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Posted: 11 years ago
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wonderful prologue...

pehli baar maine koi poem dhyaan se read ki and samjhi...

waiting for update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6



wonderful prologue...

pehli baar maine koi poem dhyaan se read ki and samjhi...

waiting for update...



Di these are my lines
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Posted: 11 years ago
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There is a very famous idiom/saying 'Marriages are made in heaven'Is it true? Think about It...Even me always wonder thinking about this.And every time I come to this conclusion yes this is more than 100 % right.This is also part of destiny.Some people believe in destiny some not.But destiny exists.Definition may be different .For Believers /theists its God's wish what he decides for us.Wht bout non believers /atheists? Simple answer what is happening and what will happen that is destiny.😲

So the idiom 'marriage are made in heaven' is also true.Two persons how much they may be in love but even true love can't stamp their relation for life long.Their relation may end up as failure.On the other hand destiny can create such situations that two strangers turn out to be couple.

Marriage a stamp which can bind two strangers in relation.That relation may turn out to be a beautiful experience for some.But for some mere a life long burden they will have to carry unwillingly reason may be any. But this is reality just like her destiny planned for her.

She didn't want to get married. She had some dreams. She wanted to fly high like a free bird.But why her own dear ones trapped her in a cage .A cage of undesired relation...But now this is her destiny and she has to be in this.For how long no one knows ? Is there some one who will free her no one knows ? May be the Almighty has any answer who plan the marriages staying in heaven...😲



SONIA



An unusual prologue.Hope buddies can digest it easily...😆

Edited by Sonia.KN - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Nice theme
waiting for ff to progress
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
interesting n unusual prologue
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Episode One

Place


A luxurious Villa situated in the heart of Posh Metropolitan Jalandhar City.

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It's a dark night as usual but the metropolitan is running in own pace. Dark night its like a think of past now whole city is flooded with artificial lighting .Road traffic...crowded Malls...Restaurants what ever be there at the weekends.

Like whole city this Villa is also flooded with lights.But some thing seems unusual. Extra decorative lightening in and around villa and Floral Decor clearly indicates that some kinda of special occasion was going on here

But not a single human presence visible here.Where are people living here ? .Whats going on here .

'Hum kehte hai rukk jaaea' a feminine scram inside villa breaks the silence around

Inside villa whole decor is enough to show the aristocracy in which people here r living. An aged lady dressed in Indian Formals is standing there on first step of decorated stairs moving upwards.

She seems too much hyper...in too much anger.Her classic attire stamps her presence in function most probably which this house has been witnessed too willingly or unwillingly..An elegant lady she seems but why she is so hyper and who is responsible for this ?

'I said stop .Just listen to me' she again repeats.

'Aap ki he sunni hai ...that's why I am here ?' A deep manly voice answered her back in same manner.

'Hamari sunni hai aapne.I told you to drink this much on wedding night? ' lady yelled

'I think there wasn't any such term in contract indicating that I can't drink during all this marriage drama' he taunted 'if there is any hidden term than I don know.Daddi Maa'

'Maan shut your mouth...such emotionless you are !!. Aur drink kar k badd-tameez bhi ho rahe ho aap.You never cared about your family.About me my emotions.I just had one wish to see you getting married.Having own kids. Was that a crime.Boliye ?' She put her heart out having tears in her eyes

She is non other than Savitri Devi Khuraana Chairperson to Khuraana Group of Industries.One of top rated business houses in India expending each and every day from construction business to Media sector...If someone is there to take credit for all this then its only Mr. Maan Singh Khuraana ...MD of Khuraana Empire and Savitri Devi's grand son.Who is now standing in front of her..Its his wedding night.He should be with his newly wed bride but why they are in such debate ?

Maan an introvert ...a well cultured Man of Principles why he was behaving such arrogantly with a lady who shares every relation with him from being a grandmother to a person who brought him n his siblings up single handedly after sudden death of his parents in such young age.

'Daddi Maa you forcibly made me ready for this marriage it is nothing else than a contract...You know whats your positing in my life.But when you found me not getting ready you adopted hook or by crook method.' he keeps on saying n Daddi she was just a listener to his emotional outbrust 'As a chairman...as a final decision maker of Khuraana Empire u cancelled many deals which were too important for us and even stopped my dream venture in mid...You left no choice for me except this .If I had to run business on my own terms this marriage was your term'

'What ever I did that is just for you betterment..Now you r naming it as a contract .One day you will realize that my intentions were nevr ever wrong ' She came close to Maan who was hardly able to fix his feet on floor as he was heavily drunk

'Okey now you are happy. ...its over main chalta hu aab' nodding his head he moved toward stairs but was not able to climb up even a step.

'Bro bro wait let me help you .Main aapko apke room tak chod deta hu' Dev younger to Maan came running and supported him from behind.

'Dev I need not any help .Daddi needs you more ' He jerked Dev off and some how climbed up stairs.

Bot Daddi n Dev were just witnessing his drama.He usually have one or two drinks only if there is any function or gathering otherwise he never drinks.

'Daddi whats wrong with bro .Wo kabhi bhi itni drink nahi karte .Thats why he is not able to control himself ?' Dev showed his concern.

'Don know beta why he is doing so.I am afraid .Even now I am wondering if I was wrong in taking decision.A lady who can decide any one's faith...can't handle own grand son' She started to cry bitterly hugging him tightly

'Daddi Maa you was never wrong.But here I am afraid too not for bro but for the innocent girl you choose for him' He sighs consoling her

'Jo sanskaar humne apne bacho ko diye hai...at least due to that I can expect some decency from him.I hop he will behave in good way .Abhi wo nashe mai hai .Hope sabh theek thaak ho' Worriness was clear on her face now thinking about the girl she choose as her bahu.

A little update..hop you will like.Plz like and drop your views as it is really tough for me to update in such unfavorable conditions related to health or personal ones .Your views will boost me up.Open up and tell me if I am right or wrong or need improvement...


Sonia





Disclaimer : The credit behind theme is given in detail at the starting. Plz read it care fully

Note : Tense liberties may be there according to flow n rules of contemporary writing

Edited by Sonia.KN - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
awesome👏👏



its different concept😉



update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Lovely start congrats 4 new ff
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely start.. very interesting track..i love it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
nice concept
liked it
thanks for the pm

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