~*~PREM MILAP~*~short[AR] A DEDECATION TO FF WRITE - Page 4

Originally posted by: simran1285

Awwwwww that was very cute! So sweet of Jai and Jia to help their massi out like that!

Originally posted by: hinanaziri

aww Nruti
that is so sweet of u to dedicate it to us
lemme read and comment soon
thanks hun

 

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aww that was such a sweet little story

jai and jia were so sweet and aditi of course

loved the sweet ending

great ff sweety

thanks for the dedication

love

Hina

 

Originally posted by: pinky_5

hey nruti.......

its damne sweet & cute......

Love u for this ff....

I liked it very very very much.......

👏

great way of thanking all the ff writers......

keep it up......

do pm me if u start another ff.....

thankssssss a lot for your pm..........

Love u,pinky........😊

Originally posted by: NANCYKASHYAP

gr8 yaar i like it do pm me if you start another ff

Originally posted by: Wild.Aimee

Hi Nruti 😊

Hey another short story. Thats great dear. I logged in and saw ur PM, so now i am reading it. Yet another incident to bring love birds together.

And kids, Jay, Jia & Aditi playing cupids was very-very sweet.😊 I loved reading it. The flashback was very nice. I felt really bad reading about Atul and Anjali's death😭. But it was so sweet of Riddhima to take care of her Nephew and Niece.

And the conversation between the kids and Armaan, and then the short 4 para, or we can say 4 lined conversation between Armaan & Riddhima, they all were very cutely and nicely written...👏

Though i liked reading your first two stories as well, but I think, out of all three strories, this was my personal favorite.👍🏼

 

Keep it up sweetie... Keep writing and PMing me 😆.

 

Originally posted by: *tiny*

oh, it is not at all too long..infact, i thought it ended too soon and should have gone on and on..lol...

really realy nice..

Originally posted by: cool_pisces

Hey Nruti

Thanks for the PM

I love ur one shots, and this was another gr8 one

Keep writing

Hope u write a long ff

Love Mini

Originally posted by: nimiluvkaran

hey my dear frend is ooosssom..vry vry vry guuud..xcellent yaar...

Originally posted by: swetha10

Cool FF.......... loved the story.. itz so simple n sweet...........enjoyed reading it.....😊

Originally posted by: madhsar

hey nruti......dat was such a sweet story...n dose twins jai n jia were vry vry cute.....plzzzzzzz write more such short stories n i salute to all d ff writers too....dey are all just awsme including u...

tons of luv

madhurima