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RAJENDRA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: madmadona
what the!!! omg is this the end????

Sorry, I thought of ending it here, but now i will continue. Dont worry.

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RAJENDRA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: VBMVTOISP2J5DCU6
Whattt
Oye.mazak.mar kro.last part baqi h

Ok Main continue karta hu.

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sarita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: Rajendra_Uppoor
Sorry, I thought of ending it here, but now i will continue. Dont worry.

thanks dear

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RAJENDRA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#134

NOTE: I finished this SS on chapter 14.
But i think most of you didnt liked the ending.
So i will be continuing this SS.
Thank you All.

Next chapter will have some out of the box incidents and scenes.
Here is the teaser pic for chapter 15

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unisha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#135

what the!!! Hehehehe shaktimaan.. M just imagining.. Omg!! That would be blast.. Amazing teaser.. Hehehehehehehehehd

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Mdmadona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: Rajendra_Uppoor
Sorry, I thought of ending it here, but now i will continue. Dont worry.

lovely pls continue yaar
don't end like this
arjun suicide omg 🤢

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ROTWCFEVMBW6XD4Y

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Posted: 12 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: Rajendra_Uppoor
Ok Main continue karta hu.

Thanks

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RAJENDRA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#138

RECAP: Arjun: Riya Mai
tumhari nazar
me itna hi gir
gaya hu tho
mere jeene ki
koi wajay nahi
hai.
Fir Arjun Train
ke Track pe
chalne lagta
hai.
Tabhi Mobile
bajta hai.
Sam calling.
A small smile
crept on
Arjun's face.
A smiling
Sam's photo
flashing in
mobile.
Arjun: Marte
waqt bhi peecha
nahi chodega.
Arjun: Hello
Sam Dhyan se
sun Main jaa
raha hu, mujhe
bhool mat jana.
Fir phone
switch off kar
deta hai.
Firse track me
chalne lagta
hai.
Door Se Train
ki aane ki
aawaz aa rahi
hai.
. .

PART-15
Arjun Ankhen bandh karke track par chal raha hai. Train aur paas aa rahi hai.
Arjun ko aisa lag raha hai train neeche se jaa rahi hai aur wo upar ud raha hai.
Arjun ankhen kholta hai tho dekhta hai. Usse shaktimaan utha kar le ja raha hai.
Arjun: Shaktimaan !! I CAN'T BELEIVE THIS.
INTRODUCING.

INTRODUCTION KI THO ZAROORAT HI NAHI HAI
Fir Wo dono ek bada sa Building ke upar utharte hai.
Shaktimaan: Tho batayiye shreeman Arjun Raute jee, Aap aatmhatya kyou karne jaa rahe the, Jaante nahi Aatmhatya mahapaap hai.
Arjun: Mera love failure hogaya issiliye marne jaa raha tha. Par abh nahi marunga.

SMan: Accha hai, par breakup kaise hogaya?
Arjun: Pehle mai apne dost ko phone kar leta hu. Baad me apki baat ka javab doonga.
Fir Arjun Apna mobile swith on karne lagta hai.
SMan: Ye kya hai Shreeman, DOORBHASHA YANTRA ?
Arjun: Ye mobile hai, Doorbhasha yantra nahi hai.
SMan: Apne baap ko mat sikha. Donoka matlab ek hi hai.
Fir Shaktimaan Arjun se phone le leta hai.
SMan: Mujhe zara Geeta Vishwas se baat karna hai.
Shaktimaan ke mobile lete hi automatically number dail hota hai.
Arjun: Ye kaise hua?
Shaktimaan koi jawab nahi deta.
SMan: Hello. .
Geeta: Koun?
SMan: Deviji Mai Shaktimaan aka Pandit Gangadhar, Vidyadhar, Mayaadhar OMkaarnath shastri.
Geeta: Kyou phone kiya?
SMan: Aise hi, Par maine suna hai, Shaktimaan ke baad aap kuch B Grade movies mai bhi nazar ayi hai.
Deviji ye aapko shobha nahi deta.
Geeta: Kutte apne kaam se matlab rakh ab rakh phone.

Few Minutes Before.
Riya Rote hue ghar jaa rahi hai.
Aur seedhe jaake apni room mai shadi ke liye taiyyari Shuru kar deti hai.
Fir Shadi ke mandap me bait jati hai.
Kajol aur Sameer ye sab dekhke hairan hai.
Shadi hone hi wali hai kuch log gun leke sabhi logon ko threaten karke Riya ko wahan se utha kar le jate hai, unka face dhaka hua hai.
Riya to goons: Kaha le ja rahe ho mujhe?
Goon No. 1: Swarg ki yaatra ke liye. Bohut maza ayega.
Riya: Please mujhe jane do.
G. No. 1: Agar jane dena tho itni muskhil se tumhe uthate kyou?

PRESENT.
Cell rings again.
Arjun: Hello Sam.
Sam: Dhyan se sun, Kuch log Riya ko shadi ke mandap se utha ke le gaye.
Arjun: Kya iska matlab Riya ki shadi nahi hui?
Sam: Haan par tu hain kahan?
Arjun: Mai yahi railway station ke paas hu.
Sam: Mai wahi aake baat karta hu.
Arjun: Theek hai.
Shaktimaan: Tumhara mitra ka phone tha?
Arjun: Mitr ka nahi Dost ka phone tha.
Shaktimaan: Apne baap ko mat samjha dono ka matlab ek hi hai.

Thodi der baad dono neeche uthar jate hai.
Sam bhi waha pohunch jata hai.

Sam, Shaktimaan ko dekhke zor zor se haste hue: Ye Namoona tujhe kaha mila, jo Shaktimaan ka costume pehna hai?
Shaktimaan: Apni zuban kabu me rako warna?
Sam: Warna kya?
Shaktimaan apni shakti se Sam ko upar utha deta hai.
Sam: Koi mujhe bachao please, Sorry. . Sorry Shaktimaan uncle.
Fir Shaktimaan Usse neeche utar deta hai.
Sam: Tho ye original hai?
Shaktimaan: Firse dikhau?
Sam: Nahin Nahin Maan gaya.

Arjun Sari baat Sam aur Shaktimaan ko bata deta hai.

Sameer Ko Kajol ko phone aati hai. Aur kehti Hai Riya ka last location Manipal End Point mai trace hui hai.

Arjun: Tho hum bhi waha chalte hai.
Sam: Haan hum Shaktimaan ke sath udke jayenge.

Shaktimaan: Ab mai utna door udke nahi jaa sakta meri bhi umar ho gayi hai.
Koi Gadi hai tho usme chalte hai.

Arjun: Tu bike se aaya hai na.
Sam: Haan.
Arjun: Tho usi mai chalte hai.
Sam: par 3 log ek sath.
Arjun: Kuch nahi hoga tribs me chalte hai.

Theeno Bike me M. G Road (name changed) pohunch jate hai.
Yaha se andar chalo fir hum Manipal pohunch sakte hai.

The following storyline is based on true indent happend to me when i was 13 or 14
. . .
Arjun: Yaar ek pani ki bottle le lete hai.
Wo ek Old age home Plus hotel plus multi purpose general store Name Take Care (name changed).
Ye old age home sirf logon ke ankhon me dhool jhonkne ke liye hai.
Arjun waha jata hai aur pani ka bottle mangta hai.
Owner Remo D'silva (name changed) attend karta hai.
Waha ek aur aadmi aata hai.
Admi: Kya aapke paas ladkiya mil sakti hai.
Remo: Kyou nahi. Boliye kis type ki ladki chahiye.
Admi: Aapka network kitna strong hai.
Remo: Bohut strong hai, Yaha tak humne Minister ki betiyon ko ladke supply ki hai.
(i know ministers name, cant expose his name here, he is there in present center gvt cabinet)
Aadmi: Aapke paas muslim ladkiya bhi milengi.
(i think the guy is muslim)
Remo: Kyou nahi.
Aadmi: Nayi ladki chahiye.
Remo: Hai ek ladki par nayi nayi hai. Bas utna co operative nahi hai.
Aadmi: Theek hai.

Now Arjun (Me) is shocked, but he have to save Riya. So He left silently.
(Note: Once a girl escaped from this hell and went to nearby house. They saved her and laudged complaint, but all in vain. THE POLICE Did nothing and the f3cking media also remained silent.
I think this is all because of political support.
He is exposed infront of whole area people.
Everybody in that area knows about him.
And later the guy named Rajendra (original name) not me.
Married that girl and now they have a baby.
God bless them.

Arjun waha se aata hai.
Sam: Itna late kyou?
Arjun: Kuch nahi chalo chalte hai.

I KNOW THE ABOVE PART IS DISGUSTING BUT IT IS THE TRUTH.
I THOUGHT OF SHARING IT WITH YOU PEOPLE.
I DIDN'T TWISTED ANYTHING. I JUST TRANSLATED IT FROM KANNADA TO HINDI.
AFTER 8-9 YEARS, I STILL DIDN'T FORGOT A SINGLE WORD.
THATS THE IMPACT

Fir theno sath me apna journey continue karte hai.

The following also my personal experience, happened just 2 days ago.

Road is of full of twist and turns.
Shaktimaan: Itna dheere kyou gaadi chala rahe ho.
Arjun: Dikh nahi rahe kitna lamba lamba twists hai, aage ka rasta bhi nahi dikh raha.
Shaktimaan: Theek hai, dheere chalao.
Bike 50 km ki speed par hai.
Peeche se ek ladki apni scooty pept me 40 km ki speed se aa rahi hai. Aur lagatar horn kare jaa rahi hai.
Arjun mirror se dekhte hue: Lagta hai ye ladki paagal ho gayi hai, baar bar horn kar rahi hai.
Thodi der baad firse horn karne lagti hai.
Arjun: Ye churail baar baar kyou horn kar rahi, jaise ki aage hi nikal rahi ho.
Fir Arjun jaanbooj kar speed 40 km kar leta hai.
Fir wo ladki thode der baad Arjun ko overtake karke aage jati hai.
Ladki: Why should boys have all the fun.
Arjun in mind: Jaa chudail tumhe baad me dekh leta hu.
Arjun, uske peeche hi hai.
Fir ekdum se break maar ke, gadi hault pe aata hai.
Sam: Gadi kyou rokh di tumne.
Arjun: Ab dekh maza.
Fir Arjun bike chalane lagta hai,
Gear change ho raha hai.
1st- 20km/hr
2nd-30km/hr
3rd gear- 40km/hr
4th gear- 40, 50, 60, 80, 100, 120 km/ hr
Fir rocket speed me ladki ko cross karke aage nikal jata hai.
Thodi door jaake Arjun gadi rok deta hai.

Fir ladki ki gadi bi waha aa jata hai.
Arjun: Jiski kudki scooty pept ho, Wo 4stroke bike overtake nahi karte.
Samjhe ya Samjhau.
Ab aage koun jayenge aap ya main?
Ladki: Aap.
Arjun: Thats good.
_
Journey ke middle me.
Shaktimaan: Suna hai ye End point ek lovers point hai.
Sam: Aur ye suicide point bhi kehlata hai, Raat ko jao tho, suicide karne wale ladke, ladkiyon se baat kar sakte hai.
Shaktimaan: Mai tho dar gaya, mujhe wapis bej do.
Arjun: Kuch nahi hoga. Main hoon na.

Fir Arjun ko Ek warehouse ke paas Riya ka Mobile mil jata hai.
Arjun: Lagta hai Riya ko yahi rakha gaya hai.
Sam: Andar chalke dekte hai.
Arjun aur SAM Dono andar jate hai.
Tho dekhte hai Riya ke haath pair baand ke rakha gaya hai.
Arjun jake Riya ko kholne ki koshish karta hai.
Itne me Sikandar aur Prem waha aajate hai.
Sikandar: Welcome Arjun Raute aur Arjun Raute ka tail Sameer Raute.
Arjun: Tho tum ho is Prem G@y ka boss Sikandar.
Sik: Nice to meet you Raute?
Arjun: Mujhe kushi Nahi hui tumse milke.
Sikandar: Wah Wah Kya baat hai, Angry Raute. Apni Riya ke liya yaha tak aaya hai.
Sam: Shaktimaan kahan ho tum.
Fir shaktimaan waha aajata hai.
Sikandar: Oh my God mai tho dar gaya, India ka pehla super hero. Yaha Real hero Raute ka help ke liye aagaya.
Sikandar: Humar super hero se bhi milo zara.
Shaktimaan: koun hai tumhara hero.
Sik: Tamraj Kilvish ha ha ha.
There comes Tamraj kilvish Lord of Evils

Kilvish: Andhera Khayam Rahega hamesha.
Sik: Andhera khayam rahega hamesha.
Shaktimaan ab dar gaya hai
Aur Dar ke maare uska pant geela ho chuka hai.
Kilvish: Ye dekho tum logon kha hero ka hawa nikal gaya.
Shaktimaan wahan se gayab ho jata hai.
Kilvish: Andhera khayam rahega.
Fir wo bhi gayab ho jata hai.
Sikandar: Is Raute kho Riya ke sath band do. AMAR PREM hai.
Riya: Amar Prem my foot.
Sikandar: baand do Arjun ko Riya ke sath.
Sikandar ke aadmi Arjun ko Riya ke sath baand dete hai aur Sam ko bhi baand deta hai.
Arjun aur Riya ka back ek dusre ko touch ho raha hai.
Riya: tum yahan kya kar rahe ho.
Arjun: Tumhe bachane aya hu.
Riya: Kyou?
Arjun: Kyou ki mai tumse pyar karta hu.
Riya: Tho beech raste me mujhe chodke kyou gaye?
Arjun: I am sorry Riya, Mai pagal tha jo tumhe chod diya. Us waqt mujhe sacchai ka pata nahi tha.
Riya: Tumne jo kaha uska mujhpe kya asar hua pata bhi hai.
Arjun: Ab maaf bhi kardo.
Riya: Pehle yahan se tho bahar nikle fir sochenge.

Sameer: Koi mujhse bhi baat karo.
Arjun: Tu chup kar kamine.

Sam: Gorilla . . . .
Arjun: Tu gorilla, tera baap gorilla
Sam: Nahi wo dekh tum logon ke peeche ek gorilla hai.
Riya: OMG ye kahan se aaya.
Jaikal: Isse main laya hu.
Introducing.

DR. JAIKAL.
Arjun: Ye tho evil scientist Jaikal hai.
Sam: aur ye lady gorilla hai.
Arjun: Tumhe kaise pata chala?
Sam: Theek se observe kar tab pata chalega.
Jaikal: Nice boservation.
Sam: Par tum yahan kaise.
Jaikal: Sikandar ne beja.
Sam: Waise Tumhara aur Gorilla ka jodi mast hai.
Jaikal: Accha, mai ye soch raha hu, Jab lady Gorilla aur Male Sameer milenge tho kya hoga?
Sameer: Mai Is Gorilla ke sath nahi karoonga.
Jaikal: Maine kab kaha tumhe Gorilla ke sath karna padega. Bus tumhara aur gorilla ka DNA aur Bone marrow milke ek naya avishkar karunga. Jisse duniya me tabahi mucha dunga.
Dr. JAIKAL KA NAYA AVISHKAR.
POWERRR.

Sam: Mai nahi dunga apna bone marrow.
Jaikal: Utha ke le chalo isko.
Arjun: Dekho chod do mere dost ko.
Jaikal: Tho tum chalo.
Riya: Nahi Sameer hi theek hai.
Jaikal: Le chalo isse lab me.

After Some times.

Sameer ko thodi der baad wapis chod dete hai.
Arjun: Kya hua Sam thu theek tho hai.
Sam: Haan theek hu par itni der tak behosh tha.

Arjun: Kuch nahi hoga.

Dr. JAIKAL: yE dekhiye mera avishkar SamIlla.
Body full gorilla ka hai aur Face Sam ka hai.
Isse dekhke Arjun zor zor se has raha hai.
Arjun: Samilla ha ha ha.
Riya: Black and White Sam. Mast hai hai.

Jaikal: Abhi jake duniya me tabahi shuru kar do.
Samilla: Mummy mujhe dood (milk) pila do.
Jaikal: Project fail ho gaya. powerrr.
Jaikal wahan se bhag jata hai.
Samilla Riya ko dekhte hue: Mummy.
Riya: Mai tumhari mummy nahi hu.
Sam ke taraf ishara karte hue: Wo rahi teri mummy.
Samilla Sameer ke taraf aate hue: Mummy mujhe bhook lagi hai, dudu pila do.
Sam: W.T.F. Mere paas dood nahi hai.
Samilla Sameer ka Shirt ka jeb fad deta hai.
Sam: Aisa Mat karo.
Arjun: dood wahan nahi, uska pant ka zip kholke peelo.
Sameer: No please.
Samilla Sameer ka zip kholne lagta hai.
ARIYA ankhen band kar lete hai.
After that They hear loud scream of Sameer.
NAHIIIN.

Next Morning.
Ariya wake up early.
Arjun: Sam thu theek tho hai.
Sam: Mai lut gaya barbad ho gaya, Mai kisi ko muh dikhane ka layak nahi raha.

Riya: Aapke sath jo hua uske liye hum khed jatate hai.

Jaikal wahan aake Samilla ko goli mar ke wahan se chala jata hai.

Sam: Kutte tu ye pehle nahi kar sakta tha.
Arjun: Ab tho zara smile dede, tumhara najayaz aulad jo mar gaya.
Sam: Meri tho fat gayi, ab kya karu.?
Arjun: Waqt ke sath sab theek ho jayega.

Aftre Some time.
Sikandar aur Prem waha aajate hai.

Sikandar: Riya tumhare liye ek kush kabhari hai. TUMHE KOI DEKHNE AA RAHA HAI.
Riya: Mujhe kisiko nahi dekhna hai.
Arjun: Kutte mai tujhe dekh loonga.
Sikandar: Raute, Jab tu gussa hota hai tho teri bebasi jhalak jati hai.
Sam: Agar Riya ke bare me kuch galat socha tho mai tumhe maar doonga.
Sik: Wah Kya Dosti hai.
Sikandar ka aadmi waha aajata hai.
Siks man: Boss koi aapse milne aaya hai.
Sik: Koun?
Man: Koi Remo D'silva hai.

Sik: Tho Remo aagaya, usse andar bejo.

TO BE CONTINUED.
YE BORING PART THA PATA HAI SORRY FOR THAT.
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Edited by Rajendra_Uppoor - 12 years ago