TaaRey TS - Pavitra Rishta *Last Part on pg 39*

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Pooja

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: Natasha.
Rey is so angry
Omg!!! I can't believe he behave so disgusting with Taani
Taani love him so damn much and because of his stupid jealousy he hurt her...
I hope Taani don't forgive him too easily, let him work for it ;)
Superb update, u did a impeccable job

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Pooja

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Posted: 11 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: navu
PART 1
it was nice..!!! :)
aww rey asked her to go to party with him...!!! :)
hehe..rey lost in taani...Always a treat to watch this oops treat to READ :D
oh god!!! rey angry :o ...hehe..lovdd it..!!
haww he drank :o
awie taani is soo caring :)
she dont want him to drive but vo gadha...huh..!!!
i was nice chapter...loved jealous rey!!! :p

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Posted: 11 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: navu
PART 2
oh god!!! this was Shocking+Rocking Update!!!
hawww how dare he to do that..!!!!!
oh god!!! i seriously wanna kill him for doing that...gadha kahinka!!!!! :p
it was too much!!! the way he behaved with a little poor soul..DISGUSTING!!!!
Awww she cried alottt still he continued his worst torture !!! >.<
thankgod!!! finally she escaped!!!
MORNING
gadhe..now what!!! ab kuch nahi hone wala aise regret karne se -_-
but now i m also feeling bad for rey!!! now what he will do to make her forgive himself?? :(
plzz plzz plzz i want u to make the third chapter i.e. CONFESSION ..full to emotional one...i dont want taani to forgive rey easily!!!
want little drama :p
eager to know how will their confession gonna happen!!!!
UPDATE SOON!!! :)))
P.S- Hats Off for ur wonderful work!!! keep rocking <3

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Pooja

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Posted: 11 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: anaghchavan
waiting for part 3

update soon, with lots of taarey romance.

updating in a while

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Posted: 11 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: yoyoaishwarya
Waiting 4 long part 3
With lots of love n romance
Plz plz update

updating in a while

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Posted: 11 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: asha_TAAREY
Part1,superb.Rey is arrogant but who dnt melt when he's blesd wit an pure incnt T as hs wife. He ws jealous by Tani n Vishesh,ye hui na baath! Uff,wana rd nxt prt sn,excitd much.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: asha_TAAREY
Part2,Oh my! D beast Rey is on. He was freaking out al d nonsense by torturing her both mentaly n physical,poor soul my Taani.TG atlst she gt sm energy to push hm away.Oh,nw he's guilty! Let's c hw wl he gt d mafi by T.Update sn dr.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: Anysia
Nice update . . .

Rey forced himself on Taani 😒

Hope everything gets sorted out soon . . .

Can't wait for confession

Update soon 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#189

please update fast pls pls pls pls

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Posted: 11 years ago

#190

PART 3 (a)

Rey : tumahari maafi..
but taani ignored him and ask him for breakfast
Taani : rey aap brekfast kar lijiye aapko office bhi jaana hai
rey also known that what he did was not forgivable and her ignorance is also justify but he is also the reyansh singhaniya how can he accept his defeat so easily...this time he decided he will do anything to win her back

Rey : taanni mujhe tumse baat karni plz...bas ek baar
he gently told her now how can ahe say no to him she love him so much if he hurt her also she cant stop loving him
Taani : ok...say what you want to say
Rey : not here can we go to our room than talk plz
Rey didnt want to talk to her in kitchen as servants was also there
Taani : ok
Taani goes to their room rey was about follow her when he remember something...goes to Fridge and took out Ice cubes than went to his room... When taani was about to enter in their last night flashes come infron of her eyes she look scared n shiversd little and rey who was behind her notice this...felt pain in his heart
Rey (himself) - what i have done to u...i m really sorry taani please forgive me for my deeds

Rey was ashamed at his act, he did not know what he would do now after the horrible mistake he commit. he did not met his own eyes after doing such a blunder, he was ashamed how could he done this to anyone especially taani his wife. And in anger he punched his hand on wall

Rey : how could i do this to her...i behave like a animal...she is so scared to even entring in room...maine shaadi ke iss pavitra rishte ki majaak udaya hai...bas taani mujhe maaf kar de

he again punched his hand on wall this time blood start oozing from his hand but he did not care at all his pain is very much that he did not care his physical pain at all and his heart is in much more pain and may be he did not realize that his hand is bleeding terribly but someone is there who can not see him in such state and when she saw the blood was running from rey's hands, she run towards him and
Taani : hey krishnaji !! Aapke haath ko kya hua ktna khoon bah rha hai...aapko kaise lag gai aur aapne mujhe bataya bulaya kyu nahi

She panicked seeing the blood running from his hand...taani gently takes his hand in her amd took him in the room amd go to take the first aid kit
Rey look at her surprisingly after what he done to her she still care for him and this made him more guilty...he was so angry on himself for doing this to her

Taani come back with first aid kit amd start applying medicine
Taani : it will hurt little
But rey pulled his hand back and say

Rey : no taani m not a person who deserve all this love and care..a man like me only desrve only hatred and pain...this is the very small punishment for my deeds...after what i have done to u i dont even deserve to live alive
Taani put her palm on his lips stopping him from saying further

Taani : rey!!! What are u saying please stop all its hurting me to see u in this condition plz mujhe bandage lagane dijiye

Taani said while taking his hand in her and start bandging his hand.

.Both eyes were teary
Rey : why you are like this..please say something...after what i have done to u please say something...ese chup mat raho...

Taanis silence was killing him and her care for him making him more angry on himslelf
Taani : ha hota hai mujhe dard jab main aapko ese dekhti hu..
Rey : tum mujhe punish karne ki jagah mere wounds par med. lagana chahti ho
Taani : aapko saza chahiye toh thik hai aapki sazaa yeh hai ki aap ab chupchaap med. lagvaynge

Rey looked at her in disbelief and taani started cleaning his wound, when she apply the anticipating it burns
rey : ahh!!!
Taani : sorry...

she blowed air on his wound and rey looked at her face her eyes are filled with tears seeing his pain, anyone can say that seeing her face that it was taani who was in pain not rey and rey just staring her with love in his eyes

Taani : ho gaya
she was about to go when rey holds her hand..taani looked at him

Rey : taani pls mujhe maaf kardo main jaanta hu jo maine kiya uske baad main maafi ke laayak nahi par pls ek baar mujhe maaf kardo...pta nahi raat ko kya ho gya tha mujhe aur nashe ki halat maine yeh sab kar beddha...m really sorry

he said while crying and taani sat beside him on bed and take his one hand in hers and she said
Taani : main jaanti hu ki kal raat jo hua voh nahi hona chahiye tha..us waqt aap nashe main the
Rey : par iska matlab yeh toh nahi haina ki main tumahre saath ese behave kar..kya taani tum mujhe ek mauka dogi mujhe apni galti sudharene ka...
Taani nodded in yes
Rey : taani main hamari zindgi ki ek new start karna chahta hu hamre realation ko ek chance...plz mujhe maaf kardo for my past deeds...for hurting u

Taani : i forgave u rey..now pls stop crying
taani wipes his tears
Rey embraced her in his arms
rey : m sorry
taani : its ok...

After sometime they broke the hug and smile through their tears
Rey : taani mujhe kuch aur bhi kehna hai..
Taani : kya
Rey didnt say anything just bend down on his knee
Rey : taani i know maine yeh shaadi apni marzi se nahi ki thi but dheere dheere mujhe yeh ehsas hua ki tum mere liye kya matter karti ho pahle main iss feeling ko samajh nahi paaya aur jab mene tumhe party mein vishesh ke saath dekha toh mujhe bahut bura laga isliye mene drunken state main voh sab kar betha par ab mujhe pta chal ki main tumhe kisi aur ke sath nahi dekh sakta kyunki main tumse pyaar karne laga hu...kya tum mujhe as husband accept karogi...kya tum mere pyaar ko accpt karogi

for taani her happiness knew no bound today she got everything she is the happiest person on earth
the man she love the most is confessing his love to her

Taani : ha rey...
Both eyes were teary...tears of happiness was falling from their eyes
rey quickly gey up embraced her in a tightest hug
Rey : thanku thanku thanku so much taani...thank u so much for coming in my life and making it beautiful I Love You so much
Taani was smiling through her tears
Taani : I Love You Too rey...

Rey knows that taani loves him but after hearing it from her mouth he felt like most luckiest and happiest person...he mently jumping n dancing in joy

Rey broke the hug and wipe her tear amd gently kiss her forehead
Both are sitting on bed (just like in confession scene)
after some time rey remembered something
Rey gently held taanis wrist without hurting her and look at the bruises
Tears come out of eyes
Rey : bahut dard ho raha hai na...m really sorry
Taani : no rey its ok ab dard nahi ho Rha main theek hu
said taani wipe his tears

Rey : taani main tumhe kuch dena chahta hu
Taani : kya??
Rey : wait..
rey went to cupboard and tookout a box and come back to taani and handed the to her
Taani : isme kya hai??
Rey : khud kholkar dekhlo
Taani open the box and found a pair of payal and a heart shaped pandent...she looked at Rey surprisingly
Rey : last week tumahare liye laaya tha...par apne ego ke chakkar mein de nahi paaya...sorry
he said with a puppy face to which taani chuckled

Taani : its ok
Rey : so hows it??
Taani : very beautifull...i love them...
Rey : main pahna du

Rey asked taani and she nodded shyly and he make her wear the payal amd pandent.