Ariya FF :iss darde dil k sifarish (part-6-page-34) 4/2 pm late - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago
I just came across this story it's so amazing... Please add me to ur pm list... Can't wait for arjun and pari to come to India PleSe update soon x
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb
Very emotional
Waiting for d next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update. Love the FB. Pari is missing her mom. Arjun is coming back to india due to the case. Thanks for pm. Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update yar...!!
very heart touching and emotional...!!
arjun and pari miss kalpana a lot...!!!
fb was cute... so finally he knows that she is sam's sis...!!
woah arjun coming back to india cool..
continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
thx a lot guyz 4 ur likes & comments at the previous part .now time 4 nxt part .njoy ...




PART -3

Arjun again drifted in his past memories ...

[FLASH BACK]

It is almost 1 month arjun staying in sameer's house .

In this one month many equation has been changed between arjun & kalpana .

Kalpana never show but in mind she liking arjun very much .it is not an unknown fact 2 arjun .infact arjun really enjoying her that type of behavior .

One day evening ...

Arjun :sam ,one month ka chutti ab khatam hone wale hai .ab firse hum dono ko job join karni hai ...

Sam :ha yr .par gharse jane ka maan hi nehi kar rahi hai ...

Arjun :ha yr .pata hai inn 1 month tera yaha rehkar na ek apna pan mehsus hone laga hai ...

On the other hand ...

Kalpana is listening samjun convo 4m quite away & bcom sad 😭

She ran 2 the roof & started crying there as no one can c her ...

But it was not unnoticed by arjun .actually he was noticing her 4m his eye corner .he xcused himself 2 sam & went 2 the roof .there he found her crying .

Kalpana didn't notice him .arjun came & stood bhind her.

Arjun :hmmm to yaha par koi ro raha hai ...

Kalpana heard his voice & turned 2 him

Kalpana (angrily):ap yaha kya kar rahe hai ??? Jakar jane ki tayiari kijiye !!!!!😡

Arjun :ha wo to mein kar lungi .par soch rahi hu yaha se akele nehi jaunga .kisiko sath me lekar jaunga ...

Kalpana looked at him confusingly .

Arjun came very close 2 her & looked into her eyes

Arjun :kisi aise insaan ko apne sath lekar jana chahti hu jo hamesha mera sath rahe ,mera care kare ...

Kalpana (also looking into his eyes):kaun hai wo ????

Arjun :agar mein kahu jo ladki mere samne khadi hai wo .

Kalpana was surprised 2 hear that 😲

Kalpana :matlaab ???

Arjun :matlaab ...aaa ...

Arjun sat on his knee & forward his hand

Arjun :ye nacheez arjun suryakant rawte ek ladki se pyaar karta hai jiska naam kalpana singh rathod hai aur wo apne sari zindegi uss khubsurat ladki k sath bitana chahti hai .kya wo ladki v iss nacheez ko pyaar karta hai aur usk sath apni puri zindegi bitane k liye tayiar hai ????

Kalpana was totally surprised .she was not expecting that .she thought 4 a second may b she was dreaming

Her eyes filled with tears of happiness .she kept her hand on his hand & nodded in yes .

[Flashback end]

Arjun came out his thought when he heard a knock on door .

He looked at the door & found rohan (his colleague) is standing there .

Arjun :rohan ,tum waha par kyu khade ho ...andar ao ...

Rohan came inside & sat infront of him

Rohan :meine sunaa ..tum india wapas jaa rahi ho ...

Arjun :ha wo ...commissioner sir ka phone aya tha .ek case k silsile me waha bulaya .but just 4 some months .usk baad mein yaha wapas chali aungi .

Rohan :wapas kyu ana chahte ho ??? waha par settle ho jao na .waise v waha par to sab log hai .yaha par pari v akele feel karta hai .waha par rahega to aise akele feel nehi karega .

Arjun :plz rohan .u know the reason .fir v tum ...

Rohan :arjun ,waha ka sab log tumari aur pari ki care karta hai .tum ye baat kyu nehi samajte ki jo kuch v hua wo niyati (fate) ka khel hai .usse control karna hamari baas me nehi hai .

Arjun :janti hu .par dil ko samjha nehi pati hu ...

Rohan :arjun ...wo sab chod .aur jane ki tayiyari kar .harre ha pari ka school chutti hone ka waqt ho gayi hai .tujhe to usse pick karne jani hai na ...

Arjun :ha .mujhe avi nikal na hoga ...

Arjun left the office & went 2 pari's school .

Pari came 2 him runningly & arjun picked her in his arms & kissed her on her 4head .

Pari :papa papa mujhe na ice cream khani hai ...

Arjun :achsa pari ko ice cream khani hai .thik hai chalo aj papa v ice cream khayegi pari k sath .

They went 2 the ice cream parlor & ate ice cream .then they returned 2 home

Arjun :pari agle hafte se to apka summer vacation suru hone wali hai na .to kyu na hum kahi ghumne chale ...

Pari :really papa !!!! Hum summer vacation par jayenge ???

Arjun :ha ...wo v apk fav place par

Pari :kaha ???😕

Arjun :india me ...

Pari :yeh !!!!!! (She started jumping) kitna maza ayegi !!! hum mamu se ,nani se milne jayenge ...bohot maza ayegi ...mein avi jak zona (her frnd) ko bolti hu ...

Pari dancingly went 2 the phone & calld her frnd zona 2 share her happiness .

One week later ...

Arjun :pari beta jaldi karo .nehi to hum late ho jayenge ...

Pari :bas papa ...2 minutes .meine mamu aur nani k liye jo gift kharidi hai usse pack kar lu ...

Arjun nodded his head in disbelief .

Arjun :bilkul apni maa par gayi hai ...😊

Arjun & pari left 4 airport .after all processing they borded 4 the plane .

Arjun & pari took their seats .pari is so xcited that she is blubbering non-stoply .

Arjun just hearing her chattar pattar .

after few minutes the plane took off .

Pari drifted into sleep .arjun hugged her in his arms .

Arjun (pov):kitna ajeeb hai ...
ek seal pehle hi hum india jane wale the .kalpana kitni khush thi ...

[FLASH BACK]

Arjun is in office .he called in kalpana's phone .

Kalpana picked the phone .

Kalpana :ha arjun bolo ...

Arjun :tumari shopping ho gayi ya india me puri ki puri shopping mall utha kar le jane ki irada hai ...

Kalpana :just shut up arjun !!! tum hamesha mujhe shopping ko lekar taunting kyu karte rehte ho ...aur fir
itne din baad hum india me jaa rahe hai .aise hi khali haat jaungi kya ...

Arjun :achsa baba ...mujhse galti ho gayi .tumhe jitna shopping karni hai karlo ...😊
Waise pari v tumari sath hai kya ????

Kalpana :nehi .meine usse mrs. cristofer ki ghar rakh k ayi hu .

Arjun :waise shopping kya sirf apna uss khadus vai k liye kar rahe ho ya mere liye v kuch kar rahi ho ...

Kalpana :arjun !!!! khabar dar jo mere vai ko khadus kaha ...😡

Arjun :sry sry sry ... khadus nehi hitlar 🤣

Kalpana :arjun !!!!😡

Kalpana was crossing the road talking with arjun on phone

A car was coming 4m opposite side .but kalpana didn't notice .

In a few second the terrible incident happened .the car rushed over her .

Arjun just heard her screaming in phone

Arjun :kalpana !!!!!!😲

After few hour ...

Arjun was standing infront of ICU room .Suddenly the doc came out of ICU

Arjun immediately rushed 2 him

Arjun :doc ...how is my wife ??? is she alright ???😕

Doc (with sad face):sry mr. rawte .we have tried our best .but her body loose so many blood .we gave her blood .but her body is not taking this blood .

Arjun is totally numb 2 hear that .

Doc (keeping his hand on arjun'shoulder ):mr. rawte , i m really sry .but there is nothing in our hand .its better if u go & meet with her .

Saying this doc left .

Arjun went 2 her room

She was lying almost deadly .when she heard his foot step she slowly turned 2 him & gave a light smile .pain is visible on her face .

Arjun came & sat bside her .tears drop continuously falling 4m his eyes .

Rohan also entered with pari .pari is also crying .

Pari :mumma ,apko kya hua hai ???😭

Kalpana :mumma ko chot lagi hai beta ...

Pari :fir to apko bohot dard ho rahi hogi na ...

Kalpana :nehi .kuch der pehle bohot ho rahi thi .ab nehi ho rahi hai .ap aur apka papa jo yaha par hai ...

Pari :don't wry mumma .ap jaldi thik ho jaogi .mein aur papa hamesha apk saath hai na ...

Kalpana smiled & kissed on her 4head .she signaled rohan 2 take pari out of the room .

Rohan went out with pari .

Kalpana looked at arjun who was crying .

Kalpana :arjun tum na rote hue bandar ki tarah lagti ho ...

Arjun (try 2 smile):bandariya ki pati jo hu ...

Kalpana smiled again & hold his hand

Kalpana :arjun ,mujse wada karo tum hamesha khush rahogi .kav dukhi nehi rahoge .aur hamesha pari ki aur apni khayal rakhkhoge .

Arjun burst into tears

Arjun :plz kalpana mujhe chodk maat jao 😭 tumare bina mujhe jeena nehi ata ...

Kalpana :arjun ,mein tumhe chodkar kahi nehi jaa rahi hu .tumare pas ,tumare sath mein hamesha rahungi ek saaya ban kar ...bas mujse wada karo apne apko kav takleef nehi doge ...tumhe khush dekhungi to mein v khush rahungi arjun ...

Arjun hugged kalpana not want 2 let her go & kalpana slowly slid her hand on his back as hugged him .

But few second later arjun couldn't her heart beat .he raised his head & found her closing her eyes .

He looked at her numbly & when he realised she left him he burst into tears ...crying madly

Arjun :kalpana ...😭

[FB END]

A long tear drop fall 4m his eyes remembering the most painful moment of his life

Arjun :kalpana ...mein to uss din hi mar jati .par jee rahi hu sirf aur sirf hamare pari k liye .uski akho me khushi dekhta hu to meri dil ko khushi milti hai ...tumse wada kiya hai .to mein pari ko apna zindegi se v jyada samhaal kar rakhunga ...

He kissed on pari's head & fell asleep holding his life his daughter ...



PRECAP : arjun-pari reach at mumbai ...samjun meeting...riya's entry ...what will happen when arjun face riya ????

Guyz don't forget 2 hit the like button & do comment .& ya ...if want 2 ask anything aur suggest anything 4 the story u can pm me aur scrap me.thank u😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was awesome
fb was so painfull😭
precape look awesome
waiting for next chapter
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow...
It was a superb update.
Loved the flashbacks.
Yay...
Arjun and Pari are coming to Mumbai.
Lovely update.
Continue sooonish... :)
thanks for the pm... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
loved it
Flashbacks were superb
waiting for the next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Super Duper Awesome update dr...!!!!!!
FB was beautiful...!!!!! The way Arjun confessed his feelings to Kalpana was lovely...!!!!!
Loved Rohan n Arjun's convo...!!!! His piece of advice to Arjun was fab...!!!!! I hope he will follow it n stay back in India...!!!!!!
Awww Pari seemed quite excited whn Arjun told her that thy r going to India...!!!!! She is so cute...!!!!!
FB related to Kalpana's death was heart touching dr...!!!!! Aww thy were so happy but everything destroyed in a sec...!!!!!!
That segment was so painfull...!!!!!
How will Arjun n Pari react whn thy see Riya...?????
Eager to read further...!!!!!!
Thanks for pm dr...!!!!! Continue soon...!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsum re hunny bunny! The fb's wer so beautiful!!! Lovd Arjun-Kalpana Convo..Beautiful!!!! Yayyy...Arjun nd Pari cuming over to Mumbai!!!! Aww...Pari is sooo cuteee! Love her! Thanxx fr pm..Continuee Soonzz!!

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