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deepsoul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#381

thank u all for commenting n liking my ff love u all u guys u give such a wonderful support n love I m touched ur each comment precious to me!! 😳

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-.-SUNSHINE-.-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#382

Nice one loved it sweet story😃

I like it very much all chapters written nicely😃

All over all chapters a superbly mindblowing👏😊

You are great writter😳

But now please reveal uday love Manyata please reveal it😛

I think now Manyata can love him and know the truth why he doing all😉

Anyways great story loved manveer😳

Jay was a bitch I hate her😡

I love Manyata and her friends and her close friend (maid)😊

Update soon waiting for eagerly pm me for sure😳

Edited by -.-SUNSHINE-.- - 12 years ago

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deepsoul

@deepsoul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#383

Originally posted by: -.-SUNSHINE-.-
Nice one loved it sweet story😃
I like it very much all chapters written nicely😃
All over all chapters a superbly mindblowing👏😊
You are great writter😳
But now please reveal uday love Manyata please reveal it😛
I think now Manyata can love him and know the truth why he doing all😉
Anyways great story loved manveer😳
Jay was a bitch I hate her😡
I love Manyata and her friends and her close friend (maid)😊
Update soon waiting for eagerly pm me for sure😳

thank Sunshine for ur lovely comment n manveer love blossom slowly so wait till that 😳 n yes I surly pm u!! 😳

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deepsoul

@deepsoul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#384

38 part!!
Rani awake remove herself from him n say" I m sorry!" N leave from there crying yuvraj feel her pain n say" I promise u princess hum sab thik kar de gey or tumhey kabhi nhi Rone degey!" His eyes fill with tear n anger
Next scene
Mohini crying n brijraj saying" kaya hua mohini tum ro kuy rahi ho?"
Mohini say to brijraj " brij maa ki tabiyat bhut karab ho gyi hai doc ne Khan hai ki unki bimari srif London mai ho sakta hai mujhe tho samjh nhi aa raha hai ki itne sare Paiso ka itezam Khan se hoga!" Start crying like a crocodile brijraj say" hum hai na hum karwaege unka ilaz!" Mohini act n say" nhi nhi brij mai phele hi tumse bhut paise le chuki hoo ab or nhi!" Brijraj say" jab phele tum paise leti thi jab tho nhi Khan ab kuy nhi? Kaya tumhe ab mujh pe barosa nhi hai kaya?" Mohini hold his lips n say" fir kabhi esi bat mat karna tum pe tho khud pe Jada barosa hai!" Brijraj say" fir tumhey humse paise lene hoge!" Mohini say" mai tumara esaan kese utaru GI !" N hugs him brijraj say" bas u mera sath de ke!" Mohini give evil smile n say " mai tumra sath kabhi nhi chodu GI!"
Next scene ( morning)
Yuvraj went to same hotel n manger welcome him yuvraj ask him about is that brijraj Singh come with some lady or is he stay here manger say" sorry we can't give u any personal information about any customer this is against hotel rule!" Yuvraj say him with anger" agar tumne nhi batya tho tumara yeh hotel band ho sakta hai or yeh tum ache se Jante ho!" Manger get scared n say" I m sorry sir abhi bata hoo!" He check computer n say" yes sir brijraj Singh yaha kal rat aye they !" Yuvraj say" kis ke sath?" Manger say" koi Lady thi !" Yuvraj shocked n ask" kaya naam hai uska?" Manager say" sorry sir naam tho nhi pata but aksar WO yaha ati hai yaha!!" Yuvraj say" agar WO dubara yaha aye tho tum pechan lo gey use?" Manager say" han sir mai phenchan luga mujhe uska chera achey se yaad hai!" Yuvraj say" good agar WO lady fir yaha aye tho is no per humhey phone kardena or tum use apni bato se ROK ke rakhna samjhe!" Manager say" ho jaeyga sir!"now Yuvraj say in his mind" ab ladki aya ayegi tho pakdi jayegi!"
Next scene( evening)
Rani checking accounts n she found that brijraj taking funds against house from so many years that's why her home come to auction after that she decided to band brijraj from market loans now he don't get any loan

she call to bank CEO n say" hum devgradh ki yuvrani bol rahey hai!" CEO say" ji yuvrani SAA khaye hum kaya sevaa kar saktey hai?" Rani say" hum chatey hai ki aap humarey datta ko koi bhi loan na de !" CEO say" kaya!! yeh aap kaya khey rahi hai yuvrani saa bala hum yuney mana kese kar saktey hai?" Rani say" tho thik hai fir us loan ki jimeydari devgradh nhi chukayega samjhey aap!" Suddenly yuvraj take phone from rani hand n say" uncle brijraj Jo bhi paise le unhey de jaye unki jimadari jaigradh ki hai! Or yeh jaigradh ke yuvraj ka faisla hai!" Rani shocked to hear this n CEO say" thik hai!" N get confused n say" yeh badey logo ki batey bhi ajeeb hoti hai ek kheti hai loan mat do ek kheta hai loan do kher humhey kaya hai humhey tho paiso se matlab hai!" Here rani ask" yeh kaya batmezi hai?" Yuvraj say" princess yeh batemzi nhi hai ise khetey hai hak jamna!" Rani say" mantey hai ki humara ghar tumne karida hai par devgradh ke faisle Lena ka hak abhi humare pass hai!" Yuvraj say" your highness humhey apki chinta hai islye hum apko shai rasta dekha rahey they!" Rani confused n ask" rasta kesa rasta?" Then suddenly Nandani come n say" ab jaigradh devgradh ki yuvrani ko rasta dekhaye gey wow!"

both remain silent for a while after that rani say" kahiye yuvraj aap kuch khey rahey they?" Yuvraj say" your highness yaha bat karna thik nhi hai aap khey tho khai bhar chal ke bat kare?" Nandani interrupt n say" acha plan hai jiji ko date pe le Jane ka!" Yuvraj say" your highness is mai aap hi ka fiada hai!" Rani thought for a while n say" thik hai chaley!" N she leave from there after that Nandani in angry mood yuvraj say" gussa thoda bacha ke rakhey salli saibha agey or bhi moke aye gey gussa karney ke wase achi chaal thi!" N he also leave after that Nandani say in angry mood" chal tho abhi chali Khan hai yuvraj par yeh rani ko kaya ho gaya hai yuvraj key ek bar kheney pe kese maan gyi? Pata karna hoga!"
Next scene (in car )

both going in car rani ask him" hum Khan ja rahey hai?" Yuvraj reply" surprise hai princess!" Rani say"humhey Laga ki tum hum se bat karna chatey ho but tumare dimag mai tho kachra hi hai!" Yuvraj say" kachra nhi princess payar hai!" Rani say with attitude" payar!!!! iska matlab bhi pata hai?" Yuvraj say" humhey tho nhi pata kaya tumhe pata hai payar kaya hai?" Rani say" mai Jada kuch nhi janti kuyki kabhi mhasoos nhi kia hai par jab bhi hoga tho bas kuch alag hi hoga par mai tumhey kuy batu?" Yuvraj say" acha mat bato ohk!" Rani say" par tum yeh bato ki hum Khan ja rahey hai!" Yuvraj was try to say but his call rang yuvraj excuse n take phone call this is hotel manger call he say" sir mai hotel se manger bol raha hoo! Sir WO lady ayi hui hai Maine use ROK ke rakha hai aap jaldi aye mai use Jada der tak nhi ROK sakta hoo!" Yuvraj say" hum bas aa rahey hai rastey mai hai!" Rani ask" kaya hua yuvraj kiska phone tha?" Yuvraj say" princess humhey us lady ka pata lag gaya hai jisne uncle brijraj ko fasya hai!" Rani feel sad n say" tho fida kaya hai I mean WO thodi na humare khene se datta ko chod degi!" Yuvraj say" but us se milke yeh tho pata lagega na ki WO chati kaya hai!" Rani agree with him n didn't say anything
Next scene
Mohini is fighting with manger by saying" mujhe yaha bita ke kuy rakha hai? Manger say" mam bas thodi der ruk jaye!" Mohini say" but kuy Maine tho sare bill clear kar diye hai! Aap mujhe nhi ROK saktey hai I m going!" N try to leave but yuvraj cross her way by saying" rukiye jara humara hisab baki hai !" Mohini confused n say" tumara konsa hisab or tum kon ho?" Yuvraj say" hum kon hai yeh bad mai batey gey phele inse Milo yeh hai devgradh ki yuvrani rani se!" Mohini shocked n say" tho mujhey kisi se nhi milna hai !" N try to leave but rani stop her n say" dekho mujhe bhi tumse Milne ka koi shok nhi hai bas mai yeh Jana chati hoo ki tum kaya chati ho?" Mohini scared n say" tum kaya khey rahi hoo mujhe kuch samjh nhi aa raha ha!i maine kaya kia hai?" rani got angry n say" ek tum itney saalo se humare ghar ko dimak ki tray chat rahi hoo puch rahi ho kaya kia hai ab bato ki tum mere datta ki piche kuy padi ho?"

Mohini say" ohh tho tumhe pata lag gaya hai tho ek bat Jan lo ki mai nhi balki tumare datta mere piche pade ohk!" Rani shocked n she leave yuvraj handel her by saying" princess sambhalo apne aap ko !" Rani crying n say" kese sambhalu meri maa ki jindagi barbad ho gyi hai ab mai unse yeh sab kese khu GI ki?" Yuvraj hugs her n say" trust me princess hum sab thik kar de gey!" Rani push him back n say" kaya thik karogey kese karo gey jab humarey datta hi humari maa ko nhi chate tho kese majboor karo gey une?" Rani crying loud here Nandani listen everything n shocked to hear this here yuvraj saying to trust him n Nandani saying in her evil mind" no so soon yuvraj yeh trust abhi nhi bane ga !"
To continue...

Edited by deepsoul - 12 years ago

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deepsoul

@deepsoul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#385

Originally posted by: Karkit
Nice update

thank u😳

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Panther_panja

@Panther_panja

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Posted: 12 years ago

#386

I knew that yuvraj would handle the situation smartly as he did not got emotionally carried away here rani got emotionally carried away because of which she was taking the wrong step. She felt that her father had cheated her mother this made her angry and frustrated. At this moment Rani needs to be balanced and strong and take a step making her father realize his mistake and make him feel ashamed in his own eyes.

Here Yuvraj little help and his little guidance like this would bring Rani closer to him. Yuraj will come out with the solution which wont break father daughter relationship and Brijraj would realize his mistake and accept it.

Hay deep

Keep it up with the great story line. Keep building up the interesting turns and surprise package in the story this keeps the reader interested in the story. Love to read and eagerly wait for the story. So madam story teller best of luck to you.