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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Interesting story hanny...
both run away theit own marriage humm
quit interesting update soon
concept cs n pro is written very well...

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archi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

thx a lot guyz 4 ur responses .so now i can start the story ...right !!!!here is the first part .hope u all will njoy it.😊

PART -1

Girl (breathing heavily):thx yr .meine to socha tha ki mein shayad train miss hi kar dungi ...but thank god !!! sahi waqt par tumne apna haat badaya .waise to mein train miss karti nehi hu .par aj ye itna vari (heavy) saadi k joda pehni hai to daudna taaf ho gaya .

Boy :so tum saadi se bhaag kar aye ho ???😕

Girl :aur nehi to kya ...aise hi kya show off karne k liye bhaagi hu ...waise tum ye dulhe ki dress kyu pehni hai???don't tell me ki tum v saadi se bhaag kar aye ho ...

Boy :ha .mein v saadi se vaag kar ayi hu .waise ye mera pehla xperience nehi hai .ye lekar choutha (4th time) baar bhaagi hu ...

Girl(shockingly):choutha bar !!!!😲tumne kya saadi se vagne me phd ki hai !!!!

Boy :don't know .but i have allergy with marriage .

Girl :par kyu ???😕saadi se itna kyu allergy hai ????

Boy :bas aise hi .i want 2 live a happy free & peaceful life without any kind of bonding .
Waise tum kyu vagi ho saadi se ????

Girl :bcoz mujhe arrange marriage nehi karni .mere parents ne mere saadi ek aise ladk se tai ki jisse aj tak meine dekhi tak nehi .janti tak nehi .mili tak nehi .aur mujhe kissi anjaan admi se saadi nehi karna .i want 2 do luv marriage .

Boy :so u r going 2 ur bf 😉

Girl (thinking about something):yap !!!

Boy :tumari bf rehta kaha hai ??? aur usne tumhe lene kyu nehi ayi ???

Girl :kyu ki meine usse mana kiya tha .isme problem khadi ho sakti thi .meine apni family ko zara si v bhanak nehi padne di ki mein bhagnewali hu .

Boy :par ab to wo log jaan gaye hai na ...

Girl :hmmm .par kya faida ab to mein mumbai se bohot dur hu na .waise ye sab bate chodo .hum itne der se ek dusre se baat kar rahe hai .but ek dusre ka num tak nehi pata .

Boy :ups sry 😊[forwarding his hand)hye ,i m Arjun ...Arjun suryakant rawte .😊

The girl also holding his hand 4 shake

Girl :riya ...riya mukherjee 😊

Arjun :riya ,i think we should go 2 the seat .aisa door me khade rehna safe nehi hai .

Riya :yah !!! u r right !!!

so arjun & riya both went & took seats

They continuing their chit chatting ...

Scene shift 2 arjun's house ...

Mr. Rawte (yelled):firse ye ladka bhaag gaya !!!😡 ye sab kuch apki wajah se hua arjun ki maa !!!{when mr. rawte get angry he called arjun's mother "arjun ki maa"😆}
Meine apse kaha tha na uspe nazar rakhne k liye .par ap ...apne bete par nazar hi nehi rakh paye ...😡

Mrs. rawte :iss me meri kya galti hai !!! apne mujhe nazar rakhne k liye kaha jab ap ghar me na rahe .par aj to ap ghar me the to aj kaise wo bhaag gayi !!!😡

Arjun's dad get silent .yes ,she is right .he also there .but arjun is their cunning unpredictable son who is just like "deep water fish"!!!!

Mr. rawte (in soft tone):sugandh (arjun's mom name) iss waqt behes karne ki nehi hai .arjun ko dhund kar nikal ni hogi .nehi to hamari izzat mitti pe mil jayegi .hum ladki wale ko kya jawab denge ???

Mrs. rawte :ap usse kaise dhund kar nikalenge .wo koi chota bachcha to nehi hai .wo to chodo wo koi mamuli ladka v to nehi . etf officer hai .police department ka best officer .usk dimag ki khel k saath hum har jayenge .apko to pata hai na ...wo jata v apna marji se aur ata v apna marji se ...

Mr. rawte :janti hu .par ek baat aphi batayiye jo ladka police department ka shaan hai agar wo hi aise char char bar criminal ki tarah bhaag jayegi to uska v kya izzat rahegi ???😕

Mrs. rawte :filhaal ye sab chodiye aur ye sochiye hum ladki wale ko kya jawab denge ???

in the mean karan (arjun's younger brother) entered with a "tooth paste smile"

Karan :maaa fikar not !!! Hume koi jawab nehi deni padegi .balki wo log v humeri tarah sawal ki darse pareshan hai ...😉

Mr. rawte (with angry tone):karan ...ek to hum pareshan hai aur tum apne vai ki tarah paheliya bujha rahi ho !!! saaf saaf batao kya kya hua hai ...😡

Karan :harrre dad !!! ap gussa kyu ho rahi ho .shant ho jao apk liye khush khabri hai ...😉

Mr. rawte (barked):khush khabri !!! tum dono vai ne mujhe khush kab rehne deti ho !!!

Karan :harre dad suno to sahi ...wo jo ladki hai na jisk sath apne vai ki saadi tai ki wo v ghar se vaag gaya ...🤣

Mr. & Mrs. rawte 2gether :kya !!!!😲

scene shift 2 riya's house

Mr. mukherjee (yelled):lakho baar pucha tha meine riya se ki uska koi pasand hai ya nehi ??? usne hume kya kaha tha ..."nehi dad i have no bf or lover".

Mrs. mukherjee :anand (riya's dad name)mujhe avi v pura yakin hai ki riya ka kissi v ladk k sath koi rishta nehi hai ...

Mr. mukherjee :nita (riya's mom)tumhe avi v shakh hai .maan liya uska koi bf nehi hai .fir wo bhaaga kyu ??? hai iska koi jawab tumare pas !!!

Mrs. mukherjee :mein manti hu .par aisa v to ho sakta hai ki wo saadi hi nehi karna chahti thi ...

Mr. mukherjee :fir usne saadi k liye haa kyu kiya ??? pata nehi ye ladki k dimag me kya chalti rehti hai ...
Par hum ab ladk wale ko kya jawab denge ???😕

Mrs. mukherjee (cryingly):wo sab mein nehi janti .mujhe bas meri beti wapas chahiye .pata nehi wo kis halat me hogi ???

Mr. mukherjee :itna tension v maat lo .wo london me 5 saal se study kark ayi hai .akele raste me chalne ka aur khud ko protect karne ka ability usme hai .aur wase v usse agar koi galti se utha v lega to wapas wohi rakh dega jaha se uthaya tha ...
(baap ho to aisa 🤣

Mrs. mukherjee :anand ...ye ap kaisi baat kar rahe hai .ek to apki beti kho gayi hai aur ap hai ki uska burayiya nikal rahi hai ...😭

Mr. mukherjee (with irritating tone):tum to aise keh rahe ho jaise tumari beti kidnap ho gayi ...khud apni maarji se bhaagi hai !!!

Mrs. mukherjee :oh jab wo achsa kam kare to wo tumari beti aur jab koi galti kare to wo meri beti !!!!

Now riya's parents started arguing on "meri beti ,tumari beti topic"

in the mean time shree (riya's cousin)came runningly calling "uncle ...uncle"

mr. & Mrs. Mukherjee turned 2 him

Mr.Mukherjee :kya baat hai shree ???😕

Shree(breathing heavily):uncle...wo jis ladk ka saath riya ki saadi tai hue thi wo v bhaag gaya ...

Mr. & Mrs. Mukherjee (shockingly):what !!!😲

scene shift 2 ariya

Arjun & riya doing their chit chat

Suddenly riya's gaze fell on ticket checker who was checking tickets 4m passenger .

she bcom tensed .Arjun noticed that .

Arjun :what happen riya ???

Riya :arjun ...i m in big trouble .

Arjun :kyu kya hua ???

Riya :arjun ...jaldi jaldi me ticket katna vul gayi .mere pas avi ticket nehi hai .ab mein kya karu ???😕

Arjun :to isme tension lene wali kya baat hai .unse kehkar ek ticket avi kaat lo .

Riya :ye possible nehi hai ...

Arjun :kyu ab kya hua ???

Riya :wo ...jab mein train k piche bhaag raha tha to meri purse kahi gir gayi hai ...ab mere pas ek futi kodi v nehi hai

Arjun thinking about something ...

Arjun :ok .just relax .mere pas ek plan hai .

Then he whispered something in her ear & after listening she giggled

The ticket checker came 2 them

TC :apna ticket dikhayiye ...

Arjun :sir ...we have a problem .actually hum dono aj hi saadi ki hai bhaag kar .humari parents humari saadi k kilaaf the .mandir se saadi karkar direct yaha chali ayi .par humere piche meri dad ki paltu gunde padi thi .hume marne k liye .kisi v tarah hamari jaan chutakar ayi hu .hum jaldi jaldi me ticket nehi buy kar payi .plz try 2 understand ...

Riya :apko nehi pata hum kis tarik se bhage hai ...un gunde k pas to talwar v thi ...

Arjun glared 2 riya giving warning "don't do over acting"!!!😡

TC feel sympathy 4 them .he have tears in his eyes

TC :tum dono ki pyaar dekhkar mujhe apna din yaad aa gayi .mein aur mere biwi v bhaag kar saadi ki thi ...

Arjun & riya both gave him a "tooth paste smile"

Arjun :to sir ...mein apko double money deti hu ap bas hum dono ko do ticket de dijiye ...

TC:nehi nehi beta iski koi jarurat nehi hai .aj tum dono ki saadi hue hai .ye meri taraf se ek toufa hi samaj lo ...😊

Arjun & riya again gave him a "toothpaste smile" & thaned him

After leaving the TC ...

Riya :arjun ...tumare pas to ek ticket tha ...😕 to tumne hunm dono ka baat kyu ki???

Arjun :riya ...kisine sahi kaha tha ...ladkiyo k pas dimag nehi hoti ...
Agar mein apna ticket dikha deti to unhe shakh ho jata ki hum alag alag se aye hai ...

Riya :arre ha ...😊

Arjun (smirked):ab kuch samjhe ya phir se samjhau ...😉

Riya nodded her head happily 😊

PRECAP :ARIYA REACHED AT PUNCHGADI ...WHAT WILL B THE NXT ????? 2 KNOW ABOUT IT U HAVE 2 STAY CONNECTED WITH THIS STORY😉

guyz ,first part done .plz if possible hit the like button & leave ur valuable (thoda sa lamba wala) comments.thank u...

Edited by hunny1993 - 12 years ago

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abhya/akanksha

@Aks13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Super Duper Amazing update dr...!!!!!

Loved Ariya chit-chut...that was a bit funny...!!!! Does she really have a BF or was she just lieing...????

Raam milayi jodi hai...ek ko lv marriage sey problem hai tou dusro ko marriage sey...!!!!

It seemed like a start of their friendship...!!!! I knw u will make thm fall in love soon...!!!!

Ariya's parents convo was fab yaar...!!!!

Wow Karan is Arjun's yonger bro...that's cool...!!!!

I knw it that Arjun n Riya were going to married to eachother...!!!

Arjun's plan was superb...Loved how thy fooled that TC...!!!!

Thanks for pm dr...!!! Continue soon...!!

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unisha

@unishaz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

interesting.. loved it.. continue soon.. thanks for pm..

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nehaghai

@nehaghai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Super awesome update
Ariya meeting fully filmy way
Please continue soon

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Amazing part
loved it
So ariya ko nahi pata ki unki shadi ek dusre ke sath hone wali thi😆
Dono ne TC ko kya ullu banaya 😉
waiting for the next part
continue soon

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archi

@hunny1993

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: skrafty
Amazing part
loved it
So ariya ko nahi pata ki unki shadi ek dusre ke sath hone wali thi😆
Dono ne TC ko kya ullu banaya 😉
waiting for the next part
continue soon

😆

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Superb update.
Loved it.
Ariya bhag gaye from their own weddings...
Kya ullu banaya uss TC ko ki TC ke aakho mein aansu agaye.
Supppara...
Continue sooonish... :)
thanks for the update.
Precap is interesting.