MG:SS Will u marry me???/pt 38 updatd on pg 71 29th june'14 - Page 24

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Posted: 11 years ago
PART 29
Thanks to all who left a comment and gave likes to the previous part.
I would give epilogue for MY BAR DAYZZ... very soon need thoda time to think may be next week or in few days will update it.
I am thinking to finish WILL YOU MARRY ME??? soon may be in next couple of parts mey...
do suggest me after this part that what is your point of view after reading this part...thank you!

Geet was sitting inside the car.she look at her phone & dial a number.
the rings go on...
"Can you come with muskan to me...I have left a message that contains the address please get her over there...bbye"
Geet cut the call and close her eyes.A drop of tear escape her eyes.
manav notice this and with his small hand he wipe her tears.
"Moma...don't cry...see I will also cry...ammy say na that tear fail our heart tua why you want to fail your heart...we will always win not fail ohk moma..."
With this he gives geet a cheeky smile and hug her.
geet also kiss him on his both cheek & hug him tight.
"Yes baby we can't fail...and we would never"
They reach the place. It was a small bungalow.
With all the decorations done with balloon and curtains.
All set with pink and Blue combination.
With soft happy birthday song in the background.
Geet catch manav's hand and takes him inside while neelum follow them.
as they reach a horn sound comes suggesting that maan have arrived with muskan.
Maan stop his car and check the address one more time and gets down
muskan also get down from the car from the other side.she comes running to maan and hide behind him.
maan catch muskan hand and get her ahead and sit on his knee
"What happen nanu...why you scare"
"Daddy are you serious... .mummie is here"
"She called us lets see...ohk"
Muskan nodes.maan takes muskan in his arms and walks inside.
maan was surprised by the view. It was nicely decorated lounge.
Even muskan got a smile seeing this.maan notice that manav was sitting on a table with a lady and geet was on the other table placing the cake.
maan got a glimp of idea why did geet call him with muskan.
Geet notice maan and gave him a smile.
maan keeps muskan down.muskan saw her mom and got really happy with this & ran to her.
geet also sat on her knee and open arms for muskan.
Muskan hugged geet.geet also gave her kiss on both the cheeks and hugged her tight. Manav saw maan and he ran to him.
maan also picked him in arms & hugged him tight.

Geet comes to maan with muskan in her hand.she comes near maan and kiss him on his cheek & hug him.
both muskan and manav put hands on their eyes and laugh. Geet smiles seeing this.
"Muskan thanks for wearing this fork which I gave you...you looking pretty...and happy birthday baby..."
"Mummie you gave this...oh so you are the secret friend..."
"Yea...I am your secret friend & I send you gifts on every birthday and..."
"New year..."
Muskan smiles & hugs geet one more time.
Maan was very much confused that muskan gets gift from geet every year and he is not aware of this..
"Nanu... "
"Yes mummie""yes moma.."
"Heheh...ohk shall we cut the cake?"
"Yea...""yes..."
"Ohk come with me...maan come"
Geet catch both muskan and manav's hand & take them to the table where cake was placed. Maan follow geet without saying anything as he was absent minded and also didn't have words at this moment.
"Neelum can you please get that plastic knife"
"Yes ma'am"
Neelum get the knife.geet makes muskan and manav both to hold the knife.she also catch it from behind and looks at maan.
maan understood the meaning and comes near geet and hold the knife.
All sing birthday song and cut the cake for manav and muskan.
Muskan take a piece of cake & goes to geet while manav takes the piece & goes to maan.
both geet & maan were shocked as they taught that both the children will come to there respective sides first...but kids are kids you can't predict them.
geet & maan have the piece & make the kids eat the cake too...manav goes to neelum with the piece of cake.
"Eelum with this cake I became 4 yrs now & I promise to protect you from moma's anger...ammy & all the people"
"Aur mey cake kilaugi kasey tum uppar bato.. "
"Baby tum hindi maat bolo talk what you know aur cake khilauga not khilaugi & uppar ni nichey bato..."
Manav give his famous MSK look & ignore geet. Geet smiles & turns.
Maan was shocked as manav was full on his carbon copy.
"Happy birthday manav baby & yes you will protect me "
Manav becomes happy and hugs neelum.muskan was looking at neelum and manav. Neelum notice it & show her arm to muskan also.
on which muskan run to neelum and hugs her.
"Happy birthday muskan baby"
"Thank you"
Muskan and manav wish each other too and feed cake to each other.
Manav ask muskan to play with him . muskan agree & they start to play with neelum.
All the time maan was silent. But now the time comes...he march towards geet.
"We need to talk...alone"
Geet knew this is going to come but to make her kids happy she was ready to do this...
"We will go inside"
Geet and maan both goes inside the house in a room...

precap: geet to confront maan...

Guys leave your likes and comments & please let me know howz it as I am not that sure about this track & a bit nervous about it...

ohk coming to a challenge I want to all 2 give me or say irritate me or leave comments till pg no 46...next update I will give on pg 46 so if you want update then give long comments & likes also..
Edited by nimi216 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
day by day i m falling love with this ff.awesome update.pls let not wait us long for next update😉😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: drashtiMyAnGeL

day by day i m falling love with this ff.awesome update.pls let not wait us long for next update😉😉



I ws really nt aware dat some 1 can lke my story so much... 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
read the whole story in one go. loved it.👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
finally they met
nice part dear loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update Geet celebrated her kids b'day together now tym to talk with maan waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Geet deside to return to maan
Finally maaneet gonna have a confrontation :|
Loved kids part
Muskan n geet finally met
Geet was muskans secret friend :D
Lolzz manavs hini..specially upar baito
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh ho ho...dono babies pehli baar eksaath birthday manaye...kitna chcha hai na...kyun dono bhai-behen ko alag karna...

awesome n lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Ty bt u hv 2 complete 3 more pgs
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Posted: 11 years ago
waiting🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢

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Posted by: zajedno

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Marry me, please.

How do you react when a man asks you if you want to marry him?

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