Written Update 23 Dec:Hari in Danger

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Posted: 15 years ago
characters:
sidhi: one of the kids.
nicky: choti bahu.
danny: nicky's husband
anand:madhu bhabhi's hubby.
BB: bhadi baa
CB: choti baa-hari's mom
anupum: shree's dad
 
 
 
 
Detailed:
 
    the baba gives a dhaga to bhabhi for hari. he tells her that she must tie it on hari's hand before sunset, because the next  16 days are going to be tough for him because the shadow will do anything to keep them apart.
 
Shree's house:
 
    the villagers gather at shree's house demanding to see shree who has cost problems in the village screaming help!! shree hides inside the house behing the curtains. her dad calls her out she comes out and her dad gets upset. she is about to say will a little kid comes with a cute puppy in his hands and asks shree to pet it it wont hurt. shree runs inside the house screaming and crying the kid insists but she goes on and finally the kid is sent out with the rest of the villagers.shree's dad calms her down.
 
Hari's house:
 
    everyone is looking at photos of suitable girls for hari. hari goes to his dad asking him why are they all after his marriage he doesnt want to marry, but his dad gives him the eye and he quites down.just then bhabhi enters and overhears hari's words.she remembers what the baba had told her. she thinks about the two things and faints. the whole family gathers around her and take her to the room. they are all in the room all worried as bhabhi looks at the dhaga. hari is pacing the room, when bhadi baa(BB) says the we should be happy that now within 16 days get him married, but noone is happy. just then hari says now he knows that his happiness.. they all ask him wat???hari refuses to tell but after pressure he says that he doesnt belief ghosts but from a couple of days he is feeling someone around him and yesterday he felt that someone was on his chest trying to kill him. and so they shoudl stop all this girl business. he tells him mom that if she has a son she will get a daughter in law. he takes everyone out. he then tells bhabhi that he loves he!!!her plan is fab and that she saved him. he will not tell anyone about it..just then the whole family overhears.CB says that now you guys watch i will get hari married in 7 days.Just then BB says her twisted line and nicky corrects her but as always BB wins.they all go and continue the wedding prep. noone listens to bhabhi.
 
Hari's room:
  hari is talking on the phone when bhabhi is about to tie the dhaga hari refuses and says that he doesnt want to marry and he doesnt listen to bhabhi. he says that he belives in love before marriage.just then CB enters and hari dissapears. CB says is she asking to much from hari, madhu bhabhi consoles her asking her not to wry. hari will marry a girl who is nidar!!
 
Shree's house-in kitchen:
   shree is cooking when her lil bro comes from the back and scares her he tells her to run away because foi baa(FB) is coming she has learned about wat u have done and so she is taking the next train here. she says that she wont let FB in. FB enters and gets angry at her. shree's dad enters and asks her to stop. FB says that she wont leave till she doesnt get her married and get her scaredness out. shree gets scared and hides behind anupam. anupam says that it is dark at 4 and so she cant go  outside to bath god.anupam tries to make her understand when FB starts her emotional blackmail. just then she sees shree signing her dad and says that she wont go anywhere. everyone is sleeping when shree wakes up and changes the clock. she says that she is saved today and goes to sleep. just then FB wakes up and changes the clock back. the clock alarm rings and shree is woken up. shree wakes up anupam asking him to tag along with her. FB refuses.
 
Outside in the dark:
  scared shree is walking in the dark she says om namah shivay. she reaches the mandir she sits near the river taking water when she notices a  crab and starts screaming for help. she wakes up everyone in the village.
 
Hari's house:
 
    bhabhi says that todays he will make hari wear the dhaga. she calls jigna but no response then she sits to read something and the shadow comes from the back bhabhi thinks it is jigna and asks her to take the aarti thali away. the shadow does, bhabhi looks up at the mirror and sees the curtains waving she walks towards them and sees noone she looks around and sees the aarti thali on the floor, she is confused when jigna comes and says that sry she is late. bhabhi says to her that she was just here where is the thali jigna says that she just got here. bhabhi worries and asks her to sent hari to the terrace. at the terrace bhabhi sees the dhaga and the rest of the thali. she reaches for the dhaga but the shadow holds her back. hari comes and bhabhi is about to tie it when it flies away. hari says he will get it and he falls...bhabhi screams Hari!!!
 
Precap: bhabhi sees the shadow/atma who tells her that she will not let hari's marriage happen no matter wat and bhabhi says that she will do anything and make that possible.
 
 
 
 
enjoy...
 
luv margi
 
 
 
 
 
luv margi
Edited by gujugurl - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago
wow what a nice written piece, could actually picture everything happening well done
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Posted: 15 years ago
Shree sounds so cute!!! scared of everything!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Shree sounds so cute!!! scared of everything!!!! 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
too nice thnxxxx for telling😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wonderful update.thanks so much