foa the metting wid the parents..!!
COntinue soon!!! =)

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Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Awe....I loved the shayari sent by Sujal....thanks and it was a cute scene as well. thanks again So Sujal n Angad hav to ask for their beloved's hands....that surely needs guts...hehe. very true Will be w8ing to witness the scenes!! Pls continue soon. i will


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Originally posted by: togepe30

Awww.........That was super cute....!thanks

Cant wait to see the meeting with parents.... hope not to dissapoint u
Continue soon ! i will
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Vandu






Originally posted by: monikaseth

sooo sweet and cute part thanks i love it now lets see how their family react ...thanks a lot for pm dear. u r welcome


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Originally posted by: spvd

nice part thanks....................the starting scene was sweet and now sujal and angad have to practice to ask for their beloved's hand from their dads very true................they are afraid and nervous what if dady's tell no????................he he he.............cont soon...................... i will


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Originally posted by: love_KYPH

gr8 update thanks
i hope all wil b well in d meetin time will tell
cont soon... i will


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Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Sujal is very happy to have Kashish back in his life.yep

The dinner setting was very nice. And he did propose to Kashish in a very romantic way. yep
Now both Angad and Sujal have to officialy ask permission from their to-be in-laws. very true
waiting to see both of the succeed. time will tell
please continue soon i wil


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Originally posted by: sania_58

cute update thanks

too good thanks
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great going
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Originally posted by: cute_samrah

lovely part thanks..................sujal is so happy yep ......................best of luck n angad thanks...................con't soon dear i will


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Originally posted by: riddhan

the part was very nice n too cute thanks loved it n thanxsssss for the pm u r welcome


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Originally posted by: AKForever

hey another great part.. thanks continue soon i will

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Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

thanks for pm u r welcome

great part thanks


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Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

awesome part adi thanks will love to see sujals meetin with kashs dad hope not to disappoint u cont soon i will


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Originally posted by: PRACHIGOYAL90

that was nice part. thanks

do continue soon i will


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Originally posted by: j44a

Great n cute part.. thanks
Waiting foa the metting wid the parents..!!i sure
COntinue soon!!! =) i will


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MIDNIGTH:

Sujal is sleeping in his room when his cell rings. He see commander on line.

S: yes sir.

COMMANDER: I am afraid there is abad news Sujal.

S: what is it sir?

COMMANDER: Sujal, Sharad has escaped from prison.

S: what? HOW DID IT HAPPEN SIR?

COMMANDER: I don't know Sujal. It has happened 8hrs ago. I have set up an enquiry + I have made a special team to catch him. I want u & ur team to help them.

S: ok sir I will call every1 now.

COMMANDER: ok Sujal.

Sujal is trying Kashish's no. but she not picking up the phone. He tries a lot but to no use. He decides to check her house. He goes to her house & is surprised to find the door ajar. He quickly removes his gun out & walks in. the house has been ransacked. He finds a note addressed to him.

IF U WANT TO SEE KASHISH ALIVE MEET ME AT TIGER HILL TOM AT 12. I WANT TO SETTLE AN OLD SCORE WITH U 2.

SHRAD.

S: dam u.

He quickly calls up Angad.

A: (sleepy voice) who ever it is plz call in the morning. I am sleeping.

S: wake up Angad.

A: Sujal. Y r u calling at this time of the night. Plz go to sleep.

S: Sharad has escaped from prison & has kidnapped Kashish.

A: (shocked & totally out of sleep) where r u?

S: I am at her house right now.

A: ok lets reach the office. I will tell every1. v will find the solution.

S: ok.

All of them reach the office & r quiet surprised by the news.

KR: Sujal do u have any clue where he could have taken her.

S: not a faint idea.

SU: lets ask the people around her house if they have seen anything.

SH: I will do that.

AR: but the thing that is harassing me is how did he get free. I mean its not possible to get out of ASTRA jail.

R: may b he had some help from inside.

S: may b…

Sujal gets a call on his cell. Which is not a familiar no.

S: hello.

K: hello Sujal… Sharad has kidnapped me.

S: KASHISH, WHERE R U?

K: I have no clue Sujal. It is somewhere near the fish colony as I can smell fish also it looks like some kind of a store. When I was brought here I was unconscious. Sujal… Sujal I am getting scared.

S: relax Kashish I am trapping the phone call. V will find u quickly. Don't worry I am coming.

K: plz Sujal come fast. SUJAL….

S: KASHISH WHAT HAPPENED.

SHRAD: u r not talking to her any more Sujal.

S: Sharad what did u do to her?

SHARAD: right now nothing. Good she called u up or else I was about to call u to know if u have received my message.

S: I sure have.

SHARAD: so do come on time or else u will never see her alive & 1 more thing come with ur team only… no1 else… I have got to settle a score with all of u.

S: even v have to…

The line gets cut.

S: were v able to get it.

KR: no not the exact place. It is some were in Versova. I am not able to pin the exact place.

S: ok Riddhima & Suhani u both go 2 Kashish's house & enquire from the neighbors if they saw any1 or anything or saw Kashish going out with some1.

Riddhima & SU: ok.

Both of them leave.

S: Arman & Shaurya u both go the east side of Versova to find if there r any stores near the fish colony there.

Arman & SH: ok Sujal.

S: Angad u come with me. V will check out west side.

A: ok Sujal.

KR: Sujal relax. V will surely find her.

S: I hope so Kripa. I have lost her once I don't want to loose her again.

A: v will not let that happen Sujal. Trust us.

S: I do. Let's go.

They have been checking the whole area but to no good.

Arman calls up Sujal.

AR: hello Sujal, v have checked the whole area but v couldn't find her.

S: ok. U guys come over here & help us.

AR: v r on our way.

After some time Riddhima call up Sujal.

S: ya Riddhima… any news.

R: v talked to few people. 1 lady told us that they saw a white merce outside Kashish's house at around midnight.

S: may b that will b helpful… ok now u 2 go back to the office. Help Kripa & make preparations to meet Sharad. But don't use any old tricks he knows all of them.

R: v will see that.

S: fine.

Sujal keeps the phone down. He closes his eyes & remembers all the movements he spent with Kashish. Angad who had been driving till now looks at him.

A: Sujal, v will find her. Don't worry.

S: I hope so Angad… I hope so. Look out 4 a white merce near the stores. Riddhima said a lady saw a white merce near Kashish's house at mid-night.

A: ok. Sujal this is the last store in this area.

As Sujal & Angad reached there Arman & Shaurya also reached.

AR: v came as soon as possible.

S: ok. Lets get inside in the team of 2.

A: I am coming with u Sujal.

S: ok. Now lets go in.

Inside the compound they find a white merce.

A: Sujal, look a white merce. May b Kashish is here.

S: b extra careful guys.

Inside the store they find 2 goons taking to each other. Sujal goes near them unseen to know what they r talking.

GOON1: do u know who this girl is inside, whom Sharad has kept?

GOON2: ya some1 was saying that she removed his cover & also killed his big brother.

GOON1: he was sure angry when he found out that she had made a call. I thought he would kill her but he didn't even touch her.

GOON2: he has given her a sleeping dose. She will sleep the whole time. No doubt.

GOON1: he was saying that he will teach her a lesson in front of her bf.

GOON2: let it be. What's it to us. V r being paid to keep guard. So lets do it.

Sujal came back & told ever1 the situation.

S: now I am sure Kashish is inside. V have to go in.

SH: what if there r more people inside? V have to do this quietly.

S: try not 2 use ur guns.

Angad & Arman decide to go in 1st. they come from back & just twist the necks of the 1st 2 guards. They then signal Shaurya & Sujal to come in. 1 by 1 they r able to kill all the guards. When they finally reach Kashish, they find her asleep with 4-6 guards around her.

S: now use ur guns, but all at once. I will take the 2 in front.

A: I will take the 2 from the other corner.

SH: I will take the 1 in right side

AR: I will take the rest.

S: on the count of 3. 1…2….3 SHOOT.

All of them start shooting. Within a min all the goons r dead. Sujal hurries towards Kashish & holds her in his arms.

S: Kashish… Kashish… say something plz…

SH: Sujal, she is unconscious. V have to take her back. Hurry plz. V cant make a delay.

They start to proceed when some1 shoots at Arman. The bullet hits his left arm & he falls down. Every1 heads 4 cover. Sujal sees who had shoot Arman. Its no1 other than Sharad. He is there with about 10 of his goons.

S: Arman, r u ok?

AR: yes Sujal I am ok. It just hit the arm.

SHARAD: yes Sujal he is fine, But just 4 now. I will surely see to it that none of u leave this place alive. I swear that. Because of u guys I lost my brother, I will not leave u guys now.

S: ur brother had tried it earlier but he was unsuccessful & hence he lost his life. I assure u that u will have the same fate.

SHARAD: so u think that u can defeat me, don't u? sorry to say that u r wrong.

S: I have never been wrong in my entire life. I will never b now also.

SHARAD: look that the no. Sujal. V r 11 in no. but u guys r just 4, that 2 1 of u is injured.

S: v will surely over power u.

SHARAD: PEOPLE KILL ALL OF THEM. DON'T EVEN SPARE THAT GIRL.

He turns around to find only 2 of his men that 2 having their hands up in the air as Riddhima & Suhani had their guns pointed on their heads.

Seeing this Sujal comes from hiding.

S: so u were saying that u will defeat me. Look now v r more in no.

SHARD: think ur self extra smart don't u Sujal?

S: no I don't. u said that u wanted to settle scores don't u? y not do it now. Every1 get out of here. I want to take care of this personally. Take Kashish with u.

SHARAD: I will not leave u Sujal.

S: I have same plans.

Every1 goes out. Now, only Sujal & Sharad in the room.

SHARAD: so with or with out guns?

S: without guns. I don't want to loose the pleasure of killing u personally.

SHARAD: v shall see who gets the pleasure & who dies?

Both of them start hitting each other. Sujal is remembering all the movements when Kashish was away from him due to his kidnap & also the time when he found her unconscious. Sujal is hitting Sharad badly. In the fit of anger he has broken Sharad's hand. Sujal is beating him badly 4 about 10mins when Angad comes in to see what is happening. By this time Sharad has gone unconscious while Sujal has been hitting him till now. Angad stops him.

A: Sujal, leave him. He is already unconscious. V will deal with him later.

S: leave me Angad.

A: Now v have top take Kashish to the hospital. Plz Sujal. Let's go.

Listening to Kashish's name Sujal comes back to reality & leaves Sharad & goes outside to see Kashish.

He sees her unconscious & Shaurya diagnosing her. He rushes towards her.

S: how is she, Shaurya?

SH: she is fine. No internal injuries. She is just sleeping.

S: when will she get up?

SH: the more she sleeps the better. Let's take her to the hospital, she will b ok there.

S: ok.

They all go to the hospital. Kashish is still sleeping while Sujal is just looking at her. Riddhima comes into the room.

R: relax Sujal. She is fine, just sleeping.

S: I know that, its just that I was remembering all those movements when she was away from me, in his captive. All those thoughts that came into my mind…

R: see non of them came true. Kashish is back with us.

S: ya thanks to all of u.

R: no it was because of all of us.

S: by the way how did u girls come there? I had told u 2 stay with Kripa.

R: well seeing that white merce Arman had called us. So v both decided to see u guys… in case u needed any help.

S: well u girls really helped us out. Thanks…

R: don't thank me, thank Arman.

AR: & here I am.

S: were u waiting outside, 4 me to call ur name?

AR: no. I was just coming to see if Kashish had regained her consciousness.

S: tell every1 to go to there houses & get some sleep. U all have been awake the whole night. Now get some sleep. I am here with Kashish.

AR: r u sure?

S: I am +ve. Now go.

Both of them leave.


hey guys,

here's the next part....

so some problems... but now SK r safely out...

hope u enjoyed it....

sorry guys but i have to go out for a project & will be coming back on15 April... the next part will b posted after that only... sorry😭😭😭😭

do leave ur comments...

LOVE

ADI

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey great part.. continue soon

Have a good time out doing ur project..

Thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 15 years ago
grt part..................kia fighting ki hai sujal ne sharad ke saath maza a gaya......................best of luck for ur project.......................

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