SHE IS MINE, ONLY MINE by Upss THREAD-II *COMPLETED* - Page 18

Originally posted by: kbtr

Hey, I just came across this FF in the Fan Fictions Recommended Thread. Let me start by saying I am now avoiding reading anything new that is incomplete. However your title and the first few lines I read gripped me so tight that I had to read the entire story posted so far!

I love the way the relationship between Kushi and Arnav has progressed. From hatred, grew love deniable and then revenge and finally true and deep love secure in the feeling of being everlasting. I felt so emotional when reading at the way Arnav cares for her every time she goes into remission from her awful trauma. The trust that Kushi showed after Latika's uninvited visit, despite her insecurities, is commendable in this story of love. And the respect that Arnav showed for Kushi, giving into her demands, knowing something was wrong, not questioning her, but letting her have her way, sealed his feelings for her. That he told her the truth at the church was just an after effect of his true and deep love for her. I love the way you have penned this journey of trust and respect into accepting of a rare love between Kushi and Arnav. For as we all know, without respect and trust, there is no basis for any kind of relationship.

I am also thrilled at how, in your story, the playing field is so level between Kushi and Arnav. For it is easy to be a bully to someone who is smaller than you (physically or in social stature...) And I am so, so, so, so, sooo happy to see that Kushi is not a quivering mass of idiotic, cry me a river, skulking in the corner, begging for forgiveness just for breathing, type of protagonist! Absolutely love her character here! Please don't change it (the way the CVs turned her in the show, or ASR!)

(😡The way they changed the characters in the show...)

I was a bit surprised at ASR's giving in to blackmail by a nonentity like Latika. I mean he always has a one up on everyone, eh? And for him to be controlled by a mere woman who has no importance in his life whatsoever, was a bit shocking. And really glad at the way and of the end of this fiasco.

Kushi has been very secretive and so has ASR. They should make it a pact to tell each other everything and not hide things from each other. Otherwise, this marriage will not survive.

So now they are married and dad is planning a wedding already!

Waiting to see how this will pan out. Loved the precap of naughty Arnav! Hope Kushi gives as good as she gets!!

And oh yeah, I was ROFL at this:

"But if this slave package also has the mode of being sex slave then I will accept the offer."

Hahaha! Love to see the naughty Kushi, too!!

Please accept my buddy request and PM me when you next update. Please? I have you bookmarked, though, so I will probably stalk you out!!😆

Thanks so much for a wonderful read!

vittoriA😊