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Posted: 19 years ago
the 2 parts were amazin
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that was awesome neha...i wonder what the secret is?? 😕

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Guys, i just updated the Character Anylasis. And there has been a new character who is about to enter the fan fiction listed. Please read, and you might get a heads up on what's comming up in the fan fiction. I recommend checking the Character Anylasis every few weeks becasue there will be new characters added sometimes.

Also- on the first page the slide show will be changed. New pictures will be added, and it will be changed within a week, so keep an eye on that!

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Originally posted by: neha9


ufff kritika ufff



ufff neha, lolzz but me seriousssssssssssssssssssss!!! and im like a bit kanfooooshed over that Bua's charracter, "change in akngads and kripas relation???????" how?? didnt u say that, although hez not, that angadz dead??? 😕 😆 lolzzz can i borrow ur brains for like umm 5 mins plz??? 😆

so ya, AND DARE U SAY WAIT AND WATCHHHHH 😡 😆
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ufff neha, lolzz but me seriousssssssssssssssssssss!!! and im like a bit kanfooooshed over that Bua's charracter, "change in akngads and kripas relation???????" how?? didnt u say that, although hez not, that angadz dead??? 😕 😆 lolzzz can i borrow ur brains for like umm 5 mins plz??? 😆

so ya, AND DARE U SAY WAIT AND WATCHHHHH 😡 😆

😆 no u cant borrow my brain for even a sec. And u dont have to wait and watch. u have to wait and read! 😉

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😭 I just read the character analysis I am both happy and shattered. ANGAD WILL BE BACK YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY 😳 .....😛and KIRPA WILL HURT HIM💔 😭 (not physically ofcourse). Nehaji Please continue.
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😆no u cant borrow my brain for even a sec. And u dont have to wait and watch. u have to wait and read! 😉



i hateeeeeee uuuuuuuuuuuuuuu 😭 and brains to me chra ke hi rahoongi 😆
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after reading the updated character analysis i'm confused neha...don't u mean prithvi instead of angad where u wrote tht kripa will hurt angad in ways unimaginable to her??? plsss cont soon...i want to know wht happens to kripa in germany...
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Pyaar Ka Pal: Part 23

Anjali ran inside Shahid's house quickly saving herself from the rain. She brushed the rain off her and then walked into his bedroom where Shahid was jogging on his treadmill. "Wow my rock star! Where do you get the killer looks and the sexy body?" Anjali drooled as she saw her love workout. His eyes met hers and she felt like someone was aiming at her with daggers. Shahid's green eyes squinted and wiping his face with a towel he grabbed his water bottle and drank half of it.

"It's all for you, otherwise after marriage you will say, oh Shahid, are you sure you're a FIB agent, who doesn't even know hot maintain his fitness?" Anjali giggled and hugged him.

"I don't care about your looks, all I know is I love you and I never want to be away from you."

"Not bad, then I have an idea, how about we run away right now and get married." He teased.

"Oh stop it now." Anjali said as she hugged him tighter, a fear hid in her embrace and Shahid sensed it.

"Anjali, are you ok? You seem tensed, sacred. What's wrong."

Anjali started to cry, and Shahid got really scared. "Anjali? What's wrong. Tell me." But she kept crying. Shahid made her sit down on the sofa and got her a glass of water. "Calm down first and tell me what's wrong. And you were quite tensed about Kripa as well." Anjali stood up and hugged Shahid once again. He hugged her back and caressed her hair.

"Why can't we tell her Shahid?"

"Tell who what?"

"Tell Kripa."

"We can't Anjali. He'll kill me."

"And what about Kripa who goes to sleep every night thinking that one morning she will wake up in Angad's arms. She's going to ruin her life with Prithvi. She doesn't love him one bit Shahid, and I just witnessed that."

"Then what do you want me to do? Tell her that…"

"Yes, tell her! It's good for both of them."

"I can't damn it, I just can't."

"Fine!" Anjali pushed him away, "Then I will tell her. I can't see her suffer Shahid."

"Shut-up Anjali." Shahid yelled. "You can't do this to me. We are doing this only for there good. No one else but Kripa's good."

"If this is good I wonder what worst is. I don't care, I'm telling Kripa… I'm going to tell her that Angad is alive…" The words echoed, as Kripa dropped something. Shahid and Anjali turned and looked to see Kripa standing there.

"Shit!" Shahid ran to Kripa who started to loose her balance.

"Don't touch me." She screamed. "Don't!"

"Kripa, but, give me a chance." Shahid said as he moved closer.

"No!" She screamed. "I didn't expect this from you Shahid. You knew Angad was alive but you never told me. Why?"

Shahid grabbed Kripa's shoulder and shook her, but Kripa broke free. Anjali stood there crying.

"Shahid why, why, why! No actually it's not your fault. It's Angad's fault. If he wanted to he would have came back to me. But he didn't. He hates me. Everyone does. I was correct, I can never get the love I deserve. No one loves me no one. And Angad, I thought he was the love of my life, but once again I was wrong, that man doesn't care about me. He hates me. And you know what, I'm sure he found the love of his life and is living a happy life, he's a…" Shahid slapped her.

"Shut-up Kripa Kapoor. Just shut-up! Do you know what your are saying?" Shahid's voice raged in anger, his eyes were red around his green irises. "I thought that Angad Khanna was a lucky man to have someone like you, who loves him. But I was wrong."

"Stop-it Shahid, you can't do this to Kripa. Just stop it. Let's go Kripa."

"NO!" She screamed. "I want to hear him, what is Angad Khanna's great excuses to be away from me for two years. I want to know."

"You want to know?" Shahid screamed back. "Come with me." Shahid grabbed her hand and took her out of the room and to his car. He threw her in the car and drove away while Anjali followed them.

The car stopped in front of a small hospital about two hours later. Shahid took Kripa out of the car and took her inside. He opened the door to a small room and pushed Kripa in there. "This is his great reason for being away from you." Kripa looked at the bed and lay there Angad. "He, Kripa Kapoor has been in Coma for almost two years now. Longer than I was. See! He's enjoying life!" Shahid had tears in his eyes and he fell to the floor crying as Anjali ran in holding him.

Kripa stood there motion less. She couldn't believe it. Slowly she walked to Angad and sat beside him. She leaned over and she collapsed on Angad, and tightly put her arms around him crying.

Three hours later, Shahid sat on the sofa next to Anjali who was sleeping, and Kripa sat beside Angad unable to take her eyes off him.

"How did you find him Shahid?" Shahid looked up at Kripa.

"Why do you care?"

"Just tell me."

"Theek hai tho suno." Kripa held Angad's hand tightly as Shahid started to tell her his story.

You guys, I introduced a new character the Bua in the last parts. The character is played by the 'Gyatri' who played Devi in Devi, and she is also in KGGK. I will post the picture soon if u still don't know who.

Edited by neha9 - 19 years ago
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Pyaar Ka Pal: Part 24

"When Angad called the FBI in Italy the day of the bomb blast I was suppose to come with him." Kripa looked at him confused.

"I work for the FBI Kripa. Don't ask questions."

Angad stood there tying his wire cable on his waist when the door opened with thud. Anagd looked the other way and saw Shahid standing there. "Shahid? What are you doing here."

"Don't ask, just come with me."

"Where."

"Just come." He grabbed Angad's hand and pulled him away, and they ran out of the room. There were two minutes till the bomb blasted. Shahid took Angad to the back exit of the hotel and as they ran out the bomb started to blast. The fire quickly spread to the back exit and some thing fell on Angad's head. Shahid took Angad in his arms and dragged him out into his car. Angad was bleeding heavily, and his arm was also burnt. "Angad! Angad!" Shahid tried to wake him up but he didn't wake up. Shahid took him to the hospital where he was taken into the operation theater. He waited in front of the O.T. for hours until the doctor finally came out.

"He can sleep into coma any time, but he's in conscience right now, you can meet him." Shahid ran into the room where Angad lay with tears in his eyes.

"A-A-Angad…" Angad looked at him and smiled. Shahid sat next to him and held his hand tightly. "You have to stay here."

"I will!" He said weekly. "You have to do me something, don't talk just listen. I told you about Kripa. Her life is in danger. You have to investigate the matter, try to keep an eye on her at all times." Shahid nods his head obediently. "Don't tell her that I'm still alive. By now everyone must think I'm dead. And they should never find out that I'm alive never."

"Angad, Kripa will be heart broken."

"I know." He said as his breathing got heavier. "She will be, but eventually she will learn to live with it. She will have to learn to live without me. Kripa and Dadi are my family Shahid, and now they are your family. You have to take care of them, protect them. Will you do that for me?"

"I will, but I have a condition." He said, eyes watery, and his voice cracking.

"What?"

"You have to promise me that you will come back, and we will save Kripa together. Angad, Kripa is your life you can't do this to her. You love her, don't you?"

"I don't love Kripa, Shahid. It was never love, just infatuation, a crush, attraction what ever you want to call it. Anything but love."

"Damn you Angad, your lying to me and you. Anagd Kripa will die. I won't do this, I'm going to tell her." Shahid lets go of his hand and looks away. Angad takes his hand in his and Shahid looks at Angad.

"Friends?" He asked weakly.

"Forever!" Replied Shahid. Tears ran from both Angad's and Shahid's eyes and they hugged. Angad's breathing was getting more and more rapid and heavy. And suddenly he collapsed and he let go of Shahid. Shahid sat there for hours crying, and then promised himself that who ever did this to Angad and Kripa, he will get them.

Shahid had tears in his eyes once again. "You made me break my promise Kripa. Why?"

Kripa looked at Angad, he lay there so peacefully. "Because I love Angad. And this love is true, and pure. Otherwise Angad wouldn't have been here in front of me today. And one day my love will show it's colors. After that I don't care if Angad loves me or not. He can go spend his life with anyone he wishes, as long as he is happy." Every word Kripa said touched Shahid, he stood up and walked to Kripa and sat down beside her.

"Kripa, your love for Angad will help." Kripa looked at Shahid-

"You think so?" She asked.

"I know so!" He said taking her hand in his. "Kripa when we were in college, Angad told me everything about you. Every little detail. So much I never felt I hadn't met you. Angad was the best friend everyone dreamed of. He is so nice, so understanding, I would stand up for him if any one would hurt him, because he would allow people to hurt him without saying a single word. We were like brothers."

Kripa smiled and looked at Angad again, "He doesn't love me. He never wants to see me again. I'm going to stay with him until he gets better. The day his eyes open and gets out of coma, I will leave him. Never see him again."

"Kripa, will you marry Prithvi still?"

Kripa smiled once again and held Angad's hand tightly in hers. "I love only one person Shahid and that is Angad. I can't marry anyone else."

"What if Angad told you to marry someone else, then what would you do?" Shahid's eyes looked into Kripa's eyes, waiting for the answer. Kripa didn't speak but Shahid understood. "Let me guess Kripa. You will marry him to make Angad happy, right?" Kripa simply smiled. "Now let me tell you something, Angad is going to deny that he loved you forever, but I think he's unfortunate if he lets go of you."

"No Shahid, correct your self, I'm going to be unfortunate if I loose him again, and I'm going to. There's no doubt on that."

Shahid smiled, "Kripa, you know I've always wanted a sister, and I think I have found her in you, and being your brother I promise you that you will get your love. I have listened to Angad enough. He's made enough mistakes and I have let him make them, but not anymore. I'm not going to let him ruin his and your life."

"You're a sweetheart!" Anjali said. Shahid turned around and saw Anjali grinning. "And in this effort of your I'm ready to help you guys!"

"Wait a second." Kripa began. "Guys, no one will force Angad. And I mean no one. I don't want Angad under any type of compulsion. Never. Is that clear?" Kripa said in a strict voice.

"You know Anjali, Kripa fits perfectly to be Angad's wife! They both are quite boring and strict." Shahid taunted.

"Shut-up Shahid, instead of worrying about me worry about yourself ok!"

"About what Kirpa?"

"Your wedding to Anjali. You guys should start planning."

"Oh don't worry about that, Anjali and I have decided that we are going to run away and marry!" Joked Shahid.

"Very funny!" Kripa said making a face.

The door opened and a nurse came in, "The visiting hours are over, only one person can stay with him." Saying this the nurse left the room.

"Shahid, take Anjali, I'll stay with Angad." Kripa demanded.

"No Kripa, you go with Anjali!" Shahid said.

"Shahid NOW!" Kripa said in a treachery manner.

Anjali giggled, and Shahid stood up, "Kripa, make sure to give me lessons on how to keep your husband in hand! I'm going to need them."

"Anytime! Your welcome!" They both laughed while Shahid gave a 'I'll see you guys later' look.

Kripa looked at Angad and placed her head on his chest, hugging him tightly, yet this time with a smile on her face. "I love you Angad!" She smiled to herself. She just couldn't believe it. Nearly two years later Angad was in front of Kripa. Now all she had to do was make him get well as soon as possible. Kripa later fell asleep next to Angad reviewing his old report.

Next morning, Shahid entered the room to find Kripa sleeping. Shahid had encountered Kripa while sleeping. But for the first time she slept with a smile on her face. Shahid knew that Angad was going to get better very soon. Anjali walked behind him and followed his gaze, and then smiled to herself. "They are made for each other!" She whispered. "They are." Shahid whispered back.

"You think Kripa is going to go to France now?" Anjali asked.

"I don't think so, and if she wants to I'm not going to let her. Anjali do me a favor, examine Angad today and tell me how he's doing."

"I will!" She assured him. "For now lets go, I don't think we have to worry about Angad any more."

"We don't!" Shahid said happily.

*****

A week passed by Kripa stayed with Angad. She took off from the hospital and declined the offer for France. Angad was indeed improving, and why wouldn't he, he was after all under the safe hands of Dr. Kripa Kapoor! Kripa had full hope that Angad would regain conscience anytime soon now. Kripa hadn't told Prithvi about this yet as she hadn't seen him. He, apart from being a trustee of the hospital, he was also the owner of a fashion house, 'Suraj.' Anjali's trip had been moved a month ahead because of a few problems.

The company because of which may things happened. She lost her parents, but also gained there love. This was one more reason added to Kripa's list to why she couldn't marry Prithvi anymore. But honestly it was an excuse. No matter how hard Kripa tried, she still had hope that Angad would wake up, take her in her arms and tell her how much he loves her. But she knows it's not true.

One day, Kripa was checking Angad like she had been for the past few weeks, when she thought she saw movement in his hands. Yet at the same time she thought that it was just her imagination. But then again the same thing happened. She quickly called Shahid, and he came running in. They stood there as Angad moved his hands for the first time in two years. His lips quivered. And his eyes slowly began to open.

The image was blurry, and his head seemed to spin. He slowly grabbed his head, and then his eyes fully opened. Shahid ran to Angad, and looked at him, and then slowly next to him he saw Kripa. He looked at them once by one. "Where am I?" He finally asked. "Who are you guys," he continued. "And who am I?"

"Angad, its Shahid, your best friend. Remember we used to play football in college. Angad?" Shahid was confused. Kripa knew exactly what had happened, crying she ran out of the room, and Shahid followed her.

"Kripa, Kripa! Meri baat tho suno." He grabs her arm and turns her around. "Kya hua? Aur yeh Angad…"

"He has lost his memory." She cried. "He has lost his memory." Kripa fell to the floor crying, and Shahid just couldn't believe it. Anjali came running to Kirpa and helped her get up.

"Shahid, kya hua, why is Kripa crying?" She asked as she helped Kripa sit down. "Shahid I'm talk to you." Shahid still didn't reply and Anjali walked to Shahid. "Shahid, is Angad ok?" Still Shahid stood there crying, and soon hugged Anjali breaking down. "Shahid, for god's sake, stop crying and tell me what's the matter?" She pulled away from him and cupped her face.

"Anjali, Angad…"

"Angad what?" She yelled.

"Angad lost his memory. He doesn't remember me, he doesn't remember Kripa. No one." He cried even more now. Anjali let go of him in shock, and backed away, running right into Angad's room where she found him sleeping once again. Kripa came running behind her to stop her, but when she saw Angad sleeping she got worried once again thinking he might have slept into coma once again.

She quickly ran to him and shook him in an effort of waking him up. After a minute of so, Angad opened his eyes. And Kirpa took a sigh of relief. "Did you mind my family?" He asked. A tear formed in the corner of her eye once again, but she quickly wiped it.

"Yes we have." Kripa concluded. "Your grand mother should be here any time soon. And these are your friends, Shahid and Anjali." She pointed to each one.

"And you are?" He asked.

"She's…" Shahid began.

"I'm your doctor." Kripa said quickly smiling. "Only your doctor, nothing more."

"Ok." He said politely.

"Now you can take rest, and will come back in sometime to check on your." Kripa said as she checked his pulse one last time. "Shahid, Anjali, you guys can stay here." Kripa walked quickly out the room into the small cabin she was appointed. She stood near the window weeping. She thought back to her words; Only your doctor, nothing more, she cried more when she felt someone's hand on her shoulder. She turned around finding Shahid there, her tears started flowing once again, as she threw her arms around him. "I'm only his doctor" she repeated again and again, "I'm only his doctor." Kripa parted from Shahid and wiped her tears. "I'm sorry Shahid."

"When can we talk him home?" He asked.

"If possible by tomorrow. And just make sure that he's not stressed. Try and remind him old events, but make sure that he doesn't over stress his brain. That would hurt him." Kripa picked up a few files. "I've handed this case to someone else, so from tomorrow I won't be here. In fact, I'm going to try to get my trip to France valid again." Kripa looked at Shahid. "Kya hua? Aaisa kya dekh raha ho?"

Shahid took a step closer and held Kirpa's shoulders, "How did you manage to love him so much?"

"I don't know, never asked myself." She joked. The door opened once again and walked in Josh next to Aaliya. "Guys, you all can't be in my office at once."

"Shut-up Kripa." Yelled Aaliya. "Anjali told me everything. Your stupid, why are you doing this to your self?"

"Can you explain what exactly I'm doing?"

"What are you doing? Ask us what your not doing." Concluded Josh. "Have you ever thought that when Angad gets his memory back, he'll kill him self for doing this. To make you think this way?"

"And what if he never gets his memory back?" Kripa said camly.

"Kripa what are you…" Began Shahid.

"It's clear. A patient who has been in coma for two years, wakes up with his memory lost. There's only five percent chance that he's going to get it back. Unless Angad is bluffing. Which I doubt. He's not that of an actor! And now if you guys will excuse me I have to go on my rounds. So everyone out!" She waited for everyone to leave and then she left for her rounds. She entered the new born baby room. This was the place where she could spend hours.

Starting from the first baby to the last she checked every one of them. These were babies who's mothers had either died and they didn't have a father, or either there mothers weren't ready to accept them. And when she reached the last baby, he was awake. Kripa put her clip board down and picked him up. The cute baby put his arms around Kripa, playing with her hair. He was the cutest little thing Kripa had ever seen. She wished she could sit with him all day and play. His gentle touch made her forget everything.

Five minutes later Kripa put him down back into his crib. She kissed his lips and turned to leave, but she couldn't, she felt as if someone was holding her coat. She turned to find the little baby holding on to her lab coat. His blue eyes smiling at her. Kripa freed her coat and kissed him once again. "I'll see you soon baby!" She caressed his cheek with her finger and then left.

She went to other room's and time passed. It was around seven and it was time for her to see Angad for the last time as she wished, hoped.

She opened his door and found him sitting there reading a news paper. "Hi, Mr. Khanna." She greeted she him. Angad looked up from his paper, and smiled back at her.

"Good Evening Doctor." He replied back. "Can I ask you something?"

"Yes, what is it?"

"When can I go home?"

"Well, maybe by tomorrow, only and only if we have a doctor or nurse available to come with you." Kripa took Angad's wrist and checked his pulse. "Your doing great! That's it for today. You take good care of your self, and I won't be here from tomorrow, you will be appointed a new doctor."

"Why not?" Angad asked.

"Well, I promised a friend something."

"Ok!"

"Bye Mr. Khanna."

"Bye Doctor." Kripa left the room and walked into the Senior doctors room. She took a deep breath and knocked.

'May I come in sir."

"Yes Kirpa. Tell me."

"I would like to quit Mr. Khanna's case."

"You can't" He said simply. "In fact we are discharging him tomorrow, and you will have to take up that job. From morning to night."

"But Doctor-"

"No question. You may leave."

"Yes doctor." Kripa left the room frowning.

"Kripa."

"Yes Doctor."

"Actually we are discharging him today."

"Yes Doctor."

Kripa called Dadi and Shahid and they came and picked them up.

Will Angad get his memory back. Will Kripa be able to forget Angad?

Edited by neha9 - 19 years ago

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