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Posted: 16 years ago
cool updt!!
mayu-mayu's mom roxxx!!!
cute updt dear!!
continue when u want!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Chapter 8

Its a bit long so dont get bored..LOL
In the kitchen
Nupur(angrily) hands on her hips:"ramesh kaka bhola abhi tak nahi aaya" she asked ramesh, their cook..
rames shaking his head "nahi beta..usse paanch baje bheja tha maine...dekh saath bajne waale hain.."pointing at the
clock
"yeh larkda gaya kaha..aur app bhi naa kaka..is waqt usse kaha bejh diya?"..asked nupur
"beta woh mandap meh sajane ka phool khatam ho gaya tha..toh meine usse mittal ji ke ghar bheja tha aur phool
laane..bas das minute ka kaam tha..patani itna time kyu laga diya.."said ramesh kaka sighing
"aane do isse..abhi batati ho.."nupur muttered angrily
"didi ...."
both turned around..there stood bhola looking nervous but trying to smile
"aap mujhe dhond rahi thi..?" he stutters
"nahi, teri aatma ko dhond rahi thi.." yelled nupur then taking a deep breath" kaha tha tu?" she asked angrily

"woh mein mittal ke ghar se phool laane gaya tha..thodi der hogayi.." looking here and there

"thodi der bhola ?" nupur said .."do ghante hogaye hain"..she snaps..."itni der kaise hogayi.?"
kahi tu waha mittal ke saath baith kar picture to nahi dekhne laga tha ?" sha asked suspiciously
bhola turned red as a tomatoe "woh kya hain na di.....

"main jaanti thi..." intrupted nupur "yaha shaadi hain, mandap abhi tak saja nahi aur tu waha aaraam se baith kar
mittals ke saath picture dekh raha tha.." she screamed before advancing towards him.."tu ruk,abhi batati ho tujhe.." she said before advancing towards him holding a belan(rolling stick)..

"didi pls mujhe maaf .." running around the table saving himself "aage se ayesa nahi hoga.." folding his hands.."kaka aap bhi kuch boliye naa" pleading to the old man..
ramesh kaka just shook his head smiling..he was used to this..
for almost five minutes nupur chased him around the table with the belan..

"nupur yeh kya kar rahi ho ...?"

all three turned around and saw mayank looking at her questionly..he looked dashing in his sherwani..
nupur still angry "kya kar raho matlab..? dikh nahi raha hain..is gadhe ki jaan lene ki koshish kar rahi ho.." she
replied funing..when she realised why she was looking for bhola "ek baat batao bhola,kya tumne tommy ko khana diya".."she asked skeptically

bhola swallowed, looking at the ground
ramesh kaka shook his head,
mayank took a deep breath waiting for the tornado..he was trying very hard to control his laughter..

nupur narrowing her eyes "bhola..?" she persisted sweetly
bhola finally looking a her "woh didi mein toh bahar gaya tha naa..." he stopped when he saw nupur's furious
expression
"tum ne mere tommy ko ab tak khana nahi diya ..?" nupur's voice was low as she made an effort to contain her fury

bhola moved back nervously "mein abhi jaakar deta ho.."
"do minute...bhola do minute mein agar tum ne usse khana nahi diya toh aaj tum bhi bhoke sow ge.."nupur warned
him.."ab kharde kharde dekh kya rahe ho, aarti utaro tab jaaoge".."she snapped
bhola quickly made his exit..

"by god iss lardke ke sar se rajesh khanna ka bhoot utarna padega..warna mera pyara tommy ek din zaroor bhook se
mar jaayega..kaamchoor kahika.."she muttered still fuming
mayank cleared his throat "agar aaj ka episode khatam ho gaya ho toh kya main kitchen mein aa sakta ho? he asked
arching an eyebrow
"mayank...."nupur said giving him an angry look..
ramesh kaka smiled..he loved watching these two..they fight a lot but they loved each other more..he always prays to
god to keep them like this..
ramesh "beta mein jaakar dekhta ho ki mandap mein phool lag gaye hain ya nahi"leaving them alone in the kitchen..

from the corner of her eyes nupur saw mayank quitely making his ways towards her..she slowly moved to the other
side of the table pretending to take out something from the draw..

Mayank smiled..."uh nupur ek glass pani milega please..?" he asked innocently
Nupur without turning around "mayank khud lelo ..main busy ho " she said while searching something from the draw..
mayank moved towards her and put both arms beside her so she was trapped..nupur swallowed

Suddenly, she felt something wet against her ear and realised it were his lips, softly moving. One second she believed
he was kissing her ear, but then she heard him talk, no, whisper, the reason why his lips had been moving.
"kya dhoond rahi ho"?? he asked huskily
With one quick move, she turned her head and her eyes widened when she noticed their noses were touching now, she
felt her cheeks flush...she quickly looked down.."mayank please hato..main abhi bahut gussa ho, mujhe tang mat karo pls.."trying to push his arms down..but he didnt allow it.he kept it there..

"hmm.. toh madam gusse mein hain..main kuch help karo" leaning more closer..and smelling her hair..
"mayank dekho tum ..." nupur started nervously
"by the way tum ne bataya nahi ki main kaisa lag raha ho?" mayank intrupted...
nupur knew he looked very handsome without looking at him "u look ok." she said "after all i designed it " she said
proudly.. still trapped between him and the draw.."and u welcome" she muttered sarcastically reminding him that he hasnt thanked her for her handwork..
"oh i'am so sorry maine tumhe thanks bhi nahi kaha..abhi kar deta ho .." he said coming even more closer, if that
was possible, his body pressing into hers.
"mayank main aise thanks ki baat nahi kar rahi thi.." she murmured while trying to push him away.."mayank koi aa
jaayega...chordo naa.."squirming against him..
"par mujhe thanks issi tarah karna aata" he murmured holding her waist and caressing it..hearing this nupur angrily
turned around.
nupur(pushing him) "agar tumhari secretary tumhe coffee laakar deti hain to tum usse aise hi thanks karte ho " she
asked angrily..she planted her hands on her hips and glared at him through narrowed eyes

mayank chuckled..she looked really adorable when she was miffed..he grinned wickedly and leaned down to kiss her
softly at the corner of her mouth " No..yeh style sirf tumhara copyright hain " the softly growled words were interspersed with fleeting touches of his lips as they travelled from her earlobe, grazed the delicate ridge of her collarbone and settled with a sign on her creamy neck..

She blushed "mayank" the word was a strangled whisper..
"kya" he murmured absently ..the dark pleasure in his eyes took her breath away and she forgot wat she had been
going to say..

"shayad tum bhool rahe ho ki hum kitchen mein hain bedroom mein nahi aur aaj ghar par shaddi hain.." she said
huskily..her voice sounded breathless and full of feminine pleading

His hands slid possessively on the stomach,stroking and caressing
"chordo mujhe" she muttered thickly as she tried to move away only to find herself trapped between the counter and
the mascular wall of his chest..
"kyu chordo" he said sulkily.."har baar tumhare kareeb aane ki koshish karta ho to koi na koi aa jata hain..toh mein is
mauke ko nahi gawana chahata ho.." he said firmly..pulling her close..

"ahhem " somebody coughed amusedly
mayank quickly let her go and pretended to get the glass from the counter..nupur just turned around and started
shuffling through the drawer..Dia(hiding her smile)"its ok guys..maine kuch nahi dekha.." She herself was embrassed..she has never seen them like this..even though they have been married for almost 2 yrs now,they never showed such deep affection in public...mayank was not that kind of a guy..he was a very private person and hardly showed these kind of emotions to others..even today he was still that old mayank from excel college..though they were a family now,but mayank always maintained a distance from her.not in a bad way but it was not in his nature to make unneccesary conversation or waste his or others time..he was a bit more friendlier and mature now but still reserved...and she didnt mind it at all..if nupur was extrovert then he was a introvert..both two sides of a coin but both cant live without each other...and right now he was blushing more than nupur..

Before she could say something uday come in " didz tum yaha kya kar rahi ho ..?" he asked giving his silly smile..
"bas issi ki kami thi.." Mayank muttered..then shutting his mouth after nupur gave him a warning look..
dia
smiled.."hmm toh mayank sharma alteast apni biwi se toh darta hain" she thought holding back a giggle..then giving uday a suffering look "dodo kya kaam tha..?" she asked firmly
"kaam..?" uday asked confused.."kaisa kaam..? then smiling "oh aap chahati hain ki main aap ko koi kaam do.." pulling
his collar " very good very good..finally aap ne realise kar liya ki main aap ka barda bhai ho..very smart.." he said smartly.."toh kaun sa kaam do aap ko..." putting his finger on his lips and thinking

dia rolled her eyes before hitting him on the arm "dodo..apni brains ko strains dena band karo and yeh batao ki yaha
kyu aaye the..?" she asked fuming...hands on her hips

Uday(rubbing his arm): woh main bhool gaya..." then jokily "waise aap ko is avtaar mein dekh kar acho acho ki fuse
urd ho jaati hain..aur mujhe toh over 25 years ka experience hain.." he said laughing

Mayank glared at him and he stopped laughing abruptly..then suddenly "yaad aaya" he shouted ..startling nupur and
dia..mayank just glared at him..

dia gave him another tight slap "dodo for once will you talk like a normal human being.." she snapped
rubbing his shoulders" sorry..woh kya hain naa jab main over-excited ho jaata ho naa toh abnormal behave karne lagta
ho.." he said proudly..

"At least you admit it," mayank muttered before he could stop himself..
Dia sighs and shakes her head.."dodo ab batao kya yaad aaya.." she asked patiently..
uday(excitedly) :"guys baaraat aa gayi" he said enthusiastically
"KYA!!" all three shouted scaring uday..all looked at him in anger..


To be continued

guys pls forgive me if I forget to pm any of you..

Eagerly waiting for your comments!!!
Jaya
Edited by jayalal - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Loved It.... I just couldnt control my laugh... Thank god tht no one is in office yet...
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Posted: 16 years ago
very very nice updt....loved it....
thanxx 4 the pm...
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Posted: 16 years ago
oh i just love llovey dovey mayank!!!

gud one
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Posted: 16 years ago
this was so so so romantic !!!11 awwwwwwwwwwwwwww....they best yaar 1 awesome one ...i am all drooling ver ur update :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
oh...!!
asusual luved it...!!
ur dilouges...!! r just too realistic to the character...!!
i can imagine... one n every scene..!!
cool...!!
n thanx for the PM again..!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome yaar
update next part soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 16 years ago
as always very roamatic n sweet update.
pehle dodo(in the bedroom), now dia. no one can leave them alone.😆
it was fabulous update. awwesum. n long update is atreat. so don worry.
update sooooooooooooon the next1. plz
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow dear wonderful.. romantic par kabab mein haddi banni Dia... loved nupur mayank convos....
Even uday's was funny...

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