Pride (20/4) | OS Series: Peccatum | UPDATED- Page 19

LyssaPie

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Posted: 11 years ago

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So cute Rudra finally have in hahah

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Anjani Patel

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Gah! I loved Gluttony! Like something, anything like that in the show would be amazing ^.^

It was perfectly etched out! I thought Aman was Rudra at the beginning :P

The twist and the little things that made me smile we great :)

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Aruni.

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Posted: 11 years ago

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OK, my guess was wrong. I thought Gluttony in the sense of selfishness will be on Thakur sa, But this is way better! Ah, the food. Loved the affection underlying the whole story. Those subtle bonds is exactly what's missing in the show.

Just before this I read an article on Barun Ji eating Chole Bhature... I googled for it (I am a hopeless fangirl that way) and I think Chole must be tasty. We have similar Sri Lankan food here too 😊

Waiting for the next!

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shagun-rocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

absolutely brilliant..that was light-hearted, fun chapter to read...rudra's expression of satisfaction that aman witnessed was to die for!...waiting for the next installment...

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1sarun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Nice read, so the age old adage ' way to man's heart is through his stomach' works for Paro.

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Meena

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: DDC1
ChotiDesi Baisa,

I am a glutton now for your series. Gluttony was so so cute. At first I thought it was Rudra then it turned out to be Aman. I guess we all love to feed our loved ones, you will touch a chord with all the Baisas here.

Please call me Choti! This is one of the best comments I've received- I'm flattered I could turn you into a sinner 😉 This one was lighthearted, in preparation for the heavier stuff to come- I needed something to break the tension. And food, is always good for that- they've got the adage wrong. Food is the way to a woman's heart, not a man's. 😆

I shall respond to the comments ASAP, Baisas! Sorry it's taking so long- I've had to work, and while I read them, I haven't had time to give proper responses.

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Khuarv

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Posted: 11 years ago

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I just love the title.Just finished reading the three updates you have posted.All three are awesome and loved the second Os series for the insight into Mohini's mind.The third was such a cute fluffy update that i had a smile at the end of that OS.Awaiting your next series.Very beautifully written👏.

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niyoti

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Posted: 11 years ago

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The disney song "a star is born" from Hercules is playing in the back of my mind while I read this 😆 Let Paro and Rudra haunt you so you keep putting out work like this.

"There is no greater agony than bearing an untold story inside you"~ Maya Angelou

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