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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
super awesome
full on fun and loved the way ariya are together.
waiting for more
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#62
It is awesome ,amazing ,superb outstanding
Update soon
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ANY ONE NEED UPDATE ??? THEN INFORM ME
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Late nite ko karungi
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Originally posted by: hunny1993

ANY ONE NEED UPDATE ??? THEN INFORM ME


Yeh koi puchney ki baat hai... ofcourse we want update...😡 😡
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I want an update
Happy NEw Year
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Fab autstanding update
loveit
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I know i m again late .but what 2 do ??? i m undone.

Finally updating the 2nd part .but firstly i have 2 thank u all who did comments & gave likes at the previous update .




PART -2

The train reached at punchgadi station .

Riya :arjun ,ye hum kaha aye ???

Arjun :train punchgadi station me ruke hai

Riya :fir to hume v yaha utar jana chahiye .

Arjun :kyu ???😕

Riya :kyu ki mera bf yaha hai .

Arjun :punchgadi me ????

Riya :ha .actually wo engineer hai .to wo survey know liye yaha aye hai .

Arjun :ok .to hume yaha hi utar jana chahiye .

So ariya got down there .

Arjun :ab batao wo hume kaha milegi ???

Riya :pas me hi ek kali mandir hai .waha hi milegi .

Arjun :tumari usk sath rate hue hai kya ???

Riya :nehi

Arjun :fir tum itne yakin k sath kaise keh sakte ho wo hume wohi milega ????

Riya :kyu ki aj tuesday hai .

Arjun :ab tuesday se uska mandir me rehne ka kya connection ???😕

Riya :kyu ki tuesday ko wo ek special brath rakhte hai jisk liye wo mandir jate hai .

Arjun (MV):omg !!! jaisa ye waisa iska bf .dono kahi brain shortage hai 😡

Riya :hey arjun ,kya soch rahe ho ??? Jana nehi hai kya ???

Arjun :ha chalo .

Riya went 2 steps & suddenly stopped

Arjun :ab kya hua ???

Riya :harre aise dress pehen kar ghumogi kya ...

Arjun :yap !!! baat to sahi hai .thik hai chalo koi hotel me jakar change kark kuch kha lete hai .fir chalte hai .

Riya :ok .

So they went 2 a hotel & rent a room .

Arjun :riya ,tum change kark ao .tab tak mein khana order karta hu .

Riya went 2 washroom & arjun ordered foods & changed his dress .

Riya also changed her dress & wear a simple anarkali suit .but that increases her beauty more .

Arjun gaze fell on her & his eyes r just fixed on her .he never seen any beautiful girl like her b4.😲She looking like an angel .

Riya could feel his gaze .she walked 2 him .

Riya (moving her hand infront of his face):hello ...kya dekh rahi ho ????

Arjun snapped out his thought .he is feeling embarace .

Arjun :ummm ...kuch nehi .bas kuch aur soch rahi thi .

Riya :mujhe dekh kar kya soch rahi thi ???

Arjun :ummm wo ...mein tumhe nehi dekh rahi thi ...mein mein ...tumare pichewala painting ko dekh rahi thi ...

Riya turned back 2 c the painting .it was a painting of a "cow"

Riya :tum ye painting dekh rahi thi ??? 😲

Arjun :ha ...ha ..kyu nehi dekh sakti kya ???

Riya :ha kyu nehi .agar tume gayi k painting pasand hai to jarur dekhogi .akhe fad fad k dekhogi .sina thok k dekhogi .dekho dekho ...😆

Arjun :ab ho gaya ho to khana kha le !!!!😡

Riya nodded happily & they started eating their breakfast .

Riya :waise arjun ...tum karte kya ho ????

Arjun :i m a police officer .

Riya's eyes popped out hearing that .😲

Riya :what !!! tum police officer ho ???

Arjun :kyu mein police officer nehi ban sakti 😡

Riya :no no mera wo matlab nehi tha .i mean jiss tarik se tum bhagkar aye ho bade bade criminals tumhe bhai keh k bulana suru karega 😆

Arjun glared at her 😡

Riya :arre arjun gussa kyu karte ho ??? mein to bas mazak kar rahi thi .😉

Arjun :achsa meri baat chodo tum kya karte ho ???

Riya :mein doctor hu .avi avi london se doctori ka padayi khatam kark ayi hu .

Arjun :tume dekh kar v kaun banda kahega ki tum doc ho.jis tarik se tum ghar chodk aye ho jarur ladk wale ko heart attack aa gayi honge ...😆

Riya :ha ha ...very funny !!!😡

scene shifted 2 rawte mansion

Mrs. rawte :hey bhagban ...meri bete ne kya kismat payi hai ...ek to teen teen bar saadi tuta .aur chautha bar ladki hi bhag gayi 😭

A bread piece dropped 4m karan's mouth hearing his mother's words 😲

Karan :mom ...ap yeh kya keh rahi ho ??? ek to vai khud saadi se bhag jata hai aur ap ho ki ladki wale ko dosh de rahi ho 😲

Mom :ha to ...agar aisa hota ki mera arjun bhaag na jata to ...fir to saadi rukh jati na ...😭

Karan nodded his head in disbelief

Mr. rawte :sugandh ab to kamse kam apna bete ka tarafdari karna band karo ...ab ye socho agar wo ladki bhag na jati to tumare bete k wajah se uski saadi tut ti .tab hum ladki wale ko kya jawab dete ???

Mrs. rawte :ha bhag to gaya na ...😭

Both mr. rawte & karan banged their heads with dining table hearing her unpredictabe words [:xx]

scene shifted 2 mukherjee mansion

Mom :aaa ...(crying with weird sound)meri bachchi kaha reh gayi hongi ???? koi usse dhundkar lao ...aaa ...😭

Simran (riya's younger sis):mom ...ap plz rona band karo .dad di ko dhund kar nikalenge ...

Mom :nehi ...tere dad ko meri riu ki koi fikar nehi ...aaa ...

Dad :ufffo nita ...baat to aise kar rahi ho jaise riya meri beti hi nehi hai .mein pata karne ki koshish kar rahi hu na ...aur fir sree v koshish kar raha hai

Mom :mein kuch nehi janti mujhe bas apni beti chahiye !!!!

She started crying more loudly .Her crying sound just out of tolerance .both mr. Mukherjee & simran keep their hands on their ears 2 resist the sound .[:xx]

In etf office

Rathod :shit !!!! firse ye bhaag gaya ...kitna mushkil se ye rishta tai kiya ...

Shree :i know sir ...galti meri v thi .meine hi to apk pas riya ki rishte lekar ayi thi .

Rathod :no shree.isme tumari koi galti nehi hai .ab kismat me agar aisa likhkha tha to kya karna ...

Shree :par sir ...meri ek baat samaj me nehi ayi riya kyu vag gayi ye saadi se ???😕

Rathod :c'mon shree ...shayad uska kissi ladk k sath affair chal raha hoga ...

Shree:ho sakta hai ...

Shree (MV):ajeeb baat hai ...ye baat riya mujse kyu chupayi ???? uska saadi thodi hi hum log jabar dasti se de rahe the ...fir kyu ??? kuch to chut raha hai ...😕

scene again shifted 2 ariya

Arjun :riya jaldi karo ...nehi to tumara bf chala jayega ...

Riya :arjun ,aisa lag raha hai ki mujse jyada tumhe meri bf se milne ki jaldi hai ...😉

Arjun :riya ...

They went out & hired a taxi 2 go 2 the mandir .

In the way ...

Riya (shouted):rukkooo ...

Driver stopped the car & both arjun & driver looked at her shockingly 😲

Arjun :kya hua ??? aise gadi kyu rukhne ko kaha ???😕

Riya :arjun mujhe jalebi leni hai ...

Arjun:jalebi ???? 😲

Riya (shyly):ha ...wo actually meri bf ko jalebi bohot pasand hai .so mein soch rahi hu jab ki hum dono itne din baad mil rahe hai to kyu na meim usk liye jalebi le jau ...😳plz arjun le ao na ...(puppy face)

Arjun's jaw dropped .

Arjun :riya ,meine suna tha log apni fiance ko flowers dete hai aur tum ho ki "jalebia"dena chahte ho !!!!

Riya :arjun ...pyaar na cheezo se maapa nehi jati .balki cheezo me pyaar hona chahiye ...ab jakar le ao na ...

Arjun nodded his head in disbelief .he went 2 the swt shop & buy jalebi .he handed them 2 riya .

Arjun :ye lo tumari bf ki jalebi !!!!😡

Riya happily took them .

After few minutes they reached at the temple .

Riya :arjun chalo .wo shayad mere liye wait kar rahi honge .

Arjun don't know why but he is really feeling very bad seeing her xcitement 😭

Arjun :nehi riya tum jao .mujhe ek jaruri phone call karni hai .

Riya :par arjun ...

Arjun :plz riya ...

Riya :ok .

She went into the temple .

Arjun went 2 the pco booth as he left his phone in his house .

He dialed on etf number .

After few rings someone picked the phone .

Arjun :hello shree ...

Shree :harre arjun sir ap !!!! ap kaha ho ??? sab log apk liye bohot tensed hai .

Arjun :isme tensed honewali kya baat hai ??? ye thoda hi pehli baar hai ...

Shree :nehi sir wo baat nehi hai .mein to bas ...

Arjun :shree ,i m really sry ki mein tumari cousin sis se saadi nehi kar payi .par galti tumari thi .mere bare me sab kuch jante hue v tumne usk sath mere saadi k baat chalayi .sirf ye hi nehi tumne aur rathod ne milkar hamari ghar me security ka intezam ki taki mein vaag na pau ...m i right or wrong ???

Shree :sir ,i m really sry .par sir ye sab rathod sir ki instructions the .mein to bas wo obey kar rahi thi ...

Arjun :waise sam hai kaha ????

Shree :sir ,kuch der pehle jaipur se phone aya tha .rathod sir ki masa ka tabiyaat thik nehi hai .isiliye rathod sir aur ayesha(husband-wife) nikal gayi jaipur k liye ...

Arjun :ok .mein ab phone rakhti hu .

Shree :par sir ...

b4 shree completed arjun already cut the call .

Shree :mein bechara kismat k maara .ek taraf rathod sir to ek taraf arjun sir .kya karu ???? pata nehi arjun sir laut ne k baad mera kya halat karenge ???
wo sab to thik hai .par ye riya kaha hai ??? mein ab usse kaha se dhundu aur fir uncle-aunty ko kya jawab dungi ???

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Arjun still standing outside of the temple .it is about 1 hour she went inside but still didn't come .

Now arjun bcom worried .so he decided 2 go inside the temple .he went inside & searching 4 riya .suddenly his gaze fell in one corner .

Riya was sitting there resting her head on her knee .arjun walked 2 her .

Arjun :riya ,tum yaha par kyu baithi ho ????😲

But she didn't reply .so arjun put his hand on her head .

She raised her head & arjun is shocked .

Arjun :tum ro rahi ho ???😲



PRECAP :Ariya going 2 jaipur ...

SRY GUYZ 4 LATE .PLZ LEAVE UR OPINIONS AS MUCH AS POSSIBLE & HIT THE LIKE BUTTON NOR I CAN'T POST THE NEXT PART .THANK U
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superb.. loved it.. thanks for pm..
Edited by unishaz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hunny kaha thi yaar tune mujhe pehele kun nahi bataya iss story ke bare mein...awesome hai yaar...

Full to todu phodu type...ye ariya ek no. Ke pagal hai...aur unki family wo bhi kisi musiam ke piece sekam nahi...

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