FF Pyaar Ho Hi Gaya: Part 29 pg105

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi guys!! How are you all?! 😃

Well, i'm still really missing kasturi and roka sooooo much so i decided to write a fanfic. It's my first attempt so hope you guys like it!
My inspiration for this ff is all you wonderful ff writers on here and ofcourse the one and only RoKa

Read it and let me know what you thought of it ye...

The storyline and character sketch is the same as the drama so i won't bother telling you about them...the only thing is that kasturi is slightly more outspoken than the normal one. If there are any changes in the characters i will let you know as we go along so here goes part 1 of 'Pyaar ho hi gaya'...enjoy!! 😛

Index:
 
Part 1 - page 1
Part 2 - page 2
Part 3 - page 4/5
Part 4 - page 6
Part 5 - page 7 
Part 6 - page 9
Part 7 - page 12
Part 8 - page 18
Part 9 - page 20
Part 10 - page 22
Part 11 - page 24
Part 12 - page 26
Part 13 - page 28
Part 14 - page 30
Part 15 - page 31
Part 16 - page 38
Part 17 - page 40
Part 18 - page 43
Part 19 - page 48
Part 20 - page 53
Part 21 - page 60
Part 22 - page 65
Part 23 - page 73
Part 24 - page 75
Part 25 - page 82
Part 26 - page 85
Part 27 - page 88 (Shaadi invitation)
Part 28 - page 102
Part 29 - page 105
 
 
 
Part 1:
 
'Aye, samajh tha kya hai apne aap ko. Bari bari gaarion mein ghoomthe ho aur bhool ja the ho ke yaha aur bhi log hothe hai. Sadak kya tere baap ki hai. Eh agar maa ka dood piya hai tho ruk...baar nikhal saale!!' She shouted as she started wiping her white salwar kameez with her bare hands. It was covered in mud from the splash the car had caused which drove past her.

The car stopped to a halt and a young, smart, very good-looking guy stepped out. He was dressed in casual clothes; jeans, t-shirt with a green blazer, rings in his fingers, chains round his neck, little earrings in his ears. He walked upto the girl who was shouting so much and stopped right in front of her.

'Excuse me kya bola tum ne??' He asked in his husky voice.

The girl looked up at him who all this time was busy abusing the car driver whilst trying to wipe the mud stain off her dress.

'Maine poocha kya bola tumne?' He again asked slightly angrily this time.

'Utharo...' she replied calmly.

'What?' He asked questioningly.

'Maine bola utharo...' she said demandingly

'Kya?? tum theek tho ho...pagal tho nahi hogi...ye tum kya ke rahi ho...utharo kya utharo?' He asked surprised and worried at the same time

'Apna chashma utharo!' She snapped at him.

The guy was wearing sunglasses which made him look even more attractive. He looked at her up and down twice and then said 'Kyun..?'

'Kyunki mujhe tumse baat karni hai..' she said

'Tho isme chasma utharni ki kya zaroorat hai?' he asked.

'Tum andhe ho?' She asked sarcastically.

'What...no!' he said

'Tho kya tume conjunctivitis hai?'

'Nahi kyu?'

'Tho chasma kyun pehan rakha hai utharo!' She yelled

He just looked at her in shock. Nobody had ever dared to speak to him like that and this girl wearing a simple salwar kameez that too with mud stains on was saying all sorts of things to him. It was definite he didn't like her at all.

'Dekho...' he said raising his finger in front of her face.

'Dikh hi tho nahi ra isleye ke rahi ho apna chasma utharo!!' She again said

Getting fed up from the way this girl was talking to him he took off his glasses exposing his deep brown expressive eyes.

'Tumhari problem kya hai?' He said irritated.

'Tum!'  she replied. 'Dekho tumne mera kya haal kar diya hai...dekh kar nahi chala sakthe kya? Mere saare kapre haraab kar diye ab mein kya karogi..?' she said angrily.

'So what's the big deal? Ye lo...' he took out some money from his pocket and handed it to her without counting it. 'Aur khareed lena ok!' He said with full attitude and started to walk back to his car.

The girl looked at the money in her hand with disbelief.

'Aye!!' She stormed up to him and he stopped by his car and turned around.

'Samjh the kya ho apne aap ko...tumhari himmat kese hoi? Pakro apne paise mujhe inko koi zaroorat nahi hai.' She said slamming the money back into his hand. 'Tum ameer logo ki yehi problem hothi hai har baat pe apne paiso ka rob jamathe ho...paiso do aur kaam hatham karo hena?'

'Uff tum...tum tum ho kya yaar? tumhari problem kya hai?!' He sighed irritatingly. This girl was getting on his last nerves; she was really wasting his time.

'Mein un ladkion me se ho jo tum jaise logo ko kaise handle karna hai achi tara jaanti ho...' the guy just stood there with his arms folded and rolling his eyes and sighing. 'Tum kya samjhe tum mujhe paise do ge tho mein tumhe chor do gi.' The guy put his finger in one of his ears and started shaking it and then started yawning. 'Tum jaiso ko mein aise..aise..chutkio mein theek karna jaanti ho' she said whilst clicking her fingers in front of his face.

'Gosh you're so rude! Tum jaisi ladki ko mein aaj thak nahi mila...tum jaanthi bhi ho mein kaun ho? Do you even know who i am?' He said with arrogance.

'Hoge kisi ameer baap ki bigri hoi aulad ya kisi laila shaila ke majnu...mujhe is se koi farak nahi partha' she said waving her arms about.

'Tum chahthi kya ho?' He said getting fed up, he wanted to get away from her as soon as possible.

'Maafi!' She said folding her arms and slightly turning so that his face was on her side.

'Huh?'

'Haan...tum mujhse maafi maango?' She said

'What? kyun mein kyun maafi mango?' He said

'Arey tumhari wajah se mere kapre haraab hoge.' She said turning back to look at him

'Tho?' He said

'Tho kya..maafi mango!' She said widening her eyes

'Huh you must be kidding...mein aur tumse maafi! Shakal dekhi hai apni?' the guy said holding his palm in front of her face.

'Tumse tho achi hai!' Yelled the girl holding her hand in front of his face.

'Oh please is shakal pe tho laakho larkia marthi hai' the guy said proudly holding his chin

'Marigi nai tho aur kya karegi tum ho hi itne daroone bechari daar ke mare marjati hogi' she said sarcastically.

'You you...you know what...maafi tho tumhe mujhse maagni chahiya...kab se mujh par chila rahi ho, mujhe gaaliya de rahi ho, mujhe pata nahi kya kya suna rahi ho...badtameez kahi ki.' He yelled

'What mein badtameez? Badtameez hoga tu, teri maa, tera baap tera poora khandhan!' She yelled pointing at him.

Both of them were standing in the busy streets of Delhi shouting at each other. They were yelling for quite some time now and people started gathering around and chattering to each other. The guy noticed this, gave the girl a dirty look and stomped inside his car. He started driving off whilst the girl started kicking at his car.

'Oye kaha jaa raha hai waapis aa mein kethi ho waapis aa..dar gaye kya?' She said looking triumphant with her hands on her hips but exhausted after all that shouting.

She looked at her watch..'hai rabba is idiot ki chakar mein mein bhool hi gaye mera interview hai. Ab mein kya karo  ek tu age hi late ho upar se us idiot ke wajah se mujhe ghar jakhar kapre badal ne parge...wah kasturi beta interview ki din hi late, ab tho tujhe ye job milne se rahi' she said to herself.

 

1 hour late to her interview kasturi finally reached there. She looked up at the building and read the signboard "Sabharwal industries" she quickly went inside and went to the reception desk.

'Excuse me' she said nervously

The girl at the reception looked up at her.

'Kasturi chawla, job interview...with Mrs Devika sabharwal' she managed to say.

The receptionist looked in the diary and then at kasturi then at the clock and then at kasturi again.

'You're 1 hour late miss chawla' she said sternly.

Kasturi looked down.

'Im sorry but you have to leave...there is no interview now all interviews have been done.' the receptionist said

'Please' kasturi begged 'please don't say that you see i got stuck in some trouble it's not my fault' she tried to explain.

'I'm sorry but that's not my problem, rules are rules..you may leave now.' She said

Kasturi kept pleading the receptionist but she wouldn't agree. Hearing all this noise devika came out of her cabin.

'Ye kya ho raha hai?' She said.

Kasturi turned around to see devika..she had a strong personality.

'Ma'am ye ladki...'said the receptionist

'Ma'am mein kasturi chawla ho mera job interview tha aapke saath lekin mein late ho gaye..ma'am im so sorry lekin please mujhe ye job ki bohat zaroorat hai please ma'am aap mujhe ek moka de mein aapko nirash nahi hone do gi ma'am please.' Kasturi said hurriedly with her hands folded in front of her.

Seeing the determination in kasturi's eyes devika said 'okay come with me.'

'Hmmm' said devika as she examined kasturi's papers. Kasturi was fiddling with her fingers whilst looking nervously at devika 'your qualifications are pretty impressive miss chawla'

'Thank you ma'am' smiled kasturi.

Devika looked at kasturi and saw what she was wearing. A simple chiffon blue salwar kameez with her dupatta round her neck and her wrists delicately embraced with silver bangles and silver earrings dangling in her ears.

'I think yehi ladki theek rahe gi Robbie ki secretary ke liye. Ache ghar se lagthi hai salwar kameez pehen thi hai, simple hai, apne kaam pe dhyaan de gi, waise bhi itni interview ke baad koi nahi milli' as she reflected on all the previous girls who had come for an interview wearing short skirts and sleeveless blouses. They were obviously there for Robbie not for the job but this girl seemed different she seemed the sort that would only concentrate on her work, the sort that could handle Robbie and keep him away from his uncountable girlfriends. She really did want the job devika thought to herself.

'Ok your hired kal se tum kaam pe aa jana theek 9 baje aur haan aaj ki tara don't be late.'

Kasturi was over the moon she was really happy..'really ma'am? Thank you soo much ma'am thank you so much' she said shaking devika's hand so hard that it could come out any second.

'It's okay kasturi' devika said releasing her hand and massaging it.

'Mein tumhe kal Robbie se bhi mila do gi okay?'

'Yes ma'am.'

'Waise tum Robbie ko tho jaanthi hogi na?' Devika asked

'Er nahi ma'am' kasturi replied feeling a bit stupid since she hard to work with Robbie and didn't know who he was.

'Perfect' devika thought.. 'koi nahi kal milo gi tho jaan bhi logi afterall tumhe usi ke saath tho kaam karna hai.'

'Ji ma'am' smiled kasturi.

That night kasturi couldn't get to sleep she was too excited about her new job. Kaushalya came inside her room as she saw the lights were on.

'Kya huwa puttar? Abhi thak soye nahi?' Asked kaushalya

'Maa' kasturi hugged kaushalya 'mein aapko pata nahi sakthi ke mein kitni khush ho ke mujhe ye job mil gaye ab mein apke aur bauji ke saare sapne pure karogi.'

'Woh sab tho theek hai puttar lekin ab tu soja kal tujhe jaldi jaana hai na kal tera pehla din hai kaam ka chal soja.'

'Ji maa' said kasturi as she lay in her bed beside her sisters and kaushalya kissed her forehead.

Kasturi was slowly falling asleep with a sweet smile on her face thinking about tomorrow but with a bit of nervousness in her gut afterall it was her first day at work. As she was about to fall asleep tanu nudged her

'di....diii' said tanu

'mmm kya hai tanu' said kasturi in a sleepy voice.

'Aap bohat excited ho na aapni job ko lekhe' said tanu

'haan...' said kasturi

'kitne lucky ho aap di aap Robbie sabharwal ke saath kaam karoge kitna exciting hai na' said tanu excitedly

'tanuuuu...' she said turning around to face her, 'mein isleye excited nahi ho kyunki mein Robbie sabharwal ki secretary ban gaye ho mein isleye excited ho kyunki mujhe ye job mil gaye aur mein ab maa bauji ke sapne pure kar paogi aur bauji ke operation ke liye paise aur teri aur navneet ki shaadi ke liye paise jama kar paogi.'

'Diiiii aap bhi kitne boring ho laakhon larkian us pe marthi hai aur aap hai ke....'

At tanu's "laakhon larkian" statement kasturi sat up on her bed and started saying 'idiot, stupid, donkey kahi ka...'

'Kya huwa di?' said tanu also sitting up next to kasturi

'Arey kuch nahi tanu aaj subah ek pagal mil gaya tha woh yaad aa gaya..'

'Acha di kya huwa?'

Kasturi told the whole thing to tanu and tanu started laughing holding her stomach 'di aap bhi na'

'Arey tu has rahi hai patha uski wajah se mein interview mein late ho gaye uski wajah se meri job bhi jaa sakthi thi tanu'

'Par gaye tho nahi na di'

'Haan lekin jaa tho sakthi thi na'

'Ek tho aap khud use behas karne lagi uparse us bechare ko...'

'Bechara?? Woh koi bechara wechara nahi hai! Tu jaanthi nahi tanu is kism ke logo ko' said kasturi

'Di ab jo koi tumse panga lega woh tho bechara hi hoga na' giggled tanu

'Tanuuu tu' said kasturi raising her hand to hit her

'Sojao na tum dono kya shoru ho gaye ho khud tho so nahi re aur mujhe bhi sone nahi de re' said navneet in a sleepy voice.

Kasturi and tanu both bit their tongue and giggled and lay down.

'Goodnight di' said tanu

'Goodnight tanu goodnight navneet' said kasturi

'Mmmm' said navneet

Kasturi turned to her left side and closed her eyes once again but this time went to sleep with an angry look on her face thinking about that "idiot".

Next morning kasturi woke up early. She stretched her arms, looked out the window, smiled and went to have a shower. She soon came out wearing a simple light pink churidhar suit. She sat at the dressing table wiping her hair with the towel. She filled her wrists with silver bangles and carefully placed each earring in her ears. She put on minimum make-up, stuck on a small bindi and brushed her hair leaving it out to sway with the wind. She walked upto the bed and nudged tanu and navneet.

'Tanu navneet chalo utho college nahi jaana kya' she said

'Mmm di bas 2 minute' they both murmed

'Koi 2 minute nahi abhi utho' kasturi said pulling the duvet off them and went downstairs.

Kasturi took everyone's blessings and sat at the table and started eating her breakfast.

'Kasturi puttar itni jaldi tyaar hogi' said beeji

'Ji beeji aaj pehla din hai na kaam pe tho socha ke jaldi uth jao' kasturi replied 'acha maa mein chalthi ho' she said taking one bite from her apple.

'Arey nashtha tho karke jaa kasturi puttar' said kaushalya

'Nahi maa bas hogaya' she said taking her mom's blessings and kissing her on the cheek. Kasturi once again took the blessings of all the elders and left in a hurry.

'haiyo rabba kya zamana aa gaya hai ab is ghar ki larkian bhi kaam pe jaya kare gi wahh' said alka moving her hands about

Everyone looked at alka thinking uff phir shoro ho gayi.

'tho is mein kya haan alka, kasturi puttar sirf kaam pe hi tho jaa rahi hai' said bauji

'abhi tho sirf ye kaam pe jaa rahi hai bauji age age dekhna kya kya gul kilay gi hamari kasturi' said alka sarcastically

'alka!!!' shouted bauji

'sach hi tho ke rahi ho bauji dekh lena aap phir mujhe na kehna ke maine bola nahi' she said and walked out leaving everyone annoyed and shaking their heads.

Kasturi reached the office, said her prayers and went inside. The receptionist told her that devika was waiting for her in her cabin and told her the directions.

'May i come in ma'am' said kasturi

Devika looked at her watch and said 'come in kasturi...hmm very good you're on time'. Kasturi smiled.

'well Robbie tho abhi aya nahi tho tab thak hum discuss karthe hai ke tume kya kya karna hai okay'

'Yes ma'am' said kasturi.

They were sitting in the cabin for a few hours discussing kasturi's task and devika was telling kasturi about Robbie...how irresponsible he is, about his affairs, his temper, etc, how he never really comes to office but is only coming today since devika forced him to.

'Dekho na kasturi maine Robbie ko bola tha ke office theek 11 baje poonch jaana aur ab tho 2 baj rahe ha i tell you ye ladka na' said devika holding her head.

'kasturi..'

'yes ma'am'

' aaj se ye tumhari duty hai ke tum Robbie ko har meeting, rehearsal, etc, time pe lao gi ok' devika said

'yes ma'am' replid kasturi.

Just then the phone rang and devika picked it up 'hello'

'ma'am Robbie sir aa gaye hai woh apne cabin mein hai'

'okay thank you' said devika

'chalo kasturi Robbie finally aa gaya hai mein tumhe use milwati hoon'

They both walked out and reached robbie's cabin. Devika opened the door and went it

'Robbie'

Robbie was sitting on the chair swinging around with his back towards devika. He swung around and got up and hugged his mom.

'good morning mom' he said

'morning? Robbie time dekho 2 baj rahe hai maine tum ko kya bola tha kal ke office 11 baje poonch jaana aur tum...'

'mom mom chill main aa tho gaya na kya baat hai aapne mujhe kyu bolaya?'

'maine tume isleye bolaya son kyunki aaj se maine tumhare liye ek nayi secretary appoint ki hai'

'acha' said Robbie raising his eyebrows  with a naughty smile on his face 'who's the lucky girl?' he asked winking

'kasturi' devika called out. Robbie looked up at the door. Kasturi slowly came inside...she was a bit hesitant and was looking down.

'Kasturi, meet Robbie aur Robbie ye hai kasturi tumhari new secretary' said devika

Kasturi slowly moved her head up and looked at Robbie and then...

'TUM!!' 😲 Robbie and kasturi both said at the same time looking shocked.

 

So guys kaisa laga?? 😉 I know this part was quite long and sorry if i bored you but i wrote a long part as i'm not sure if i can update regularly at the moment as my exams are next month but i'll try.

Do comment and feel free to criticise!

Let me know what you thought of it and tell me if you think i should continue...

 

hinna 

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Posted: 15 years ago

m so very happy and excited that theres one roka fanfic added to the list of fantastic fanfic..... thank u so much for starting a fanfic.... a very nice part, u write really nicely.... please update soooooooon........

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Posted: 15 years ago
wah!
wat a part yaar!!!!!!
awesome prt!!!
i'm glad dat u've started ur ff......i'm very happy to see roka again!!!!
woooooooo awesome part!!!!da 1st part itself rocked.....so cant imagine how da other parts will be....
hope u don take much time to clear da tiff btween roka n ro falling for ka....
continue fast.....i'm eager to read da rest!!!!
npopoooooooo....its not at all long compare dto shumi dii or sari dii's f....plzzzzzzzz if u can den write lil more long part coz always hhaappyy to read anything abt my roka!!!!!
continue faasssssssst!!!!
 
Nechu
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Posted: 15 years ago
U SJOULD CONTINUEEEEEEEEE..............plzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: nehaaa nawab

m so very happy and excited that theres one roka fanfic added to the list of fantastic fanfic..... thank u so much for starting a fanfic  ur welcome 😛.... a very nice part, u write really nicely  aw thank you for the wonderful comment 😳.... please update soooooooon........ will try and do asap

 
 
Hinna
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: RoKa PraNeev

wah!

wat a part yaar!!!!!!
awesome prt!!!  aww really? thank you so much i'm glad u liked it 😳
i'm glad dat u've started ur ff......i'm very happy to see roka again!!!!  i know i've always been inspired by all the ff writers on here so thought of giving it a shot......
woooooooo awesome part!!!!da 1st part itself rocked.....so cant imagine how da other parts will be.... aw thank you....i wasnt sure if it was any good since it was my first attempt...i felt i might have dragged on but im soo happy u liked it 😃
hope u don take much time to clear da tiff btween roka n ro falling for ka.... well you'l just have 2 wait n see 😉
continue fast.....i'm eager to read da rest!!!! 😆 lol will try 2 update soon
npopoooooooo....its not at all long compare dto shumi dii or sari dii's f....plzzzzzzzz if u can den write lil more long part coz always hhaappyy to read anything abt my roka!!!!! lol u want me 2 write even longer parts 😆 i don't know if i can do that but will try....cos even i like reading and writing about roka 😳
continue faasssssssst!!!! ok will try
 
Nechu
thanks soo much 4 the wonderful comments nechu
 
hinna

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: RoKa PraNeev

U SJOULD CONTINUEEEEEEEEE..............plzzzzzzzzzzz

don't worry sweety i will continue, i haven't wrote the next part but will update asap
 
hinna
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow yaar u did a great job
keep it up
it was anazing
 
Anniya
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey mind blowing  hina superb yaar!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow! Loved ur FF 👏
Totally hilarious - i kept laughing out loud and my friend kept giving me weird looks on his webcam 😆
'Hoge kisi ameer baap ki bigri hoi aulad ya kisi laila shaila ke majnu' hehe loved this line 😃
'Oh please is shakal pe tho laakho larkia marthi hai' me too...😛
Love Kasturi's character shes got guts 😉
And nice to see a decent Devika for once 😲
And it wasnt too long or boring 😊
Please continue soon 😊