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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update Sweety..
Romance in the rain ...and the kiss at the end an unexpected one 😉 😳

Gods blessing this cute couple frm heaven ..that was a fantastic ending for the chapter...loved it ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
CHAPTER 56

VISHNU & LAKSHMI:

Vishnu is driving the car quietly. Lakshmi is looking through the window.
Lakshmi turns towards Vishnu and calls him..."Vishnu..."
Vishnu: sollu Lakshmi...
Lakshmi: mazhai vara maathiri irukku ille?
Vishnu: ayyayyo... mazhaiyaa?
Lakshmi: ippo edhukku padharre? naama car la thaane poyikittu irukkom?
Vishnu: Karthik, Raji bike la varaangale...
Lakshmi: avanga jolly yaa mazhai ya enjoy pannitte varuvanga...
Vishnu: adhuvum correct thaan...

Droplets of water start pouring and Lakshmi is very happy...
Lakshmi: haiyya... mazhai vandhiruchi...
Vishnu: intha mazhai naama veettukku ponadhukku appuramaa vara koodaadha?
Lakshmi: Vishnu vandiya niruthu...
Vishnu: edhukku?
Lakshmi: enakku ippo mazhaile nanaiyanum...
Vishnu: venaa Lakshmi...
Lakshmi: please ... Vishnu...
Vishnu: sonnaa kelu Lakshmi... naalaikku Office poganum... ippo nee mazhaile nenanjaa... fever vandhuda pogudhu...
Lakshmi: adhellaam onnum varaadhu... ippo nee vandi niruthariyaa... ille nnaa naane irangidavaa?
She tries to open the door.
Vishnu stops the car with a sudden break.

Vishnu: enna Lakshmi ippadi panre?
Lakshmi: neeyum variyaa?
Vishnu: naan varalai paa...
Lakshmi: sari ... nee ingeye ukkaaru... naan poren...
Lakshmi gets out of the car and starts playing with the rain.
Vishnu is happy seeing Lakshmi enjoying the rain...
Lakshmi enjoys and rejoices by getting wet in the rain ...
After sometime, Lakshmi comes to Vishnu, opens the car door and drags him out of the car...
Vishnu gets out but is still hesitant to get drenched in the rain.
Lakshmi comes to him and says..."Vishnu... let's dance..."
Vishnu gets carried away with her bubbliness and grabs her and starts to dance.
Lakshmi: I LOVE YOU ... Vishnu...
Vishnu: I LOVE YOU TOO... Lakshmi...

KARTHIK & RAJI:

Karthik kisses Raji and she responds with equal impulsion. She hugs him by placing her arms around his neck and moving closer to him. Karthik is completely bowled over by this gesture of hers realizing how deeply she is in love with him. Both of them want to cherish the moment forever and disturbing the beautiful feeling they are enjoying... Karthik's mobile rings...

It keeps on ringing continuously and it is Raji who comes to her senses first and breaks the hug . She takes her hands off him and gently pushes him back. Departing from her Karthik looks at her intensely.

Raji: Karthik ... un phone adikkudhu paaru...
He puts his arm around her waist and grabs her close and says.."ennaachu?"
Raji points his pocket and says ..." mobile adichitte irukku paaru.."
Only then does he realize that his mobile was ringing, he takes it out of his pocket... and exclaims seeing the name on the mobile screen.
He answers..." hellooo... yes sir... sollunga sir... (he quietly listens for two minutes... and) ... OK... sir... see you ... sir..."
Karthik cuts the call and looks at Raji who is eagerly looking at him and says..."Viswanathan Sir... "
Raji: ennaachu Karthik?
Karthik: solren ... iru ore nimisham ...
And he dials Vishnu...


Vishnu & Lakshmi holding each other and are lost looking into each other's eyes.
Both of them are experiencing the joy of being in Love and the happiness of being in each other's arms...
Breaking the silence Vishnu's mobile rings...
Vishnu gets disturbed, ignores first but had no option but to attend the call as his mobile rings continuously... Seeing it's Karthik calling, he answers quickly...

Vishnu: machaan enna daa?
Karthik: machaan enga daa irukkeenga?
Vishnu: on the way daa... neenga reach aayaachaa?
Karthik: illa daa... entha area la irukke nee?
Vishnu: dei... exact aah theriyala daa... iruttaa irukku... mazhai vera...
Karthik: sari appo... naan solradhai kelu...innum correct aah 30 minutes la office kitta vandhidu...
Vishnu: office kaa?
Karthik: nee vaa daa... naan ner la solren... Viswanathan sir call panni irundhaaru... urgent daa... udane office ku vaa...
Vishnu: sari daa...bye...
Lakshmi asks him "ennaa aachu Vishnu?"
Vishnu: ennanne theriyalai...Viswanathan sir call pannaaru... half an hour la office ku vaa .. ner la solren nu sollittu call cut pannittaan ...
Lakshmi: sari vaa polaam...
Both of them get into the car and he drives towards office.

Karthik ends the call and Raji asks him worriedly .."ennaachu Karthik?"
Karthik: onnum illai... Viswanathan sir call pannaaru... office ku poganum.
Raji: edhukku?
karthik: oru nimisham ...
He messages to someone and says..." half an hour la Office reach aaganum... anga pona udane solren... vaa polaam..."
He starts the bike and Raji sits behind and he drives fast...
Raji holds him around his waist and leans on his shoulder .
Karthik could feel she is shivering but he had no time to comfort her.
He rather says.." thoongaadhe Raji... "
Raji: illai Karthik... fast aa drive pannaa bayangaramaa kulurudhu...
Karthik: sorry Raji... ore oru twenty minutes .. please...
Raji: OK...

exactly twenty minutes later, Karthik reaches Office.
He takes his mobile and calls Vishnu.
Karthik: dei... Vishnu enga daa irukke?
Vishnu: almost reached daa... two minutes...
Karthik:OK..
He cuts the call and Vishnu arrives and as soon as the car stops, Lakshmi comes running,
and enquires.."ennaachu Karthik?"
Karthik: tension aagaadheenga...
Security comes and gives him a parcel and says "oruthar vandhu neenga vandha kudukka sonnaanga Sir."
Karthik takes the parcel from him and says Thank you.

Karthik gives the parcel to Raji and says idhula dress irukku ... rendu perum idhai maathittuu vandhu conference room la wait pannunga... naanga Sir ah paarthuttu vandhidarom...
Raji: vaa Lakshmi...
Lakshmi: mmm... vaa...
Both of them enter into the office..

Vishnu comes near Karthik and asks " enna machaan... en daa ivvalo tension aah irukke?"
Karthik: cha... en mela enakku bayangara kovamaa irukku daa... eppadi ivalo careless aah irukka mudinjidhu nnu enakku kaduppaaguthu..
Vishnu: enna daa?
Karthik: Viswanathan sir call pannaaru daa...
Vishnu: adhai thaan yerkanave sollittiye... edhukku phone pannaaru nnu sollu daa...
Karthik: adhu vandhu...
Karthik's mobile rings and looking at it he says, "dei... sir thaan... vaa modhallai avarai parthuttu ... appuram detail aah solren.."
Vishnu: sari...
Both of them go to Viswanathan's cabin.

Both Raji and Lakshmi change their wet attire and wear the new dress in the parcel and wait in the Conference room.
Lakshmi: ennaachu Raji?
Raji: theriyalai Lakshmi...
Lakshmi: ennadi badhil idhu?
Raji: illa Lakshmi... viswanathan sir kitta irundhu call vandhuchi... eduthu pesittu udane varen sir nu sonnaan... ennaachu nnu kettaa oru nimisham iru nnu sollittu... Vishnu vukku call panni office vaa nnu sollittu ... Office pona udane solren nu sollittu inga koottittu
vandhuttaan. naangalum vandhom pinnadiye neengalum vandhitteenga.
Lakshmi: enga ivanga rendu perum?
Both of them wait restlessly...

Karthik and Vishnu knock and enter Viswanathan's cabin...


Chapter 57... coming soon...


Edited by sweety16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the update sweety..
Wonderful romantic scene..Love the suspense of what and why vishwananthan sir called them...
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks fr d beautiful chpter Sweety...kr scenes r awesum...suspense suspense suspense...omg cnt waittt update nxt part soon Sweety..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the pm sweety..!!
Loved the romantic feel..
Vishwanathan sir yethuku kuptaru...!!
Eagerly waiting...!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
A big hug 🤗 for you sweety. Chance illa pa...

Sooo romantic...

What suspense???????????????
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Posted: 12 years ago
suspense mela suspense...
.ipo edhuku viswanadhan sir urgent ah koopidrar...kousik problem laam mudinjadhu nu ninachen...ipo enna pudhusa...😲
.karthik vera edho careless ah irundhutn nu solran...seekram sollunga sweety..
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Posted: 12 years ago
sweety,athu enama suspense,ennala wait panna mudiyala,
visu sir ethuku kopitaru,ethavathu prachanaiya😕
even karthik told that he had done a mistake😲
enapa ithu,anyway i hope it must not be any negative one

sweety,neenga suspensea appaiye last varaikum kondu vantheengala,naan emanthuten,antha kovathula en pakathula iruntha oru water bottlea(filled with half quantity of water) appadiye throw panniten.antha nerathula enga pakathu veetu aunty vanthutangala,athu avanga nosea patham parthuiruchu.but avanga enna parkarathuku munnadi naan escape aayiten.avanga than innum athu yaarunu theriyama polamikitte irunkanga😆😆.

athanala,neenga seekarama next parta update pannungapa.😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shiningstar77


sweety,neenga suspensea appaiye last varaikum kondu vantheengala,naan emanthuten,antha kovathula en pakathula iruntha oru water bottlea(filled with half quantity of water) appadiye throw panniten.antha nerathula enga pakathu veetu aunty vanthutangala,athu avanga nosea patham parthuiruchu.but avanga enna parkarathuku munnadi naan escape aayiten.avanga than innum athu yaarunu theriyama polamikitte irunkanga😆😆.
athanala,neenga seekarama next parta update pannungapa.😳


ayyayyooo...
idhu enna anyyaayamaa irukke?????
edhoo padichu enjoy pannuveenga nnu kadhai ezhudhunaa ...
pakkathu veettu aunty mookkai ellaam odaikkareenga?????

director kaattina promo vida mosamaa irukkaa enna intha suspense?
correct aah follow pannaa angeye clue kidaikkum...

next update mostly tomorrow evening or night...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweety16


ayyayyooo...
idhu enna anyyaayamaa irukke?????
edhoo padichu enjoy pannuveenga nnu kadhai ezhudhunaa ...
pakkathu veettu aunty mookkai ellaam odaikkareenga?????

director kaattina promo vida mosamaa irukkaa enna intha suspense?
correct aah follow pannaa angeye clue kidaikkum...

next update mostly tomorrow evening or night...




hi hi hi,sweety athu onnum illapa,konjam aarvamthan 😆,vera onnum illapa,naan onnum aunty nosea venumnu oodaikalapa,athu theriyama patruchu.moreover chinna kayamthan.that's all.so dont worry.neenga santhosam padunga unga kathaiya naanga evalavu jollya seriousa paarkaromnu😳
Edited by shiningstar77 - 12 years ago

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