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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

awesome update

geet was trying hard to get his attention but all go in vain
that beach scene was too funny
maan found her on road n bring her to his home for sending her back to India but she is here to take him back along with her

thank you dear 😊 yeah he totally ignored her. Lets see what geet will do and maan
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ash1991

Amazing update...
Loved it a lot...
Maan recognized geet...wonDer why maan is away frm everyone...

thank you dear 😊 so glad you loved the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
I will update today for sure dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 4
awesome...
that beach scene was funny...
is that Maan?
hes sending her back?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Updating tonight.. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
will be waiting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 5



P.S.: Past in ITALIC

"These are your flight tickets to India, you are leaving tomorrow morning" he told and looked at geet with stern face while geet looked at him surprised. She folded her hands over her chest "You are so fast Mr. Khurana. I myself came here so I will go when I feel like and I will go when I miss my family but not like you who always stay alone and talk with walls and files" told geet sarcastically. "Thank you for reminding me Ms. Kapoor, I don't want you to be in my company. I don't my life to be disturbed because of you" told maan, his each and every word pierced her heart. She is a disturbance to him, how can he say that? Her heart is crying for his words, does this mean that she is no one for him, did he really forget everyone and is that the reason why he didn't reply her single mail or call till now.

"That's means if I am there in your life you will be disturbed, is it right?" asked geet pouting. Maan rolled his eyes and said "Meri maa, I was just joking now stop your drama" Geet was silent and sat on the couch with crying fake. Maan sat beside her half hugging her and told "Now why you are still angry. I told you sorry na" "You told I am disturbing you so I won't talk to you" pouted geet and turned her face away. "You just need a chance to fight with me. Chalo now sit like this only, I too won't talk to you" told maan and got up for having food. He took his plate and relished the paratha. "Ummm yummy" Geet is looking at him with corner of her eyes and looked up complaining to her babaji. "Dekho na babaji yeh kitna kamina hai, mujhe bhi bhook lag rahi hai" complained geet. She too got up and took her plate. "Yaar geet today I am too much hungry" told maan and took her paratha too. Geet opened her mouth in O and looked at him with fuming eyes. "Mr. Fatty enough of eating" taunted geet. "Dare you call me fatty again" warned geet. "Fatty Fatty Fatty Fatty Fatty Fatty Fatty" shouted geet and ran to save her life from her fatty.

"Did you really forgot our old days maan, if I get angry you always pamper me and in turn I will always tease you. How much I irritate, you never left me but now when I came for you, you want to send me away" thought geet sadly. Geet made a straight face and asked "So you want me to go from here?" asked geet. Maan glared at her as he knew she is cooking some plan in her mind. "Ok i will go" told geet. Maan is surprised for a second but her next set of words made him rooted in his spot. "I will go to India only on one condition Mr. Khurana. Marry me then i will go" asked geet. Maan is totally enraged with her words "Stop your non-sense geet" roared maan.

"What happened maan? Did I ask anything wrong? I think no. I just asked you to marry me" told geet normally. Geet is hell bent in making him to testing his patience. "Geet, I never talked this patiently. Before I do anything to you go from here" warned maan. Geet smirked and asked "Really maan, please don't do like that I am getting scared" taunted geet. Maan held geet's shoulders tightly and said "No more arguments geet, don't you dare to talk a word more. I am warning you I don't know what I will do" Geet smiled at maan and told "Bohot din hogaye maan tumse baat karke, I missed everything" Maan softened a bit and left her from his hold. "Why you are doing this geet? You know very well why I am here all alone. Then why?" asked a frustrated maan. "It will pain here (pointing her heart) to see you like this maan. Why you are punishing me maan why? Why you are punishing me for someone's mistake. What is my mistake maan, loving you Is my mistake? When I was small my parents left me and now you. Do I don't have right to live a normal like" asked a frustrated and painful geet.

Sun raha hai naa tu
Ro rahi hun main
Sun raha hai naa tu
Kyun ro raha hun main

"Nothing has changed even today maan, please come back" begged geet. "Nothing is like before geet, there is nothing. Get that clear" told maan.

Waqt bhi thehara hai
Kaise kyun ye huaa
Kaash tu aise aaye
Jaise ko duaa
Tu rooh ki raahat hai
Tu meri ibaadat hai

Apne karam ki kar adaayein
Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein

Geet held his collar and shouted "Kyun tumne waada kiya kit um mujhe kabhi chodke nahi jaoge? Kya hua tera wo sab waadein. You were always selfish maan, you were always. That time you are happy with me so you promised but now you don't want anyone, not even me that's why you are ordering me to go. That day and this day there were only YOU, inn sab ke beech mein there is no place for me. Main tho pagalon ki tarah tumse pyaar ki, ab mujhe sab kuch samaj aa raha hain ki mein kitni swardi aadmi se pyaar kiya. I won't break my promise like you Mr. Khurana. You rule the whole world that doesn't mean that I will do whatever you say. Why you don't want to come back and why you don't want to marry me. Tell me the reason dammit. Do you think that I am also like your MOTHER" There was a silence for few seconds and the whole room echoed with a tight slap and maan's fingers were printed on geet's cheeks.

Geet's hand automatically reached her cheek while maan looked at her with sheer anger, when he saw the tears in her eyes he realized what he did. How can he slap his geet, in anger he don't know what he did. "What you are doing to me geet? Why you are making me hate myself more and more?" asked geet helplessly. Geet didn't talk anything; she is too shocked to talk anything. She too realized in anger what the grave mistake she did. How can she? "I am sorry maan" apologized geet.

"That lady is alive geet, she is not dead" told maan punching the wall with his fist.


Precap: 😡

Here is the next part of Tera Saaya, waiting for your response.


Love

Chinni

Edited by _GoldenStarz_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice part
Eagerly waiting for the reasons to be revealed...why maan is like this & about his mom
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part
maan want geet to go
her condition baffled him
he slapped her for taking his mothers name
want to know wt happened that maan is like this
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi dear! Intense update! Past n present well incorporated! Maan was so happy in the past! Den wt happened? Y did he change! Maaneet argue n he slaps her! She mentioned his mom! Maan realises wt he did! Geet apologises! His mom is alive?? His mom is the reason y all this is happening ! Feeling 4 Maaneet! update soon! Superbly written

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