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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
zoya was sleeping peacefully in asad's arms...❤️
asad was the one to wake up first ! ❤️

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☺️he saw their position in which they slept asad's leg was enterwined ☺️ with zoya's his hands ☺️ were on her bare back zoya's kurti was not in her place the doris ☺️were open the neck portion from one side was tilted almost 😳 below her shoulder and that was reveiling 😳her neck line and the area above the shoulders her hands were on 😳asad's bare chest...☺️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ASYA4eveAAA

important note :


GUYsss as u all know that our beloved ksg

has left the show qubool hai i am totally shattered...

after this news thats y i gave a crappy update ...

but i felt i was blank so i'll complete this story soon...

as i promised but i 'll have to think if i can start a new one

i had 6 - 7 conceppts for the new ff ...

but seeing KSG leaving the show my mind is now completely diverted ...

please motivate me to write more ...

i'll try my best if i can start a story sooon...

IN NEW YEAR !...

and ya please rmember if anyone is writing and ff its a request from me and all forum members please consider KSG as asad !...

till then byeee !

try to be happy !



yup... give this FF update and finish it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
such a terrible woman, trying to cause a miscarriage
I hope Asad figures out that she is evil personified
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Posted: 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
PART : 38 : "" TOTALLY CRAP !!! "
READ AT YOUR OWN RISK !


Quiet a big risk...
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Posted: 11 years ago
NOTE :

GUYSS AS U KNOW I SAID THE LAST UPDATE PART 38 WAS CRAP SO THE
REASON BEHIND IT WAS NOG THAT KI I WANTED TO END THIS STORY OR I
GAVE THE UPDATE NOT NICELY I WROTE IT WITHOUT EDIT
N AS KSG LEFT I WAS REALLY REALLY UPSET COS OF THIS
BUT U ALL MISUNDERSTOOD THAT I DIDN'T WANTED TO CONTINUE
THE STORY SO TO TELL U GUYS THE STORY IS SAME AS I THOUGHT
WHILE WRITING 1ST PART OF IT !!!...
SO IF U GET SM REALLY SAD UPDATE S DON'T GET ANGRY COZ THRY
R THE IMP N BASE OF THE STORY. ..
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Posted: 11 years ago

PART : 39 :~

Asad was driving aimlessly the words of his greif were ringing in his mind " zoya ne kyi saari sleeping pills ya aisa koi drug liya hai jiski wajah se feotus bahut kamzor hogya tha " ...why did the hell zoya did this ? why ? zoya tried to kill our child ? our symbol of love that was in her .The child was my only hope that our relation could get better when he or she comes in our lives...

And zoya she ruined it completely she ... she killed me and my last hope in her . The baby was my part in her . It was my child that she played with it was our love with which she played . Now she has crossed her limits how can she ? if she didn't needed this child she should have told him .

But killing a poor soul without any reason . "kya galati thi uski ? ...kya galati thi uski ? jo zoya ne mere bache ko itni badi saza di " i will never forgive u zoya i will never forgive u ...

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Here in hospital zoya was lieing on bed aimlessly . After a min she starts to move a bit and dilshad come running towards her and najma followed her ...

Zoya slowly opened her eyes and saw dilshad and najma crying bitterly she looked at her surroundings she was on a bed in hospital she tried to remember wht happened and then she was able to recall she was not healthy n probably partially concsious and then she fell down and next was all black out ...

she motioned her eyes in circles and then asked ...

Z:" ammi ... asad ? ...mai yaha ? ... "

D:" ... " < no reply just crying >

Z:" najma ?... ammi btaaiye na ... kya hua hai ? mera !..."

then she stopped in between and tears started streaming down her eyes ...

Z:" ammi ? mera bacha ?... "

D:" ..." N:" ..."

Z:" najma ammi btaiye mujhe mera bcha ...tho theek hai na ...ammi de dekhiye mai bilkul theek hu... mujhe kuch nhi hua hai ...haina najma mujhe kuch nhi hua hai ... mera bacha bhi bilkul theek hai mai jaanti hu !..."

D:" ZOYA!!! ... apne aap ko sambhaalo zoya ... please aaram kro ... "

Z:"NHI !!!! BTAIYE MUJHE ABHI !!...KYA HUA HAI AMMI MERA BACHHA THO THEEK HAI NA ?..."

D:" ZOYA ..."

N:" ..."

Z:" NAJMA TUM THO PLEASE BTAO HUA KYA HAI ?"

D:" ZOYA ...TUMHARA BACHCHA ISS DUNIYA ME AANE SE PEHLE HI ...MAR GYA !!! "

and with that zoya eyes went wide she cried giving that shock expression on her face and then she collapsed on the bed and kept muttering ye sach nhi hai yeh sach nahi hai mera bachcha zinda hai !...

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Here asad reached home directly went towards the baby room glanced at it once and cried a lot then the words again haunted him and he was now not controlable the times he spent with zoya regarding the baby was peircing his heart ...

and now he started to throw things ...
and within no time the room was destroyed and he sat on the floor hugging his knees...

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dilshad came back from hospital and saw asad she quicly ran to him ...

D:" asad ye sab ?..."

A:" usne aisa kyu kiya ammi ?... kyu ?... "

D:" she frowned in confusion..."

A:"zoya ne hamare bachche ko maar dala hai !... usne ..."

D:" nhi asad aisa nhi hai ho sakta hai uski koi majboori rhi ho .."

A:" ammi !!! please leave me mujhe kissi se baat nhi krni hai ..."

D:" asad ?!"

A:" AMMI PLEASEE !! "

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Here zoya was saying the same thing " ye sach nhi hai mera bachcha zinda hai "...

she got discharged from the hospital in two days and now she was coming to her home in hope to meet asad once ...

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they reached home and najma opened the door fr them looking horrified wht was coming next ...

asad came out and finally after two days their eys met eachother
zoya tried to talk to him but he moved away in his room came out with two bags and threw them on her face...

A:" aaj se tum apne room me rhogi ..." miss faarooqui !!"

Z:" par ...asad !..."

A:" in guest room !... NOW AMMI !!! "

with this they took her and everyone explained zoya how asad was in a bad mood cos of her n when they asked why she did this ofcorse she said i didnot do anything ...

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Many days passed by and asad din't look at zoya both of them didn't have food zoya was given some morsels but then too she ate just for her ammi...

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AFTER TWO WEEKS...

asad was working in his office and then anahida entered his office

An:" asad i need to talk to you ..."

A:"..."

he just concenterated on his work ...

An:" asad I LOVE U !!! "

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Here in house no one was present as najma had to go back and dilshad had gone to bring some groceries ...

Zoya was sitting there and thinking about the events in their lives from past few months entry of anahida their fights and then she started to cry like hell she got up took out her bags made sure she didn't leave anything back...

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A:" what ? what did u just say ?..."

An:" i said i love u !..."

A:" see anahida i m not in a shape to handle this crap or a joke of yours so cut this out and lets work ..."

An:" ohhh come on asad !... i love u n thats true u cant do this to me i did so much for this day ..."

he got up held her by her shoulders...

A:" wht u did ?..."

An:" oh asad i know u dont love zoya so does it matter now ?.."

A:" anahida just tell me !... NOW !"

An:" tho suno ... maine doc. ko paise diye taaki wo tumhe andhere me rakhkhe actually wo tho mera kaam kr rhi thi dawayiya galat likh rhi thi jis wajah se zoya aksar behosh ho jaati thi ... maine jaan booch kr apna accident krwaya taki tum zoya ke saath doc ke paas na ja sako ...zoya ko ye dikhane ki koshish ki ki tum ab usse mohabbat nhi krte uske man me tumhare liye shak paida kr diya...maine aapi ko bheja zoya ko dekhne ke liye... aur kuch dino pehle jab zoya giri mai jaanti thi ki aisa kuch hone wala hai uss injection ki wajah se maine ussi ke pehle aapi ko bta diya tha ki zoya ke bachche ko maar daalna ... (after a pause) aur dekho aaj ye sab sach hogya ... "

and before she cud complete it a huge slap was kept on boher cheeks she looked up and had a fight with asad and he took her to police station...

<<dont want to strech it guysss ... >>
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here in KM zoya looked at the house one last time and left the letter in asad's room and came out ...
she hired a taxi and came to the bus stand and sat in the bus ,..

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here asad came out of the police station and ushed towards the house but he didn't knew that before he could tell the truth to zoya she will leave him !...

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DONE FINALLY DARE U DONT COMMENT ON THIS HV STARTED A NEW STORY GUYSS DO READ IT LINKS R BELOW BE HAPPY WISH ME LUCK FR EXAMS ...

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