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Posted: 11 years ago
😊 i am a big fan of this story ...
couldnt help but fangirl over this story and think that ...
if they creative team had hired you , you would have given us these wonderful scenes...
each scene has arnavs redemption engraved in it ... his helplessness reminds me of the time when khushi got force married to arnav ...where khushi was more helpless caught in the shakles of hatred from arnav , lust from shyam , misunderstanding and disowning fron her parents and sister, misunderstood and looked down upon by her in laws and heart shatteringly alone and broken because her dreams where snatched away ...
here also arnav is caught in the quagmire of finding khushi , feeling guilty for leaving her alone in the mandap , being looked down upon by his whole family because of ditching khushi ,facing every body .every day in apprehension when would anybody accuse him about something which he himself is regretting day in and day out ...it will be like adding fire to oil...putting mud in wound ...for him day in and day out ...
then khushi comes back to his life ... he infact will her back ...
playing against all odds of opposition which the world has imposed before him to not meet khushi ...
and when he meets her she has lost all her memory ...
he has to make her fall in love with him again...
he tries wooing her ...and getting friendly with her ...of course she could not resist his charms and ends up falling for him .though in her mind she presumes she is married to someone else but she knows its a way beyond her entire being to control or restrict or ignore the bond they share...
i think the story took a you turn with her pregnancy ...which halts all plan of arnav to give her time reason khushi is 2 months along...
it accomplished three things intensified arnavs guilt over leaving her in altar,made him realize that he has a baby on way about which khushi has no idea so he has to protect khushi and baby from societies taunts over having baby out of wedlock,
third made him realize how wrong he had been ... he dint write his destiny devi maiyya wrote it...
a more personal thing is that he wanted to shower khushi with his affection while she was pregnant...
i want to know 3 things 1. when will family get to know that khushi is carrying arnis child
2. when will she know...
3. what will be families and khushis reaction to pregnancy
other obvious questions are when will she regain memeory ...
will she love him? hate him...
forgive him ...
what will garima do when she comes to know that khushi will she lash at arnav again or force arnav and khushi to get married or will she separate them
i loved garimas lashing scene at arnii and all others...
how will these changes affect akash payal...
and when will shyam freaking be exposed and will anjali get a closure ...
i hope i just buged you a lot with all these...
ks
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Posted: 11 years ago
Story is getting more and more interestin.
Wonderful update.
Waiting for more...
Thanks for PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
it's getting more and more interesting !! Awesome update love it !! continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kannansangee

😊 i am a big fan of this story ...
couldnt help but fangirl over this story and think that ...
if they creative team had hired you , you would have given us these wonderful scenes...
each scene has arnavs redemption engraved in it ... his helplessness reminds me of the time when khushi got force married to arnav ...where khushi was more helpless caught in the shakles of hatred from arnav , lust from shyam , misunderstanding and disowning fron her parents and sister, misunderstood and looked down upon by her in laws and heart shatteringly alone and broken because her dreams where snatched away ...
here also arnav is caught in the quagmire of finding khushi , feeling guilty for leaving her alone in the mandap , being looked down upon by his whole family because of ditching khushi ,facing every body .every day in apprehension when would anybody accuse him about something which he himself is regretting day in and day out ...it will be like adding fire to oil...putting mud in wound ...for him day in and day out ...
then khushi comes back to his life ... he infact will her back ...
playing against all odds of opposition which the world has imposed before him to not meet khushi ...
and when he meets her she has lost all her memory ...
he has to make her fall in love with him again...
he tries wooing her ...and getting friendly with her ...of course she could not resist his charms and ends up falling for him .though in her mind she presumes she is married to someone else but she knows its a way beyond her entire being to control or restrict or ignore the bond they share...
i think the story took a you turn with her pregnancy ...which halts all plan of arnav to give her time reason khushi is 2 months along...
it accomplished three things intensified arnavs guilt over leaving her in altar,made him realize that he has a baby on way about which khushi has no idea so he has to protect khushi and baby from societies taunts over having baby out of wedlock,
third made him realize how wrong he had been ... he dint write his destiny devi maiyya wrote it...
a more personal thing is that he wanted to shower khushi with his affection while she was pregnant...
i want to know 3 things 1. when will family get to know that khushi is carrying arnis child
2. when will she know...
3. what will be families and khushis reaction to pregnancy
other obvious questions are when will she regain memeory ...
will she love him? hate him...
forgive him ...
what will garima do when she comes to know that khushi will she lash at arnav again or force arnav and khushi to get married or will she separate them
i loved garimas lashing scene at arnii and all others...
how will these changes affect akash payal...
and when will shyam freaking be exposed and will anjali get a closure ...
i hope i just buged you a lot with all these...
ks

Thanksss...no u didnt bug me...u encouraged me...love u for it...🤗love it that ur my stories fangirl heheheh 😳😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
I just realized, I missed reading this one too

It was a cute update. I knew it would be Laxmiji 😆 I am so happy that Arnav didn't doubt Khushi and was actually thinking about her safety. It would have been really bad if he thought that Khushi was hiding Shyam from him. I hope Khushi starts remembering things. Aww she is falling for Arnav once again but knowing that she is already married is stopping her from accepting her feelings. Glad to see Garima back on track. Loved the update :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
For 18, 19, 20...
Beautiful updates dear...
loved how you depicted her family's emotions on facing her for the first time...
loved how Garima has now realized her mistake took a stand for Khushi...

Does other family members know about her pregnancy?...

Eager to read the next...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 20 97165869


Part 21

Arnav walked in the meeting room. The photographer was getting angry...Look Ma'am...If you dont cooperate, I cant finish the job today...

Arnav intervened and said...Whats wrong?

Khushi turned to look at him...She would be leaving him soon, she thought...She didnt know if she could do that...She had just left Dai ji and Sarpan ji and now Arnav ji...

Before the photographer could complain, Khushi said...IM tired...I cant do it anymore...

Arnav looked at her...It was late and they all had been working non stop...She did look tired...Arnav looked at the photographer and said...Pack up, the rest can be done tomorrow...

The photographer...But Arnav only few shots are left...

Arnav came towards Khushi, took her hand and walked out the room and said...Pack up means pack up...Ill let you know when you will be needed again...

Arnav walked in to his office, made her sit on the sofa and said...Im sorry, I should have been careful...

Khushi...No, its just that I got tired...

Thinking...More emotionally and mentally tired than physical...Arnav ordered some food for her...The canteen lady served Khushi food and she smiled at her...Khushi smiled back and was looking at her... Did she know this lady?...She couldnt place where and how...When she left Khushi said...I think I know this lady...I dont know from where or how...But I think I have seen her before...

Arnav smiled and said...Maybe she use to work with you before she moved here ...Dont think too much..Eat and ill be right back...

Khushi finished her food, changed her clothes and walked down to look for that lady...She went and stood near her and asked...Do you know me?

The canteen lady was shocked...she didnt know how to respond...She looked up and saw Arnav behind Khushi...He shakes his head...The lady looked at Khushi and said...I meet so many ppl everyday, how many do I remember???

Khushi stood there staring at her, then smiled and said...Ya, you are right, Im sorry, Its just that I thought...

Arnav called out to her...Khushi...

Khushi turned and walked out the office...She was silent on the way home...Arnav was giving her side glances, she did look worried, he asked...Khushi...Are you ok?

Khushi looked at him and said...Im fine...Just tired...

The minute they reached home, she excused herself and went to her room...She lay down on the bed and closed her eyes...She didnt know what her future held...Wish she could remember something...She was so lost...She wanted something else and life was taking her in the opposite direction...Why was she feeling like this? The thought of leaving Arnav ji was unbearable...She sat up...Khushi this is wrong...She touched her mangal suthar...This is so wrong...Whenever she was close to him, her heart would beat faster and she wanted to be more close to him...And when she was away from him...then...then...No...No...I must avoid him...I must keep my distance...What happened in that room, should never happen again...Or...Or...Or it will be so hard for me to leave him...She punched her pillow, hugged it and finally fell asleep...

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Anjali knocked on Arnavs door and entered...Chotey, is everything ok?

Arnav...I dont know Di, Khushi kind of remembered the canteen lady, but couldnt actually distinguish who she was...I guess that worried her...

Anjali...Hmm...She missed her dinner...Im sure she will be hungry later...I have asked HP to keep some food for her...She came close to Arnav and touched him on his shoulder and said...My dear, dont worry so much...All will be fine...soon and she left...

Arnav sighed and wished all would get normal soon...cause it was driving him crazy...He couldnt sleep...He was wide away when he heard some noise...He checked the clock...It was about 2:00 am...Who could that be...He walked out and saw the light in the kitchen on...He went inside and found Khushi filling a glass of water...She froze when she saw him...

Arnav smiled and asked...Hungry? Op has left some food for you...Go and sit on the dining table, I will heat it and bring it...

Khushi lowered her glass and asked...You will heat the food?

Arnav...Ya, when I come home late, I do that...I cant sleep hungry...

Khushi walked out to the table and waited for him...Her mind still dazed with the days commotion...He came with a tray full of warm goodies and placed it in front of her and sat next to her and said...Finish it all off...

Khushi looked at all the food and said...I cant have all this...

Arnav picked a spoon and said...No problem...Ill help you. And he started eating...

Khushi smiled and dig in...Soon they emptied the whole tray...Arnav was watching her as she ate and he asked...Khushi are you ok? She nodded...

Arnav...You forgot to call Dai ji...

Khushi...Oh God...Its too late to call her now...

Arnav...She called me instead, I told her that you were fine but tired and resting...And will call her first thing in the morning...

Khushi looked at him, smiled and said...Thanks...

Arnav had also called the psychiatrist and had given him full update on Khushi...He told him about the shoot and the canteen lady. He asked if it was helping her or not...cause it had triggered something...its possible she might be remembering something...The doc had told him to take it all calmly and patiently...It can happen in a sec...any second...or, it can take months...All she needed was their moral support... Cause when it happens...She will need all the help they can give her...Arnav had assured the doctor that he would be with her all the way...

After dinner he walked with her to her room and bid her good night, reminded her that she was to pose for the ad and walked on...


Morning...

Arnav takes Khushi back to the office so that pictures can be taken for the ad... Khushi was not at all interested in them. The photographer was really upset... Arnav came and took him to his office and said..What is the matter with you? I told you to take few pics, thats all...I m not going to make an ad from it...Im trying to repeat what happened in her life so it helps her recall her memory...Dont make it so hard for her...Just take few pics...Dammit!!!

The photographer then understood what the whole thing was about...He went back and started clicking without getting upset...But now Khushi was tired of it all...Arnav was carefully watching her and then he saw her sway ...He ran and caught her...

Arnav...Khushi...Are you alright...

Khushi held on to him and said...IM feeling dizzy...

Arnav...Let me call the doctor... Aman...

Khushi...No..I dont need a doctor...I..I...I want to go to Payal's moms house...

Arnav was shocked to hear her say this...Amma's house?

Khushi...Yes please...

Arnav nodded and left her at Gupta's house...said he would come to get her in the evening...She stayed there but was very silent...

Amma tried to talk to her, to find out what was troubling her...

Amma...Khushi...What is wrong?

Khushi remain silent for a long time, then said... Everything is wrong...I dont know who I m...I dont know where my family is...I dont know what to do anymore...

Amma came and hugged her and said...Everything will be fine soon...Dont worry so much...

Khushi looked at her and wanted to tell her so much, but she didnt...She couldnt...She just said... Im scared...If I find my family, what if I dont like them? What if I dont want to go with them, then?

Amma knew exactly what her baby was going through...She hugged her tightly and said..Nothing like that will happen... Think positive and have faith in God...Everything will be fine soon...

Khushi hugged Amma back, it felt so good...After a long time she felt as if she had come back home...It was so soothing and comforting...Amma held on to her for a long time...Patting her back and combing her hair...

Arnav came to get her in the evening...She goes back to Shantivan and goes straight to her room...Arnav takes a tray of food to her and finds her near the pool...She was looking beautiful in that red sari...

Arnav feeds her few morsel and she starts to cry... Arnav then held her in his arms and comforts her...She cries and tells him that she wanted to go back to Dai ji...Arnav tries comforts her and wipes her tears and they both look into each others eyes...Time stops...Raba wa ...Arnav looks at her lips and bends his head to kiss her...

Khushi was too shocked to move... then she felt his lips on her temple...moving towards her cheeks...His hands also moving on her body...She was lost, didnt know what she wanted, for him to stop or to go on... She felt his hand moving towards her stomach...And she pushed him back...hard...

Arnav was shocked...He hadnt meant to go so far...He came close to her to comfort her...She moved back and said...No...NO...you cant...we cant...This is wrong...How did this happen? I cant...its...its...

Arnav...IM sorry Khushi...I didnt mean to go so far...I..

Khushi...How did I let it happen...Its not right...I belong to someone else...And you know that...Then why? She covered her face with her hands and cried out...Oh God...what have I done...

Arnav...Its ok, nothing happened...

Khushi...It shouldnt have happened...How did I allow it...Im not only married...Im also pregnant...and how did I allow this to happen...

Arnav was shocked to hear that and he asked...You know you are pregnant?

Khushi removed her hands from her face and looked at him and said...Of course I know...How could I not know...I have lost my memory, not my brain...What do you mean? How do you know?

Arnav was looking at her, still in a shock...Aaa..Dai ji told me...

Khushi...Dai ji knows?? Of course...the doctor must have told her...Why she didnt tell me?? Dont you dare tell anyone...

Arnav nodded and said...I wont...Cause you were already worried and she didnt want to scare you more...And if you knew, why didnt you tell her...

Khushi very sadly said...IM already burden on her...and then I should tell her that soon there will be a baby...more burden on her...Thats why I came here with you, so I can find my husband...But...

Arnav desperately wanted to take her is his arms...to hug her tight, comfort her and tell her that she was not a burden, she belonged to him and their child was a blessing..not a burden... But he couldnt...Dammit...He needed to talk to the doctor to ask him if he could talk to Khushi and tell her everything...He couldnt see her in so much pain any more...

Khushi was sad and said...I want to go to Amma's place...

Arnav raise his arm to touch her...Khushi moved back and said...Dont touch me...plz dont touch me...

Arnav dropped his arm and said...Its late, I will drop you there in the morning...

Khushi nodded and Arnav left...Both didnt sleep much...

In the morning Arnav drove her to Amma's place and Khushi stayed there till evening...Again she was silent and in deep thoughts... When Arnav came to get her in the evening, Amma told them that they all were going to the Ayurveda camp tomorrow for few days... Khushi says bye to them and is sad...She would surely miss coming here...

Back in Shantivan after dinner, everyone was in their respected rooms. Khushi was in the kitchen getting water and the phone rang... Khushi went to ans it...She said hello a few times...but there was no reply...It seemed as if the caller was in no mood to talk...or was in a shock...at hearing her voice...

Edited by Fazila~ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
aweome update fazzy👏
loads of hugs🤗

khusi was so in thoughts of arnav she is afraid to leave him .😭...well she didnt know that she belongs to him and that is reason why she feel like this...😭

she was tired due to photoshoots...but she remembered canteen lady...and she couldnt remmebr her properly even canteen lady cant tell her...😕

she felt dizzy and wanted to go to amma house.😕..well indeed she find comfort there...and here arnv is tensed about her..she is sad and he is feeling helpless...dont know when their misery will end😭

even in the night after second day of photoshoot arnav find her at pool lost in thoughts.😕..especially she is in pain and cant even tell her everything..😕.but he lost his control...he kissed her..and that is when khusi was on war as on one side she want to be with him but for her he is stranger 😕and she is married to someone..😭

finaly she pushed him in anger and dont want him close to her..😭.and she told that she is married and pregnant...arnav thought how she knew it ...but she is woman ..might lost her memory not brains...👏but she didnt knew that arnav knew this...😕while arnav too told her about him knowing about it as daiji told him.😕..but she consider herself and her baby to be burden..as no one has come for her...poor khusi is feeling soo helpless😭

and arnav couldnt bear it as she is his love wife and thier baby is coming too😭..but he couldnt do anything...sigh...again she wish to go to amma.😕..but now they are leaving for few days and this will make khusi more sad...😭

that call khusi recieved ..i am afraid if that is shyaam??😡 oh no...she is not well and pregnant and shyaam will make hell for her...i hope arnav do something fast😕

pls ud soon😊
Edited by AR_EternalLove - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: yeshyeshna

nice update

was that shyam???

thx...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aesome... and OMG is that shyam on the phone...
looking forward to the next part

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