20 July Written Update

Vitna thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
From the beginning, arlsaan and the others get in trouble for going to the dead zone so the main teacher told them that they will all get punished and the punishment was that they had to clean the library. Then on the other side zaakfaar and his wife Mikkavi were really mad and wondered who the boy could be to destroy there army. So then Zaakfaar called his power fool men to go search for him and kill him and so he did. Finally zaakfaar men went to the school and saw that there was a teacher there so he hit the teacher on the head n the teacher fell down and zaakfaar men turned into that teacher and went inside the school. Over in the library, Shefaan and Urfus and dufus were making fun of him. Suddenly Zaafkaar men came turning into a teacher, asking them why they were in the library. arslaan got supicious. And said to the teacher that probably he have forgotten but they all got the punishment to clean the library. Zaakfaar men sweating said that  that what he meant to say that why you guys were talking instead of cleaning. Then he left. The next morning the main teacher came to annouce that they were going to have a big game. And so he annouced the players that were going to play in that game. first he called Urfus and dufus then rudabeh then Shefaan then arslaan. then later he announced the captian of the game and shefaan was so sure that he was going to be the captain but he didnt and arslaan became the captian. Then urfus and dufus told shefaan to steal arslaans weapon that he uses and so he did while urfus and dufus tried to get arslaans attention. then shefaan went to arlsaan's room and stole his weapon and then the zaakfaar's men saw him with the weapon and said that he is the boy. Then the next day on the game everyone was ready and arslaan told he couldnt find his weapon so they said he had to play without it! Then the main teacher tired to fire up this thing but it wouldnt let him do it and the teacher got suspicious! So zaakfaar men was right beside him and told him what happen so the teacher said that there is a stranger in this school and so zaakfaar said he will check out what is it. Then the game begin. Suddenly during the game he flys up in the air and people see that he is being chocked. The main teacher tried to help him but couldnt and zaakfaar men was in a room doing all this to shefaan. So then shefaan toke out arslaans weapon and tried to defense himself but couldnt and if fell on the ground and arslaan sees it and helps shefan. Then on the other side the teacher that was unconsious woke up and ran to the school. Over there zaakfaar men comes out to kill arslaan and then suddenly the other teacher comes and tells the main teacher everything and he kills zaakfaar men. while zaakfaar men was struggling he sees the symbol on arslaans hand and the symbol meant that he was rehan's son. So the zaakfaar men screams out loud that he is rehan's son and everyone get shocked and even Zaakfaar heres it. And there is finishes.
 
 
Well hoped u enjoyed it! my first time so please do comment!😊
 
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks!!!! sounds really interesting