Pyar Ka Safar FF Part 4 Pg5 UPDATED

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Posted: 15 years ago
 Part 1
G get's up and goes into the bathroom and has a shower. And then comes back and Changes into a nice Kurti and Jeans when G is ready her friend Sanju phones.
 
Sanju: hi G hows u?
 
G: i am fine  hows u?
 
Sanju: i am fine too G when are you reaching college?
 
G: in about 5 minutes.
 
Sanju: ok i will cu then tc bye
 
G: ok byexx tc
 
They both hang up from the phone. And then G takes her mobile, books and then locks the door and then goes to the car and drives to college.
 
when G aririves at college she get's out fom the car and phones Sanju and asks where she is.
 
G: hi Sanju where are u ?
Sanju: G i am waiting for u by th canteen because we have our Phsycology class so hurry up.
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G: haan Baba i am coming
G: sees Sanju and the goes to her Sanju says shall we go to our class.
 
Sanju and G both go to their Physcology class and sit down on the Chair
when the Teacher comes everyone get's up and says good morning Sir.
The Teacher says Sit down Student please.
Everyone sits down when G is listining a boy from behing flicks a note to G  an on th note it says will u meet me in the canteen after class.
 
(a boy is messing with G)
G wonders who could have played this prank.
when the class is over Sanju goes to G and asks what happened?
 
G: shows the note to Sanju and Sanju reads the note.
S: but G who could have played a prank on you?
G: i really don't know.
 
When the College is over while G is walking to the Canteen she could feel that someone is following her.
She turns around and sees no one is there.
As G is about to leave the canteen.  The boy comes and with them there
 
4 boys  andy they say to hi beautiful hows u?
 
The boy who wrote the note try to grabs her hand and try to kiss her
but G slaps the boy.
 
G: says leave me
 
 Goons : not so easily
 
 G try's to escape form the boys  but the boys catch her again.
 
 G: screams help help.
 
 G is about to get rape but she doesn't because our hero S comes on
 time and saves her and fights with the goons.
  S beats the goons then the goons get so scared and run away.
 
  What do you think is going to happen next.
 
  please leave your comments and view.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow...............Wonderful  update  dear......keep  it  up  😆
Ganga  in  Jeans ..........Soooooo  cute
Sagar  fought  with  the  people  who  teased  Ganga ...............Of course  Sagar  is  for  Ganga  and  viceversa .
I  think  as  Ganga  is  the  Modern  girl  here  wearing  Jeans  etc., she  won't  Thank  Sagar  instead  she  might  scold  Sagar  saying  that  he  has  done  all  these  to  show  his  heroism  in  front  of  her ..............How  is  my  prediction ?

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi....
Nice update....
I just hav one problem.......
I dont think u shud write abt sensitive stuff like a rape in college....
Thats not acceptable wid me....if u just didnt add that part it wud be okay.....sorry for the lame complaint...
Otherwise it was okay...
Agree wid SWANI...
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Posted: 15 years ago

oops!! psychology or  physcology.....or u gonna invent new subject....lol

[quote]
 I was about to say same too !!
Ganga  in  Jeans ..........Soooooo  cute
Sagar  fought  with  the  people  who  teased  Ganga ...............Of course  Sagar  is  for  Ganga  and  viceversa .
I  think  as  Ganga  is  the  Modern  girl  here  wearing  Jeans  etc., she  won't  Thank  Sagar  instead  she  might  scold  Sagar  saying  that  he  has  done  all  these  to  show  his  heroism  in  front  of her[/quote]
continue till forum closes.....really loved it!! new concept new idea..hmmmm

Edited by Passionaire - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
i need more comments  and i will surely continue soon.
Chait-Jenn-4eva thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: swani_saku

Wow...............Wonderful  update  dear......keep  it  up  😆
Ganga  in  Jeans ..........Soooooo  cute
Sagar  fought  with  the  people  who  teased  Ganga ...............Of course  Sagar  is  for  Ganga  and  viceversa .
I  think  as  Ganga  is  the  Modern  girl  here  wearing  Jeans  etc., she  won't  Thank  Sagar  instead  she  might  scold  Sagar  saying  that  he  has  done  all  these  to  show  his  heroism  in  front  of  her ..............How  is  my  prediction ?

 
Thnx Swanitha for like  liking the next part will be up soon just need more comments.
i am glad u liked it. you are right will edit the rape part.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Passionaire

oops!! psychology or  physcology.....or u gonna invent new subject....lol

[quote]
 I was about to say same too !!
Ganga  in  Jeans ..........Soooooo  cute
Sagar  fought  with  the  people  who  teased  Ganga ...............Of course  Sagar  is  for  Ganga  and  viceversa .
I  think  as  Ganga  is  the  Modern  girl  here  wearing  Jeans  etc., she  won't  Thank  Sagar  instead  she  might  scold  Sagar  saying  that  he  has  done  all  these  to  show  his  heroism  in  front  of her[/quote]
continue till forum closes.....really loved it!! new concept new idea..hmmmm

 
Thnx Passionare i will continue 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: styleislife13

Hi....

Nice update....
I just hav one problem.......
I dont think u shud write abt sensitive stuff like a rape in college....
Thats not acceptable wid me....if u just didnt add that part it wud be okay.....sorry for the lame complaint...
Otherwise it was okay...
Agree wid SWANI...

 
Thnx Ash  for the lovely comments i will continue thnx once again. 😛😛
Chait-Jenn-4eva thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
i need more comments ans views.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Annie.... Sweetie...Iam very sorry.....
If my comments hurt u....
What was i thinking......this was ur 1st FF....n all i cud do was complain...
Sooo sorry sweetie....hope u forgive me....
Okay...now lets change the topic....lol
Soo.....u needed more views n comments...
Well look no further...Iam here sweetie...
Gr8 update...
Nice name....
Perfect for their story...
It is a lamba safar haina...
I think even if Ganga is modern....that does not mean that she has no manners......
I mean if sum1 helps her...she shud thank him....
I hav lived abraod n i think the "modern" girls r not this way...yes they r more free n hav an open mind....but they do not lack manners...atleast i think so.....
So how abt my vies...need more comments then just tell!
Bye sweetie..
Take Care..
XxX