OS: Unexpected Dare(My First OS)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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(^^Beautiful banner by my Sparky(...Jes...) I love you Sparky)

This is my  First OS that i have ever written😳 and It's about Virman and Virika Both😉


Everyone loves playing truth and but can one game of truth or dare Change everything!
More Importantly The Friendship of Six friends will still be there or after the game would be something more than that!



Jeevika(while looking at her watch): Guys the party is almost over so i think i should better get going now, it's pretty late already.
Viren: Jeevika the ruler master agar ek raat late hogayi tou kya hojaye ga( tried hard to convince her)
Jeevika: Par Viren I have to go now you know na my house is pretty far away from here and party is also over now everyone would be leaving soon

A voice said from behind her: Jeevs stay na LET's play truth and dare then you can leave as soon as possible
She turned back and saw her friend Manvi giving her the cutest puppy dog face

Then a tall guy came from behind her that was their Naughty play boy friend Virat

Virat: Wassup People! I thought you guys already  left
Jeevika: I was about to but they are insisting on playing a game  and that i should stay longer
Virat: Great Idea haan!
Manvi: My idea haan( becoming proud of her self)
Virat: what? sachi i thought  you didn't had a brain
Manvi turned red after hearing this and Virat bursted out laughing  after seeing her face
'' Aj tou tumhari khair nahi Virat Vadheera'' this all what she said before viren intervened

Viren: Guys come on dont start fighting now!
It was my idea of playing the game and Manvi convinced Jeevika to stay!
Jeevika: Or you guys can fight and I can just go home...
As soon as she said so all the heads turned around to face her

Manvi: No Jeevis you stay and i would see him after the game
virat didn't say anything except for chukled for a few seconds

Viren: Guys let's go over there and Ask Uday and Shivani to join us
Pointing towards two people who were spending some time alone

All went there!
Virat: Oye Uday, Shivani Love birds come here we are playing Truth or Dare join us here
Uday at first raised an eye brow to show in conveniance but then Shivani went to join the rest so he also went there

Best friends Group was Complete Now!

Jeevika: I am only doing this because you guys wanted me to play this game which i really dont like!
Manvi: dont worry Jeevs you will always remember this game after that she winked at Virat!

So Viren Truth or dare! manvi said excitedly
Viren: Truth for now 
I have no mood to crack some egg over my head at this time remembering the last game and the dare which Manvi gave him
Everyone laughed at him for sometime

Manvi: Viren so umm do you Fancy some one over here?

Manvi and Virat had Planned This game to get Viren and Jeevika to spit out their feelings and some how had convinced Viren to play the game and ask Jeevs to play too without letting him know of their plan...

Viren made ''O'' SHAPE face and Said: Where did this Came from?
But then it was the game so he had to say it...feelings that he had been hiding since so long

"Yes i do fancy some one over here...She has long brown hair and green eyes that are so deep and a really cute smile..."

Virat and Udhay: Naam lena ki zaroorat hai kya ab?
All face turned towards Jeevika who was at first shocked but then started blushing like mad

Then Suddenly She said: I like you too Viren!

Oops was what she said after she completed her sentence

Manvi and Virat High-5ed after that and said in Union:
''Mission complete''
Jeevika gave a deathly glare to manvi and said: You so Have to Pay for it!

Some feelings already became clear but wait the game is still ON!

Viren; Manvi Truth or Dare?
Manvi: Dah Dare
Jeevika: you have to go on a Date with Virat!

Manvi and Virat Both said together: NOOO

Viren: No backing away acha! dargayi so samjho mar gayi

Manvi: dar no way I would complete this Dare!
Ab tou Meri izzat ka sawal hai

Shivani: So tomorrow at 8 pm you guys have to go on a Date a real One! and will be spying on you so be Careful

Virat: main kaha phass gaya ab
Manvi: Shss Its a dare we have to do it

Jeevika High-5ed Viren This time!!!!!!!!!!
Manvi: Yeh kya tha!
Viren: Revenge!

Jeevika: Kunal
Truth or Dare!

Udhay: Truth please!
Jeevika: Since how long you have been liking Shivani!?

Udhay: Simple...since the first time i saw her
Shivani: What?
But you said you liked me Only since 2 Months
Manvi: and you believed him?😕
Shivani: Uday?
Uday: Alright atleast i said i liked you but couldnt say the whole thing

everyone except uday and Shivani Bursted out Laughing 
while the duo was at first quite then both BLushed!!!!!!

Manvi: Wow This Game was way TOO Interesting...So much happened tonight
Shivani: Wait for tomorrow something else is left for now

Then she remembered her date with Virat!
''Uff Yeh Viren aur Jeevika na Kaha phasa diya mujhe'' Manvi said to herself While making a dissaproving expression


Next Day!
Manvi and Virat Got ready and Had the same feelings...both didn't wanted to go but it was a dare which they had to complete besides they were both best friends since many years what possibly could happen it wasn't like something would change after all!

Virat picked Manvi from her House at exact time, The Journey was a bit awkward as both didn't talk to each other
finally they reached their destination

Manvi: I know its awkward for you virat it was my dare and you got stuck with me if you don't wanna do this you can go any time you want
Virat( smiled): Arey yaar dosti ka liye kuch bhi karo ga aur Manvi It's just a dare date how bad it can be
By the way you look really nice! REd Suits you!

Manvi: Blushed, Thanks you dont look bad your self!
white shirt and Blue jeans perfect combination
Virat: Let's go then

The Date went Fabulous super funny yet adorable, both enjoyed each other's company it was not like a romantic date but was funny one
Virat was cracking jokes and Manvi was laughing hysterically!

Date Came to an End

Manvi: Virat I think we should go now!
Virat: yeah we should but let's get some pics to have a prove of tonight
Manvi: umm I dont think we need that
Virat: why?

Manvi giggled pointing towards Virat's back
Virat: oh so they are here for spying
Jeevika, Viren, Udhay and Shivani were all there wearing disguise trying not to be recognized by the duo

Manvi: are you thinking what i am thinking?
Virat and Manvi both got up and went to the rest of the group 
Manvi raised an eye brow then bursted out laughing real hard follwed by Virat saying: Oi! get up you hardly disguised people!

Udhay: I told you we would be recongnised
Shivani: psssh atleast they didnt notice us since so long
Viren and Jeevika together: How would they even notice us they were busy with each other

Manvi: No thats not true
then she realised that was true then she gave her signature smirk to Jeevika

Virat: Okay guys lets go now
Manvi come I'll drop you
Viren: Sure kaal baki batain karey gain smirked at Jeevika

Virat went to drop Manvi back this time the car ride was not silent instead both talked about random stuff and had fun

After Virat Dropped Manvi he went back to his own home thinking something did actually change
Manvi was just a friend for him till now  a really good one but after the dare date she meant something more the thing that he hadn't realise before was which he realised now
He actually Liked Manvi a bit more than a friend...


One Game of Truth and Dare and Everything Changed...While for some it was a Memorable Confession but for others it was the Night of the beginning of Some strong Feeling for someone

THE END of The New Beginning😉

 

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Posted: 10 years ago
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So the Reason I wrote this is that It's a Gift for two of my Very Special friends 
Manahil(...Mallu...) and Shweta( Krazzy_Shweta) 
I know your Birthdays are coming up so consider this as a Pre gift!😉

I love you Guys😳


And Thank You Sparky for the Amazing Banner and All the Help😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
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maggie u write
fab
amazing
superb
u shud write more os and stories
love it
too kwwl
too gud

IM FIRST WHOOO
Edited by sumayyah1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Your first OS! Magnolia, lemme read it now! 😲
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumayyah1

maggie u write
fab
amazing
superb
u shud write more os and stories
love it
too kwwl
too gud

IM FIRST WHOOO


But i never Wrote anything before🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: .LiveLaughLove.

Your first OS! Magnolia, lemme read it now! 😲

Yes First one and My Inspiration is My Janny😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks di🤗
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The beginning of this OS showed how interesting it was going to be.  Virat and Manvi's plan was accomplished. Best friends, what for? 😉 But-wait- WHAT? Jeevika and green eyes?! Wow! Very nice, Magnolia. For the first time I'm imagining Krystle having green eyes! 😳 Jeevika's revenge to Manvi was awesome! Dateee with Virat! 😉 Bechara Uday, phas gaya. 😛 VirMan having mutual feelings. LOL. It must be real awkward for them as they, being best friends, were going on a DATE! 😳 Jeevika, Viren, Udhay and Shivani... You guys didn't need to spy! Romance bhi nahi karne dogei kyaa?! 🤣  Manvi was smart enough to realize them wearing their disguises! 😛 VirIka, smart ho yaar tum dono! 🤣 Virat, realize hogaya tumhe? 😃 That night was special for 4 people, Shivani, Uday, Viren and Jeevika. 😳 But the next day changed Virat's life. First attempt of writing a one shot was fabulouis. The story was amazayn! The concept was phenomeniall. The ending was extraordinharry. And ur idea was brilliam! Keep writing. Please write more... Love this one to the core of my heart. 

PS continue this 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Janny i got inspired by you😳
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maham
beautiful ff dear
update soon
pm me whenever u update