DMG # 5 |*VIRMAN FF*| Chap 69 pg 138 (3 jan) - Page 64

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweet_angle12


No problem if it is short... Just update😊



Ok will update 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: naina927

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Thanks dear...
WAITING. .
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Posted: 11 years ago

~~~ i know u guys will love it... but its SHORT.. 😳 Next part will be updated tomorrow i think... ~~~
chapter 65 (i)
~~ pyaar toh rahega...
manvi opened her eyes and saw herself wrapped in virat's arm. this wasnt something new for her... everyday she made her way into his arms and wake up seeing his ever handsome face but today... today it wasnt giving her that joy... manvi got out of his embrace trying not to disturb him but in this process, she did wake him up. manvi wondered how she ended up sleeping in his arms and virat looked at her trying to read whats going on in her mind.

manvi saw virat looking at her from the corner of her eye and hurriedly got up from the bed.
virat : manvi...
manvi : i am sorry...
virat : sorry...?? for exactly what...???
manvi : for troubling you...

this irritated virat like hell. he loves her... why is it soo difficult for that pinhead to understand, he thought.
virat : what is wrong with you...???
manvi : i am perfectly fine... thank you...
virat : dont irritate me manvi... dont... i warn you...

manvi ignored virat's word and decided to move out quietly without creating a scene. but before she could do that, virat held her hand and pulled her backwards towards him. manvi lost her balance and they both landed on the bed with manvi on the top.
breaths fanning on each other's face, eyes locked, heartbeats racing and bodies wrapped were making the situation more awkward and difficult. virat and manvi were losing their senses as the proximity was burning them. manvi was drowning in his eyes and she dont know when she was turned around and now virat held her hands beside her head.
manvi and virat were both at loss of words and though they wanted to say many things but nothing came out of their mouths. they were tongue tied and eyes locked.
manvi : i love you...
manvi unknowingly whispered which broke their trance.
virat : i know... i love you too...
manvi : no you dont... leave me...
virat : dont get into sherni avatar... listen to me for just once...
manvi : i dont want to... mujhe nahi bezatti karani fir se...

manvi struggled to free her hand and virat pinned it more strongly to the mattress.
manvi : leave me...
virat : not in your dreams...
manvi : haha... dont worry then i will leave you...
virat : dare you do it...
manvi : mujhe challenge mat karo... aur karna hai toh pehle mera haath chodo...
virat : nahi... i wont... listen to me carefully... i love you mrs. manvi virat singh vadera...
manvi turned her head to the other side and virat lovingly cupped her cheek and made her look into his eyes...
virat : and i wouldnt let you go... aur haan... take care of yourself... kal raat ko -
manvi : kal raat ko kya...??? (nervously)
virat : kal raat ko you were sleeping on the terrace. it was so freezing cold outside... take care of my baby...
manvi : my baby..?? (holding his shirt in her fists and pulling him close) what do you mean by your baby...??
virat : i meant exactly the same thing you meant that day... oops that night...
manvi : its our...
virat : i know that... good that you admitted it yourself...

virat freed his shirt from her hands and got up leaving manvi stunned. did he bluff her so easily...???
manvi : huh... i hate you vadera... (getting up and saying frustatedly)
virat : i hate you too mrs. vadera...
manvi made a face and went to the bathroom to get freshen up. virat then giggled to get a glimpse of the real manvi... the real sherni... the girl he loved.

" ahhh... "

virat almost jumped on listening manvi shout from the bathroom. he took steps towards the bathroom and in the meanwhile manvi came out running and collided into him and hugged him tightly making him stumble a little.
virat : manvi... what happened...???
manvi : chipkali... there is a lizard in there... wo mujhe ghoor rahi thi...
virat rubbed manvi's back to soothe her but he literally wasnt able to control his laughter.
manvi broke the hug and looed at virat who was trying to control his laughter.
manvi : you are laughing at me..?? what am i..?? laughing stock...??
virat : no... no ways... (making a straight face) i m not laughing... see...
manvi : lier...
manvi angrily moved out of the room leaving behind virat who rolled on the bed imagining a scene where a tigeress gets scared from a little lizard and starts jumping around.
scene shifts
manvi came to kasak's room and sat on the bed near her. before she could say anything, kasak jumped out of the blanket and shouted which scared manvi again...
manvi : kasu...
kasak : mumma darr gayi... hehe...
manvi : everybody is behind me today... such a bad day...
kasak : no one behind you mumma... see...

manvi looked lovingly at kasak and taking kasak in her arms fell on the bed tickling her.
kasak : haha... mumma... hehe... tickling hehe... nooo...
manvi : will you scare mumma now...???
kasak : hehe... no... hehe..

manvi stopped tickling her and kasak tried stopping her laughter.
manvi : better... cmon get up now...
kasak : baby toh kab ka awake hai... aaj mumma late ho gayi... haha...
manvi : you are becoming very naughty...

virat : like mother like daughter...
kasak : haan i like mumma...
virat : i like her too...

kasak opened her arms on seeing virat and he took her in his arms.
kasak : good morning...
virat : morning my princess... u know today mumma (winking at manvi) -
manvi cut virat in between and told kasak to brush her teeth...
kasak : mumma aaj kya...??
manvi : nothing baby...
virat : mumma today got -
manvi : dare you say a word...

kasak : kya hua..??
manvi : nothing...
virat : no no... you should know mumma ki shehzaadi...
manvi : tum jyada smart mat bano virat...

kasak : papa toh already smart hai... hehe...
virat : haan... bingo...
manvi : argghhh... i hate you...
virat : i love you...

kasak : i love both mumma papa...

manvi showed her tongue to virat and took kasak in her arms.
manvi : mumma loves you too... now come on lets get ready...
kasak : haan hum fir pretty pretty ban jaege... hai na mumma...???
manvi : haan...

manvi took kasak to the bathroom to get her ready.
virat : we will be fine... i know this is the only way... hum dobara aise hi kareeb aaege manvi aur iss baar koi misunderstanding nahi hogi...

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
lol manvi getting scared of a lizard n den kasak
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mika17

awesome update
lol manvi getting scared of a lizard n den kasak



Thank u 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
awieee that was one sweet and naughty and a cutie kind of progressing patch up!! i loved it totally!! amazing naina ji ..tusi great ho! jaldi jaldi next update do na plzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update. Virman moments were cute,funny and romantic. Kasak as usual was a cutipie. I liked it very much. Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Vaarya53

awieee that was one sweet and naughty and a cutie kind of progressing patch up!! i loved it totally!! amazing naina ji ..tusi great ho! jaldi jaldi next update do na plzzz



Thank u vaishali n i promise jaisi hi updt likh lungi, i will post it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing Update..!!!
Virat is now determined to bring Maanvi back and this time with complete trust and love..free of any fear and no MU..which wow for him,..if u remeber i was pissed by his reaction towards his anger that too Rishabs words...dumbo..lekin acha its pay back time..so m liking that she will take her time to let him in this time..!

And then we have our Maanvi expressing her love...well she does theres no doubt but he hurted her in worse possible way...so anger totally justified though m eager till when will she resist as she seem to melt too soon with him around,,,though we dont mind..issi bahane romance hojata hai..some things dont change...😆n hope u know what m referring to...Loved Kasak..she will bond our VirMan back and the progress is very nice...Waiting fir the 2nd part to the Update Naina..!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update
virman are so adorable
cont soon

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