DMG # 5 |*VIRMAN FF*| Chap 69 pg 138 (3 jan) - Page 58

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: _Virman_

Awww this is so good aww kasak is so adorable continue soon



Thank u fr liking my sweetu kasu
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Posted: 11 years ago
teaser coming up in few minutes...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
loved it
hope everything will be fine between virman
loved vanshika and virat part
plz cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Guys sorry teaser wont b coming up tonight...
Something urgent came up...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice chapter kasak is so cute virat s tryng hard to fix evrythng cntnue sn
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Posted: 11 years ago
CHAPTER 64
~~ kitni mohabbat hai...

manvi wasnt able to sleep and she was looking at her angel and brushing her hair with her fingers. looking at kasak always delighted her and reminded her that she is her responsibilty. kasak is the angel maya gave her and all she has to do is to take care of her and love her, cherish her till her last breath. manvi many times thought that if that day she wasnt emotional broken up, she would have never ran into maya but the very next second, she always believed that that accident was desitined to happen and if it wasnt she, then it would have been any other random person from this huge population of billions.

kasak smiled in her dream and so did manvi. she wondered what was her little kasu dreaming about, what brought this pleasant smile on her beautiful face. this smile of hers... she was staying here just so that this smiles stays on her lips forever and forever. she knows that without her kasak wouldnt be able to live forget smiling. manvi knew if kasak was the breath of air for her, so for kasak she is her universe. she will do anything and everything to protect her angel; especially after what happened that night. she almost died seeing that fear stricken face of her daughter. she saw how kasak supposedly believed that her world ended. she saw how devastated her daughter was when that horrible moment happened which surely left a mark on her mind. it hurted manvi soo badly that it broke her heart. she literally hated virat for the first and the last time in her life. she hated the father of her children not the love of her life. she hated how virat said those hurtful and disgusting words in front of kasak and how he lost his calm before yelling out that shit.

manvi's attention then diverted to the little one growing inside her. her unborn. their unborn. she mentally scolded herself for saying that the baby was only hers. no... no ways... this baby is not only hers but virat's. its theirs... theirs because they made it...

manvi : we love you meri jaan...

manvi lied down comfortable in the bed and closed her eyes. she was thinking to catch up some sleep but she was reminded of something which she didnt notice in the day. the way vanshika welcomed her today was rather strange and the way she was whole day asking to have fruits or juice was also not so usual. something was strange and oh no then it stricked her. do they know about her pregnancy and if yes then how because she never told them... virat... he must have told it to them. next moment manvi felt really bad... she felt as if she was cheating on them and being unfair. how can she hide such a news from them... she was being unfair by letting them remain unaware of their grandchild growing inside her... they have a right to know that she is pregnant and will be soon giving birth of the child of this family.

manvi felt suffocated and getting up from the bed went to the terrace. she stood there and a cool breeze of air passed through her. manvi looked at the stars and tried solving the puzzle of her life. her life was not less than a fairy tale after she got married and got kasak but now suddenly everything got messed up this badly. she just got what she wanted and life snatched everything she had.

manvi : this is not fair...

manvi whispered in a low voice as she was trying to control her emotions. her eyes were filled with endless tears but she was determined she wouldnt let them roll down at any cost. she have to be strong... she woudnt break the promise she did to herself. she wouldnt fall weak and she will answer every question of her husband, not to clear any of his doubts but to show him how wrong he was in judging her even after knowing her for around 9 years now. how much she tried to prove herself that virat is wrong but that doesnt make her stand clear... that doesnt makes her come out clean. she cant ignore the fact that she is also wrong... they both are wrong in their respective places.

manvi saw how whole day virat tried to make her understand and how very smartly he took baby steps to bring her back. bringing her back... only she knows how much she wants to come back to this place where she actually belongs to... she knows how virat kept his ego aside and tried to make up for the loss but is it all so easy. will they ever be able to forget this phase of their life...??? will they ever be able to forget the bitter memories attached to it..?? will they ever be able to forget that they both at a certain pont of time gave up on their marriage...??? will they ever able to forget that the differences between them affected kasak in an awful way...??? will they ever be able to forget that they didnt even welcome their baby with a smile on their face...??? baby... their baby... what is the fault of that innocent small life that no one celebrated its existence... no one welcomed it... this was not she wanted... instead she actually imagined what would be the reaction of every member of the family... she imagined it even in that phase when she was craving to carry a baby inside her. she wanted to bring a never ending smile on each face around her but what destiny gave her is totally unexpected. every face around her is so busy in lamenting and praying to god to make everything alright... there are tears instead of smiles...

manvi : mumma is sorry baby... mumma is sorry... i dont know how many times i need to apologise from you... you are your daddy's dream... his wish... but your mumma is very bad... mumma doesnt let daddy come near you... you have no idea how much your dad wants to come near you and feel you... mumma is scared honey... scared of losing your daddy again and of getting hurt... but dont think he doesnt love you or me... he loves us so much... i saw it in his eyes... trust me... (keeping both of her palm on her flat stomach) trust me, once you come in this world, dad would love you soo much... infact more than mumma... your daddy will be the best father to you as well like he is to your di... mera bacha bahut samajhdaar hai na... thoda sa patience rakhna... bas thoda sa... everything willl be okk... you will get your family baby... you will get everything you deserve... everything in the world... its mumma's promise to you...

this was it... this was the moment which broke her emotionally... the tears she has been holding back, rolled down her cheek.

manvi : i am sorry virat... i am sorry...

manvi touched her mangalsutr and closed her eyes. her life was being difficult to her and she was scared what if she loses this time... what if she ends up losing her everything...


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virat : manvi...

virat was staring at the ceiling in the darkness and suddenly he felt as if manvi called him. but seeing the current circumstances, somewhere in his heart he knew that this is nearly impossible. she wouldnt fall weak especially in front of him, she wouldnt let him know how broken and hurt she is... but she is not the only one who is hurt... he is hurt the most... the most she can ever think of...

virat : manvi... wish you told me everything before that piece of shit told the truth. wish you could see that i totally understand that it was an accident... an accident that could have happen with anyone... me or you... an accident which could be done even by me... wish i could tell you that i didnt believe what rishabh said... i know you can never play such a dirty trick... you can never do something like this... you would never kill maya so that you can have me... i trust you on that... but... but i cant ignore the fact that you didnt trust me enough to share this truth with me... it hurted me so badly... i thought we are enough for each other... but i never knew that i was unable to became that good for you though you mean my everything to me... why manvi...??? why...??

next moment, virat consoled himself. he needed to... he cant let go his everything like that... his life, his love, his marriage isnt like a castle of playing cards that would get shatter even with one hard blow of air. he have to stand in between his family and the hardships coming their way. he wouldnt let his children suffer because of the choas going on... he wouldnt let anything wrong reach his family now...

virat got off the bed and slowly made his way to kasak's room to have a look at his girls... the two most beautiful girls whom he love to death... he slowly opened the door making minimal sound as possible and saw that manvi wasnt there and kasak was sleeping peacefully hugging her teddy. on not finding manvi, a strange fear gripped virat's heart.

virat : you cant go manvi... you cannot leave me...

he really thought that manvi left him again and will she ever leave kasak like that on her own... no she cant... but then where she might be.at slowly closed the door and went to the kitchen.

virat : may be she wanted to eat something...

virat went to the kitchen and didnt find manvi there. then he went to the terrace, in the hope that he would find her there. yes he found her... he saw her sitting on the swing (jhula). a smile played on his lips and he took steps towards his life.

virat : manvi...

he called out her name in a very soft and a loving tone but he didnt get a reply from her. he again called out her name instead of being disheartened. he reached and faced her, just to see that she was sleeping. tiredness was written over her face and the dried marks of the tears that flowed through her eyes. he hated himslef at that moment because he knows he made her cry... he gave her a reason to cry in such a condition when he should have given her all the happiness of the world.

virat : i am sorry manvi... i am the reason behind these tears of yours... i know baby...

virat swiftly yet delicately scooped his world in his arms and went down the stairs. he made his way to their room and carefully laid her down on the bed. he covered her with the duvet and she instantly cuddled inside it, which brought a smile on virat's face and he brushed few strands of her hairs tucking them behind her ear. he could have stared at her for the rest of his life but something else grabbed his attention. he got into the bed and softly cupped his palm against manvi's stomach trying to feel his baby growing inside her. only he knows how much he was dying to feel it. he softly kissed her stomach and whispered " im your dad sweetheart... dad loves you baby... ". he so wanted to talk to this little life but thought that indirectly he would be disturbing both manvi and the baby so he quietly laid on his side of the bed.

few minutes passed by and there was no moment and virat was about to sleep when he felt a weight on his chest. he opened his tired and exhausted eyes to see manvi making her way into his arms and snuggling close to him. he happily wrapped his arms around her and softly pecked her forehead before drifting off to sleep. these few days without her, were like a living hell for him and now when he got her in his arms, he felt complete. they found their heaven in each other's embrace and this was it... it was their moment of love... ❤️

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Edited by naina927 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
loved it
their both convo is superb
hope they sort their misunderstandings soon
and they talk to each other
when will kasak come to know about the baby... want to know her reaction on that
continue soon😊
Edited by niki795 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
for the first time for your story I'm first to comment
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: niki795

for the first time for your story I'm first to comment



Ohhh woww congoo... 🥳
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Posted: 11 years ago
I lov ❤️ virman in this update u show us pure lov ❤️ dear aww so much emosniol 😭 moment both virman lov eachother madly bt cant confess cz of their guilt 😔 awww manu want 2 fell their babby with virat aww i loved ❤️ d last part where virat take manvi in her room n both sleep thogher lov ❤️ that part wen virat kiss manviz bely n feel his baby awww superb dear

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