VIRIKA: ON MY WEDDING DAY.... MARRIED A STRANGER INSTEAD OF MY BRIDE ! - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: virikamaliha

Awesome start...
Hehehehe love the last part...
Continue soon...
Wanna know wht happen next.,..


Thank you !
I'll update after 3 days !😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: sweet_aayushi

awesome start to the story😊
jeevika dint bothered that she is married to whom😆😲
viren's mom accepted jeevika as her DIL 😊
viren is irritated😆
really now viren is going to have a tough time to handle jeevika😆
god this so good⭐️
loved the whole conept 👏
looking forward to this story
really amazing
its a treat to read
continue soon 😊


Awe... thank you very much !!
It's a lovely comment😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: sweet_aayushi

awesome start to the story😊
jeevika dint bothered that she is married to whom😆😲
viren's mom accepted jeevika as her DIL 😊
viren is irritated😆
really now viren is going to have a tough time to handle jeevika😆
god this so good⭐️
loved the whole conept 👏
looking forward to this story
really amazing
its a treat to read
continue soon 😊


Awe... thank you very much !!
It's a lovely comment😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
omggg...wht a story...
vry interesting
do continue sooon
sry couldnt comment longer one...busy wid exams na..sry
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: amritaluvskryan

omggg...wht a story...
vry interesting
do continue sooon
sry couldnt comment longer one...busy wid exams na..sry


Wat a story ...😉😆😆
Thanks!
I'll😳
It's OK, as u atleast commented !😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
part 2:

viren: now why r u laughing ? is there any comic play going around here ?

jeevika: yes ... now, u'll have a comic scene here !!

viren : r u out of ur mind miss ...

jeevika: jeevika, miss. jeevika !

viren: wateva !

jeevika: i'm not going to come to ur house mister viren !! 😡

vanshika: no dear, u should not say like this ... a married woman should stay with her in laws !!

viren: mom, let her go if she wants ... i can't bear such a girl n neither u can ... trust me mom 😕

vanshika: shut up viren, shez my DIL n no one can change it !
jeevika, don't worry that u'll have to stay with us ... i mean elders, as i've already bought a new flat for u guys to shift in 😉

jeevika: aunty, why don't u understand ? i can't live with this kind of human being, n it would be far more better to live with u !! 😆😆

viren: then go n live with them n i'll happily stay single in my new house ! ⭐️

vanshika: don't underestimate me viren ... i'm ur mother ! u can get the keys of that house only on condition that u'll take my DIL with u !!

viren: how come she became ur DIL so fast, not even becoming my wife ? 😳

vanshika: then who told u no ? ... make her ur wife n enjoy in the new house

viren: ok then, gimme the keys of house !! 😆😆

aenna: viren !!! ... wat the hell has happened to u ? ... u wanna take jeevika with u as ur wife ? 😡

jeevika: no ways ... sry viren, i'm not going to come with you !! 🤢

viren: oh my god !! ... wil u please stop it jeevika ? ... wat has happened to me ? ... jeevika madam ... please keep quiet as i'm getting confused 😕 !! ... even i don't have any such intentions !!
aenna, please wait for a second !!
mom, i don't want this girl nor that house 😆... is that understood ?

vanshika: if u don't want her, leave it ... but i want her ! come jeevika, we'll go to our house ... i'll also see how he'll not accept u as his wife , cal ur parents n tel them that u r going to ur home !!

jeevika: aunty ... wait , i've to tel u a wonderful news !!

vanshika: wat ... ? ... r u pregnant ? 😳

viren: mom ... ? 😲😡

all were shocked at her question ... !!

vanshika: i was just kidding children !! 😆😆

jeevika: u have a great sense of humour aunty !! 😉
wat i wanted to tel u is ... i'm also a christian n not hindu 😆😆!!

vanshika: i accept that u also have grt humour sense , now stop it ok ?

jeevika: oh c'mon aunty ... , i ran from my wedding n look at me ... i'm a christian bride , right ... i wore a frock ... now, did u understand ?

vanshika: yeah jeevika, how could i miss that ? 😲

jeevika: so, can i go now ?

vanshika: ok, u r free to go where evea u want, but be careful n bye ... my first DIL !! 😭

viren: why did u waste so much time jeevika ? ... u could have told it before only that u r christian n things would have been settled by now ... 😆

varun ( viren's dad ) : u all stop it, now enough of ur drama !!
viren n jeevika, u decide whether to live together or to get divorced !!
first cal jeevika's parents
if u r going to live together ... take the new house keys n go !
else, we'll go to lawyer !!

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that's all for now ... bye buddies !!

Lemme know if u liked it !!

Buddy me for my pm's !!

I'll only pm to those who'll comment ... !!

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Edited by reyna. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
yay...m the frst one to comment...yippieee
cute updy bt eager to knw whts gonna happen next
viren's mom is vry understanding...
do continue soon nd plz updt best frnds soon ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: amritaluvskryan

yay...m the frst one to comment...yippieee
cute updy bt eager to knw whts gonna happen next
viren's mom is vry understanding...
do continue soon nd plz updt best frnds soon ...


yippiee !!
u r the first to comment ... 👏
u'll know in next parts , just wait !! 😳
yup ! 😆
thanks !
i'll update best friends every monday dear !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: krystu05

Great update!

Continue Soon.


Thank you!
I'll😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
comic update ya awesome updte thanks for the pm

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