VIRIKA: ON MY WEDDING DAY.... MARRIED A STRANGER INSTEAD OF MY BRIDE ! - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: AmmuKryan

OOps Sry i'm late dear!!!

But it's really hilarious
I ❤️ jeevika's attitude!!!
Pls i wanna big update asap dear!!!!!


It's OK dear!!
Thanks !
Even I love it
I'll try, but big update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 4:


vanshika: is this a way to talk with your wife ? i know ... but this is not a way to romance also !! 😉😆

to jeevika ... don't mind his words jeevika, he cant' see you laughing because he can't control himself ... as you look like an angle while laughing

hearing this ... jeevika burst into laughter ... 🤣

viren: mom ? 😲😡

Jeevika calls her dad from his phone ... he lifts it

jeevika: dad, just listen me, I got married n viren is my husband ... I'm not at all joking n u can see us at our wedding venue ...😆

Aditya: r u serious ?

Jeevika: how can I joke now, dad ?

Aditya: then what did you do ? ... you made a joke of us !! ... ok, I'm coming there with your mother ... Don't you go away from there also !! 😆

Jeevika: ok dad, bye !

Viren: is it the same number you gave me ? 😲

Jeevika: yeah ! at that time he was a bit serious on me n now, he's coming here

Aditya comes with jeevika's mom

Aditya: how can u do this to us jeevika ... We were waiting there to get u married n u got urself married ? didn't you feel the need to atleast inform us ?

Jeevika: dad, if I had known ... then I would have definitely told you 😆

Aditya: what does that mean ?

Jeevika: actually dad, I got to know that stella and rahul loved eachother at that moment, and I didn't get any other thought, so ... I ran, expecting that they both will get married ... They got married no ? ... No problems right ?

Aditya: are you mad jeevika ? if you got to know about it, then you should have informed us ... So many things happened and finally they both got married !! ... What if their parents don't approve of their wedding ?

why do you always take your own decisions without concerning about us or atleast even without informing us ?

jeevika: u know me dad ! ... Leave it ... Happy that I'm married now ?

jeevika's mom: u know, we lost our family prestige just because of you ... N who is this guy ?

jeevika: you are not happy that i married ? ... i thought you would be ... and this guy is your son-in-law and my husband


aditya: we never forced you right ? ... If you wanted to marry this guy, then why did you accept for that marriage ?

viren: excuse me, my name is viren


jeevika: who asked you now ? 😆


viren: you and your parents were constantly referring me as guy, so ... i thought that ... it would be better to get introduced myself ! 😡


jeevika: so, what do you want to tell them ... ? that you are not a guy ? and we should not refer you as a guy ? 😉


aditya: what ?😲


viren: uncle, did you listen ... how she speaks !! didn't you teach her some manners ?


aditya: she was like this from childhood as we were always pampering her, but is that true ? 😕


viren: yeah ... it's true !


aditya: what ? you are not a guy ? 😆


viren: no ... !!


vanshika: no ? 😲


viren: no mom, not like that !! ... i'm a guy ... i was telling ... it's true that she was over pampered ... and you all are thinking like this !!

how can you also think like that mom ?


vanshika: i don't believe in this generation ... and how can i know about that viren ? 😳


manvi was laughing continuously ... 🤣


viren: mom ? 😲😡


jeevika: that's why ... don't try to mess with me in future ... !!


aditya: jeevika, stop it !! you are not going to talk with him like that ... he is your husband and you must obey him


vanshika: no problem jeevika, he'll only obey you once you both will get settled ... i know, he is like that only !! 😆


viren: mom ?😲😡


jeevika: we got married accidentally dad ! ... It's his and his girlfriends wedding , I came running into this church when I saw abc uncle right in front of me !

here, they thought I was the bride, before I could clear the confusion ... Uncle also came into this church. So, I stood quite .

then this guy forced me to say " yes " as the father was asking ... n I had to compel !!

viren: I didn't force you ... I mean, I thought it was aenna n so, I told like that

aditya: whatever has happened ... has happened !! so, we should continue with next steps, right !

viren's dad, vanshika, aditya and jeevika's mom talk for a while

aditya: since you both want to live together, we don't have any objection as after all you are married

jeevika: but dad, I don't want to live in with him until complete my studies and he is also fine with that

aditya: u know very well that ... I know you better than you know urself, so ... Nothing like that !! 😉... you are going to live in with him in his house and we are not taking you back with us !

viren: what ? ... No ways ... I'm not going to live in with your daughter uncle ! ... Please take her with you 😭

vanshika: you shut up !

viren: mom ? 😲😡 I'm married now ... Atleast now please don't scold me in public !

vanshika: nobody will mind because you are afterall my son and I have full rights to scold you ... N if anyone has to object it, then it must be only jeevika as she is your wife ! 😃

jeevika: no aunty !! ... U carry on with your scoldings ... I really don't mind ! 😉

vanshika: so sweet of you jeevika !!


viren gives jeevika a death glare ... N jeevika smiles in reply " you cannot do anything except looking at me angrily 😆"

jeevika: dad please ... Mom ... please tell dad that I'll come back home !

jeevika's mom: when you have such a lovely MIL, you better stay there only jeevika !

aditya: we are leaving as you will try and melt us to take you back ! love you and we will meet you frequently dear ... bye !

jeevika's eyes were becoming moist at the sight of her parents leaving her alone ... And soon ... Tears made their way out her eyes ... 😭

She just touched her cheek to notice something strange ... A water droplet ... She just heard and saw that tears exist but today, she felt them !!

She was brought up with all the luxuries of life and so much of love that ... Today, she feared of loosing them, this strangest feeling which she never experienced was heart wrenching !!

She felt a comforting hand and then she immediately turned and hugged that person ... ( u all might have guessed as to who it was ... Viren ? ... No ... Absolutely wrong ... hihihi )

It was Vanshika. She consoled her n took her to their house

Just expect a twist in this tale from now and in next part itself !!

u can make guesses 😉

I know it was boring, but it is important to present the reasons for jeevika's stay and her behavior traits

********** love ... reyna

This story will be updated every Thursday !!

Lemme know if u liked it !!

Buddy me for my pm's !!

I'll only pm to those who'll comment ... !!

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Edited by reyna. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
awesome update how jeevika parents he is a boy or not from childhood jeevika is pampering and you tell me one thing jeevika is hindu or chirstian thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
awesome superb how viren is my name is viren i am not a guy and all thing something else and jeevika cried even her plan failed and her parent are living her she is a poor girl thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: sushmavirika

awesome update how jeevika parents he is a boy or not from childhood jeevika is pampering and you tell me one thing jeevika is hindu or chirstian thanks for the pm


thanks !!
u'll know abt that in further parts n it's a secret !!😉
please don't thank me for pm's !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: arshiasushma

awesome superb how viren is my name is viren i am not a guy and all thing something else and jeevika cried even her plan failed and her parent are living her she is a poor girl thanks for the pm


thank you !
yeah ... but shez not a poor girl !
u'll know whos poor in next parts 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks sweety !
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsame update
thanks for d pm
continue soonnn

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