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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: cute_madhu

Thanx Nisha di (hope can call u that)..Thanx a lot sweety.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜›.will cont asap...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: rajatnmughda4ev

Hey cool! Another FF! Sounds very interesting. Please do continue.

 
Hey thanx sweety...thanx for u'r compliment..I'll cont asap.....
Love ya hon......t.cccccccc
 
 
 
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"Shera didi..Shera didi..app kab aii.."

"Bass abhi ai hoon bachon.." said a visibly very happy Shera.

"Didi hum toh na apse bohot naraz hai?" the children pouted.

"Arey par kyun..iss barr toh humne aisa kuch nahi kiya"..she too had a confused n lil sad luk n pouted n asked the children.

"Tum iss baar kitne dino baad ayi ho..humein kitni yaad aa rahi thi tumhari..huh"..said a innocent voice?

"Arey mera bacha..mera nanha sa abhi..."saying so she picked the child up..

"bachu ji..aap toh aise keh rahe hai jaise humein apki bilkul yaad nahi aa rahi thi?"said Shera pinching his nose..playfully.

"Agar tumhe meri yaad aati na..toh tum jaldi aati?"?said the child who seemed to be the most upset for her cumin so late..after so many days.

Shera knew it was not goin to be easy to win over the kiddo n more so..she cudn't bear to see him upset..she loved the sweet. Cute babies of hers smiling.. "Acha thik hai baba..humse galti ho gayi.humein maaf kardo.."

"Nahi.."

"Kar do na..dekho hum kaan bhi pakad rahe hai.."she held her ears..n made the so sorry cute innocent bachon wala face?

"Tum bohot gandi ho.."

"Voh kyun..abb toh humne kaan bhi pakad liye.." She pouted..

"Tumhe pata hai na..mein tumse jyada derr naraz nahi reh sakta..aur jab tum yeh karti ho..tab toh bilkul nahi.."the child said putting his arms in front of his chest..trying to remain angry?

"Acha toh abb keh do na ki maaf kiya.."shera said while twirling the child in her arms?

"Ummhuuu?"

"Acha toh thik hai..hum apko voh chize nahi denge joh hum apke liye laye hai?"

"Kya..kya layi ho tum mere liye?" the child forgot that he was angry wiv Shera..he was too excited to know what his fav, most lovable badi behna had brought for him.

"Pehle bolo maaf kiya.." Shera said expecting that he'd say thik hai..maaf kia.

"Nahi.."

"Toh thik hai hum yeh antara ko de dete hai.." Shera tried hard to put a straight face..she knew tis tactic was surely gonna wrk.

"Arey uss bandariya ko..chipkali kahi ki..huh?yeh toh mere liye hai..do mujhe.."

"Pehle kaho maaf kiya.."

"Thik hai?tumse kabhi koi zidd mein jeet paya hai bhala?"

 

 

"Pata nahi humare saath itne sare sainik kyun bhej diye.." he muttered under his breath.

"Hum kya dudh pite bache hai..joh apni khud ki rakhsha nahi kar sakte.." "Par abb jab yeh aa hi gaye hai..toh inhe maza chakate hai?"

 

"Jaldi daudo Andhi.."(sowie cudn't think of anoder name for the mare..Vini di hope u like tis name..)? "jaldi karo..inn logo ko bohot piche chodna hai humein.."

 

"Hhhmmmmmmmhhh"

 

"Haan aur phir hum masti karenge..akele jaenge toh zyada maza aega..pata nahi maa ne inhe kyun bhej diya..ajj toh inke chake chuda dete hai.." saying so he pulled the rein harder n lightly hit the stomach of the mare?to increase her speed..

 

"Hhhmmmmmmmhhh"

 

"Rajkumar..Rukiye toh rajkumar.."

"Rajkumar Veer?

 

Sainik piche bolte hi reh gaye aur Veer agey nikal gaya?

 

"Sabash andhi?"veer uski peeth thaphapate hue bola.. "bohot khub..humne phir unn sipahiyon ko piche chod diya..abb humein jaldi apna rasta bhi badaal lena chahiye taki hum unhe chakma de sake.."

 

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"Shera Didi?"

"Haan tasha bolo?"

"Didi aap baki sab ke liye kuch nahi layi..sirf apne ladle Abhi ke liye tofa layi hain.."

"Arey voh.?"

"Humein pata hai didi..apko sirf abhi pasand hai..aur voh antara..bass vahi dono?"

B4 shera cud say anything..

"Nahi didi toh sirf humein yani antara ko pasand karti hai..uss kankhajore Abhi se kaun pyaar karta hai?"

"Abbey oye..khusat bandariya..didi tujse nahi sirf aur sirf abhi yani ki mujhse pyaar karti hai.."

"Dekh kankhajore zyada bola na..toh haath paer alag kar dungi.."

"Tujhe aur aata hi kya hai..vaise bhi sirf bol sakti hai..aur toh tu kuch kar hi nahi sakti.."

"Dekho abhi..hum tumse achi tarah baat kar rahe hai..isliye tum bhi humse achi tarah baat karo.."

Abhi imitates her..

"Urrggghhhh..ruk ja kankhajore..ajj toh nahi bach sakte tum..ajj toh sakshi jiji ke pass bhi nahi jane dungi..taki tum bach jao?"

Saying so the gal starts running around..trying to catch the boy?

 

All the oder kids sat there..enjoying the sweet, innocent fight of theirs. Which had been a routine from ever since Antara had shifted to their basti..

..(during tis whole while..like when Antara n Abhi were fightin Shera had given the gifts i.e toys, bangles, payals etc to the kids n the kids give shera the sweet pecks..or sloppy kisses [ as they loved her rosy cheecks n the small boys said that they tasted delicious?jus to make her blush..as she luked like a heavenly angel when she blushed..a pari] )

After sum time abhi came n hid behing Shera..sayin " Didi dekho iss chipkali ko..jann bhuj kar chipakne ki koshish kar rahi hai mujhse.." he said so loud enuf so that antara cud here that?

She speeded up sayin.. "ruko..abb toh tumhari kher nahi.." n was goin to catch Abhi when?

*CrasH*

 

The young gal stopped running n abhi stopped laugin..all the oders looked at the direction of the voice.

They saw a vry Fair, Handsome, fully built young boy..who luked as if he belonged to the Royal Class..On some distance from his horse they saw Hakim Baba ( a vry old vaid..the most famous vaid in the whole shramik basti..) layin on the earth.

 

What they saw was sumfin they knew was enuf to enrage shera?

 

"Na jane kya samjhte hai apne aap ko..Aisi batameezi apne Mata-Pita ke samne dikhaye..kya zara bhi akal nahi hai inhe..ki zara dekh kar ghode daudae..Yeh koi Khula Maidan thode hi hai..jo iss tarah itni tezz rafter se apne ghode..nah ghodi ko dauda rahe hai..Na jane kahan kahan se aa jate hai inse "Bigade Rais"? ( sayin so Shera covered her face wiv the extra layer of Clothes..in such a way that only her beautiful eyes were showin..she took the piece from one ear to the other ear n tucked it in there..Then she got her daggers ready..in case this lad proved to be an Ill-mannered Royals like those she had met earlier..So she wud teach him a lesson to remember..)

 

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"Ahhhhhhh"?.

" Arey inhe toh chot lagi hai.."

"Baba..Baba ..humara sahara le kar uthne ki koshish kijiye?""Voh hum bohot jaldi mein vahan se jaa rahe the..aur humse apko dekhne mein chuk ho gayi..Humein maaf kar dijiye?"

"Arey Koi baat nahi.."

"Humari zaldbazi se apko lagg gayi.." said a visibely upset Veer..coz he had hurt the elderly person in his hasty state?

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Here while Veer was showerin sorries for his behaviour..Shera on other hand was rattling curses over the royals?n tis lad? "Ajj toh sabak sikha kar rahenge" sayin so she pointed her dagger towards the handsum young lad n saw him in a deep convo wiv Hakim Baba..

She took aim n swiftly the dagger left her hand to go right past Veer's Left arm..it wud hav bruised him a lil if he hadn't had a swift body..

" Hmmm..Yeh mohshaye..Bade furtile hai..abb toh aur mazaa ayega.."

Once again she took her perfect aim at his right arm n lo?the dagger went past his right forearm..n jus as it was abt to go into his flesh..he dodged?Shera admired the lads quick reflexes n dodges?She loved Challenges?n now her task was to get tis person trapped?She had already captured him by his upper body..buh he still cud get out..So she decided takin aim at his leg?she threw the daggers wiv g8 speed n accuracy n Veer knew he had an equal opponent..so he becam ready for the attack..had it not been his yr's of training..the perfect aims wud hav taken him..n bruised him badly?

 

For now he wanted to dodge the daggers n latter he made a mental note..of knowing why he was bein attacked..n to meet the attacker?He wud surely love to meet the man who had such a g8 skill of wrkin wiv daggers..

 

After a few mins he found himself being attacked by daggers from all four sides n now to his amusment..he was captured...he was trapped?

 

" Yeh kya ho raha hai?humein iss tarah..pakad kyun liya hai..." he said after a while noticing his surroundings n saw all people standin quietly?starin at him..wiv such emotions as fear, hatred, cold fury, mockin glares n most unexpected sympathy n PITY.. he was so surprised by these expressions..

 

"Apki Khatir dari karne ke liye..RAJKUMAR"

 

"Huh.." Veer who till now was interprettin what the expressions meant..luked ova to the source of voice that had broken his daze?it had sounded so mellifluous, n sweet..n he thought he had heard tis voice b4? his mind blocked all memories as he thoughttt..

 

{ "Kiska intezaar hai apko'

   "Aap"

  "..neend nahi aa rahi?"

"Kaun ho t..err kaun hai app"

"Apke sapno ki shezadi..apki?n she came so close to him..her body touchin his..sendin electrifying sensations all ova him?

" Yaad nahi aa raha.."?n she blew on his face?she came even mre closer..bringin her lips barely inches away from his..n blew yet again?as he closed his eyes letting her take ova his senses..control him? " Agli baar dhyan rakhna..soch kar rakhna humara naam.."

n she withdrew..he watched her getting away n luked at her lips..lush red..so soft..how he wanted to capture em n feel em..

 

He watched her getting up?n goin..

" Kahan jaa rahi ho"?he said still in the after effects of their brief contact n caught hold of her wrist?

She replyed by cumin closer n closer?he loosened his grip?n then in moments time she was running away?laugin?}

 

"NAHI" he said a bit loudly to himself? "awaaz toh ek si ho sakti hai..aur vaise bhi yeh ek mard hai..ek admi..inki awaaz ladkiyon se milti hai..aur toh aur..humne unhe kabhi nahi dekha..aur voh ek sapna tha...ek khoobsurat sapna.."..he smiled at his thoughts?

 

He was so occupied in himself that he hadn't noticed that his attacker had moved closer n was now jus a few steps away..stridin long n graceful coverin the remaining distance b/w em?

 

"Humein yahan kyun kaid kiya hai?"

" Humne kaha tha na..Apki Khatirdari ke liye..RAJKUMAR.."

He was taken aback..tis voice surely resembled the voice in the dreams..buh he was mre shocked by the tone in which she..HE Veer corrected himself refered him as Rajkumar..It was drippin wiv heavy distaste.

 

" Khatir dari toh khol kar bhi ki jati hai na..toh bandh kar kyun.."..he put his charming smile as he looked in the deep black ebony eyes? "jaam do aur donon hi do aatishah" This line occurred in his mind..the time he luked in those eyes..captivating..the most beautiful eyes he had eva seen..He cud see the fire burning in them..he thought that they made her..HIM he corrected himself luk mre beautiful.. "huh..mard aur sundar?" he was confused?

 

"Hum nahi chahte ki app aur kinhi Buzurgon ko giraye..isliye app ki kahtir ase hi hogi.."

 

By now Veer realized that tis gal..MAN had captured him coz the old man had fallen down..due to his speed on the horse..

 

" Dekhiye..humne baba ko..janbujh kar nahi giraya..voh.."

 

" Haan bandhne ke baad app jaise amirjade yahi zavab dete hai..agar hum apko is tarah pakadte nahi toh shayad..app bina maafi aur thodi badtzmizi kar yahan se bhaag jate?"" aur vaise bhi..app jaise aryavraton ko hum bakhubi jante hai.."..n her eyes were burning wiv such an atrocity that he was forced to look down..

 

" Dekhiye..humne baba se maafi?"

 

" NAHI mangi hogi..humein pata hai..isliye abhi mangiye.." her eyes had the icy cold daggers in em..ready to attack him.. " Chehra hi andar ke zalim ko chupata hai..Dikhne mein itne bure bhi nahi dikhte..lekin andar ke rakshash ko dekhein toh pata chale.." she thought in her mind?

 

" Dekhiye hum..unse pehle hi maafi.."

"Jhoot bolna app aryavraton ki rago mein daudta hai?" " Apki galti nahi..humari galti hai jo apse itni mohabbat se aur salike se baat kar rahe hai..hum bhul gaye ki app bhi shayad vahi boli samjhte hai..jiss se app in sab shramiko ko samjhate hai.." n she stepped a bit closer n put her sword on his neck..n said "abb maafi mang lijiye..warna.." n pressed the sword on his neck..

 

Veer who was angry at the tins tis gal..MAN said abt his clan..calmed down the instance he felt her body cum near his? he was surprised by the skill wiv which the gal..MAN put the sword on his neck..as in..If he tried to move he wud be hurt..or else he was not to be hurt?he was surprised by the grace wiv which SHE..he put the sword on his neck..

 

" Aap Khamakha hum Aryavraton ko?itna bura bata rahi hai.."

 

"Ohhh..toh app humein bataenge?huh.." n she put a highly mockin face..

"Aap jaise kai amirjadon ko dekha hai humne..aur saath hi mein thik bhi kiya hai..hum nahi jante app aryavraton ko hum Sabhi log insaan kam aur zanvaar jyada kyun lagte hai..har dinn koi na koi sehzaade aa kar yahan par apne se buzurg, arton aur ladkiyon ka apman kar zate hai..lekin koi kuch nahi kar pata Kyunki Aryavraton ke alawa toh sab nichi jati ke log hai na.."she said..wiv sarcasm dripping from evry wrd of hers. She had the highly angry face now?

 

"Arey aap..app humari baat toh suniye..dekhiye hum toh bass?"said the baffled Prince

 

"Beti.yeh toh humara madad kar rahe the..inhone hummein nahi?"the old man who had now recovered the shock of fallin n then the daggers n then seein Shera in front of him.. tried to stop the now very fierce Shera..

 

"Baba..app khamakha inki tarafdari kar rahe hai..apko pata hai na..ki yeh aryavrat kaise log hote hai?Zindagi bhar mahalon mein rehne walon ko kya pata ki bahar Shramiko ke saath kya bartav hota hai..Yeh moohshay kya jane..zindagi inke liye toh phoolon ki shaiya hai?"..n she gave him a side ways glance..which melted all the anger that had developed when she didn't even listen to him once..He saw the hurt luk in her eyes..buh the oder second it was replaced by the old luk..He was vry well surprised as to how tis gal..GAL masked her feelings so well..

 

"Nahi bitiya..inki galti nahi?"

"par yahi toh itni jaldi daud rahe the..aur phir app girr gaye.."

" Aap aap thik toh hai na Baba.." said Shera in a vry concerned voice n looked ova at baba from head to toe..n saw that his knee was bleedin..She immediately tore a piece from her extra cover n started bandaging him..

 

" Aap bhi na baba..zara toh khayal rakha kariye na apna.." she said after she finished bandaging.

" Abb tu jo hai mera khayal rakhne ko..toh mein kyuin bhala itni chinta karu.." n he softly patted her head.. " Meri Pyaari Bachi"

 

huh..Pyaari bachi..Jungalli billi bolna chahiye..na jane itna gussa kahan se lai yeh ladki..LADKIIIIII?He said out aloud..

 

 

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" Abb inse maafi mang lo..thik hai.."

" jii..jii baba"..she gave him a pitiful glance..she was ashamed that she didn't listen to him once....." Bichare..bina matlab ke itni derr tak humare tane sunte rahe..par hai toh yeh bhi aryavrath.."

"Har Aryavrat ek sa nahi hota beti.." he patted softly again?on her head..givin her blessings..

"Par jaldi hi andar aa jana?Ajj Toofan ane wala hai"..

" Yeh aap kaise keh sate hai baba"

" Kyunki ajj hawaon ka rukh ulti disha mein hai..aur badi teji se hawa chal rahi hai..dekho saare pakshi bhi apne kutumb ki aur laut chale aur har jagah dhul aur paatte hi bikhre pade hai?"

"Haan lag toh humein bhi raha hai baba..par yahan toh bohot kaam hi toofan ate hai.."

"aur jab ate hai toh bohot bade aur zordar ate hai?Ajj phir do jaan ek ho jaengi?ajj hum phir ek amar prem kahani ko apni akhon ke samne sajiv hote dekhenge?"

"huh"

"kyunki yahan toofan tabhi ate hai..jab do premi pehli ya akhri baar milte hai?.."

"Oh?." Shera thought as to if tis was a superstition too?

"Baba app jaldi jaeye..toofan anne ke asar lagg rahe hai..vaise bhi baki sab toh jaa chuke.."

" aur tu meri bachi.."

"Hum bass abhi unse maafi mang kar ate hai?" Shera turned to point towards the dashing royal...n saw him standin nearby..besides the tree on which she had trapped him?

 

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The wind blew ever harder..everyone had returned bac to their houses..it was rare to hav a storm in this village..buh it was believed that this storm came for uniting two people..mind, body, heart n soul 4eva?

At a distance we cud see the determined Shera..movin towards the old oak tree where the young handsum prince stood..skillfully takin out the daggers in a daze?

She was determined to not let her hatred take ova her common sense the nxt time..n to stop doin tins on impulse..n seek 4giveness wivout letting this arrogant young brat getting the better of her..

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 " Voh..humein..voh.." Shera tried to speak as the young lad obviously luked at her still lost in Deep thought?

 " Voh hum..keh rahe the ki humein maaf kar dijiye..humne bina kuch kahe sune apko.."

 

Ladki..he muttered.. " huh"..

 

"ji..umm kya" Shera was confused by his reaction..instead of sayin sumfin he kept lukin at her..first it was wiv a confused expressions..then she saw how his eyes roved ova her body n then he mumbled sumfin..as sundarta kapde..she thought that tis lad was rilli crazy..here she was sayin sorry n he was lost in his own wrld? "Inhe toh gusse mein hona chahiye tha.." " Na jane aise kya dekh rahe hai.."..humne toh sab thik se pehna hai..aur yeh toh aise dekh rahe hai..jaise ki ajj ke pehle kissi ko dekha hi nahi.." She thought n luked mre confused..She lowered her eyes to luk at herself n saw that evrytin was awright?

 

n she luked at him wiv a confused expression (she is still covered fully..jus her eyes r showin..)

 

"Humne kaha app ek ladki hai.." he said lukin at her eyes filled wiv confusion?

"Ji.." she luked so confused..n he smiled thinking.. " Itni khoobsurat ankhein aur yeh bholapan..Jaan nisar ho jaye.."

 " Ek ladki hokar badi achi nishanebazi kar leti hai.."

" Dhanyawaad..lekin ek ladki hone ke bawajod..issey kya matlab hai apka.." He saw fury risin..n thought of teasin her.. " hmmm..abb mazza ayega.."

" Haan Kyunki ladkiyan bohot kaam hi yeh sab karti hai..aur humne toh ajj tak sirf apko hi aise dekha hai.."

" Mahalon se nikalkar dekhenge toh samajh ayega Rajkumar.."

"VEER" he luked deep in her eyes?

"Ji?" she said confused

"Humara naam hai Veer.."

"Ji Rajkumar." "Yeh sab humein kyun bata rahe hai..sachi ek Bigade Rais hai..na jane humein kya samajh rahe hai.." she thought..

He moved closer..n raised his hand..

" Rajkumar.." she said uncertainly?n moved bac.. " Hum apse sirf maafi mangne aye the..humne bina soche?"..she was cut off by him..

" Toh humne kab kaha ki aap kuch aur karne aii hai..humare soch mein toh aisa kuch nahi..Shayad apke hi irade?"..n left the sentence hanging havin a teasin naughty luk in his eyes..he luked at the effects of his teasin...n saw her lowerin her eyes?

She moved bac..n he caught her hand

" Kya?????????" she luked up at him..n luked deep in his eyes..no one had eva dared touch her..n he bein a stranger..an aryavrat at that..had held her hand as if he had full rights..she luked deep in his equally piercing beautiful brown eyes..

" Maaf toh humein karna padega na?" n he moved a lil closer?backing her against the tree trunk..

" Ji..aap".."Yeh"..She found herself stuttering. It was the first time..she didn't know why her defenses went down n she didn't respond the way she used to..b4 tis she had met men who had loved her body n tried to get her..buh she had kicked everyone hard in there ass..n made them regret the fact that they were behind her..buh today she felt weak..she cudn't do nytin other than look in his eyes..

" Hum apko sirf ek shart par maaf karenge.." he luked at her teasingly?coz he knew tis was the first time any one had taken courage..towards tis jungalli billi( he felt it..that he was the first man towards whom she had weakened her defenses.)

" Aur Voh Kya.." she put a highly arrogant n irritated face.. " Yahan hum inse maafi mangne aye the..aur yeh na jane kya..urggggghhhhh"

She luked at him demandin..

" Humein apne dill ke kareeb rakhna" he said..enjoying her angry expressions..n the winds..as it had grown calmer ever since she came near him.

"Ji?ab chodiye?..KYAAA????????????" she luked so angry?n tried to get free..from his grip.. he chuckled..at her bein so naive n innocent n tightened his grip?

 

(..wiv every wrd she stepped bac n he stepped closer..)

 

"Chahe kitni bhi koshish kar lo, yeh haath nahi chuda paogi?" at tis bells in the near by sati-shiv temple rang hard?

" Abhi dekhte hai.." She tried to get free from all her strength..

 " Humein apna chehra dikhaiye?"

she stopped her attempts to get free..she luked at him.. shocked..

again tis was the first time anyone had asked her to show her face..even though all people told her to keep her face uncovered?as it was so beautiful...buh he was the first one to demand so openly to see her face..

" Kyun.." her voice filled wiv curiosity..

" Itne khoobsurat Chehre ko dhak kar rakhna koi achi baat toh nahi?app nahi janti ki kitne ashiq marte hai apka yeh chehra dekhne ke liye.."? He continued seein her lowerin her eyes? " aur vaise bhi malikai husn ka chehra kaisa hai..yeh jan ne ke liye humara dill betab hai.."

 

(now her back is touchin the tree trunk n he is vry close to her?the wind seemed to hav gone wild..it blew harder than ever..matchin the way their heart beats had speeded up n got eratic)

 

b4 she cud react..he tuk a step forward n let go the piece of cloth that was obstructin him from viewin the beauty it hid behind..

 

"AFREEN"

 the wrd escaped his lips the time he saw her face..

He luked deep in her eyes..n kept lukin at until she lowered her eyes unable to take his piercing gaze..

He then luked at her cheeks..n moved his hand to feel her soft, smooth rosy cheeks..that had turned red due to him.. " Kitni laal ho rahi hai..yeh nahi janti ki inki yeh ada humpar kya sitam dha rahi hai.." as he moved his hands ova her cheeks to push back the strands of hair that were obstructing his view...she gasped low..slowly..her lips quivered?

N then finally he luked at her lips..he kept lukin at it for a vry long time..which seemed to be eternity for Shera..He gazed intently at those lush red lips...as if they were a winecup luring him..to hav it..He moved closer..n then saw her breath becum short n quick?

 

he luked bac at her eyes..n found them close..he saw her lukin like an angel in the moon light..he luked at her intently as he found colour risin up her cheeks..She luked so perfect..so beautiful..so serene..pure beauty..the radiance emitted from her face was heavenly..he found himself being absorbed by her beauty..

He moved closer..so close that his nose touched hers?

He slowly closed his eyes letting her beauty be ebbed in his mind..4eva..

 

..he was unaware of how vulnerable n exposed she was feelin..

tis was the first time sumone, at that a male..stranger..had been so close to her..no one had eva dared to be so close to her..n today tis complete stranger, a Prince whom she barely knew had seen the face she hid from all..had made her feel so vulnerable..

 

The tin she didn't know was that..she was havin similar effects on him?

He felt an electrifying sensation feeling her under him..feeling so close to her..This was the first time he had been so close to a gal..he knew modesty didn't allow tis..buh he cudn't help himself..he felt deeply inclined towards her..reason he didn't know..

 

" Veer.."?she said so softly that he thought he barely heard it..

"Veer.."?she said putting her hand on his chest to create sum distance..he moved closer holdin the hand she placed on his chest? possessively..he neva knew that his name cud sound so beautiful..

"Phir se kaho.." he said rubbin his nose on hers..

"Veer.."..she said gaspin..

"Jane dijiye humein.."

"Nahi"

"Chod dijiye?humein.."

"Kya sach mein humse durr jana chahti ho.."? n they went in for a eyelock

 a long silence prevailed b/w them..he luked at her closely n put his hand ova her cheeks.. creasing em.. "Bolo.."

 

She jus nodded her head?n lowered her eyes..

" Toh jao.." n left her abruptly?

She was shocked..buh when she saw the luk in his eyes..she didn't understand buh knew it matched hers..she thought it was better to leave..

 ??.And As she turned to leave??.

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A Night to Remember:

…….And As she turned to leave…….

 

" Shera…" the royal muttered..

"huh..apko humara naam kaise pata.." she said wiv a confused expression..

" Dill ki awaz se.."..

"KYAAA???" She gave him a deadly luk..already the way tins had turned out to be had enraged her..She had let off her defenses, lost control ova her emotions in front of a complete stranger..she had let him touch her..speak to her in the way no one else ever had..she had felt so vulnerable at that moment..

"Is tis what a gal from a gd family does..Is tis wht u'r baba has taught u..Is tis the way u behave around a complete stranger..???" She mentally kicked herself for letting tis rich spoilt brat take control ova her 'momentarily'...even if jus for sum time..buh he had made her feel like no one else eva did..she felt tis sense of security n comfort bein close to him..even though she knew that modesty doesn't allow it to be..She cudn't deny that she was shocked n mre ova SCARED..coz no one had eva taken advances towards her..n here he was openly touchin her that too disarmed..n she still didn't stop him..She felt so bad n sick..She felt bad not for letting him cum close..buh becoz now she knew she had given him hopes…she had made her own self fall down in his opinions...she felt sick..coz she knew she wud neva be able to control her emotions in front of him..she jus cudn't…

N here he was flirtin wiv her..she jus cudn't help buh shout at him..

 

"Apko humara naam kaise bhi pata chala ho..hum sirf yeh chate hai..ki ajj ke baad hum kabhi na mile..humein nahi pata ki voh kaunsi ruhani kashish thi..(her voice softened) jo humein app tak khich layi..hum sirf apse maafi mangna chahte the..Humein maaf kar dijiye kyunki humne binamatlab app par chilaya aur phir..Yeh joh kuch hua…uske liye humein maaf kar dijiye..(she was near to tears now..buh she controlled herself well tis time)

 

"Shera hum toh sirf mazak kar rahe the..humara apko iss tarah dukh pohchane ka koi irrada nahi tha..hum jante ai ki app sirf humse maafi mangne aai thi..aur phir joh hua uske jimedaar hum hai..voh kashish humne bhi mehsoos ki..aur haan hum apko koi giri hui ladki nahi samajh rahe..hum jante hai ki isme apki koi galti nahi hai..aur maafi toh humein mangni chahiye chunki yeh sab humari vajah se hua..shuruat se hi hum galat the.."

He said in a hurt voice..he so wanted to control his voice buh it gave away..his hurt was clear thru his voice..He had neva wanted to do nytin that wud make her feel uneasy n distaste him..He had neva even touched a gal till date..buh he didn't know why..Buh he felt deeply inclined towards her..he cudn't stop himself..he had seen her becom stiff n then how she stopped him..he knew how bad she must feel..to let sum stranger touch her…after she was a classical beauty from a vry gd family....He was feelin guilty, ashamed, bad buh still to a certain extent RELIEVED…

 

She stood still for a moment ( the hurt in his voice hadn't gone un noticed by her),then covered her face wiv the cloth n turned bac to leave…

He let out a sigh..n went in front of her.. " Apne humein abb bhi maaf nahi kiya.."

She stopped in her tracks n not lukin at him..she changed her direction..buh each time he wud block her path..

" dekhiye humein jane dijiye" She said wiv a mixture of irritation n anger in her voice…

" Jab tak tu..he corrected himself the vry moment..mera matlab jab tak app mujhe maaf nahi kar deti..mein yahan se nahi hatunga.."

She raised an eyebrow n then humourlessly givin a laugh.. " Ek aryavrath humse maafi mang rahe hai..humein abb tak apne kano par yakin nahi ho raha.."

He cudn't take her mockery now..It was enuf..firstly she had refused to 4give him n then she was mockin him..He took hold of her shoulders lightly.. "Mein nahi janta ki apko hum aryavraton se kya sikhwa hai..par mein toh sirf yeh chate hoon..ki app meri dost bane.."

She shrugged her shoulders the moment his hands touched em..

" Apki himmat kaise hiu humein chune ki..Dosti ki baat toh durr..hum apka yeh chehra bhi nahi dekhna chahte" n she walked past him..

" Soch lo..hur kissi ko Veer ki dosti nahi milti..aur yeh chehra dekhne ke liye toh sari ladkiyan marti hai..Aap badi nasib wali hai jo…" he was cut by her…

 " Aap sach mein humse dosti karna chahte hai…" She said in an amused yet angry tone

" Haan…"

" Toh hum sirf itna kahenge..ki dosti sirf haath badha kar ya bol kar nahi ki ja sakti..dosti toh kisi ka vishwaas jitt kar hi ki jati hai..Dosti koi khel nahi..Kabhi toh Do lafz bolne se bhi ho jati hai..aur Kabhi ta umra saath rehne ke bavazud bhi nahi hoti..

" Aur mein manta hoon ki humari dosti bhi ek hi mulaqat mein ho jaegi.."

"Toh sochte rahiye..kyunki humein nahi lagta ki hum kabhi dost ban paenge.." she said wiv a loads of distaste dripping wiv each wrd…"

 " Mujhe apka naam iss churi ko nikalte hue pata chala.." he made anoder attempt to change his bad image in front of her…

 " Haan iss par humara naam khuda hua hai…" she said angrily… Even though she was confused as to how cud she not use her common sense…She knew one tin for sure that tis wasn't one of the days when her brain was dependable enuf..The previous events had actually made her too ashamed n angry to tink properly.. .she still knew that she wud neva 4give him..

" Aur voh bhi itni sundar tarah se ki koi kitna bhi chahe isey dekhe bina nahi reh sakta.." he eyed her the time he said tis…

Hearin his double meaning statement she nearly snatched the dagger from him…She stroked the dagger n then said " humein khed hai ki humne iss sey apke upar nishana lagaya…abb isey na jane kitni baar saaf karna padegi…"

n then she started movin away from him…

"Chahe kuch bhi kaho..abb toh mein aapko apna dost banakar hi rahunga..Yeh Veer ka vada hai…"

"Khokhle vadein karna aryavraton ki fitrat mein hai…"

" Yeh vada khokla nahi..Abb toh isey pura kar kar hi dum lunga.."

"Sapne dekhna achi baat hai..hum apke liye dua karenge…"

" Kyun"

" Kyunki Shera ki dosti app jaiso ko nahi milti…"

"Veer apki dosti hasil karke hi dikhaega…"

" Yeh toh waqt hi bataega…" sayin so she strode off in the dark night..

 He kept watchin her till the time he cud see her…n then wiv a sigh..he luked to the heavens above..

" Humein karib lakar yeh toofan toh tham gaya, Mere dill mein jo toofan utha hai, Voh kabhi nahi Thamega."

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Veer watched her go, till her thin, small, attractive frame disappeared admist the dust. He placed his hands on the bark as if feelin it, feeling her in it.  He could still feel her essence, her sweet, smell of crushed pines n wild flowers. He slid down n sat at the roots of the old banyan tree, under which; moments b4 he had, had his lyf's mst passionate n romantic experience. He knew wht he did wasn't sumfin tht was modest, Not at all how a first meetin shud be like. Buh he cudn't help it, from the moment he saw her his heart went wild. Her mere presence seemed to stir a turmoil of such emotions from which he had remained unknown b4 today. Buh still the time she came close to him, put her sword on his neck, he felt sedate, he felt calmer n much happier. ( Ironical isn't it..buh still as much true)

 

He didn't want it to be like tht. Buh she wasn't ready to listen to him, or talk to him.

She had been bold n atrocious from the very start, unlike all the oder gals he had ever seen b4. Buh he knew as a matter of factly tht even people who appeared to be vry strong need tht protection, they too had feelins. He knew she was just like him, as he didn't like to show his emotions in front of all n she too was the same. He knew vry well how to mask his feelings n wear a face faade, guard his expressions in front of people whom he didn't want to knw his feelins. Buh when she was near him, in front of him, he didn't feel the need to guard his expressions, coz he knew he cudn't. Oh How beautiful she luked wiv the moon-light bathin her face, her eyes closed, cheeks aflame, lips quivered. The way her breath becam short n heavy, when he was near. He loved seein the effect he had on her. He had never been so close to a gal in his whole lyf, n how so eva much he tried he cudn't resist himself after seein the effect he had on this Nave, bold n atrocious beauty..He felt tht sudden need to protect her, be close to her, as she felt so nave and vulnerable under him.

 

 

The heavenly embience on her face was one tin no one cud let go unnoticed n he too noticed it, Her beauty was so pure, serene, untouched..anyone cud get drowned in her beauty. She was jus like an angel, in both the ways…..

She was the BEST of her kind..

 

He sat there savorin the feelins of the pre-decided meetin from the heavens, the unexpected yet the BEST. Sittin under the old banyan tree he promised himself the umpteenth time, to win her friendship, her trust, her heart, her evrytin, to make her his now n 4eva..

" Tum Chahe joh bhi kaho, mein tumhe apna sabse khaas dost banakar hi rahunga. Mein pehle tumhari Dosti hassil karunga aur phir tumhara Dill jitunga." Sayin so he luked heavenwrds, prayin for himself n for her.

Slowly he brought his hand towards his chest n placed it on his heart, where moments b4 she had put her soft, small, smooth, beautiful hands to stop him from going further. He placed his hands ova his wild, eratically beatin heart, So wild tht he cudn't tame it nymre . His eyes had tht twinkle now, wiv a cutu nonu smile which lit up his face.

 

 

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" Toh Barkhudar iss kadr dill thame kisse yaad kar rahe ho..Kahin apni mehbooba ko toh nahi"

" Huh..Kaun"

" Arey Vaah Barkhudar, pehle toh app humein humara avaj se hi pehchane ka dava karte the, par abb kya hua, abb toh hum apko yaad hi nahi aa rahe…shayad abb kissi aur ke khayalon mein hi ghum ho."

" AGNI" He said mre to himself than the handsum stranger (mirchy di ke jaanu), " Haan yeh Agni hi ho sakta hai, mein bhi na, uske khayalon mein itna ghum tha ki..kuch aur yaad hi nahi raha." Sayin so he smiled to himself. " AGNI"

" Hmm!! Toh akhir miya gurfam ko hum yaad aa hi gaye….." n b4 he cud say nytin Veer quips in..

" AGNI..tumm..tumm kab aye.."

" Bass yun hi thodi derr pehle aya aur apko yun apna dill thame , apne app se muskurate hue dekha toh yeh janne ke liye ki mazra kya hai hum yahi par khade dekhne lage, aur phir joh hua voh apko pata hi hai."

" Acha yeh batao ki yahan par kaise ana hua aur kiss liye aye" Veer said tryin to divert his fren's attention from his state a few moments ago.

" Arey miya app toh bohot jhep rahe hai.." he continued totally ignoring Veer's DG's…" Par phir bhi hum apko apne sawalon se baksh dete hai…" n gestures his hands royally..

" Apki badi kripa Rajkumar Agni, toh app kya app humare pichle sawalon ka uttar dekar hum par thodi aur meherbani karenge." Veer said, givin him a enuf of it luk..

" Zarur!! Vaise jald hi mera Rajya Abhisekh hone wala hai .

" Hmm..Toh mera bachpaan ka dost, mera langotiya yaar, abb Ajmer ka Maharaj Ban ne jaa raha hai, Yeh toh bohot hi khushi ki baat hui."

" Haan, aur kuch dino baad jasn hai, toh mujhe yahan pitaji ki agya se ana pada, kuch ache utth ( camel) aur ghode kharidene the, aur isliye bhi taki hum thodi kuli hawa mein ghum, Kyunki yeh shayad akri baar hai jab hum iss tarah kahin bina chinta ke aa jaa sakte hai..Vaise mein yahan se Gurukul bhi jaunga, Guruji ne bulaya hai..so unse milne.."

" Aur Rajkumari Vaishali se bhi." Veer said wiv a naughty gleam in his eyes, tryin hrd to keep his face straight.

" Hmm..chidalo jitna chidhana hai, vaise app bhi shayad kissi ko apna dill de chuke..."

" Tum kabhi nahi shudroge Agni.."

" Arey Barkhudar, tumhara dill bhi kissi magror hasina par aa hi gaya hai, tabhi toh ped ke niche, uski yadoon mein gum, iss kadr dill thame baithe the" he gestures whteva he says n at last puts his hands on his chest jus like Veer's.

"Agni dekho jaise tum samjh rahe ho vaisa kuch nahi hai"

" Hmmm!!! Majra shayad usey bhi jyada ho..".."Kheir.." He conts seein the way Veer doesn't want to tell him nytin now.. " Jab bhi tum chaho, mujhe batadena, mein janta hoon..ki tum jyada der tak mujhse koi baat nahi chupa sakte."

Veer gives him a cutu smile n thanks him thru eyes.. " Kabhi nahi badlega, humesha vaisa hi rahega"  (Veer smiles seein his childhood buddy, who understood him better than himself, always supported him, they had been the best of frens from the time they met in the Gurukul, where they were educated.)

 

"Umm voh abhi thodi derr pehle yahan toofan aya tha, so saare log chale gaye the.." he pauses for a while as he got bac memories of the events of the evening..

" Aur..aur voh..haan meine suna hai yahan Ekadashi ka bohot bada mela lagta hai, jisme uthhon ke bade bade saude hote hai, aur achi nasl ke ghode bhi milte hai. So chalo hum chalkar tumhara kaam pura karte hai, Shayad wahaan koi bohot hi acha uth ya ghode mill jaye"

" Hmm aur Shayad voh Magrur Hasina bhi, joh apka dill chura le gayi.."

" Huh" " Tum bhi na Agni.." ( Abb toh sirf khakh milegi, maine toh usey itna naaraz kar diya ki abb toh voh shayad hi mujhe mile, maine aisa kyun kiya..thodi duri banaye rakhta toh kya ho jata..na jane abb kya sochti hogi voh humare bare mein) Veer speaks to himself, buh a lil loudly..

" Abb toh pura vishwaas ho gaya hai ki tum apne dill se haath dho baithe.."

" Kya Agni tum bhi, baat ka batangad bana rahe ho.."

" Acha..Tum toh abhi se hi pyaar mein pagal ho gaye ho…"

( PYAAR..huh Pyaar ki baat toh durr, voh mera chehra bhi nahi dekhna chahti)

"Pakka Bhabhi kahin aas paas hi hogi.." Agni conts..

(BHABHI!!!  Hmm..Abhi toh dosti hi nahi hui, aur Bhabhi..Par sabr kar Agni, mein usey hi teri Bhabhi banaunga.)

 

" Dekha khud se hi baatein kiye jaa raha hai..sachi Veer.." n b4 he cud say nytin mre..

" Chalo Agni jaldi chalo.."

" Hmm shayad jaldi karne se bhabhi mill jaye" Agni teases him even mre..

n Veer walks ahead ignoring his remarks.

 

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While on the oder hnd Shera was fuming wiv Anger, She had too mny thoughts cumin to her mind to tink clearly, she absent-mindedly walked over to the maidan; where the kids must hav cum out by now. Well now she was in for sum mre grueling..like Innocent Questions from Ananya, A big Lecture from her dear small bodyguard-Abhi n a lot mre pestering for choosing a right boy for herself by Pari maa n Sakshi. All of this becoz of tht Butt-Ugly, psychotic jerk, who wud now be standin grinning from ear-to-ear, coz he had actually had a vry beautiful gal makin a fool out of herself in his arms moments b4..Oh jus how embarrassed she felt..

 

"Aisa pehli baar toh nahi hua, har dusre dinn hamein koi bohot hi ache dikhne wale naojawan Rajkumar milte hai, par naa jane inn Rajkumar ki ankhon mein, baton mein aur yahan tak ki samma mein kaisi ruhani kashish thi ki hum chahte hue bhi khud ko rok nahi pae." She sighed buh then gave a shy smile.

She blushed remembering the shocked as well as mesmerized luk on his face, the way he told her in his own way tht she was the most beautiful (Afreen), how he behaved as if he too was intoxicated by the turn of events, by her beauty n attitude. Buh suddenly her beautiful smile was replaced by an angry frown.. " Yeh sab sirf humein hi mehsoos ho raha hoga, Voh toh abb phir kissi aur Ladki ke saath vahi sab..na jaane hum bhi kaise in sab baton ke bare mein sochne lage, Voh toh thehre ek Bigade hue Raisjade, unka kya jana hai.." n shook her head in a negative way.. " Abb toh bass kissi tarah se Pari maa, Sakhshi, Abhi aur Anu ke prashno se bach jaon.."

 

" Ahh!!!" A moan escaped her lips the time she nearly tripped ova a pointed stone hurting herself.

She had been so lost in her thoughts tht she didn't even see where she was headin to. As if the previous events weren't enuf. The way she had made a fool out of herself..Gosh..

 

" Dekha kaha tha na maine, ajj toh didi ka dhyan hi nahi hai yahan par, na jane kinn khayalon mein gum hai.."

" Tujhe kabhi kuch pata hota hai chipkali…." Watchin her turn away wiv a bad face "errr..umm..Anu" he put on his sweetest voice n continued " Ajj tumhari Shera didi uss Bandar ke khayalon mein gum hai"

" Hey Bhagwan, abb kya hoga"

" Kyun"

" Tumhare alawa ek aur Bandar aa gaya basti mein, abb hum basti walon ka kya hoga.." She teased him and ran away.

" Ruk jaa Chipkali, ruk jaa ajj tujhe nahin chodunga"

" Huh!!" She showed him her thumb n ran to where Shera stood watchin the two..

Pantin Anu stopped near Shera, n leaned for hr support n clung to her..

" Didi bachao mujhe iss jungalli Bandar se.." n hid behind her.

" Chup kyun rahi hai chipkali, samne aa.teri toh aisi ki taisi kar dunga"

" Abhi"

" Aap toh chup hi raho"

" Arey par kyun, abb kya kar diya humne"

" Hmm kya kuch nahi kiya, kya kar rahi thi vahan itni derr se.."

" Umm kya" Shera asked nervously, had they seen them both..

" Itni derr tak tum us ped ke pass kar kya rahi thi, ajj ke pehle toh kabhi nahi baat ki kissi ajnabee se itni derr, toh ajj kya hua."

"Voh.."

" Tumhe pata hai kaise ankhein phad-phad kar dekh raha tha tumhe..zara toh khayal kara karo, isliye kehta hoon, humesha mujhe saath rakha karo."

" Hum koi bache thode hi hai.."

" Haan bachi se bhi badhtar ho, bachon mein bhi itni akal hoti hai, mujhe laga tha ki tum abb tak vapas aa gayi hogi, lekin nahi, voh Bandar toh"

" tumne kya dekha"

" Abhi ne kuch nahi dekha issi ka malaal toh hai usey, warna abhi tak toh Rajkumar ko kitni khari-khoti suna aata"

Shera passed a sigh of relief..

" Usne tumse kuch kaha toh nahi na, tumse kuch ulti-seedhi baat toh nahi ki na, kuch aisa-vaisa karne ki koshish nahi ki.."

" ABHI!! Yeh kya keh rahe ho" Shera was so touched yet astonished as to why was he askin so mny questions..

" Maine usey tumara haath pakadte hue dekha tha, par phir yeh chipkali mujhe pakad kar le gayi, (Toofan aa raha hai abhi, chalo) jaise ki toofan sach mein mujhe uda le jata.." n twisted his face.

"Hmm..waise toh kuch nahi hua, par unhone humein bohot pareshan kiya..aur hum kuch nahi kar paye"

" Kyun didi" asked Anu

" Pata nahi kyun" n she finally stood up " Hum kuch karna hi nahi chahte the, Kyunki hum kuch kar hi nahi pate…Khair chodo"
"Hmm kyun chode, kahin tumhe uss sey pyaar vyaar toh nahi hi gaya"

" KYAAAA!! PYAAR, VOH BHI HUMEIN, VOH BHI UNN JAISE BIGADE RAIS SE..ABHIIII" n gav him a get a lyf expression "DUH"

"Aur vaise janab, apko kya pata hai pyaar ke bare mein..Itne chote se ho, humein nahi lagta apko kuch pata hoga."

" Arey waah..hmm chota bacha jaan ke humko, bhondu na samajhna reeeeeeee!!!..Tumse bhi jyada pata hai mujhe pyaar ke bare mein.."

" Acha toh batao.." Shera replied quickly coz she rilli wanted to knw wht tis small kiddo thought of love..  coz Since a very long time ago, people have searched for the meaning of love. But even the great philosophers, with their profound definitions, could not fully touch its true essence. N now her dear kiddo was gonna tell her wht love meant..

 

"Jab koi tumse pyaar karti hai toh jiss tarah se voh tumhara naam leti hai, toh tumhe lagta hai ki haan..iske mukh mein mera naam surakshit hai..

Pyaar wahi hai joh tumhe tab bhi hasa sakta hai, jab tum sabse ruth kar alag baithe ho..

Pyaar voh hai jab koi tumhe dukh pohchaye, aur phir tum us par bohot hi jyada gussa ho lekin phir bhi tum uss par nahi chilaogi, Kyunki tum janti ho ki iss sey usko dukh pohchega.

Pyaar voh hai joh dadaji ko dadi se hai, jabse dadi ko jhukne mein taqliff hoti hai, toh dadu hi unke pairon ki malish karte hai. Jabki unhe khud haath modne mein bada dard hota hai..

 

Yahi toh hai pyaar.."

 

" Par abhi humein kisi ajnabee se pyaar kaise ho sakta hai"

" Kyun nahi ho sakta..maine dekha hai, ajj joh tumhare gaal itne laal ho rahe hai, chehre par jo chamak badhi hai, sab uss Bandar ke ane ke baad hi hua hai.."

" Abhi tum bhi na..kuch bhi kehte ho..humein pakka unse pyaar nahi hai, aur na hi kabhi ho sakta hai"

" Hmm thik hai. Waise bhi tumhe voh Bandar kaise pasand aa sakta hai.."

" Haan vahi toh"

" Arey nahi, voh koi Bandar nahi, voh toh kitnnnneeeeeee ache dikhte hai, itne hasin nojawan toh maine ajj tak nahi dekhe…"Anu (ananya) quipped in..

" Nahi voh Bandar hai.."

" Nahi voh nahi hai.."

" Haan voh ache nahi hai"

" NAHIIII!!! Voh ache hai.."

" Haan….." Now anu had a triumphant look.. " Voh Bandar hai!!!!" n abhi teased her.

 

" Urrrggghhhhh!!!!!! Huh Bandar kahi ka…" n Anu made a face.." Kheir chalo didi, hum mele mein chalte hai.."

" Haan chalo.."

" Nahi voh.."

" Nahi na…Challllloooo"

n both abhi n anu pleaded her…so she agreed…

 

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"Chalo na didi, voh dekho payal, kitni achi hai..app par badi janchegi..lelo.." insisted Anu

" Nahi Anu, tumhe pata hai na, hum yeh sab nahi pehente"

" Ajj mere kehne se lelo na.."

Shera nodded quietly..they were a few mins away from the bangles n anklets store.

" Apko pata hai didi, app bohot bohot khoobsurat ho, atti sundar..acha hai app yeh ghaghre aur sab nahi pehenti, warna jane kaise kaison ki nazar lag jaye ek pari jaisi ladki ko dekh kar."

" Hum itne bhi sundar nahi hai.."

" Arey apko kya pata didi, app itni sundar ho ki abhi app piche mudogi na, toh apko ek katar mein saare ladke apke piche dikhenge"

" App toh kuch jyada hi badha-chadha kar bol rahe ho bachuji"

' Yakin nahi aata toh dekhlo"

N as Shera turned to luk around she saw hundreds of eyes roving ova her, she turned bac flushed..

" Umm, voh chalo yahan se.."

" Arey voh kyun bhala.."

" Itne saare log dekh rahe hai..voh bhi.."

" Pata hai, isliye toh chalo, ajj app gazab sitam dha rahi hai, sachi yeh laal rang app par bohot fabta hai..Kya pata shayad ajj voh dukandarr bhi apko dekh adhe damon mein payal de de"

" Dhat pagli, kuch jyada hi bolna sikh gayi hai.."


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"Arey miyan, itni derr se dekh raha hoon..yeh kisse dekh rahe ho ek tak ghur ke" Agni tried to see the person who caught his frens fascination…He was sure now, tht there was sum gal, coz his fren who never ever left a tin undone, in the middle had quietly slipped away towards the end of the tent, while he was busy bargaining for the camels, n ever since he never left the place..jus kept on lukin at sumone wiv intent eyes.

 

" Akhir irrade kya hai"

" Ji bhar ke dekh loo"

" Aur aisa kyun"

" Allah hi jane"

 

n Veer moved away, as if trying to put up wiv the person he had been lukin on for so lng..

 

" Kiska picha kar rahe ho" 

Veer shrugged his shoulders

" Jante ho usey"

" Ruhh janti hai"

" Hmm toh miya humein yahan utto ka sauda karta chod, dill ka sauda karne chale.."

buh veer had moved away. Towards a stall..

 

" Acha.." Agni tuk hold of Veer's arms " Humare saath chalkar voh uth toh dekh lo jinhe humne pakke kiye hai.."

" Abb kuch aur dekhne ki khwaish nahi rahi.." he sighed deeply..n walked away towards the stall.


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"Dekho na didi, kitni janch rahi hai app par.."

" Haan lagta hai beti, tumhare liye hi bani hai yeh" said the old lady, sittin nearby.

 " Baba.."..she luked at the payal..n took it..examined it..

" Khaas chandi se bani hai, asli hire jade hai, aur ghungroo bhi bohot ache hai..iski naksashi toh dekho..kitni khoobsurat hai.."

" Haan baba sachi bohot khoobsurat hai..Par hum yeh sab nahi pehente"

" Koi baat nahi bitiya yeh mein tumhe yun hi de raha hoon..mera ashirwaad samajh lo, Kyunki abb yeh mein kisi aur ko nahi dunga..yeh tumhare liye hi bani hai.."

 

She took one anklet and pulled her robe a lil above, revelaing her milky white, smooth skin n bend down to put the anklet..

" Dekho Anu..kaisi lag rahi hai.."she said n luked up..to find two intent eyes on her..

" Bohot khoobsurat.." he mouthed..n b4 he cud say nytin, she turned around n said..

" Baba Apka ashirwaad sar-ankon par, par abhi hum jiss maksad se jaa rahe hai, usmein humara yeh payal pehena gawara na hoga, aur vaise bhi hum nahi chahte ki..humse yeh gum ho jaye.." n removed the anklet n pulled bac the cloth..

" Thik hai, toh mein inhe shambhal kar rakh deta hoon.."

" Ji baba.." n she turned to go..

" Mera gussa uss payal par kyun nikaal rahi ho.."

" Humein apse koi baat nahi karni.." she turned to go.

" Dekhlena, abb toh yeh payal tum pehnogi, aur issey mein khud tumhe pehnaounga" n he took both the payal's from the old man, pocketed em carefully n bowed to him..

Shera moved on..wivout givin him a single glance..buh he kept following her…


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Didi!! DIDIIIIIII…Chalo abhi ke abhi chalo..dekho shaam ki mehfill sazi hai aur ajj toh jasn ki raat hai..jaldi chalooooo.."

" Nahi abhi..voh.."

" mein tumse puch nahi raha..tumhe bata raha hoon.."

" Par"

" Jyada bola toh pari maa ko bula dunga.."

Shera's mind raced 4wrd to the conversation headin towards her wedding n finding the right guy..

 

" Umm nahi nahi..hum abhi ate hai ABHI!" She gav him a sweet stern luk..

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" Rajkumar humne suna hai ki app badi hi achi Shayari karte hai..Toh humein kuch sunaenge…"

" Voh toh bass aise hi kabhi kabar..par abhi hum..umm..nahi suna sakte" Veer tried getting away from the gang of the basti n all the oder people..He was searchin for her.

" Kyun Nahi"..

" Voh..ummm..Haan Haan..voh isliye Kyunki abhi humein koi prerna nahi mill rahi, voh cheez nahi mill rahi jispar hum shayari kar sake." He sighed of relief, finally he got a reason n tht too a gd one..Buh naturally he didn't hav the inspiration now n he was busy searchin for her..

" Hmm..Toh abhi lati hoon tumhari prerna.." said Pari maa..

 

She brought out a gal, claded in a blue Arabian night gown, beautifully dressed, wearing simple yet marvelous dress n jewels. Her face was masked, ( as u may hav seen in Arabian movies..) with a netted cloth, her head covered with the scarf..

It luked as if the moon had cum down on the earth..

 

" Abb bolo, yeh hai na, tumhari prerna.." " Humari sabse pyaari bachi, sabse sundar, yahan har kissi ki prerna hai yeh.."

Veer was speechless, the moment she came out of the tent, he saw all eyes on her, he too cudn't luk away, walking baby steps, with her head bowed, a frown adorning her perfect face..How he felt Taken by Her… yet again..

He saw her being seated jus in front of him, on a matted bed (charpai).

Finally seeing all the eyes on him, he luked away from her angelic face n said..

 

" Subhan-Allah, humein abhi abhi apni ek bohot purani shayari yaad aa gayi, App sab ki agya ho toh sunau…"

" Irshaad-Irshaad"

Shera didn't say a word, jus tucked in the netted cloth firmly, so tht it doesn't blow away from the wind n jus luked up in his eyes, which were intensely gazing at her.

" Izzazat hai" he mouthed..

n she jus luked bac down n bit her lip (for lukin up at him).

 

Zamane mein har taraf noor bikhar jaye!!

Agar hatade voh naqaab toh Qayamat aa jaye!!

Nazar utha de toh manzar badal jaye!!

Zara sa muskurade toh sahere mein bahar aa jaye!!

 

She still faced downwards, n then luked up to escape his piercing gaze; towards the night sky to see the moon goin behind the clouds.

 

Agar dekhle chand usko raaton mein,

Toh sharmakar badaloon mein chup jaye!!

Agar hatade voh naqaab toh Qayamat aa jaye!!

 

She luked down; at him, astonished by his lines…they were so beautiful, were they for her.

 

Uski saqawat bhi badi bemisaal hai,

Pyase ko dekhle toh samandar mill jaye!!

 

And he gave a charming smile to her.

 

Ab uski saqawat ki mein kya misaal dun Jaan-E-Veer,

Pathar pe haath rakhde toh jaan aa jaye!!

 

N he placed his hands on his heart..gesturing like a child.

 

 

" Waah-waah kya shayari hai..bohot khoob"

"Itne arse baad Veer se uski shayari sum raha hoon..yeh humein toh kabhi kabhi hi sunata hai, par ajj shayad inka mizaaz sach mein bohot ashikana ho chala hai…toh hum apko yeh bhi batadein..ki Rajkumar Veer Shayari toh karte hi hai, aur saath mein bohot hi gazab gazle gaate bhi hai..Yeh toh yeh baat nahi mante, aur humare kehne par kabhi nahi gaate..par agar app sab kahe toh shayad…"  Agni smiled down towards his fren, who was lukin at him as if he wud kill him..

" Arey yeh toh kya baat kahi, Rajkumar gaate hai aur hum sune nahi..Yeh bhala kaise ho sakta hai..apna Abhi toh bohot hi acha dhol bajata hai..Ajj uski icha bhi puri hogi, sabke samne dhol bajane ki.."

 

N everyone pestered him till he was ready to sing…

 

Yun haseenon se se toh daaman ko bachana chahiye – 3  he asked the gals to give music..
halki baarish - 5 ho toh thoda bheeg jana chahiye           he made em repeat afta him..
halki baarish ho toh thoda bheeg jana chahiye
yun haseenon se toh daaman ko bachana chahiye
halki baarish - 4 ho toh thoda bheeg jana chahiye
halki baarish ho toh thoda bheeg jana chahiye

Shera got up to leave, it was becumin too ridiculous n way too confusin…was he singing for her or was he singing it on demand.." Khuda hi jane..lekin joh bhi ho..Gaate toh bada acha hai, ek shayar hone ke nate keh sakti hoon, ki yeh shayari toh khub kar lete hai..Afsoos ki humara pehli mulaqat bohot azeeb si thi, warna hum bhi apna hunar inhe zarur dikhate..) n so she turned to leave, she quietly tried to slip away..buh she wanted to meet abhi n anu ltr..so she turned bac..n instead she saw him getting up, lukin at her.. she turned bac trying to hurry, or she may attract attention wiv him lukin at her n getting up..

Chalte chalte tumko dekhe raahon mein jo ghumkar        He sung it for her..she was his   inspiration..seeing her goin then turning bac..he knw she was lukin for her small frens buh then didn't she turn bac..
toh samajh lo ke nishaane par laga teer-e-nazar                              and put his hand on his heart..
chalte chalte tumko dekhe raahon mein jo ghumkar
toh samajh lo ke nishaane par laga teer-e-nazar
uski aankhen de rahi ho pyar ki daavat agar                                   He sung tis line huskily…
jheel jaisi - 5 aankhon mein sab doob jana chahiye                        he acted as if he seriously was in love                                                                                                                                                                            -                                                                                   wiv sumone..
jheel jaisi aankhon mein sab doob jana chahiye
yun haseenon se toh daaman ko bachana chahiye
halki baarish ho toh thoda bheeg jana chahiye

Shera tried makin way out..buh all goin in vain..evryone was jumpin n popping out of nowhere to dance to the tune..All were enjoying n she did give him full credit for tht..

pyar ka aaghaaz pehle jo kare ikraar se                                             He too was now dancing on the tunes..          
phir tumhe ghayal kare apani nazar ke vaar se                                He luked n pointed towards her
pyar ka aaghaaz pehle jo kare ikraar se
phir tumhe ghayal kare apani nazar ke vaar se
jo tumhare dil pe rakh de haath apana pyar se                                He luked at her meaningfully..as she too had put her hands on his chest to stop him..
haal-e-dil apana - 5 usse khulkar sunana chahiye                          As if givin advice n also for teasin her..
haal-e-dil apana usse khulkar sunana chahiye
yun haseenon se toh daaman ko bachana chahiye
halki baarish ho toh thoda bheeg jana chahiye

Now she was fuming..tht incident was so close to her heart n here he was openly trying to embarrass her..by singing out whteva was in his mind..Buh then he had said tht she was his inspiration n he was jus enjoying..so she went normal wiv it..buh she had to leave now..asap.

He thought tht she was rilli angry now n thus was goin away…

ruth jaaye woh agar toh phir manana chahiye                                He tried to attract her attention        
jab woh dekhe aapko toh muskurana chahiye                                n yes she did luk bac n he smiled at her
ruth jaaye woh agar toh phir manana chahiye
jab woh dekhe aapko toh muskurana chahiye                          he finally made his way out of the crowd
baahon mein lekar use kuchh gunguna chahiye                             He stopped seein her talking to anu..she was waitin now for sumone as Anu had gone…so he continued singing..
zindagi bhar - 5 saath uska phir nibhana chahiye           He meant wht he said n he luked at her
yun haseenon se toh daaman ko bachana chahiye
halki baarish - 5 ho toh thoda bheeg jana chahiye
halki baarish ho toh thoda bheeg jana chahiye – 4        He ended it seeing her leave..Gosh he rilli needed to knw where she was goin all of a sudden n he had to befriend her n win her trust n..n so so vry mny tins..n here she was leaving..

 

 

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Finally..Finally...Well abb pura update hua prt 3..Now em wrkin on prt 4 n will post it sn..

Till then sweeties..Read n comment……

 

Here's a thought to nurture till near future..:

Love is like an eternal flame,
Once it is lit, it will continue to burn for all time.

 

Btw NO PM service darlings..or may be..will send out PM's…buh plzzz don't kill me if u read it b4 I send PM's..PM service may be unavailable or will take time..Plzz bear with me…

 

Love ya all loads…..t.cccccccc

 

 

 

 

                              -Ur's Ever Madhu 😳

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hey love it gr8 another ff plz do cont asap.

 
 
 
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Hey thank u soooo sooooo much sweetz..I mean u'r compliment made my day...will try n update asap....
 
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hey madhu sounds interstg, do continue!

 
Thanx love for the compliment..will cont asap...
btw u'r name is very beautiful..mehraan....
 
Love ya sweetz......t.cccccccc
 
 
 
                        -Ur's Ever Madhu😳
 
 
 

A Night to Remember - B (ii)

 

 

PRT 4:

 

 "Dekho abhi jane do na..phir zarur ayenge.."

" Tum humesha aise hi bolti ho?" saying so he turned away wiv his hands firmly around his chest?

" Ohhhooo" " Hmm janab iss baar bohot naraaz lagte hai..manana padega?" She kneeled down in front of him buh he turned away, he just didn't look at her..

"Offooo" " Acha thik hai..agar hum apko voh de joh app humesha mangte ho toh?"

" Acha tum sachi dogi.." he was delighted wiv the proposal?

" Haan.."

He hugged her tightly n gav a wet kiss on her sweet plump rosy cheek, now when she was going to get up, he pulled her down n kissed her on the oder cheek.. She blushed rose pink, wiv her head lowered, then quietly closing his eyes, placed a kiss on his cheek?

" Aise nahi..jaise maine di thi waisi"

When she was abt to refuse, he looked away again..faking anger..

" Ohhoo.." n she placed a big long kissie on his plump cheeks.

He looked at her, while she just blushed prettily.

"Aise sharmaogi, toh uss bandar ka kya haal hoga?" he said pointing towards Veer who was half hidden behind a tree?

As she looked up to him, she saw him staring at her, she looked bac daring him, How cud he just look at her like this.. " Sachi Bigade Rais" n she narrowed her eyes.

She turned bac n mounted Toofan, promising Abhi n Anu to come bac sn after her important mission?

" Pakka vada, jaldi ayenge hum..pakka?." n she looked at the two kids lovingly n strode away..

Veer had already bid Good Bye to Agni n oders, excusing himself sayig " Humein kuch zaruri kaam hai, jana hai, baad mein zarur wapas aunga..pakka" n he followed her to this end of the basti, just to see her getting deep into the Dark Forest.

" Na jane kaisi ladki hai, itni khoobsurat, aisi raat mein, akeli jaa rahi hai..voh bhi aise kapde pehne.."  ( she had changed to her original dress.)

" Chalo Andhi, jaldi..unka peecha karo."

 
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" Arey yeh kya ho raha hai, itni raat gaye aisi avazen..Hey bhagwan humein bachalo, na jane Shera kahan reh gayi?" one of the men Shera's baba had sent to be wiv her, said..

" Aur kitni thand bhi hai, agg bhi bujh gayi?"

" Humein yahan bithakar kahan chali gayi?"

 

Suddenly someone appeared from admist the dense trees, held by the rope hanging down.

 

"Chale jaooooo?Jaldi bhaag jao..warnaaaa?" n it made a whistle, n was pulled up again. Then out of nowhere daggers came flying, along wiv some blood drops..

The rustling leaves, heavy windflow and the darkdense forest made it vry eerie?

 

"Chale jaooooooo?jaldi bhaag jaooooo?"

n yes those feeble hearted protectors, who were already unwilling to come with the naughty girl ran away from there?

 

"Dekhna ussi ki shaitani hogi?usey lagta hai ki hum darr gaye, waise darr toh sachi gaye, par humein pata hai ki voh aisi badmaashiyan karti rehti hai..waise bhi agar voh humare saath nahi jana chahti toh bitiya akele hi jaegi, hum seedhe aswayi gaon pohonchte hai..unhe yahan se akela jane do, unhe yahi lagna chahiye ki hum chale gaye.."

" Chalo.." n the two mst trusted men of Shera's father rode away..wanting to catch up wiv those poor fellows who had rilli got scared by this deadly act..

 
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" Sabash toofan..bohot hi ache..Jante hai ki kakaji darre nahi the, sirf humein dikhane ke liye bhage, par phir bhi abhi ke liye toh sirf hum dono hi hai.." n she patted his back, mounting him.

"Bohot Khoob"

Toofan neighed n Shera turned to find him there?

" Aap..Aap yahan.." she was so surprised to see him there?

" Haan chasmein-badur, mein?waise badi berehmi se daraya sabko?" He looked at her uncovering her face n completely mounting her stallion. So..she wudn't answer him even now?

" Zaruri tha, Kyunki humein aur toofan ko akele hi jana pasand hai.."

" Waise apka toofan hai bohot hi samajhdar..apke ek seeti bajate hi upar khich liya.."

" Itne saalon ki mehnaat ka phal hai.." n she softly patted his (toofan's) back?

" Waise app itni raat ko kahan jaa rahin hai.." he demanded getting close to her horse?

She just raised her eyebrows in response..He immediately realized his folly of demandin such an answer n thrwin such a question onto her?

" Humare kehne ka matlab yeh hai, ki app itni raat gaye, itne ghane jungle mein.."

" Yahi sawaal hum apse bhi pooch sakte hai.."

The young prince was baffled..Like look at this gal, here he was askin her a question all abt her well being, n she retorted in a perfect way, well who was he to ask such tins..n yes wht exactly was he doin here? " Inka khayal rakhne aye hai yahan..nadaan ladki.." he thought..

" Dekhiye..hum yahan sirf apke liye aye hai.."

She gav him a vry shocked luk..

" Humara matlab..voh..yeh..ki hum bass isliye aye hai Kyunki humara manzil ka rasta bhi yahin se hai..aur isliye bhi Kyunki app jitni khoobsurat ladki itni raat gaye iss jungle mein akeli jaye toh phir humare jaison ko hi toh apka dhyaan rakhna padega na.." n luked at her for response..

She jus started moving away?here she was yet again blushin at his comments..

Seeing the desired effect on her he continued..

" Aur waise bhi app ek ladki hai.." he knw she wud turn n only coz of this he had said tht..

" Ek ladki hai..iss sey apka kya matlab..app kya humein apke mahlon mein rehne wali kissi phool si komal, badi masoom ladki samjhte hai.."

" Haan so toh hai..app bhale hi kahin bhi rehti hon, ghar toh akhir ghar hota hai, har kissi ko apna ghar mahal lagta hai..aur haan apko hum nahi balki Sabhi phoolon si komal, behaad masum Veerangana samajhte hai.." he told his thoughts abt her?

She thought she shud hav worn the extra cloth n covered her face, coz now it was slowly turning red from the bright pink..

" Iss sey apka matlab kya hai ki hum ladki hai..kya koi ladki akele jungalon mein nahi jaa sakti?"

" Nahi.."

" Aur voh kyun?" she put on a stern face..

" Kyunki, jungalon mein bohot se janvaar rehte hai, bohot se khatre hote hai jinse ladkiyan.." she cut him off..

" Jinse ladkiyan achi tarah se jhoonj sakti hai.."

He smiled at her curt reply.. " Haan! Haan par na jhonje toh zyada behtaar hoga.."

" Huh!! Aap toh waise bhi Sabhi ladkiyon ko apne mehlon mein kaid aurton ki tarah samajhte hai. Par shayad app nahi jante ki bahar ki duniya mein..yani ki apke mehlon se bahar joh ladkiyan hoti hai, voh har cheez ke kabil hoti hai.."

" Matlab app kehna chahti hai ki mehloon mein rehne wali aurten kissi kabil nahi.."

" Nahi" n she pulled toofan's reign..to stop him.. "Hum khood Nivriti maa ko bohot mante hai..lekin shayad app samjhe nahi..hum yeh kehna chahte hai ki shayad app aurton ko bohot hi kamzor samajhte hai...bilkul mehlon mein rehne wali aurton kii tarah..jinke pass saara haq hota hai, mehlon se bahar ki iss aam duniya mein joh aurtien hoti hai, unke saath hone wale anyay ko rokne ki takat hoti hai, lekin phir bhi voh samne nahi atti..shayad isliye Kyunki bahar ki duniya ke mardon ki tarah hi aryavrat bhi apni patniyon ko bilkul kamzor samajhkar kabhi agey anne hi nahi dete.."

She moved on..still waitin for his response..

" Waise kai haad tak hum apse sehmaat hai.." she luked at him astonished..she thought he was anoder chauvinist pig.. " par shayad aurten bhi samne nahi aati..agar voh anyay ke khilaaf kuch bole toh?"

" Haan sahi kaha?waise ek aryavrath hone ke bavjud apke vichaar kafi ache hai.." she gav an amused too lil smile..

" Waise app aryavraton se itni nafraat kyun karti hai.."

" Nafrat toh hum zindagi mein kissi se nahi kar sakte..kyunki zindagi nafrat ke liye bohot hi chotti hai..bohot hi zyada chotti..par haan..agar app mahal se bahar kabhi ek aam nagrik ki tarah jaye..toh app dekhenge ki aryavraton ne aam logon ki zindagi kitni kharab kar rakhi hai..shramikon ke saath joh bartav app aryavrath karte hai voh koi kissi janvar ke saath bhi nahi kar sakta..Aur aurton ke saath joh shoshan hota hai..itni buri tarah se julm kiye jate hai..chotti chotti bachiyon ke saath.. Yeh sab karke shayad app ko acha lagta ho..apki shaan badti ho,..par uss ladki ki aur uske parivaar ki garima toh mitti mein mill jati hai.." She made an utterly disgusted face..

" Aap joh sochti hai voh galat.." he was cut off yet again..

" Galat nahi hai balki sachai hai Rajkumar.." she said curtly?.

" Haan par har aryavrath ek sa nahi hota.."

" Ho na ho..app toh waise hi hai.."

" Matlab..app kehna kya chahti hai.."

" Iss tarah itni raat ko, itne ghane jungle mein.." she gestured and said tht like Veer.. " Aap ek ladki ka peecha kyun kar rahe hai.." she said tis glowerin..

He jus smiled at her sarcasm n the way her expressions n moods changed soooo rapidly..

" Hmmm..Apka peecha nahi kara jaa raha hai mohtarma..hum toh apke saath hi chal rahe hai..dusri baat yeh..ki hum mante hai app behead khoobsurat hai, lekin hum aise nahi ki waqt ki garmjoshi ko dekte hue kuch aisa kare, jise apko aur mujhe zindagi bhar malaal rahe.."

" Kar bhi nahi sakte app..kyunki malaal toh sirf apko hoga apne haath, pav aur daant tutt jane ka.." she gav him the daring look.. " Waise bhi apke jaise kai bahadur, sachai ke path par chalnewale, dudh se dhule aryavraton ko thik kiya hai humne.." she said sarcastically..

" Hum toh darr hi gaye mohtarma.." he said smiling..she gav him the angry luk..buh b4 she cud say nytin..

" Bass bass..apko humare barein mein bohot pata hai, hum jan gaye hai.."

" Kya!!! Apke barein mein.." she gave him a get a lyf expression " Hum apke baarein mein nahi aryavraton ke baarein mein bol rahe the.."

" Ah haan..aur hum bhi ek aryavrath hai, aur app humare bare mein bada janti hai, shayad bohot dilchaspi hai hum mein.." n he was bac to his flirtin..n make her blush ways..

" Besharam bhi.." she said..noddin her head negatively..

" Khair chodo..mein toh bass itna keh raha tha, ki apko iss tarah akele jungle mein nahi anna chaihiye Kyunki itni bahadur hone ke baad bhi, bohot si samasya khadi ho sakti hai apke liye..Aur isliye hum apko bolna chahte the ki..apko unn sab ko bhagana nahi chahiye tha..aur abb jab sabko yahan se ravana kar hi diya hai, toh phir.."

" Toh phir kya??"

" App humein saath mein lekar chale..taki yeh safar app humare saath tae karein.." he said tht as a double meaning sentence..

" Yeh safar toh hum waise bhi akele tae nahi kar rahe..humare saath toofan hai, aur dusri baat..apke saath..yeh pura safar.." n she scrunched her nose..

" Kyun..kya burai hai hum mein.." he demanded..

" Umm? Voh burai toh..pata nahi..app khood hi..dekh..humara matlab sungh lijiye.."

"HUH!!" He made a popat kinda face..n then when toofan had walked away a bit, he smelled his under arms.." " Chhhhhhiii..Ewwww" he so wanted to puke tht time..gosh it was smelling too bad, ek ladki ke peeche, voh bhi aise.." n he made an utterly disgusted face..

By the time he looked up again..she had gone away?

" Hey bhagawan..Yeh ladki hai yah andhi..yun ayi aur yun chali gayi.." at the mention of andhi, Veer's mare neighed.. " Ohhoo jana tumhe nahi bola..par abb chalo..yahin kahin hogi voh.."

 
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He turned around as he heard the sound of water splashing near around him...He moved a lil away from the waterfall still under the water-stream, the cool crystal white water washin over him n his senses..He had found out the water fall a few miles away from the place where she had left him.. " Jungle sach mein asli saundarya ko darshata hai, kaise inn ghane pedo ki add mein itne khoobsurat aur pyaare jharne ko chipa rakha tha..Koi andar jhank kar dekhe toh pata chale ktini khoobsurati kaid hai yahan; humari duniya se door, iss anokhi bhool-Bhulaiya mein..jisse dekhte hi koi bhi iss sey pyaar kar baithe.."

" Shayad kudrat ka karishma hi hai yeh joh, sab se door, jahan bohot hi kaam koi atta ho, wahan itne khoobsurat tarah se yeh ped-paudhe jharne iss tarah bina kissi ki dekh rekh ke badh rahe hai.." He murmered to andhi, who too was havin this twinkle in her eyes, which showed tht the mare too was vry happy.

"Chalo..abb jiss karan se iss jungle ki shehzadi humen chod gayi uss sey mitta diya jaye.." n he took of his upper vest, so tht he cud bath properly..n get rid of the odour tht was cumin from him coz of traveling so many days..

" Hmm..Ajj toh mazza aa gaya..iss tarah jungle ke beech..akele bina kissi aur ke, jharne ke neeche.."

" Aha !! Kya baat hai.." n he continued the shower for so long..He was so enjoyin it..

" Arey abb yeh azeeb si halchal kaisi.." n he then what he saw left him gawking..

There he saw her, stepping down in the pool of water, the stream which flowed from the water-fall..n thus was waist deep..she stepped in it gracefully..the smile adorning her face now was soo beautiful and angelic?the grace wiv which she took baby steps and neared the crystal white water reflecting her curvy shape was again a wonder to him, where did she get such a grace from, wasn't she a normal gal, well she didn't luk like tht, she was mre beautiful then the mst beautiful princesses of all times?The time she first stepped inside the water n the chill it send all over her body, the way she shivered lightly wiv her eyes closed, lips quivered?The moon light enhancing her beauty, as it peeped thru the limited space of the dense trees, shwing off her curvy figure mst beautifully?

As she got waist deep inside the water, she dipped in once, wettening her whole body...n her dress fully, so that the wet pieces of clothes clung to her body, she started splashing the water, around herself and playing around in the water, getting deeper n deeper still..She swam all the way to the middle of the stream..n teased the poor stallion who cudn't cum till the middle..She again dipped in the water, n left him panicking for a few moments as he didn't see her coming up..buh then again when he heard an uproar of  laughter, followed by sound of splashes, he came to knw tht she was a water person, she swam too well, the way she cut her way thru the powerful stream wiv equally powerful strokes was amazing.. She then moved back towards toofan again, after completing sum rounds inside the peacefull stream.. She then went near the bank of the stream, n splashed water towards the stallion..who was obviously enjoyin his riders happiness..

her hair sticking on to her face and neck, making her look too hot to handle?but where had her wildness gone, she now looked like a small child playing wiv her friend..all the atrocity, ballistic nature of her's seemed to have been washed along wiv the stream..

" Yeh jitni khoobsurat hai utni naadan bhi hai..itni raat gaye iss jharne par akar, iss kadr masti kar rahi hai..Humare bichare dill par kya guzar rahi hai nahi janti jaleem hasina.."

Saying so he took his sword lying nearby n moved on towards her side?

 

Oblivious to her surroundings, she continued bathing Toofan by splashing water on him..Her sword lay nearby..

 

"Kyon chandani raaton mein dariya par nahate ho,

Soe hue pani mein kya agg, lagani hai?.."

 

She turned around hearing the same voice and the shayari..jus to see him standing their..his back towards her..resting himself on the mare..without any cloth covering his bare back n torso..

 

Suddenly she felt herself too drenched in water, completely overcome by embarrassment of being seen like this she quickly came out of the water and shook her head to let the water run down her body..She knew her clothes were now truly hugging her figure and it wasn't a very presentable way in any such situation..She wanted to dry out fast, n thus took out a small napkin from the side bag?

As she made full efforts to dry herself in minimum times..he fervently kept stealing glances of her..God wasn't she just too nave.. she was trying to dry herself which clearly gave an idea that she wasn't vry comfortable wiv the whole scenario..so he started chattin to her still facin backwards..

" Badi achi tairaq hai app.."

" Jante hai.." Gosh!! This meant he had been lookin at her for a long time?

" Janti hai itni raat ko iss tarah koi bhi apko dekh kar kya kuch nahi kar sakta.."

" Karne ke liye toh koi bhi kabhi bhi kuch bhi kar sakta hai..par haan..abhi shayad apke khayal mein hum ek bebaas ladki hi hai..aur aise mein bohot kuch ho sakta hai.."

She turned around to look at him..as she had finished drying her hair..she cud do notin abt the dress as it was fully drenched..so she wud betta stop the water flowin down her body..i.e from the top..

" Waise dekha jaye toh haan..sahi baat toh yahi hai..par ismein do cheezein alag hai..pehli baat toh yahan Toofan waise bhi khada hai..aur dusri baat..humne jaise pehle kaha tha..waise hi abb bhi..lachari aur bebassi ki toh baat hi nahi Kyunki humein toh apni raksha karni atti hai.."

" Acha aur voh kaise karti app.."

She took out the sword from it's cover, moved it from behind her back..and brought it in front of her face pointing towards him?

" Iss tarah?" she said still in position..

" Aur agar samne wala apse zyada takatwaar ho toh.."

" Talwaar bazi mein takat ki nahi, kala aur kaushal ki zarurat hoti hai..Waise bhi ajj tak hum kissi se nahi hare, aur na hi kabhi harenge.." she resumed her normal position..moving her thin finger around the blade..

" Itna gurur.." He said facing her now..

" Gurur ki baat nahi hai..baat hai apne aur apni talwaar ke upar vishwaas ki.." she said.. moving closer to his horse..picking up his uppervest thru the point end (ort) of the sword and threw it towards him.. n faced back..

He quietly held the shirt for a moment then blushed..he wasn't wearing his shirt n was till then obliviously standing around wiv his bare front towards her.. he blushed slightly..

( aww nonu blushing..cute na..)

She giggled seeing him lowering his head holding the shirt..She wasn't goin to leave the scores unsettled..He had made her blush so much she too was goin to make him embarrassed atleast..( lollzz kiddish na..humari Shera hai hi bachi..waise she can get him pink by embarrassment but not blushin coz aisa karne ke liye..U knw..*wink wink*)

 

" Waise..ajj humne pehli baar ek ladki ko humse muh modte hue dekha hai.." he said now fully dressed..wantin to overcome the embarassement?

" Ajj ke pehle jitni ladkiyan thi unki ankhein kharab hongi.."

" Kyun??"

" Apko dekhkar nahi mudi.." n she rolled her eyes..

" Waise kahan jaa rahi hai app.."

" Aswai gaon..Par app kyun pooch rahe hai.."

" Arey yeh toh bohot achi baat hai, hum bhi wahin jaa rahe hai.."

" Ohh.."

" Toh chaliye.."

" Kahan??"

" Jahan jana hai.."

" Hum kahan jaa rahe hai..hum toh abhi yahin hai.."

" Par kyun..abhi toh jana tha.."

" Par..isliye kyunki abhi thodi derr pehle app humara talwaar bazi par baat kar rahe the..aur abb hum apko yeh baat mann mein liye nahin jane denge ki ladkiyan khud ka bachav nahi kar sakti.." she took position..

" Haan! Haan..hum jante hai ki app bohot achi talwaar bazi karti hai..aur apke nishaane bhi bohot hi achook hai..so kuch karne ki zarurat hi nahi hai.." he tried to get this topic off..he rilli thought tht may be he'd hurt her or may be she isn't that gd a fighter..

" Sochiye matt..sochne mein waqt voh jayar karte hai..jinhe darr lagta hai, aur ajj toh apki soch bhi badalni hai humein.."

 

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They stood facing each oder now, each grabbing a sword..soaked in water from head to toe..

He looked at her, she was still drenched from water..wiv some water droplets still makin their way thru her thick long curls onto her milky white skin..Holdin the mighty big sword wiv jus one hand (tht too a small one as hers) wiv such an air of confidence and such an aura around her..she seemed perfect..

" Shayad humein nahi ladna chahiye inse..kahin kuch ho jae toh..itni nazook dikhti hai, kahin idhar udhar lag gayi toh.." n he thought of breakin away..buh even b4 he cud complete his thoughts?A Sword came thrusting towards him..n stopped jus a few inches away from his forearms..

 

So she rilli wanted a fight.. " Thik hai, zarur apki har icha sar-ankhon par, par thoda dheere karenge app par prahar..kahi phool jaisi komal ladki par iss dhardar talwaar ka prahar ho gaya toh.." n he took full care of not using his full force?

 

Yes it was an offensive principle of fighting as she aggressively took the initiative, buh it was needed, didn't his belief tht girls are less powerful n skillfull n can't fight a male properly needed to be broken..Standing in front of her, the one from who'z blade every master was afraid..If he went bac wiv the belief that gals can't fight well..It'd be an insult to her and her blade, an insult to her years of rigourous training?

She moved back and pulled bac the hilt of the sword, her sword ork still pointing horizontally forward.

 

He moved away too, doing flashy but ineffective ( not harmfull) fencing techniques..showing off his knowledge..

She showed him vry impressive but ineffective techniques, showing her skills to him..

( this is required b4 every fight as the opponents need to knw each oders prowess..)

 

Shera drew her sword from her left hand?

For a long moment they stood motionless, a Prince and a Dakoo Rani watchin each oder?

He moved forward cautiously. With a blur of motion She jumped at him, slashing at his ribs. Veer reflexively parried the attack, and their swords met in a shower of sparks. His sword was batted aside as if it were no more than a fly. She did not take advantage of the opening, however, but spun to her right, hair whipping thru the air, and struck at his other side. He barely stopped the blow and back pedaled frantically, stunned by her ferocity and speed..

 

 " Humein lagta hai ki apko iss tarah mazza nahi ayega..chaliye is par koi shart rakte hai.." she knw he wasn't goin to attack first nor was he actually interested and he had taken her to be granted..tht was shown by his easy blows, and how she had taken him off-guard..he surely hadn't thought to receive such blows n she had already aggressively took the initiative?

" Kaisi Shart.."

" Hmm.." she stood still thinkin..still ready if he attacked..

" Agar mein jeet gaya, toh mein apke saath iss puri yatra ya khoj mein rahunga..har waqt.."

" Ahaan..Thik hai..waise janaab humein pata hai ki jitenge hum hi,..humein apke liye khaid hoga.." saying so she thrust her sword forward, decreasing the distance b/w them..

" Abb mazza ayega..ajj app pehli baar harengi?kyunki veer haar jaye yeh ho nahi sakta.."

" Shera na jitte aisa bhi kabhi ho nahi sakta.."

" Dekhlete hai.." saying so he pushed his sword towards her, such tht now their swords were clashing.. "Ohh so lets tell her how proficient  I am.."

They remained in a comfortable distance for a while, exchanging blows, thrusts, parries and the three major counter attacks..Veer realized tht her hold on the sword was vry skillful n powerful, yet she was flexible enuf..All the while she was fightin him single handedly.. She was vry skilfull..sometimes she converted a false cutting blow into a sudden straight thrust and the oder moment she made master cuts, so tht her sword deflected the incoming blows while simultaneously hittin him..buh she was very careful not to hurt him..each blow she made was made wiv such a skill tht it went jus inch past his face and body so tht her sword didn't hurt him..

He was equally powerful, he must be quiet used to such combats as he too must hav done a lots of practice and tht's why was still holding on wiv as much dignity as she had..None of them was weak, both of them were equally skillful..

They tried to make the oder's sword fall wiv high, middle and hanging positions..so now jus two positions were left the low and back positions..both of these required lots of skills..

They reached the second phase of combat where the combatants are closing together and their weapons again make contact..the distance b/w them seemed to close in..

Now seemed to start the real fight?coz now he was fighting for his dignity, wht wud it be like to loose to a gal..buh she wasn't an ordinary gal, she was too skillfull, and her moves seemed to be flawless..This was the first time he had met a person who cud take his blows and still stand in front of him actually challenging him..and on top of tht she was a gal.. He thrust his sword on hers, using all his power now, so tht her sword might fall..she immediately backed away jus to give him another horizontal left to right cut..Again their swords clashed together..

 He began the most complicated series of attack he knew. He flowed from one form to another, recklessly combining and modifying them in every possible way. But no matter how inventive he was, Shera's blade sword always stopped his, She matched his actions wiv effortless Grace.

Engaged in a fiery dance, their bodies were linked and separated by notin buh mere flashing blades. At times they nearly touched, taut skin only a hair's breadth away, buh then momentum wud whirl them apart, and they wud withdraw for a second, only to join again. Their sinuous forms wove together like twisting ropes of wind blown smoke.

 

It seemed as if their bodies were entwined together but then in split seconds got separated jus to come back even more closer again..Now the air between them vibrated wiv tension from being so close?

Exchanging blows, attacks, parry's they kept moving, their positions changing, now they were vry close to the edge of the stream?

Hard and Soft, the idea is that when their blades contacted..he tried to gauge her mind and oppose strength wiv weakness and weakness wiv strength to control and exploit..He looked deep in her eyes, to see the ferocity and respect in her eyes..

Respect he earned coz of the fair way he was fighting, and the way he too was careful and was taking the duel seriously..

Suddenly he pulled in too close so tht she kind of lost her balance..He was about to put his hands around her waist to hold her b4 she fell..buh..

Then the blade centered out from the her lower abdomen at a 45 degree angle aimed at his chest came to him..one of her hands was touching the ground, which meant she had balanced herself even b4 Veer had 'tried' to hold her..

Man tis gal was rilli vry skilfull and flexible..

                As he pulled away, she came bac to a normal position..he pushed his blade onto her's so now their was no question of skills, just power..buh she made the half sword technique, she gripped the middle of his blade with the second bare hand. This wud allow a range of striking and deflecting actions..So their duel still continued..

                  Now He was being too powerful to her, coz of  his physique..being a man he was anyways mre powerful and now he was using his full force.. buh she was too adamant to leave so she jus turned around so that now he was standing on the edge..She made the rare blow, she held her sword straight in front of her n kind of nearly slashed him.. ( moved the sword too near) he bend down, but stumbled and lost his balance and fell in the stream..

 

She smiled at her success..she had won wiv full dignity and grace, he wasn't the one able to keep balance, she had been in the same position buh had taken care of herself..She slowly moved the blade from across her back impressively, doing the rounde, brought the sword in front of her and kissed the blade in the mid..The sword too deserved credit..

 

She started to move away, buh then turned in her tracks just to tease him..

" Dekha hum jeet gaye, kaha tha na humne, Shera haar jaye yeh kabhi ho nahi sakta..aur dekhiye app sahi jagah jakaar gire, abb nahana bhi ho jaega?" n she giggled away? " aur haan abb toh app humare saath a bhi nahi paenge.." she teased him further..

This caught his attention..gosh he needed to do sumtin..

" Ahhh!!!" He moaned lightly and held his back..he wasn't very hurt buh still it did give a lil pain the first time..

"Kya hua.." her naughty n haughty expression was replaced by concern now..

He was abt to say notin, buh then it struck him.. " Abb agar inke saath jana hai..toh toh humein kuch na kuch karna hoga?"

" Ahhh!!" he pretended tht he was vry hurt.. "voh bohot joorrr se lagg gai.."

" Ohhoo!!" as she started moving towards him..he stopped her..

" Rehne dijiye mein khud aa jaunga..Aap chale jaiye.."

" Arey!! Aise kaise..apko humara wajah se lagi, humein apko pakad lena chahiye tha..humein sachi nahi pata tha ki apko lagg jaegi.." she was genuinely feeling sorry for him..

Seein tht she's buyin the story, he felt sumfin fuzzy..the way she showed concern made him feel tht..He liked the way she herself was comin to him..he smiled " Sab apke saath jane ke liye hi toh kar raha hoon.."?

N gets past her holding his back..

" Kahan lagi.." she asked him, as they walked towards their horses..

" Yahan.." he said pointing towards his chest (his heart)?

" Kya??" she narrowed her eyes at him..

" Aaahh!! Voh humara matlab hai yahan.." he again caught his back..

" Hmm!!" she was supicious, as now he was kinda over reacting, and she cud see the reason clearly..he wanted to cum wiv her..she made him stop..

" Rukiye..ek min hum thik kardete hai..agar sach mein lagi hai.." he moaned nodding his head positively.. " toh thik ho jaega..aur agar nahi..toh aur jyada pitt dard satega.."

saying so she slammed one of her hands on his back..and so he rilli maoned..

" Isliye kehte hai, Shera se panga kabhi nahi lena.." she said in the kiddish way like Abhi..

 

" She moved towards Toofan and mounted him..she was goin to leave now.. She turned the stallion, such that they were now facing each-oder?

" Arey app kahan jaa rahi hai.." he asked tis vague question

" Jahan humein jana hai.." she gav equally vague answer

Till then she had cum closer to his mare..Toofan had abruptly halted.. n had turned a lil towards the white beauty?He moved closer as she edged behind..

Veer n Shera both saw this different aspect of the horses the first time..

" Toofan..kahan jaa rahe ho.." n she pulled his reign's softly to make the stallion face away from the mare, towards their path..

He jus neighed and moved a lil closer and then again abruptly turned away from the source of his fascination..The mare to was standing a feet away, and had backed up..

" Kya hua Andhi..aise peeche kyun aa gayi..voh koi nuksaan thodi na pohchaega.." n he pulled her reign's and walked towards her?

" Pata nahi yeh ajj Toofan ko kya hogaya.." she murmered and patted his back..

As she was abt to move?

" Arey apne saath chalne walon ka zara toh intezaar karna chahiye..Hum bhi toh aa rahe hai apke saath.."

" Aap..aur voh kyun bhala.."

" Arey phir se wahi..hum pehle bhi keh chuke hai.."

" Hum bhi phele se iss baarein mein apse bol chuke hai.."

" Agar abhi humara bazai koi aur hota, toh kya karti app..Bhalai ka toh zamana hi nahi raha.."

" Arey ismein kahan se bhalai ki baat aa jati hai..Hum koi nazook kali nahi hai..samjhe app..hum khood apni raksha kar sakte hai aur yeh dekh chuke hai app..."

" Kya??"

" Haan..kyunki hum jeet chuke hai..aur abb app humare saath nahi ayenge.."

"AHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" he tried the same old trick..

She luked at him wiv killer eyes..

" Humein aise chod ke jaogi.." he made the puppy dog innocent face..

she was puzzled..

" Hum toh apse..ek ladki se haar gaye..hum toh apni raksha nahi kar sakte na..toh isliye aap ko hi apne saath le jana hoga na humein.." he made the cute abla naari kind of face and gave tht pose?

She laughed a lil at this antique creature in front of her..he was so kl abt his losing to her, and had actually used it at his disposal..So he rilli wanted to go wiv her..

" Thik hai.." she put on the stern face..suppressing her laughter..

He merrily mounted Andhi and started moving along wiv her?Jus when he was abt to speak..she said, " Bilkul chup chap chalna..Koi baat nahi karenge hum pure raste.."..now she was a bit upset as he too was coming along wiv her..She had planned to spend quality time wiv her dear stallion buh now him being wiv her she cudn't enjoy and be like the lil kid she was when alone..he wud be there watchin her all time?so she cudn't put on her lil antiques now..

Again when he was abt to say sumfin..

" Bilkul Chup?Agar bolna hai toh akele chale jaiye.."

" Huh!! Jungalli Billi" he muttered under his breath..

" Kuch kaha apne?" she narrowed her eyes..

" Nahi nahi..!! Kuch nahi.." " Billi ki tarah kaan bhi tejj hai.." he spoke in mind..n when he saw her lookin at him wiv " U said sumfin look" n jus gav a smug smile and looked away..takin in the beautiful surroundings..the deep greens of the most exotic and beautifully coloured forest he had ever seen..wiv the jungle queen / forest princess (thnx sumi di for tis name), a silent jungalli billi besides him..

 

 

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Hmm finally here's the prt dearies?anoder lng prt..it took me a while to write..sowie coz hav been busy wiv preparations for further studies ..so sowie sweeties?

Hmm RL bhi update karna hai..em goin to wrk for tht prt now..kk?

Plzzzzz do comment dearies?I rilli love readin em?

Btw will be PMing in a while..It'll take time..Plzzzzz don't reply bac in PM's plzzz..em sowie if I sound rude..buh I feel vry bad when em not able to reply?

See ya all sn?

Love ya all loads?t.ccccc

 

 

 

                                  -Ur's Ever Madhu😳

Edited by cute_madhu - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Cute Madhu.. I came running here... 😊 from the link u gave me.. no FF.. where is it 😭 jaldi shuru karo .. jaldi post karo 😭 Me waiting 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: bhuvana3

Cute Madhu.. I came running here... 😊 from the link u gave me.. no FF.. where is it 😭 jaldi shuru karo .. jaldi post karo 😭 Me waiting 😊

 
Awwwwww sweety aap bhagi bhagi aayi...U r such a sweet heart...I jus gav the prologue sweetz....abhi character sketch aur phir FF shuru hoga.......
 
Saans toh le lo meri pyaari di.....mein abb jus for u kal tak character sketch post kar dungi n will PM u sweety so dun not worry......
 
Thanx sweetzzzzzzz..Love ya hunni-bunni......t.ccccccccc
 
 
 
                         -Ur's Ever Madhu😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
arrey are u going to torture us😲 wid each character sketch posting it separetely!! πŸ˜†
 
lol...
 
well, i liked ur prologue, seemed really interesting πŸ˜›, as u told, i clicked the thanks button, but i was about to comment after 1st part, as im truly busy these days..
the prologue was amazing, and wat to say about veers sketch.. 😍.. waiting for sheras. i wonder if she will be a dakoo or a princess.. actually i think as per ur writting she will be a dakoo; and this will be a passionated story. πŸ˜›
anyways, i will wait just as others are doing, continue wid the ff. πŸ‘