#T2 ASYA ff:vishwaas note pg93 22/5/14 - Page 43

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...loved it...
and i agree with you that for us asad is always ksg...
Pls update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

PART : 38 : "" TOTALLY CRAP !!! "
READ AT YOUR OWN RISK !


so here it goes m telling u guys before the update it is super crapy n i hv lost my interest in writing after ksg left the show now i'll be writing only tragic stories...
i'mm going to start the story as soon as i get the banner...

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zoya was sleeping peacefully in asad's arms...
asad was the one to wake up first !

he saw their position in which they slept asad's leg was enterwined with zoya's his hands were on her bare back zoya's kurti was not in her place the doris were open the neck portion from one side was tilted almost below her shoulder and that was reveiling her neck line and the area above the shoulders her hands were on asad's bare chest...☺️

and she was fitted to asad's body like a mold !

he smiled at her cute face and stared at her for long time he watched her sleeping after sometime he moved more close to zoya n checked her temperature it still hot !...

he sighed n thought that he would take help from his ammi now !
he kissed zoya on her sensitive area of the neck and and nuzzled it !
he murmered a sorry and placed zoya's kurti back in place ...
he turned her back and tied the doris of her kurti and left from there leaving a parcially concious zoya there...

he returned back to find her still sleeping he came down and dilshad asked him about zoya he told her that she was wet in the rain and no she has fever ...
dilshad tells asad that she's seeing these changed things between them from a few days...

A:" ammi please i dont want to discuss it !..."

D:" asad ye jo kuch bhi hai tum dono k bheech hai mujhe sirf itna pta hai ki zoya ammi bane waali hai wo hume itni badi khushi deni waali hai tho hmara bhi farz hai usse utni hi khushi dena..."

and with this she left for some work ...

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it was noon n zoya was still unconscious asad was in the room admiring zoya's glow he was happy very happy seeing the glow on her face !...

and now the door bell rings...

he goes down and opens the door he saw there anahida with a packet he asked her to come in ...

she came and said to him...

An :" wo asad tum kl party mein aaye the na par jldi nikl gye the aur maine apne sabhi guests ke liye ek surprise gift rakhkha tha...tho tumhara gift !...":

she said while giving him the packet they were chatting !

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meanwhile zoya got up still in partiallly conscious state she stood up and started to walk slowly taking a step at a min with the support of the wallls she hit on many things and then she came out of the room ...

she wlked towards the stairs n while coming down her head started to spin...

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here asad and anahida were having some business related talks when they heard a huge thud and a loud screem of ZOYA !

they reached there and wht asad saw made his world go upside down he felt that the floor was slipping from his foot..

he shouted ...

A:" ZOYAAA !!! ZOYAA ZOYA UTHO UTHO ZOYA HUH? ZOYA GET UP ZOYA PLEASE GET UP !..."

An :" asad hame isse abhi aapi k paas leke jaana hoga "

they rushed to sadaf's clinic and after smtime sadaf returned with a plaster of sad face ...

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S:" i'm sorry asad ur child is no more !..."

asad cudn't believe wht he heard just now he was about to faint but when he listened to the next part he was shocked to no extend...

S:" humne bahut koshish ki feotus ko bchaane ki n shayad wo bach bhi jaata kyunki zoya sirf 5 sidheeyo se giri thi or wo bhi pet k bal nhi !...lekin zoya ne kyi saari sleeping pills ya aisa koi drug liya hai jiski wajah se feotus bahut kamzor hogya tha n usne kaafi dino se kuch khaaya bhi nhi tha theek se ..."

asad's anger boiled up and he left seeing dilshad and najma there..

after sometime anahida went to meet sadaf ...

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An:" thankyou aapi !... aapne zoya ke bache ko maar dala mere pyaar ko paane k liye meri madat krne k liye shukriya.."

S:" shukriya chodo anah ! ... zoya ka bacha MRA NHI HAI ...
maine jhoot bola tha doc. k hote hue mai zoya k bache ko maar nhi skti thi..."

An:" kya ? aapi ab kya hoga ?... agar asad ko pta chal gya tho..."

S:" aisa kuch nhi hoga ! hum usse andhere me rakhkhe ge aur zoya ke man me uske liye shak paida ho hi chuka hai ab wo din door nhi jab meri chhoti ... mrs. asad ahmed khan bnegi !..."


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sheeesh !!!

kitna zada crap tha sorry for this but i cant help it my mind have lost the words it seems after KSG !...
i'lll be starting a new DARK story soon with asya and haider humaira so stay tuned i'll update th prolouge when i get the banner tilll then if u seriously liked this update ...
which m sure u wouldn't have so if u can drop a comment please i'll be greatful !...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice part wanted to kill anahida
plz pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
its nice pls do continue
and pm me for next update

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Posted: 11 years ago
the update was short😭
but i loved it😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part dear
do continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice part !
Thank God she showed some humanity by not killing the child !
Asad should try to understand Zoya !
Its hightime ! My poor Zoya is suffering sooo mucch !!
Update sooon
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh no
this is so bad

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Posted: 11 years ago
Kill that anahida
Hope Asad will get yo know abt his friend intentions
& he save zoya.
Continue soon
Plz PM me when u update next part.
Happy New Year to u
Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago

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