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Posted: 11 years ago
part 5 :

vanshika takes jeevika to their house

first day of marriage and in viren's house :

all the people get into the house ... n have their seat !

jeevika was watching their interiors and was very much in love with the colour combinations and designs, especially the furniture n paintings !!
she liked those vintage pieces in display and an old camera attracted her attention ...then the chandelier ... soo huge and amazing !!

jeevika: who designed this house ?

vanshika: viren ... everything is his thought

jeevika: is he an interior designer ?😲

vanshika: no, he is an industrialist n we have digital tiles industry, and chandelier making one !

jeevika: nice ... i liked this designing a lott ... and that camera ?

viren: i like it a lott ... it was of my grandad which he bought during his teenage !!

vanshika and jeevika were surprised at his answer, as they didn't expect him to reply

vanshika: he's like that only ... he talks only when he likes the topic !

jeevika: oh ... even i liked that camera ... i like collecting vintage items

vanshika: see ... how nice it is ... both your tastes are same ... i knew that you both will make a lovely made-for-eachother couple !! 😳😉

viren: mom?😲😡

jeevika: a typical individual !!😆

vanshika: u know jeevika, if you were hindu, your first day in this house would be celebrated very happily ... !!

varun: so what if she's a christian vanshika ? we should celebrate now also ... do something vanshika !!

vanshika: that is what i'm saying ... if she was hindu, then she would have done many things for us on this special day,
but since she's christian, i should do the specials and she will eat 😆!!

varun: religion doesn't matter vanshika ... why are you always behind religion ? how can you say that she doen't know how to cook ?

vanshika: just wait and watch varun 😎
to jeevika ... jeevika, do you know how to cook ?

jeevika: no aunty, we have a chef !!😆

vanshika: what if she is on leave ?

jeevika: we'll go to hotel or get a parcel 😉

vanshika: washing clothes ?

jeevika: we have laundry

vanshika: if they are on leave ?

jeevika: we have washing machine

vanshika: cleaning house ?

jeevika: we have a housemaid n if she is on leave, ... we have vacuum cleaner aunty !! 🤡

vanshika: who does all these things like using washing machine to wash, vacuum cleaner ?

jeevika: another maid who wil be there !!😆

vanshika: did you hear varun ? this is what i was telling you ... a hindu DIL will know everything before hand as her mother would teach her !!

to jeevika ... tell me ... what do you know !!

jeevika: i know a lot of things aunty

vanshika: like ?

jeevika: reading, writing, playing games, talking, swimming, skating, painting, dancing, n singing !! 😉

vanshika: what does your mom do in your house ? 😕

jeevika: she wakes up at 8 am, we all have breakfast together, then she'll go to help my dad in office, she comes home, have her dinner and sleeps

vanshika: very good !

varun was shocked 😲 and viren was laughing at her answers 🤣!!

jeevika: but why are you asking like this ?😕

vanshika: nothing jeevika ... i'll go and cook something

jeevika: u will cook ... don't you have a cook aunty ?😲

vanshika: no, i dont' like someone else cooking for my family !

jeevika: so, u don't have any maid in the house ?😲

vanshika: we do have maids for all other works except cooking ... but we don't have as many maids as you have !! 😉

varun: this is what happens if you ask questions like this !!

to jeevika ... jeevika, dont' think about her questions as it's completely fine even if you don't know anything ... !!
we have maids and they'll do the work, u just call them whenever you want something

vanshika just wants her DIL to know every work so that you need not depend on anyone else ... and you should be capable of handling your life even in difficult times ... that's all !

jeevika: ohk !! aunty, can you show me my room, so that i would get fresh and go to my house to bring my stuff

vanshika takes her upsatirs to viren's room ... which was neatly arranged n has aenna's pics all over the walls 😳!!

jeevika: but this is viren's room , i guess !!

vanshika: yeah ... it's his room n u should share this room with him as you are his wife😳

viren: no mom, give her that guest room ... please !!

jeevika: yeah aunty, give me the guest room as i won't be comfortable sharing my room with him 😡

vanshika: you are not our guest and you both are not strangers at all ... you should share this room only 👏

jeevika: but all these aenna's pics ?

vanshika: i'll remove them in a minute, wait !

as she was about to tear off aenna's pics, viren hold's her hand ...

viren: no mom !! please don't ... i still love hr a lot and can't give her place to somebody whom i don't even know properly !! 😭
and mom, just by changing the photos on wall doesn't change the photo in my heart ... it was and will always be the same person !!

vanshika: don't try to become smart and threaten jeevika so that she'll listen to watever you say ! ... you better try some other way viren

to jeevika ... don't feel bad of his words as he really means that ... we need not change photos on wall, as his heart already has a photo of you and that it'll never change 😉

jeevika: smiles n thinks to herself " why is she feeling that i'll feel bad at his words ? why is she scolding her own son for me ? 😲"

both viren and vanshika leave the room ...

vanshika: varun, what do you think we should do now ?

varun: why are you asking me ...you always do whatever you want even if i say something, so better not to say anything !!😆

vanshika: you are right !

varun: why are you acting soo mean vanshika ? ... and give viren some respect infront of her atleast ... he must be feeling very bad !!

vanshika: coz i don't want them to divorce !!

varun: what ? 😲

u'll know what all vanshika knows about viren, jeevika and aenna in next part !! scroll down for readers note !!

i want long comments for my long update and that too a day advanced update !

********** love ... reyna

This story will be updated every Thursday !!

Lemme know if u liked it !!

Buddy me for my pm's !!

I'll only pm to those who'll comment ... !!

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Edited by reyna. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
readers note: please dont' skip reading this !

1. please don't thank me for pm's ... i'm sending it for you to read so, please don't thank me for pm's !!

2. please gimme a bit long comments , as i love to read long comments ... and i would appreciate it a lott !!

3. please atleast let me know which part you liked in the story , rather than just telling i liked it !!

i'm really sry if you are hurt, but i want to read ur proper responses !!
very few people are actually doing it, so, i thought to tell you ...don't feel offended !!

i'm editing my buddy list, so ... those who want pm's should comment else they'll not get my pm's from next part !

sry for being harsh, but i'm sending pm's to 330 people and i get such a less response that i'm really not enjoying !
so, better to send pm's only to those interested !!

love ...reyna


Edited by reyna. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
reading the story iam laughing now also i cant control i liked how jeevika answer about vanshika question she know so many things vanshika and varun expression omg and viren laughing of jeevika answer awesome update i cant control myself laughing
you told dont thanks for the pm but i will tell thanks for the pm you will send the pm it is difficult to send all and you will do no so i will thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: arshiasushma

reading the story iam laughing now also i cant control i liked how jeevika answer about vanshika question she know so many things vanshika and varun expression omg and viren laughing of jeevika answer awesome update i cant control myself laughing
you told dont thanks for the pm but i will tell thanks for the pm you will send the pm it is difficult to send all and you will do no so i will thanks


Thank you !!
Yeah... I was laughing while writing😉

Yeah, I'm taking effort to pm you n I wasn't you to thank me by it comment n that's enough !
Thanks a lot
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was an amazing update.
I loved every bit of it...
jeevika answers just made me laugh like crazy.
rinni from where u get all this ideas. ????
nd viren nd jeevika have to stay together... awww... good fr us!!!.
vanshika nd varun r amazing parents.
phenomenal part.. .
I m waiting how u will put them together.
nd tht annea I wanna dlt her frm viren's life .. hahaha
I know u will do tht. ...
precap Luks thrilling ...
waiting fr it. .
do cont soon!!! :)
give me some tips to write good stories like u.
love u ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: millee18

it was an amazing update.
I loved every bit of it...
jeevika answers just made me laugh like crazy.
rinni from where u get all this ideas. ????
nd viren nd jeevika have to stay together... awww... good fr us!!!.
vanshika nd varun r amazing parents.
phenomenal part.. .
I m waiting how u will put them together.
nd tht annea I wanna dlt her frm viren's life .. hahaha
I know u will do tht. ...
precap Luks thrilling ...
waiting fr it. .
do cont soon!!! :)
give me some tips to write good stories like u.
love u ❤️


Thanks milky !!
From my crazy head !!😉
Yup !
I would love them
Thank you !
Me ... N tips 😲
U must be kidding right !!
Love ...reyna
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Posted: 11 years ago
ohhh myy goshhh oh my goshhh !!!! some 1 kill me ryt noww !!!! REYNAAA this storyyy is just beyonddd hilarious+ awesomeee!!!
i swear i read the story frm the beginning n i was in luv with ittt!!

coming 2 the update !!
it was hilariousss i was literally laughing at my jeevika's answerss !!! buhaahhaha
jeevika, do you know how to cook ?

jeevika: no aunty, we have a chef !!😆

vanshika: what if she is on leave ?

jeevika: we'll go to hotel or get a parcel 😉

vanshika: washing clothes ?

jeevika: we have laundry

vanshika: if they are on leave ?

jeevika: we have washing machine

vanshika: cleaning house ?

jeevika: we have a housemaid n if she is on leave, ... we have vacuum cleaner aunty !! 🤡

vanshika: who does all these things like using washing machine to wash, vacuum cleaner ?

jeevika: another maid who wil be there !!😆

vanshika: did you hear varun ? this is what i was telling you ... a hindu DIL will know everything before hand as her mother would teach her !!

to jeevika ... tell me ... what do you know !!

jeevika: i know a lot of things aunty

vanshika: like ?

jeevika: reading, writing, playing games, talking, swimming, skating, painting, dancing, n singing !! 😉

vanshika: what does your mom do in your house ? 😕

jeevika: she wakes up at 8 am, we all have breakfast together, then she'll go to help my dad in office, she comes home, have her dinner and sleeps

vanshika: very good !

this scene literally cracked me up !!
hahahhahaha i cant help bt laugh n i swear i m loving this storyy from the deeeppp bottom of my heart !! hahahahahaha damn dammnnn excitedd 2 read the nxt part wish i could read all new parts one by one !! n u bitch listen carefullyyy !!! i want the update 2morrowww itselfff or elsee or elseee i will forget u r my frnd 🤣🤣🤣

but dude u know wat i regret y i havent read this story first bt nowww i wont regret !!!! coZ i m gonna read it alll over again n again n laugh hahahhhahhaha u see coz i luv laughing n ROFLing THNXXX REY for giving me a story where i can laugh whenever i want n tht too its virika story yayyy !!!!

I WANT 2 READ THE NXT PART SOOONN !!! U GET IT !!
Edited by JennyKryan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: JennyKryan

ohhh myy goshhh oh my goshhh !!!! ... some 1 kill me ryt noww !!!! Did i ?😉.REYNAAA this storyyy is just beyonddd hilarious+ awesomeee!!! Thank you

i swear i read the story frm the beginning n i was in luv with ittt!! Aww ...😳

coming 2 the update !!
it was hilariousss i was literally laughing at my jeevika's answerss !!! buhaahhaha even I was laughing while updating 😆
jeevika, do you know how to cook ?

jeevika: no aunty, we have a chef !!😆

vanshika: what if she is on leave ?

jeevika: we'll go to hotel or get a parcel 😉

vanshika: washing clothes ?

jeevika: we have laundry

vanshika: if they are on leave ?

jeevika: we have washing machine

vanshika: cleaning house ?

jeevika: we have a housemaid n if she is on leave, ... we have vacuum cleaner aunty !! 🤡

vanshika: who does all these things like using washing machine to wash, vacuum cleaner ?

jeevika: another maid who wil be there !!😆

vanshika: did you hear varun ? this is what i was telling you ... a hindu DIL will know everything before hand as her mother would teach her !!

to jeevika ... tell me ... what do you know !!

jeevika: i know a lot of things aunty

vanshika: like ?

jeevika: reading, writing, playing games, talking, swimming, skating, painting, dancing, n singing !! 😉

vanshika: what does your mom do in your house ? 😕

jeevika: she wakes up at 8 am, we all have breakfast together, then she'll go to help my dad in office, she comes home, have her dinner and sleeps

vanshika: very good !

this scene literally cracked me up !!
hahahhahaha i cant help bt laugh n i swear i m loving this storyy from the deeeppp bottom of my heart !! hahahahahaha damn dammnnn excitedd 2 read the nxt part wish i could read all new parts one by one !! ...then u must have read after i completed the story😉n u bitch listen carefullyyy !!! i want the update 2morrowww itselfff or elsee or elseee i will forget u r my frnd 🤣🤣🤣 ...then, u r sure to forget, as I can update only on next Thursday ... I'm writing my exams, updating best friends n preparing ...very busy😉😆

but dude u know wat i regret y i havent read this story first bt nowww i wont regret !!!! coZ i m gonna read it alll over again n again n laugh hahahhhahhaha u see coz i luv laughing n ROFLing THNXXX REY for giving me a story where i can laugh whenever i want n tht too its virika story yayyy !!!!

I WANT 2 READ THE NXT PART SOOONN !!! U GET IT !!
I got it ... N u'll get it on next Thursday😆


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Posted: 11 years ago

😭🥺
WHAT NEXT THURSDAYYY !! NOOO !!!
N NO SHAME AT ALL HW CAN U KILL UR BESTIE REY ???
N i want the update 2morrowww !!! NAAA I WONT LISTEN 2 U I WANT IT 2MORROW !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: JennyKryan


😭🥺
WHAT NEXT THURSDAYYY !! NOOO !!!
N NO SHAME AT ALL HW CAN U KILL UR BESTIE REY ???
N i want the update 2morrowww !!! NAAA I WONT LISTEN 2 U I WANT IT 2MORROW !!!


But I'll be in school writing exam n will come late !!
Then I've to again prepare for day after Tom !!
So, no update 😆

Please stay alive until I post next part !
Then u'll not think to die by me😉

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