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praj.shrish

@praj.shrish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Eccentrica, Divyahet, chavvi16 , ragvir.fan, Cute6 , ipkkndeternity

All of you. Thank you so much for your support. 😃

And I will be back sooner with next story

Edited by praj.shrish - 12 years ago

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javeria

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

It's alright take your time and come back as a fresh and energetic writer.

Waiting to read your next story. 😃

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praj.shrish

@praj.shrish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
It's alright take your time and come back as a fresh and energetic writer.
Waiting to read your next story. 😃

Thank yo so much. 😛

And I will be showing up sooner than you expect 😊

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praj.shrish

@praj.shrish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#134

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Hetal

@Divyahet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#135

Being a nice and naughty reader..😆😳
here I am the first one to comment..😳

THANKS A LOT FOR CHOOSING THIS SONG.
my all time favorite so a tight 🤗

coming to the update ..
well as usual, very well written..⭐️⭐️⭐️
as I said I love this song..
and you did definitely a wonderful job .⭐️

I loved the way Khushi tried to get her Khadoos LG back,
I loved the way she planned to bring the real Arnav...
and he understood why she was behaving like this...
and finally they are happy...

lots of Love dear,
take care.😊

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javeria

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

Thank you for continuing.

This is superb and the story fit the song. 👏

You brilliantly presented Shyam fiasco in a very unique way and it's consequences suffered by the victims.

The incident hurt Arnav and changed him a lot. He took way too seriously. Arnav was living a life of guilt, guilt of not trusting his wife and taking her for granted.

Whatever Khushi did to take him out of his misery was the best way she could thought of. Arnav taste his own medicine.

Nobody should change but they can try to grow up maintaining their true self.

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#137

and she is back woohoo

hmmm khushi had to do this

otherwise that man would never stop changing

look there is nothing worn with changing yourself

but do it because you want to

not under guilt man

that will just cause more harm than good

agreed his temper is bit too much

whose isnt man

but that dont mean you close yourself off completely

how is she supposed to get you man if you do that

when she did the same he couldnt take it

now you understand why she did what she did

hmmm the song was so appropriate man

just what this OS needed for sure

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#138

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I'll unres once you do the same 😈

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Sajinabi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#139

Praj bowing down to u 4d exquisite masterpiece of ur

. Loved how u protraited a healthy relationship were immaturity or just falling in love is not neccessary, but to set ur heart and mind to be with ur partner in all ups and downs of life Love Forever

Lack of communication, hiding, and trust these three things r d fact dat makes a relationship a sinking boat and dats wat has made a beautiful love life of Arshi a curtain in der life Crying 1

. It was really sad to see Khushi struggle to bring der marriage back to normal which was lost all beacoz of der lack of understanding and trust in each other Grrr

. No matter how much ASR goes into his Shell just becoz of one incident but our KKGSR knows to be back in life and learn a lesson from it . Was really happy to see dis positiveness from one side, which is very much required other wise can't predict d longivity of der relationship Shocked

WOW loved Khushi's technique of brinking back her old Arnavji back to life once he was with all her craziness 😆 . After many days; the star filled sky, the cool breeze and calm water of the pool had again witnessed this sweet tinkling laughter of the couple deeply in love Kisses

. Finally Khushi succeeded in bringing back her old Arnavji back into der beautiful relationship which was lost once and let khushi make sure to keep Arnav's tinkling laughter 4ever Couples