VIRMAN: ON MY WEDDING DAY.... MARRIED A STRANGER INSTEAD OF MY BRIDE ! - Page 25

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: niki795

Awesome update
loved it
the first day of marriage in vadera house is superb
manvi loving the interior is nice

manvi: nice ... i liked this designing a lott ... and that camera ?
virat: i like it a lott ... it was of my grandad which he bought during his teenage !!
vanshika and manvi were surprised at his answer, as they didn't expect him to reply
vanshika: he's like that only ... he talks only when he likes the topic !

the above part surprised me too...😲


vanshika: see ... how nice it is ... both your tastes are same ... i knew that you both will make a lovely made-for-eachother couple !!
virat: mom?
manvi: a typical individual !!

a typical individual 😆😆

the whole Hindu thing is superb..
continue soon


thanks for a lovely comment !!

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jia123sagar

It was amazing update

Loved the update
Loved vanshika and maanvi's convo
Vanshika's questions and maanvi's answers was superb
Vanshika and virman bedroom part was nice
Plz cont soon


thank you !!

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: _keertu_

hay sry cant comment

but i am reading ur stories as i get time..
loving ur all stories
continue soon..
virman ki stories i wont say no to read...😳


thank you !!
read it wen u r free n plase dont' forget to comment after u read , coz it matter's a lot to me 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
loved itt
vanshika and manvi questiononing part was really funny🤣
i think 'mom' is virat trademark😆
what vanshika know about these three😲
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: virman.lover

awesome update

loved itt
vanshika and manvi questiononing part was really funny🤣
i think 'mom' is virat trademark😆
what vanshika know about these three😲
continue soon


Thank you !!
Yeah... It's his trade mark😆
Up know in next parts !
OK🥱
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: reyna.


it's ok, as i've also taken off for 1 week from the forum 😆
how can i remove my sweet buddy ?
love ...reyna




thanks a lot dear🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
the update was funny...enjoyed it a lot.
wishing u a happy new year.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 6:

( if u like my story, please do share it with ur buddy's as the response is very very less for 350 pm's !! u can check the last part likes n comments to know it better ... i'm really upset, but thanks to all those who like n comment !! )

varun: why are you acting soo mean vanshika ? ... and give virat some respect infront of her atleast ... he must be feeling very bad !!

vanshika: coz i don't want them to divorce !!

varun: what ? 😲

vanshika: yeah ... They want to divorce, but donno why they accepted to live together

varun: how do u know that they are going to divorce ?

vanshika: I went to call them as it has been a very long time after they went into the room to talk personally ... Then I heard manvi saying ...

" it's just a matter of 3 months and then we'll divorce "

As I heard them coming out, I came back.

We should do something in these 3 months to make them stay together for life long, but I donno wat to do ? please help me varun !!

Varun: ok, we'll do something ... But that doesn't need you to scold virat always ..

Vanshika: I don't want to hurt him, but I want him to understand n take seriously wateva I'm saying ... I want to insert some sense into my son !!😆

Varun: first, we should make him forget aenna, else ... He's never going to accept manvi

Vanshika: but wat's the guarantee that manvi will accept him after he starts liking her ?😕

Varun: we'll make her love virat, but first, we should make both of them on same level ... N for that, we should make virat back to single from his relationship status !!⭐️

Vanshika: how can we do that ?

Varun: first we should know completely abt aenna for planning anything !!

Vanshika: how can we know abt her ?

Varun: we should catch someone who knows completely abt aenna

Vanshika: how abt her mother or father ? they'll know her very well

Varun: why do u need to go to them also ? ask ur son ... He also knows her very well 😉😆

Vanshika: why would he tell us ?

Varun: then why would her parents tel us ?

Vanshika: then why don't you go n do friendship with her 😉

Varun: I would have done it far ago, if u were not there !!

Vanshika: no probs ... U can go n do friendship with her ... I'll give u the permission !😆

Varun: donno how I got into these cracks all around me ... Vanshi ... first u insert some sense into ur head n then try it on ur son !!

Vanshika: not necessary, I've sense ... My son wil only tel us !!

Varun: please ... This is not the time for silly talks !

Vanshika: don't u remember ... Virat writes diary n we'll get all the info abt her from his dairies !!

Varun: that's a very bad thing to do ... N I'll not do bad things !!

Vanshika: look who's talking !! ... Talking like u didn't even do a single bad thing !

Varun: I've done wrong things wen I was small, but not after that !!

Vanshika: then, who came to my room like a theif during night and kissed me before our marriage 😳? u were not a kid then n that is a very bad thing to do ... at night ... into a girl's room ... Before marriage !😆

Varun: u knew it 🤢? I thought u were sleeping at that time ... N how come u didn't tel me all these years, that u knew it ?

Vanshika: I waited for the right moment to disclose it😉

Varun: u r a devil vanshi 😡!! ... ok, but u've to get those dairies tomorrow , we'll read them n then think as to wat we should do !

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In virman's room ... At night

Manvi: aunty ... Wat are u doing ... All these flowers ?

Vanshika: it's ur first night manvi, so I'm decorating ur room !

Just then virat comes from office ...

Virat: wat's all this mom ?

Vanshika: asking as if u don't know anything

Virat: mom ?😲😡

Manvi: but we don't want all these aunty... Please

Vanshika: I know, u can manage without flowers also 😆😆, ... But Virat likes jasmine flowers

( Spanish jasmines smell wonderfully n I love their smell personally ... so, I've added them )

Manvi: ( stopping her laugh ... ) is it aunty ?

Virat: mom, I'm not going to accept her as my wife ... The faster u understand that, the better wil be situations !!

Manvi: aunty, even if he ever accepts me, I'll not accept ur son as my husband !!

Vanshika: who told u both to accept eachother as husband and wife ?😕

Virat: then wats all this mom ?

Vanshika: this is all my responsibility to arrange n I did it !! ... Rest is upto u both to use it or not !😉

She leaves their room ...

Virat: I'll go n freshen up

Manvi: I didn't ask u 😆... N u need not tell me ... ok ?

Virat: ( gritting his teeth ) it was my mistake to tel u ... N for ur kind information, I didn't tel u like a husband so that u'll keep my dinner ready as soon as I come out,

I just told u coz ... It means that... u should leave the room as I need some personal space !!

Manvi: even I'm not going to stay here to see how u look after shower !!😆

She marches out of the room ... varun n vanshika hide

Varun: OMG !! why are these two shouting at eachother ? is this the way to talk ?

Vanshika: this is wat is happeneing ... Leave that husband n wife tag, atleast they can talk like friends or atleast like strangers, they can be normal to eachother !!

Varun: if we leave them like this, then they will soon become enemies also !

Vanshika: so, our first mission is to make them friends ⭐️!!

Varun: yeah ... n mission 1 starts from tomorrow !!

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Manvi goes to their room after dinner

She sleeps on the bed with pillows on either side

Then virat comes into the room, seeing manvi sleeping on the bed, he shouts ... " get off my bed "

Manvi woke up at his loudness

Virat: don't ever again sleep on my bed ... Now get up ... Wat are u seeing ?

Manvi: ( shouts ) aunty ... !! aunty, uncle !!

Both varun n vanshika come to their room to know why she was shouting !!

Manvi: see aunty, ur son is not letting me sleep ... !!

Vanshika: how can he let u sleep?😲 ... It's ur first night after all😉

Complaining like a small kid ... Don't u know that u r not going to sleep on ur wedding night 😡

U have other imp. Works to do other than sleeping, my dear 😳😆😆!!

To virat ... U carry on my son, this time I'll support u 😆!!

Virat: mom ?😲😡

Manvi: aunty ... He's not letting me sleep on the bed 😡!!

Vanshika: it's upto u guys to sleep on bed or not😆😆, u both decide it ... How can we tel u ?

Saying so, she drags varun out n they go to their room !

Varun: wat was that vanshika ? u know wat they are talking abt !!

Vanshika: yeah ... I know, but we've to leave thme to settle matters btw themselves n not to call us for everything ... This is how they'll become friends ⭐️!

Varun: u r a genius vanshi 👏... Love u 🤗!!

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Manvi: since it's our room, bed also belongs to both of us ... We'll share it !!

Virat: wat 😲? I'm not going to share my bed with u ... How shameless u are 😡?

Manvi: shut up virat, else I'll shout for a different reason this time 😉😆!!

I've already told u ... Don't act like a girl, be open minded ... I'm telling to sleep on bed, n not sleep with me ... Meanings differ ... u better understand 👏!!

U r a hypocrite !!😡

Virat: I know😆

Manvi: then, how come u have a girlfriend ?😉

Virat: it's my personal matter ... Stay out of it !

Precap:

Wait for the mission 1 n for the secrets in diary

wish u all a very happy new year !!


I'm really sry for the delay ... I missed one thursday update ... So ...I've given u all ... A very long update of the story !!

I guess, many of u knew that I'm a Christian ... N chritsmas is the biggest one for us ... I enjoyed the whole Christmas week n hence the delay !!


My apologies !!


i want long comments for my long update


********** love ... reyna

This story will be updated every Thursday !!


my first story: BEST FRIENDS TO BEST LIFE PARTNERS

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3823857/best-friends-to-best-life-partners-upd-epilogue-11-2


Lemme know if u liked it !!

Buddy me for my pm's !!

I'll only pm to those who'll comment ... !!

reyna's index: fusion of ff's , girl's corner n kid's corner !!

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3762857/reynas-index-fusion-of-ffs-girls-corner-n-kids-corner

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
loved it
the highlights of the whole update are vanshika and varun 's conversation
loved them both
they both trying to keep virman together

the best part is

Vanshika: don't u remember ... Virat writes diary n we'll get all the info abt her from his dairies !!

Varun: that's a very bad thing to do ... N I'll not do bad things !!

Vanshika: look who's talking !! ... Talking like u didn't even do a single bad thing !

Varun: I've done wrong things wen I was small, but not after that !!

Vanshika: then, who came to my room like a theif during night and kissed me before our marriage ? u were not a kid then n that is a very bad thing to do ... at night ... into a girl's room ... Before marriage !

Varun: u knew it ? I thought u were sleeping at that time ... N how come u didn't tel me all these years, that u knew it ?

Vanshika: I waited for the right moment to disclose it

Varun: u r a devil vanshi !! ... ok, but u've to get those dairies tomorrow , we'll read them n then think as to wat we should do !

loved it
continue soon dear
Edited by niki795 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Sweet lovely and funly

Hope they becme fnds soon

N sort out dere diff

Happy new yr

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