Mayur FF-Dil Ke Naazuk Dhaage#3 Pt-73/Pg-142 - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago

Mayank is so hurt... Bas Nupur jaldi usay mana le... Feeling bad for my Mayur

Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Brilliant writing full of twists and turns.
I am loving this story.
Please update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Shafoo

mayur both are poor


poor???

acha nahi laga kya part
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Irum.

HAPPY NEW YEAR Janni!!!!

It ws an emotion packed update.

thanks..


Well Mayank apni jgha theek hai.
Nupur ne jo kiya who bohat wrong hai.
Ek taraf tu os ne Mayank ko os ka Pati ka haq nahi diya and Mayank ne bhi ose support kiya tu dosri taraf who apney bdley mein itni andhi kese ho gaya k ek praye admi k sath... .. .. .chi...
Mayank ko ose abhi itni asani se maaf nahi krna chaye.
Lets see Nupur ab kitney papadh beilti hai Mayank ko manofy krney k liye.
Now she will see the other side of Mayank.
Abhi tak os ka pala ek friend se padha tha bt ab os ka wasta ek lover boy,ek husband se hai.
Thanx for PM.
And waiting for next update.


hmm..voi to..
pagal ho gayi thi...
haan lekin mein zaayeda drag nahi karungi...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: GauriLuvsRP

FIRST OF ALL HAPPY NEW YEAR DEAR...🤗
Nice update dear...
Hope nupur will be able to manofy mayank as he is very hurt...
Continue soon...
Thnks for the PM...


Hope so
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Faria.

Oyee shaffy tu maar khayegi kya??
ye tu kya kar rahi hai
meri mayur ko itna dukh kyun de rahi hai
i really hate u

meri itni majaal mein tumhare mayu ko dukh doo
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Posted: 11 years ago
I hope you all are enjoying this story
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Posted: 11 years ago
I know many are angry from me..But i wont drag the story..I don't know how will you all react to other parts but i will try to bring my best
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Posted: 11 years ago


Dil Ke Naazuk Dhaage


Part 53


Next morning..Mayank opened his eyes as sun rays fall on him...he blinked his eyes numerous of times to open..he still having headache...he turned his head and found Nupur sleeping putting her head beside him..there were traces of dried tears giving him the story that cried whole night and slept like this only.. ..Remembering about last night events played in his mind..how Nupur order to escort to her room and how he confronted her..she blaming him breaking her trust and being having relation with Rhea...and how they confronted Rhea...he remembered he had gone to bar..and after that what happens nothing is clear much to him..he knows he just told his grief and didn't forgive Nupur on her numerous pleas...what had actually hurted him was when she said him of being using her trust...he immediately stood up..in anguish and moved straight forwardly to washroom avoiding to see her face early in morning...

The loud bang of door made her sleep broken..she looked here and there but Mayank wasn't seen anywhere..the sound of water running made her realize that he is there..she quickly getup and ordered something on phone and settle down back there waiting for him to come..Here he was standing under cold shower letting his aggregated nerves to down..though his heart knew he can't forgive her..he had blamed his feelings his pure feelings which he had only for her..her accusition has hurted bit very deeply...and now it's her who have to do the initiation and also have to gain that trust in her eyes again..which she intend to loose last night...

Where on other hand Nupur was thinking ways now to manafoy her "roothe piya"...She was thinking of tactics when he came from washroom drying his hair through his towel completely ignoring her...she stood and went upto him but before she could speek there was knock on their door of room service...she let them to put the trolly and thanking she closed the door..Mayank was noticing this from corner of his eyes but didn't budge to say anything and kept on drying his hair when he heard her voice,"Ye Lo..!!".He ignored her again and turn to took his shirt when she came in front of him forwarding a glass she said,"Ye lo..."

He said coldly,"Mujhe nahi chahiye.."

Nupur:Tumhe iski zarurat hain hangover utarne ke kaam aayega...


He gave her a question look when she said,"Kal raat tumne bahut pee li thi...Le lo lemon water hain.."

He silently took it ,his eyes travel on her wrist where were the marks off broken bangles...a blurry flashback came in front of him being pushing her and pinning her against bed but since it wasn't clear..he just silently took the glass and sipped it...somewhere it was giving him relaxation but he didn't showed...it to her..soon she too got ready..when she came out of washroom he had already gone she sighed to herself,"OOoh apne roothe piya ko bahut manana padega mujhe..."..

She was getting to move when someone knock her door she asked and get response of Room service,she opened the door seeing that he had brought a tray with eatable items in it,she asked,"What is it.."
He politly replied,"Mam your breakfast.."

Nupur:But mene koi breakfast order nahi kiya...

"Mam sir ne order kiya tha..".A small smile touched her lips and she said,"Acha ..thik h thank you.."She sat there with her breakfast smelling it's fragrance as if Mayank had himself prepared for her..though how much he is angry from her still he cares for her and ordered breakfast for her...she ate breakfast with more ease as if enjoying every bit of it...Finishing her breakfast she made her way to the conference room which was on upper floor...She entered the lift...and shocked to find him there..though he ignored her presence but still she was happy that she is going to accompany him till meeting room.Fortunately there was no one in the lift..she thought to start some conversation with him and could know his mood today.

Nupur:So meeting ke liye ready...He just coldly nodded his head and turned his head to otherside to avoid any sort of talking ...he was already composing his raising anger and hurt when he felt her arms on his shoulder..he jerked her and asked in cold tone,"Kya ker rahi ho tum.."She reply with sly smile,"Kya apne pati ko hug ker rahi hoon..".

Mayank:Koi zarurat nahi hain...

Nupur:Kyu..mujhe to zarurat hain...

Mayank:Dekho...mene kaha na mujhe...

Nupur:Offo tumhari sunn kon raha hain mein to bass bata rahi hoon..aur mujhe mere pati ka hug chahiye to chahiye...

Mayank:Nhai mil sakta...

Nupur:Kyu nahi...

He was already taking control of his anger but she was on verge of breaking it..not controlling anymore he grabbed her arms fearing her of his this sudden act and pinned her against lift wall and said with anger tone,"Tumhe ek baat samjh mein nahi aati..mujhe tumse baat kerne mein koi interest nahi hain...dekho don't let me to loose myself else..."

Nupur:Else what..!!"

Mayank:Else consequences would be really bad for you to bear...

Saying he left her jerkly and that time only lift opens and he storms out leaving her a bit scared and bit determined..."I am ready to bear any consequences in cost of your forgiveness Mr.Husband.".


Saying she boosted herself and too made her way to meeting room.In meeting both were quiet pre-occupied as it was very important meeting and they have to get this deal any how...no matter what Both Mayank and Nupur put their best and atlast the deal was theirs.Cliets were very much impressed with their work and soon agreed to start the project.After meeting got over eveyone resides of sharing lunch and made a plan to explore city..before Mayank could politely reject Nupur said yes to them and said they will be joining them shortly...

Mayank was already fuming with anger but since he ddn't have any choice he has to agree with it..after sometime he storm out of the room walking in parking area completely knowing that Nupur is foloowing him..a car came and handed him over keys when he asked ,"Where are others..!!".Before he could reply Nupur said,"Vo sab pehle chale gaye mene bhej diya tha taaki.."She blushed and the other man left leaving the couple alone..She asked him casually,"Ab aise ghoor ghoor ke kya dekh rahe ho..!! Mayank give her stern expression and himself got into car not wanting to create any scene..

They reached to near by park..it was a very beautifull park..seeing the park something recalled to him and he moved out to explore it..He was seeing each and every path of that park as if he had once visited there..Nupur just asked him in curosity,"Mayank kya aa chuke ho pehle tum..!!".But he took her question in wrong way,"Fir shaq kr rahi ho kya..!!".Now Mayank taking high limits of her..and finally she looses her cool after so much accustion she holds his collor and asked him,"Aakhir problem kya hain tumhari.."He gets bewildered a bit with her sudden outburst but soon gain himself and removing her hands from her's he coldy replies,"Tum ho..meri problem..!!".He was about to go when he holds his had and question him back,"Kya meri galti ki maafi bhi nahi hain..mein jaanti hoon Mayank mujhse bahut badi galti ho gayi hain..mene tumhare vishwas ke saath khela hain per please mujhe maaf ker do nahi to please punish me..tears were flowing from her eyes even making Mayank hurt..she continued Tumhara ye behaviour mujhe bahut dard deta hain Mayank...Please don't this to me..he grabbed her shoulder and said,"Aur jo tumne mere saath kiya vo..!!"She replied to him,"Ek pal ke liye to vishwas mera bhi toota tha na Mayank but sab kuch jaanne ke baad ehsaas hua mujhe apni galti ka ..!!".He said to her,"Lekin Nupur tumhari baaton tumhare uss herkat ne meri un feelings hurt kiya hain jo mere dil ke bahut ..bahut karib thi..".

Nupur outraging herself,"Feelings...Feelings..Feelings to meri bhi hurt hui thi but tum to kuch zaayeda hi isse leker issue bana rahe ho.."

Mayank:Mein issue nahi bana raha hoon..jo hain vo baata raha hoon kyunki...aur vese bhi tum to chahti thi uske saath ye sab..tumhe laga vo koi escort wala hain..jabki tha to mein...

Nupur:Agar tum dhayan se sunte to mene kaha thi ki mein nahi chahti ...mene manaa ker diya tha...

Mayank:Galat tumne kaha ki tu nahi ker sakti...

Nupur:Baat ek hi thi Mayank...

Mayank:Nahi dono ka matlab alag hota hain..chahna aur nahi kerna..

Nupur:Aakhir tumne isse kya farak padd raha hain..mein nahi kerna chahti thi...kya ye tumhare liye enough nahi hain..

Mayank:Nahi..mere liye kaafi nahi hain...

Nupur:Kyu Mayank..kyu farak padta hain tumhe..bolo Mayank kyu...

Mayank finally furious confessed why he was being hurted more than her,"
Kyunki mein tumse pyar kerta hoon..I love you god dammit..and His this confession left her all dazed and shock...nothing got registered in her mind except that he loves her she don't know how to react..was all numb when another blow to her...when he said,"And I really really regret it".Saying he left her there standing in all shocked numb ...and hastily droved not knowing where he is going...!!


Hope you like it.
Edited by shafy_MN - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update..confession and heartbreak at the same time... loved it...

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