FF-Pyar Ka Asar-2 ||EPILOGUE on pg no-68||COMPLETED!! - Page 18

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Posted: 11 years ago
well for tha u have to read whats coming next 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Barbie-19

Nice update Kiran ⭐️

I guess Kunal is getting engaged with Shruti
what's wrong with RR..now he's trying to make Sanjana a vamp in Premeer's life 😵
Eager to know what'll happen when Premeer'll meet at Shruti's place
update soon..

thanks tooba and trust me nothing is gonna happen wrong 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tarannum6

Please update soon...



Originally posted by: Hcsee17

plss update kiran next...





just now I'd started writing writing next chap..we'll be updating soon 😃


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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter-40

Then Maan family entered the Mehra mansion...Both Vijay Mehra (Heer's mausaji) and Kamla Mehra (Heer's maasi) was welcoming them.

And it was Heer's turn to greet them...She sulking hugged her maasi...and Kamla smiled seeing the frown on her face...

Kamla:- kya baat hai aj hamri heeriye ka moh phulla hua kyn hai..

Heer looked away in anger..

Teji:- wo isliye didi...Heer ap logo se naraz hai..

Vijay:- arre aisa kyun..???

Balraj:- wo kya haina vijay ki shruti California se wapis agai or kisi ne use bataya nahi..yahan tak ke shruti ne bhi nahi bataya isilye madam gussa hain..

Kamla:- ohh to yeh baat hai..Heer beta wo kya haina..shruti ke wapis ate hi tere mausa ji or muje immediately out of town jana parda kisi kaam se...isilye beta kisi ko batane ka moka hi nahi mila..

Heer:- maasi..chalo thik hai apka yeh reason to samjh mein ata hai..ap log to out of town the...lekin shruti..wo yahin isi sheher mein thi na...usne bhi batana zaruri samjha...

Before kamla could answer her..Shruti came there excitedly

Shruti (hugging teji and):- maasi...meher...kaise hain ap log...

Both meher and teji smiled and hugged her back

Shruti greeted balraj hugged him..

Shruti:- kaise ho ap mausaji..

Balraj:- main thik hun beta tu kaisi hai...

Shruti:- main bhi ek bardiya..

Shruti looked towards heer.and heer looked away from her frowning...Shruti with teasing smile hugged her tightly putting both her arms around her...

Shruti (hugging heer tightly):- Heeerrr..meri jaann...kaisi hai tu...

Instead of hugging her back she was continuously trying herself to get released from her tight grip. Heer looked at kamla

Heer (to kamla):- maasi...apni beti se kaho ke chorde muje...

Shruti teasingly smiled and looked towards teji

Shruti (to teji):- maasi ap apni beti se kehdo..ki main isi nahi chordungi

She said hugging heer more tightly..

Heer (to kamla):- maasi apni beti se kehdo muje isse koi baat nahi karni hai..

Shruti (to teji):- maasi apni beti se kehdo muje issi baat karni hai..

Both Teji and Kamla smiled seeing their daughter's childish act

Balraj, vijay and meher was enjoying the whole scene..

Shruti after giving a smirked kissed on heer's cheeks..

Heer:- eewww..chii...chord muje gandi lardki..

Shruti (teasingly):-kyun...mere kiss karne se problem ho rahi hai...jab prem jiju kiss karte honge tab to bohot acha lagta hoga haina...

Heer started blushing...she looked at shruti..

Heer:- shruti ki bachi..ruk ja batati hun tuje mein..

Heer started chasing her...everyone started laughing...finally goes behind teji in order to save herself...

Teji:- arre chalo ab bas bhi karo tum dono..Heer- Meher ja shruti ke sath upar jao or taiyar hone mein uski madad karo..

Heer and meher nodded went upstairs with shruti..

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In shruti's room

Shruti:- plss Heer I soo sorry yaar...actually india ate hi mein apni nai job mein busy ho gai...isilye tuje call karne ke time hi nahi mila...plsss sorry...

When she didn't get any reply from heer she looked towards meher for some help..meher nodded her head..

Meher:- di..its ok..ab maaf bhi kardo na shruti ko...plss...dobara wo aisi galti nahi karengi...haina shruti di..

Shruti:-han..han

Heer:- pakka...

Shruti:- han baba pakka promise..

Heer smiled:- ok..

Trio hugged each other..

Shruti:- I missed you..

Heer:- I missed u too..ab chal jaldi se taiyaar ho ja..lardke wale tujhe dekhne ate hi honge..

Shruti:- ok...

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Kunal was sitting in the car with his parents...completely nervous..he was continuously looking at his watch..

Kunal's mom:- kunal...itna pareshan hone ki koi zarurat nahi hai beta...abhi tum sirf lardki dekhne ja rahe ho...shadi karne nahi..

Kunal:- wo thik hai mom..lekin yeh Prem kahan reh gaya..usne mujhse wada kiya thaw o mere sath ayaga aj..to phir kahan hai wo...uska phone bhi nahi lag raha hai..

Kunal's dad:- kunal...jab tum bathroom mein the tab ghar pe prem ka phone aya tha...wo keh raha tha ki wo direct lardki walo ke ghar hi pohochega..so don't worry

Kunal:- acha..thik hai//

Kunal (thinks):- hey bhagwan..pls aj time pe Prem ko bhej dena...ek wohi hai jo muje himmat de sakta hai...pls bacha lena muje pls...

When they reached there...Kunal's mom -dad was standing in front of the door..and kunal was standing behind them

Just then the opened and an elderly couple welcome them

Kunal's dad:- app vijay mehra???

Vijay:- ji han...pls come..

They all went inside..vijay and kunal's dad introduced them with their wifies..and when kunal's dad introduced kunal to them..he nervously smiled and took their blessing...just then Teji and Balraj came out their room...

Trio Kunal, Kunal's dad and Kunal mom got surprised seeing Teji and Balraj their...

(Note:- at the starting of this ff I'd already told that kunal's family is also closed to Maan's as Juneja family. They were also family friend)

Kunal's dad:- arre balraj tu and bhabi yahan???

Teji:- Yahi sawal humare mann mein bhi hai bhaisab?? Ap log yahan???

Vijay (confused):- ap log ek dosre ko jante ho??

Kunal's mom:- ji han..kunal ke papa, balraj bhaisab or lalit bhaisab..yeh teeno business partners or bohot hi ache dost hain

Balraj (looking at Kunal):- or humare bache bhi..or vijay or kamla teji ke didi or jijaji hai...darsal yeh log kisi waje se Prem or heer ki sagai mein nahi aapaye the na...to isilye ap logo ko shayad pata nahi hai

Kunal's dad:- oh acha yeh to bohot hi achi baat hai..

Kamla:-han... yeh to bohot hi achi baat hai..hume to pata hi nahi Teji, ki tum log singhania family ke close ho..ab to sach bolun...agar humari shruti ka rishta singhania pariwar mein hota to muje apni beti ki bilkul tension..

All smiled..Kunal got again nervous hearing the word marriage

Teji:- arre aplog kharde kyun hai baitiye na...

All got settle down..and Teji and Kamla went to kitchen to snacks for everyone...

Kunal (nervously thinks):- yeh Prem kahan reh gaya..aya kyun nahi abhi tak...

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Prem was struck in traffic

Prem was coming frustrated second by second..

Prem (murmured):- dammit!!!!

Just then his phone rang..seeing the name flashing on the screen the wide smile spread on his face

Prem (softly):- hey my love!!!

Heer blushed:- Prem..kya kar rahe ho??

Prem:- traffic mein phasa hun..tum batao...pohoch gai shruti ke ghar...leli class uski..

Heer:- han shruti ke ghar par hun..or achi si class li meine sabki yahan pe

Prem chuckled

Prem:- lardke wale agaye???

Heer:- han agaye hain..but mein or meher to shruti ke sath upar hain..to abhi lardke ko dekha nahi hai meine...

Prem (getting little jealous):- tumne lardke ko dekhke kya karna hai???

Heer:- arre kyun??? Mein lardke ko kyun nahi dekhungi???? Muje bhi to dekhna hain ki lardka dekhne mein kaisa hai...smart hai?? Handsome hai?? Ya SEXY hai!!!!!????

Heer joked sensing the jealously in Prem's word

Hearing the word SEXY for another guy from heer's mouth Prem got angry

Prem (angrily):- thik hai..jao..dekho jisse dekhna hai tumhe...jab fursat mil jaye tab phone kar lena muje..

Prem disconnect the call...

Heer:- arre umm hello prem...prem hello..

Heer got shocked at first but then a teasing smile appeared on her face realizing how much possessive her prem is about her..

Just then her massi call her to bring shruti down..

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Precap:- Prem's car entered the campus of Mehra mansion...he got down out of the car, heading towards Mehra mansion he started thinking about heer's words...the last conversation with heer made his mood worst...how could his heer call another guys sexy he angrily thought. Just then hearing the sound girlish giggling Prem stopped in his track...

He went to the garden from where the sound was coming...he got shocked seeing heer and kunal sitting on the bench little close and talking happily and laughing like anything..Seeing the sight Prem started shivering in anger. His eyes got all red...


Waiting for the comments 😳

Edited by kiran_28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was an interesting update <3'
Loved it<3
Looking forward to the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow Nice update buddy
So Prem is jealous haan
And What a precap yaar
And Shruti's teasing was good😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update..
love to see jealous and possessive prem
plz update next soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice update
Too good waiting for next
Plzzz update soon
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Kiran 😃

pg 25 wow awesome.

Shruti and Heer scene was fab. I loved the dialogues and Heer being mad and Shriuti trying to pacify her. They are very close and it's shown the way you describe it.
Kunal is so worried hehe. Poor guy. Wonder y Prem couldn't be with him earlier on.
Oooh cute convo betw PH.
Wow Prem is annoyed cuz Heer's laughing with his friend Kunal.😲
What's gonna do now.😕
You stopped here.😒 I wanna know what prem said to them or if they saw him first.🤔

Ty I loved reading this ch.

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