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Posted: 18 years ago
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Let me know what you think of Chapter 1 and let me know what needs improving in Chapter 2 as I will post the next chapter either tonight or tomorrow.

Even let me know what you want to happen next, cause i want to keep my readers happy and engaged in the story.

Edited by Sujalthegreat - 18 years ago

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