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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hunny1993


Ye hue na baat ... 😊

that is coz we need to restore our energy nd come back and lobb u more😈
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Leki


that is coz we need to restore our energy nd come back and lobb u more😈



Ab ye hui na baat...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi5 Kavs😆
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Posted: 11 years ago


hi5

Hunny we r true ariya lovers...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

Hunny hum ariya lovers sabhi ariya wrters ke fan hai jo ariya writers ka khoon bhi karna janate hai...

We are unique😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
No please don't stop them please
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Posted: 11 years ago
we love your story❤️ do'nt dare to discontinues it😡
plz update soon😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
Your stories are superb
Don't discontinue them plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
sry 4 late .but u all know the reason .i m totally upset with ur responses .may b u all don't like my works .😭
Any way i m continuing stories only 4 those who always support me .thx leki ,kaveri di ,anku ,piya 4 lobbing me 😉
& ofcourse thx 2 pinku ,megha ,ila who gave me mental support .😊.
now time 4 nxt part .




PART -3

Arjun looked at riya & shocked .she is crying .

Arjun :riya ,tum ro rahi ho ???😲

Riya now burst into tears .she hugged him suddenly & broke down in his arms crying very badly .
Arjun is quite shock at her sudden act .this is the first time any girl hug arjun .she is holding him so tightly .arjun getting a different feelings with her .he is in confusion if he should hug her back or not .but this moment riya need a very supportive person .in the mean time he is only one .he pushed his all thoughts aside & hugged her back 2 make her comfortable .they sitting like that 4 few minutes .then arjun realise people r starring them weirdly .so he slowly broke the hug but still holding her by her shoulder .

Arjun :riya ,meri taraf dekho ...

Riya looked at arjun with teary eyes .seeing her arjun felt something pinned into his heart .😭

Arjun :kya baat hai riya ...tum ro kyu rahi ho ???

Riya (with sobbing):wo nehi aya arjun ...😭

Arjun :what !!!!😲but tumne hi to bola tha ki wo yaha ayegi ...

Riya :ha arjun .usne v mujhse yahi kaha tha ki wo yahi rahegi .par wo yaha nehi hai ...how could he do this 2 me arjun ...😭

She again hugged him & crying badly .
Arjun bcam so angry on riya's bf .how could he do this 2 riya ????how dare he 2 ditch her .😡

Arjun (MV):agar wo kamina mere samne aa jayena to i swear mein banduk ki chai (six) goliya hi usk veje me dal dungi !!!! akhir uski himmat kaise hue riya ki tarah itni innocent ladki ko hurt karne ki !!!😡

Arjun came out of his thought when he heard riya's voice .

Riya :arjun ,wo aisa kaise kar sakta hai ...wo to mujhse pyaar karta hai na ...

Arjun :riya ,tum shant ho jao .uss insaan se k liye ro kar kya faida jisse tumari feelings ki koi kadar hi nehi ...

Riya :no arjun .wo aisa nehi hai .

Arjun :agar wo aisa nehi hai to wo yaha aya kyu nehi ???

Riya :jarur koi problem hogi .mujhe usse baat karni hogi .

Saying this she ran out 4m the temple & went 2 the pco .
arjun also ran after her .she called in a number .someone picked up the phone .arjun is standing outside of the pco .
After few minutes conversation riya came out of the booth happily .she again hugged arjun .but this time happily or quite jumpingly .

Arjun :kya baat hai riya tum aise uchal kyu rahi ho ????

Riya :mera usk sath baat hua hai arjun .aur wo avi udaipur k liye nikal chuka hai .wo hume wohi milegi .😃

Arjun :what !!!! par tumne to kaha tha wo yahi rahegi .

Riya :ha .but actually usk sath mera last baat hue thi parsu .fir meri mobile kho jane k wajah se usse contact nehi kar payi .usne to mere cell par calls,msgs ki thi .usse thodi hi pata tha ki meine apna phone kho di .

Arjun :par wo udaipur me kya kar raha hai ???

Riya :ufffo arjun !!! meine tumhe bataya tha na he is an engineer .wo waha site survey k liye gaya hai .

Arjun :great !!!! aise bf palte ho tum !!! aj tak meine suna hai ki ladka ladki k piche bhagta hai .but yaha to mumla ulta hi hai ...😡

Riya :1 minute arjun ...kahi tum issi chakkar me to mera help nehi kar rahe ho na ki tum mere piche bhag sakho 😆

Arjun :just shut up riya !!! iss waqt me mazak karne ki mood me nehi hu 😡

Arjun bcam more angry on riya's bf in his mind .he don't know why but feeling jealous of that lucky man .

Riya :hey arjun kaha kho gayi ...

Arjun:umm kahi nehi .tum bolo ab ka kya plan hai .jaoge usse milne udaipur ???

Riya :ofcourse jaungi !!! wo jaha mein waha ...

Arjun (MV):dhat !!!! ye riya v na ...uss engineer k liye pagal ho chuka hai .aur iss chakkar me mujhe gadhe ki ser karni pad rahi hai !!!!😡

Riya :arjun ,kya khade khade soch me pad gaye .chalo ...

Arjun :ha chalo bol di aur chal gayi udaipur .udaipur yaha se bohot dur hai ...direct koi bus ya train nehi milegi .pouchte pouchte kal duphar ho jayegi ...

Riya :so what !!! hone do .mujhe bas udaipur jana hai .plz arjun ...(she pleading like a cute child)

Arjun :ok f9.ab chalo ...

in mumbai...

Shree ,chotu & liza were working on finding out riya .
In the mean time simran entered & 4m other side karan also entered in etf .accidently both banged with each other .first simran yelled .

Simran :dekh kar nehi chal sakti !!! akh kya chand pae rakh kar aye ho ...😡

Karan :oye ...black film ki rani mukherjee (lolz ...her name title is also mukherjee😆) khud ko to dikhayi nehi deta aur mujhe blame kar rahi ho !!!!😡

Simran :how dare u talking with me like that !!!!😡

Karan :kyu ap kya queen eligabeth ho jo apse shraddha se pesh ani padegi ...

Simran :uuu!!!😡

In conference room -

Liza :ye chilla ne ki awaz kaisa ???😕

Chotu :shayad office k bahar kissi taxi driver k sath kissi passenger ka lafda ho gaye honge ...

Shree :chotu ,jaisa tera naam waisa tera dimag !!!! hamari office sound proof hai .bahar k awaz andar kaise ayegi .ye shouting office k andar ho raha hai .chal hall me jakar dekhte hai ...

So they came 2 the hall & what they saw their eyes getting popped out .😲simran & karan already started their fight .both pulling each other hairs .
Shree ,liza ,chotu immediately rushed 2 them & very hardly parted them .but simran -karan showing still each other punch .

Simran (shouted):u devil !!! mein tumara sadh fodh dungi !!!😡

Karan (also shouted):chudhel kahi ki haat to lagakar dikha !!!!😡

now shree interpreted

Shree (shouted):karan - simran just stop !!! ye etf ka office hai ...WWF ka manch nehi .😡

Finally karan & simran stop their fight.but still looking each other with snaky view .

Shree :karan tum yaha kya kar rahi ho ???

Karan :bas ye puchne k liye ayi thi ki vai ne koi call ki hai ya nehi ???

b4 shree could answer simran barked

Simran :ooo to tum ussi insaan k vai ho jo meri behen se saadi k din bhaag gaya hai ...😡

Karan :arre wah !!! ek murgi gayi murga k piche to dusra aa gayi yaha ande dene ...

Simran :what !!!

Karan :aur nehi to kya ...mere vai k upar iljaam lagane se pehle ek baar apni behen ki kartute k bare me v to bol do ...mere vai to kamse kam saadi se bhagne k liye bhaga hai .par tumari behen to kissi aur k sath hi bhaag gayi ...

Simran :meri behen kissi k sath nehi bhaagi .wo v saadi se bachne k liye bhagi hai ...

Shree :tum dono ab bas v karo ...kabse dono chapad chapad kar rahi ho .ab thoda break v do .yaha par apne vai behen k bare me puchne aye ho ya jhagde karne aye ho !!!

Karan :arre yara ...puchne k liye hi to ayi thi par iss ki wajah se (looking 2wards simran) sab gadbad ho gayi ...

Shree :arjun sir ka pata chal chuka hai .unhone phone ki thi .wo bilkul thik hai .

Simran :aur riya di ???😕

Shree :uska jayada kuch nehi pata chala hai .bas station se pata lagaya hai ki wo punchgari janewala train me chada tha .aur usk sath ek ladka v tha ...

Simran is shocked hearing that 😲

Karan :dekha ...ladk k sath bhaagi hai ...

Simran :aise kaise ho sakte hai ...mere di kissi aur se pyaar karte hai .aur itni badi baat unhone mujhse chupayi 😭

Shree (keep his hand on her shoulder):mein v yahi soch rahi thi ...usne hum dono se kav v koi v baat nehi chupati .pata nehi iss baar usne kyu chupayi ??? tu tension maat le hum riya ko dhundkar nikalenge ...

Scene shift 2 ariya

Riya :arjun ,aur kitne der tak aise hi chalti rahu ???mein thak gayi hu ...aur mere per (leg) me dard v ho raha hai ...

Arjun :bas thoda aur .samne high way hai .waha se bas ya lift leni padegi .

Riya :but arjun mujhse ab aur chala nehi jaa raha hai ...

Arjun looked at riya .yes ,she is looking so tired .her face looking dull .

Arjun :riya ,ek minute ...

he came close 2 her .riya looking at him confusingly .suddenly he lifted her in his arms .she is totally shock at his sudden action .

Riya :arjun ye tum ...

Arjun (looking into her eyes):ssshh ...apni bagbag thodi der k liye band karo .nehi to mein tumhe aise lekar high way tak chal nehi paungi ...

Riya :par arjun tumhe takleef hogi ...

Arjun :riya ,meine kaha na thodi der k liye apna muuh band rakho .aur waise v mein ek police officer hu .mujhe ye sab se koi farak nehi padta ...

Riya (teasingly):kyu ...tumari police ki training me kya ladki ko lifting karne ka training v di jati hai ...😆

Arjun :riya ...

Arjun started walking holdig riya in his arms .the whole way riya was silent .but she was continuously stairring him .
On the other hand arjun didn't look 2wards her directly .but he was taking glances of her 4m his eye corner .
After 20 minutes they reached at the high way & luckily got a lift ...


PRECAP:Ariya reached at updaipur & took riya 2 sam's house .sam is shocked 2 c riya with arjun .what will happen now ??? ...😉


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Posted: 11 years ago
Yay...
I am the first one to comment and like the update,without a pm...
Yahooo...
Jai Ho stalking power ki...
Awesome and super duper update...
Loved it a lot...
Ariya going to Udaipur...
Precap is interesting...
Continue sooonish... :)
thanks for the pm... :)
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