Mayur FF-Dil Ke Naazuk Dhaage#3 Pt-73/Pg-142 - Page 21

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ratibob007

part 56 & 57 both are written brilliantly.

But ab patch up kara do.


kara dungi dont worry
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Faria.

oye shaffu
tu meri mayur ko kab milayegi
bahut hogaya ye gussa
ab tu kuch kar


don't worry next update will be happy update
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Kurup

Very nice updatesss...the way mayank is reacting is very bad,,,agreed that he is hurt with nupur's behavior, but she had made it clear that she would not have done such an act, still cant he beleive her...

but the last chapter was very good..the emotions were beautifulll...both nupur and mayank 's emotions were very very high today,,,,keep this pace up...


Thanks a lot
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mayuloveu

Beautiful update. Mayur ki mila do.


thank you so much
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: GauriLuvsRP

Last two updates were beautifully wriiten dear...

bas mayank khud bhi tadap rahe ho air nupur ko bhi tadpa rahe ho...
mayur ko ek kar do yaar...
continue soon...


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

awww such a janu update


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Posted: 11 years ago


Dil Ke Naazuk Dhaage


Part 58


In morning she opened her eyes...she found herself near him which gives content to her heart..she lookes at him who was still in sleep due to effect of medicines ...she got up from her place..when she felt a pull and turn to see and realize that their hands were enterwin together neatly placing on the bed...she was in abit confusion whether it was done in sleep or he did it purposely..but whatever the reason be..this shows that they are together and she felt no to leave that hand ever and be always with him ,she smiled to herself and carefully not waking him up she gave a slight kiss to their joined finger's and than slowly remove them from his hold.

After about an hour Mayank opened his eyes...and instantly turned his head to look for Nupur but went dissappointed not seeing her beside him...he wish to see her first in morning..a big frown appears on his face when he heard someone saying,"Ye dekho..mujhe to laga tha ki mera bhai subha subha mujhe apni smile ke meraa swagat krega but yahan to as usual muh chadha ker beth gaya...".His frown turns bigger when someone also joined the person,"Haan yaar...dost hue paraye..zamanaa hua begana..".

Mayank:Aa gaye tum dono muh chadha ker yahan subha subha ..aur koi kaam dhandha nahi hain kya...

Samrat:Kya Mayank..mujhe to laga tha ki tere sir per chot lagi hain to tera sadupan kuch kam ho gaya hoga but nahi ye vesa ka vesa hi hain infact ab badh gaya hain...

Benji:Sahi kaha..ab smile mein bhi iska sadupan jhalakta hain...

Mayank:Benji...he glared to him..and than turned his head in order of searching her..Samrat helped him to sit and offered him breakfast...

He want to enquire about her but somehow couldn't when Benji spoke,"Jisse aap dhundh rahe hain unhe humne zabardasti ghar bheja hain...

Mayank:Kyu..?? suddenly he realized his sudden rise in pitch and than frame up his question ,"I mean What happen..!!".

Samrat:What happen kuch nahi tumhari biwi ne bechare doctor ka dimaag kha liya tha ye pooch pooch ker ki Mayank ki kitni injuries hain .?? Kiss baat ki zaayeda care kerni hain?? Tumhari diet..??Tum discharge kab hoge..??Wagerah wagerah..?? Aur vese bhi vo raat bhar thik se so bhi nahi paayi !!!

Mayank firstly smiled to himself hearing how Nupur irritated doctor..not because of this he was smiling but he was smiling to know how much she is caring for him it making him feel that whatever he heard that time was true and it bring new beat to his heart..but when Samrat mention that couldn't able to sleep properly a frown appears and he asked,"Tumhe kese pata ".

Samrat:Humari pyaari bhabhi ki aakhen bahut expressive hain nahi unke pati balki unke devar bhi samjh jaate hain unki unkahee baat

Benji:Isliye zabardasti thoda rest krene ke liye aur freshen up hone liye ghar bhej diya hain ..!! Aa jaayengi thodi der mein tu breakfast ker..!!

His face become dull with fact that she isn't near to him..he wish if she would have been with him she herself would have fed breakfast to him but now these two*glaring at his brother and friend* now these two monkeys are going to feed him..aww Gosh Nupur jaldi aa jao...

Mayank made face and said,"Vo mere shoulder mein bahut pain hain..!! Mein nahi khaa paunga.."

He wish them to call Nupur for that but no how can they miss this opportunity instead of calling Nupur as per his wish they themseleves came forward and fed him saying,"Kya baatt kerdi tune aaj bhai bhai ke kaam nahi aayega kya...hum khud tujhe apni haatho se khilayenge..".With that they fed him where Benji told him about his rejections he faced in mission of Ladki-patayoing and asked Mayank,"Yaar tere office mein koi achi ladki nahi hain..".

Mayank:Achi hain but koi tere type ki nahi hain..

Benji:Matlab??

Mayank:Matlab ki ki aise nahi hain jiska I.Q. level zero ho..".

Saying he high-fied with Samrat but than moan with little pain.Samrat,"Dude araam se..".

Benji:Vese on serious note kuch pata chala...

Mayank:Dekh abhi tak to shaq hi hain yakeen ke saath kuch nahi keh sakte..

Samrat:Police zaru pata kerke batayegi..

Benji:Hmm..aur vese bhi mene apni team laga diya hain uss number to detect kerne ka jahan se call aayi thi..

Samrat:Kuch pata chala..

Benji:Yaar number private hain isliye thodi der ho rahi hain aur vese bhi tu hi keh raha tha ki police ki zayedaa involvement nahi chahiye..

Mayank:Hmm..thik hain..jesa bhi kuch pata chale mujhe bata dena abhi to hume ek story frame kerni hain verna ghar mein sab tensed rahenge...

Samrat:Don't worry intezaam ho jaayega...

After some time Nupur entered making his wish to fulfill like after ages..with her Shilpa Ji and Radhika Ji accompnied and both ladies took seats besides him asking about his health talking him while she was standing beside him quietly listening to their talk...He so wanted to hear her voice even ready to keep his ego aside but it's seems ye zalim zamanaa is not letting him to share some words with his wife when an idea clicks to him and he directly asks her,"Nupur office mein kya chal raha hain..".

Nupur was bit taken from his question but than said to Shilpa Ji putting her both hands on her waist,"Dekha Maa mein na kehti thi...thoda thik hue nahi office ki baat le ker shuru ho jaayenge...

Shilpa Ji:Bilkul sahi keh rahi hain tu..turning to Mayank..aur tu halat dekh apni isme bhi office ke baare mein soojh raha hain...Before Mayank come up with some words Radhika Ji spoke supporting him,"Shilpa Aisa kyu keh rahi ho..aur vese bhi vo konsa kaam leker beth gaya hain bass pooch hi to raha hain..

Mayank:Dekha mummy bas ek aap hi hain jo samjh sakti hain mere jazbaaton ko...

Nupur:Maa tum bhi judd gayi iske saath team mein..mein to ye keh rahi hoon bass thoda ghar aa jayen..fir office ki chinta ker lenge tab tak to mein hoon na...aur haan inse ye bhi keh do ki zaayeda kaam nahi hain office mein mene aaj poocha tha phone kerke..Saying she turned towards window..opening it's lid making fresh air and sunlight to enter the room.Where he too made a face saying himself,"Pyar se bhi to keh sakti thi...!!".After sometime doctor came and check him and with most insist she send Radhika Ji and Shilpa Ji back and assure them to be beside him.She made him ate lunch and than giving hi medicines she advised him to take rest and moved to other side when she felt from backside...he turn to see Mayank has held corner of her Sari pallu stopping her from going anywere though wasn't looking into her eyes but still want her to come near to him.She said to him,"Mayank chodo na...".
He looked at her
for a while and than said,"Nahi.."

She said again pullig her pallu,"Mayank chodo na.."

Mayank:Khud hi le lo...

She sighed and walked upto him muttering,"Kya bachpana hain ye..chodo acha mera pallu.."Saying she forwarded her hand to remove it from his grip when he brought it near to him and said to her,"Pass aa ker nikal lo.."
She widened her eyes and came a bit near to him,"Ye kya hain Mayank...tumhe rest nahi kerna...".With that she came near to her..when with sudden pull she fell on him..she was startle a bit but than realizing that he is in pain due to his wounds she made an attempt to get up from him when again he pulled her towards him making her eyes to go more wide.he said with intense in his voice,"Aisa kya dekh rahi ho.."

She said in low and loast voice,"Tumhe dard ho raha hoga.."

Mayank:Tumhe apne bahon mein lene se mujhe koi dard nahi hota..

She was complete dumfounded with his reply..he is back did he forgive her..a blush crept on her cheeks and said,"Mayank tumahri chot per bahut dard ho raha hoga..

He said,"Jahan dard tha ,jahan chot lagi thi vo to kab ki thik ho gayi.."

She meant what does he meant,her eyes gets moist as today she was relived from heart he had forgiven her ,she puts her head on her chest while he carressed her back soothing her pain he knew of what pain she was going through..while she said,"Mein bahut darr gayi thi Mayank ,tumhe uss halat mein dekh ker Please aage se kabhi aisa mat kerna...saying more tears made her way..he carressed her back and said,"Nahi karunga...agar meri iss halat se meri biwi ki ye halat ho jaati hain to nahi karunga..".She raised her head and asked,"Aise halat matlab..??".He silently wipes her tears from his thumb and by holding her through her chin he said,"Aise so vulnerable..!! weak..apni suddh na rakhna..aapne aap ko dekho mujhse zaayeda tum patient lagg rahi ho...itna bhi kya rota hain koi..

Nupur:Tumne to meri jaan nikal di thi...

Mayank:Ab to thik hoon na to ab rona dhona band tumhe pata hain na mujhe meri biwi ki aakhon mein aansu nahi pasand..She silently nodded and than placed her head on his chest
While he enlcosed her closely to his heart..he missed her so much...now he won't let her go away from him no and never..she will be only his forever.

He placed a soft kiss on her forhead and hugged her tightly..when their session got disturbed as doctor came to check visit on him...After he went she sat beside him talking with him,while sometime he played with her hair or sometimes touch her cheeks...the comfortableness between them came back and that actually brought content to their hearts.

Days went and Mayank-Nupur relation were also recovering like his health.Inspector also informed them it was mis identity case they were searching for "Mayank Roj Singhaniya" but mistaken to be "Mayank Sharma".Convincing all that no one is after his life and he is safe.Nupur handles both her office work and also Mayank helps her while being there on hospital bed much to dismay to other's.Somewhere he had forgiven her for his mistake seeing how much care she does for him and more over how much broken she became seeing his condition like his whole life is dependent on him only , like he is only for her,he realizes her love for him and also could able to gather up him self to forgive her.On other hand Nupur was feeling his behaviour to be change to normal and he is talking to her properly but still she felt she should again do all attempts to get his forgiveness and moreover his love she want to see that old trust back in his eyes and for that she was ready to do anything and still on course of doing it.


Tu na jaane khud ko bhi jitna
Maine jaana tujhko hai utna
Thodi thodi dopehri
Zara sa tu mera savera
Abb toh..
Sune naa dil meri
Aate jaate bas aane waale pal ke
Khayaalon mein hai rehta bekhabar

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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful part...

my god our ffs are going to have similarity on this track 😕😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful. Mayur is magical. Mayank is trying ti forgive her. Thnks u updated . But yeh dill mange more
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Posted: 11 years ago
Such a nice update... the story is progressing so well

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