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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it..😃
continue soon...
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Edited by abi_niki - 11 years ago
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Very nice madhu . You have written Shlok thoughts about astha which I really missed in the show. We couldn't read his mind . Please continue.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: dakshaavi

Very nice madhu . You have written Shlok thoughts about astha which I really missed in the show. We couldn't read his mind . Please continue.


Am planning to continue with current track..
Have to watch first episodes again..
Let's see if I can tomrrow.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The slight MU is the gel Honey..the minds thoughts are fevicol se..everywhere they see their partners..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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plz Di try to continue this
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Originally posted by: niki795

plz Di try to continue this


I will work on It tonight..lost connections but will bring out from current track..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Prasai


I will work on It tonight..lost connections but will bring out from current track..



thanks Di 😊
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Pls continue and pm me
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Chapter 1:

Chapter 2:
Episode 4
Shlok checking traffic in back-view mirror, sees the traffic and thinks where his destiny landed him..goes back to the day where Aastha was in his room fixing herself seeing herself in mirror..
Shlok taunts on her how women change colors in life and how his life colors got changed by Aastha's sweet touch and that made shlok think the guts of asstha to say mr.shlok Agnihotri check your intentions as you don't know how to take of your own things..
The way you said my pride and ego doesn't come in respect for your dad, made me think of my own selfish pride.
I again fell for her guts, seeing her challenge my guts, went to show what man has but the eyes, her soft skin and soft hands made me husky say watch out you are in my room.
Oh aastha how I loved the first soft touch and your guts of challenging a man in his own room.

Your soft touch through heart by destiny..


Episode 4 and 5.

Shlok tired and hungry pulls his car seat back and slants it down to relax thinking to reach his destination soon ..he cursed the weather and seeked help from destiny.
Destiny plays well. Shlok removing his shoes remembered the next day again where dad asked to stay forever instead of two days, the day where he knew he was awarded and his baba happy. Kavya wanted to eat on the table but was refused saying house rules.
Kavya reminded him of Aastha and her innocent look, getting up searching for her sandal under my car. destiny plays how and where her sandal landed under my car..
He not thinking accused her and Aastha proved her innocence by saying how do I know your car..the collector office what was she doing there, must be avadoot baba papers. I was so surprised to see her again in a row.

Oh Aastha how I mistook you innocence not knowing you land in trouble easily.

Innocence coincidence by destiny.

Episode 5
I went mad without you, come o my love, why you left me Aastha.
all the rain flowed away, and my beloved you didn't come,
seeing the glow of eyes, I can say very clearly you love me dearly Aastha.
tears roll down my heart to see you walk away- but am helpless to stop you as your safety concerns me first ..oh dear Aastha.
on the roof our eyes meet, as we have high pride and ego to balance all of our family as Ashlok.
don't leave me ever.. Like this for my bad ego to support you Aastha
I fell for you, I love you, that's my pride and it says my true ego.
You'll not find anyone else (so much loving) like me even your parents Aastha.
You too come, leaving everyone..Angihotri's as I need to heel my heart of pain oh Aastha.
You too come, leaving everyone..kirloskar's as I need you to give the same warmth as your baba.
tears roll down my eyes of love for you are invisible and resemble the rain drops.



Shlok thinking about Aastha coming back to him and to meet her fast, feels to reverse his car back and ride fast away in another route ...this reminded him of the fast car drive on the day of the reporter pinpoint on family.
Oh Aastha if it would have been any other day, I would have listened to you and adored your intelligence of how you caught suresh's word "headquarters", or the guts of getting into my car.
But as the reporter guts to pinpoint about family institution, scholarships name on baba and family, I felt to teach sabak. Felt to teach you limits of sabak.
Oh Aastha how I took you on a fast drive and left by cliff side ..what am I? But it was necessary to teach boundaries with strangers.
But destiny played for honour to show your value in dignity for honour and my value for dignity. How I wished to see not you again and again but destiny was set. Though a chauvinist it was predestined
Destiny to show honour for dignity of women.

Honour of dignity by destiny.



Chapter 3
Precap.
Destiny of real character sanmaan..a mistake of two. Brought us as Ashlok together..the destiny was set
Do leave comments and suggestions.


Edited by Prasai - 11 years ago

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