Ashlok FF: My Heart Whispers, but I can't Hear...Part-1 to Part-19 - Page 54

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Thanks guys for liking the update.. will keep on giving you more surprises...




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Thanks guys for liking the update.. will keep on giving you more surprises...




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Will update within a while needs proof reading... not getting time yaar...
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Will update within a while needs proof reading... not getting time yaar...



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Part-13

Immediately all three friends ran after Shlok, who was moving angrily towards his car stamping his feet...

Shlok, stop... Varun shouted but he didn't even turn back... He just started the car and went away...

Guys, I think he needs some time alone.. Astha spoke in broken voice... she had never expected his past will come back in this way...since they had been back from Agnihotri mention last year, Astha could never talk about Swati or his family with Shlok, she didn't want to upset him, once she had tried to talk with Shlok about Anjali, but he dismissed it completely saying her to stay out of his so personal matters.

It was evening, when they reached his flat, and were shocked to see his condition, it was almost like when he had imagined Astha as Swati, completely mess... almost all breakable things were no more useable, bedding, pillows were torn... and he was almost red in anger as well as pain... shlok, control yourself... Varun said...

I wished to never see her face again... But why always me is chosen to get hurt...Shlok punched the wall...

Shlok... Astha held him, when he hugged her tightly almost crying...

It had been almost two hours when he was a bit cooled down and everything was settled a bit...

Shlok, I want to tell you something...I must had told you before but you never gave me chance... Astha spoke hiding her pain... knowing Shlok is in much more pain than her at the moment... for her anything that can give happiness to Shlok, was enough...

Hum... he looked towards her...

Shlok, actually. Swati was not at fault at that time... Astha spoke...Shlok looked surprising at her...

When Astha held his hand and told him everything... Shlok's anger rose more.

You mean she needed money for her mother and so she left me...he shouted...

Yes...Astha replied...

And you believed in this crap Astha, as Mrs. Agnihotri told you? Then why didn't Swati tell me about her requirement, I could arrange...

You were not big enough at that time Shlok.. or she didn't get the chance to tell you, before...she paused for a moment. Your parents trapped her...

No, I don't trust any of them...Shlok denied...

Ok, just imagine cool minded, if this story is true, who was the real culprit?

Of course, Shlok's parents... Gauri spoke...Shlok was listening carefully...

Then why will Mrs. Agnihotri tell me , she was on mistake? Will not she blame Swati for the same if she wanted to make a story? But she herself told me, Swati was not at mistake, it was they...Astha clarified...

No, I don't trust them... ... Swati was gold-digger, when she got more benefit from my parents, she left me... Shlok shouted...

Astha was angry now. Wait a minute Shlok.. She was gold digger because she took benefit from your parents, but what will you say about me? I also took benefit of your friendship na? Astha shouted...

What? Shlok as well as Gauri and Varun were surprised...

Didn't you pay for my baba's surgery? So in this way, me and Swati are both in same boat na? Then why I am still your friend? Am I not gold digger in your eyes?

Astha... Shlok shouted raising his hand on Astha but just stop midway before hitting her... he held her shoulder pulling and shouting...how dare you to say so about yourself? Who gave you the right to speak so low about yourself?

Astha had tears in her eyes on listening. She spoke softly...why such difference Shlok? Just because you loved her and she left you for caring her mother? But I am still with you Shlok... Then doesn't she deserve another chance To explain herself...

Shlok sat on sofa holding her head in his hands... But nothing can be same now...

Ya, I can understand, nothing can be same now... But at least you can be friends with her... may be later on you too realize, you misunderstood her because you believed what you were shown...Astha said...

I need time yaar...Shlok cleared his side...

But with one promise, you are not going to hurt yourself again... Astha held his hand...

K... he gave a fake smile...

When Gauri dragged her to kitchen... Astha, are you mad?

What? Astha asked Gauri.

You are asking Shlok to go back to Swati, you are going to lose your love forever...

But he loves her till now...Astha replied wiping tear that appeared in her eyes...

He loved her Astha. Varun spoke coming in kitchen. but if any girl at the moment in his life is, then she is just you...?Kyon Mahan banna chahti ho apna pyar kho ke?

Mahan nahi banna chahti hun main. I just want his happiness, nothing else, and you people say na, he loves me but doesn't realize, but one day he is going to be mine only...let's see what's the truth...if he loves me really, he will be back to me, but if I get him forcefully, you yourself think, how will I live my life with a man who has some other girl in his heart? Astha shouted a bit crying...

Listening noise there, Shlok too came... what happened guys?

Nothing. Just talking about today's activities...Varun replied while Astha turned her face wiping her tears...

When Shlok called Astha... Astha, let's go, it's your office time.. And they both left..

As they went outside... Gauri whispered to Varun .yaar, ye Astha to pagal hai, we need to do something to bring them closer and make Swati out of their life...

Ya, I was also thinking so... I just hope Swati is not as good as Astha and we get chance to make Shlok understand...Varun too whispered...

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Next day in college... Swati was sitting on a table in the lawn alone thinking about last day's happenings... when Shlok had shouted on her. She had tears in her eyes... thinking about the day when she left her...

HI. She listened a voice form backside. She turned in surprise... it was Astha...

Hello Madam... She stood up for Astha being junior...

Hey no formality... Astha smiled...may I sit here?

Ya, why not? Swati smiled...

Astha sat near Swati recollecting herself and finally spoke...I am shlok's friend...

Ya, I know, I saw you walking out after him and also all know about you two's friendship here...she paused a bit...

Ya we are best friends, just friends... Astha completed clearing her doubts...

A smile appeared on Swati's face listening just friends...

Why did you leave him? Astha asked directly...

Listening Swati had tears in her eyes, she lowered her head wiping her tears...

This all was my selfishness..i needed money...She spoke with hiccups...

Then why are you crying now? You have moved on in your life... Astha wanted to know what she want somewhere wishing in her heart she must have move don...

No, could not... I got money to save my ayii. But left my life at the place...my happiness lost that day only when I lost Shlok, When I saw him today, I understand , how much he hates me, but at least I can get his forgiveness...

Listening Astha thought for a minutes, this mean, whatever Anjali had told her was truth...

Let's go. Astha held her hand...

Swati was shocked...what Mam? I mean...

Its Astha... She smiled...now come...she almost dragged Swati with her to canteen...When three others sitting in the canteen looked towards them in shock... Shlok was about to get up from there, when he passed through Astha giving her killer looks. Astha held his hand nodding him not to go...he turned angrily...

For me? Astha made a puppy face... Shlok could not stop himself for Astha only from staying...

When Astha announced ta her table. Guys meet our new group member. Swati... I added in our group without asking you people, hope you don't mind. She asked Varun and Gauri...who gave her a smile...

Hi Swati. Its Varun...Varun forwarded his hand for hand shake... Swati smiled and shake hand...

Hey. Gauri... Gauri too shake hand... Astha looked towards Shlok. He nodded in no...

Shlok.. Astha shouted and signaled him. He just shake hand with Swati without smile without emotions...

Astha made her sit next to her near Varun, while she herself sat near Shlok...

So swati where are you from? Varun asked in order to start conversation.

Basically form Mumbai... then my mom was ill, so we had to move to Delhi...she replied with a smile.

But Swati, you were shlok's classmate na? Astha asked, but why are you our junior now? I mean... She left sentence incomplete...

Ya, I had to skip one year's study due to my mom's health,. She paused looking towards Shlok, but he was looking at table... after we left Mumbai...she completed

Astha gave Shlok assuring look indicating, I told you...

Where do you stay Swati? Gauri asked her to continue...

In hostel... She smiled.

Hey why don't you come at our place tonight for dinner? Astha took a chance... while Shlok pinched her arm angrily under the table...Astha gave him a look...

Me? But how will I? She looked towards Shlok for a yes, he didn't respond at all... when Astha intervened again...

No problem, Shlok will pick you from hostel...

What? Shlok was quite upset...

Yes, you will... Astha showed him eyes...

In no mood, he had to say yes...while Gauri held her head irritating on Astha...

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It was evening, Astha had complete all the preparation before going to her office, when Shlok came to pick her and drop to office...

Astha, what was the need to invite Swati? Shlok shouted ta her. I didn't say you anything as I didn't want to create a scene there...

For you stupid... She caressed Shlok's face...

But I don't need her in my life back...

Please give her a chance Shlok, for me...she made a puppy face, Shlok just smiled on her posture... Ok, I have done all preparation, just bit are pending, that Gauri will prepare, don't forget to pick Swati at eight. She ordered Shlok.

jo hokum mere akka...he bowed down with a smile after two days...but one condition. Rice will be mde by you only. Gauri doesn't cook it good...he twisted his mouth...

As you wish...Astha smiled while going out from the car.

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Shlok had picked Swati, he didn't speak even a single word with her, actually he was feeling quite uncomfortable with her...Swati tried to speak but he didn't reply even...

As they reached... Gauri and Varun welcomed her

Nice flat... Swati smiled...

Its shlok's, he has given us completely furnished...Gauri smiled...

Oh... she too smiled...

Know cooking? Gauri asked...

Ya...

Lets go to kitchen, most of food is prepared...lets prepare remianing...

Where is Astha? Swati asked. When she didn't find her...

She does job too na? She will be back by ten...Shlok drops her and pick her daily from job...(Gauri told Swati meaningfully making Swati to know how close they are)infact he doesn't like Astha to go alone ... he even has food only after Astha come back...

He stays here only? Swati was a bit shocked...

No, his flat is in next building, but most of the time, he has his food here only, he loves Astha's cooking...she knows his likes and dislikes very well...you must be knowing too na? Gauri taunted...to which Swati just smiled...

Oh its nine thirty, Varun, where is Shlok? Gauri asked...

How can he forget yaar, he has already left for Astha... Varun spoke...as they both had planned...

Ok, Swati, will you cook rice? Gauri asked..

Ya, why not? Swati said...and started cooking...

Gauri came with a smile...

Aj to dinner pe hungama hoga..., she is cooking rice... Gauri hugged Varun..

What? Once Swati will see his angry look, surely she will step back on seeing how Astha will handle him...Varun too smiled..

When Shlok and Astha entered the house...

Shlok, listen yaar...Astha pleaded.

Don't you dare to talk to me Astha... Shlok shouted on Astha entering the house...

Listening so much noise, Swati too came outside in the hall.. what happened? She asked casually...

When Shlok showed him finger. don't... Don't ever dare to speak between me and Astha...its Our personal matter and outsiders are not allowed to speak...Swati was shocked on listening, when Shlok held Astha's hand and dragged her to her room.

While Varun and Guari shared a smile... ab ayega majaa... they looked towards Swati...

What happened to Shlok? Swati asked...

Noting yaar, it's their daily routine... Astha must have done something wrong and he must be shouting. They keep on fighting usually. As Shlok is quite possessive for her and doesn't allow her to go anywhere without him, when they listened from outside...

Shlok? Astha tried to speak...but he didn't let her speak...

How dare you to come alone? With whose permission, you came alone outside your office gate? How many times have I told you to wait there till I reach...

Swati was shocked on shlok's possessiveness for Astha, (he was never so with me in our four years relation. Even I was his Girlfriend)

Gauri was noting change in expressions of Swati's face... she slowly went ear the gate and opened it a bit making Swati see the inside scene of room...

Swati looked inside...

Shlok, I am sorry baby... Astha was holding he rears...I thought you must be busy...she made a puppy face. That's why I took taxi...

Doesn't matter how busy I am, In last seven months, even once I missed to pick you? Shlok was looking a bit ok now...moreover could not you call me...you know I don't like you to travel by taxi that to at night...

I know, you didn't miss even once but I thought you must be busy with sw...she stopped immediately

So this is the reason...you think I will be busy with that Swati? You think, I can miss you for that girl? Are you nuts Astha? No one, I repeat no one cn be between us... Got it?... He shouted...

K, I am saying na sorry sorry sorry... now please cool down...Astha cupped his face in her hands...

Shlok cooled down and pulled Astha in a hug...Ok, promise me..you will never repeat it again...

Ok baba, I will never.. Astha smiled breaking hug,.. Now let's go, I am feeling hungry...

YA, I'm also Hungary, infact more Hungary.. You know how much energy I lost when I could not see you standing there... Let's go... Shlok wrapped his arm around her shoulder... and both came outside smiling...

While Swati had tears in her eyes... (Who says, these two are just friends... The reality is Shlok has moved on...)

Edited by jeenia123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
another awesome update
loved it
at first I got irritated how astha bought swathi to their group and making her go to shlok
but then the talk between varun ,,,, gauri ,,,, and astha made me understand y she is doing like that...!!!!
I love the way you write about each and every emotion,,,,,, feelings
shlok possessiveness about astha is beautifully described
varun and gauri are cute and their plan is nice
finally swathi realised shlok has moved on
but yet he didn't realise
continue soon
thanks for the pm😊
Edited by niki795 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
will comment latter...
right now going to sleep
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was soo good dear ...i am loving this ff so much that i m going to save it in my laptop for reading again and again...reading about astha shlok really makes me feel so fresh... u r a blessed writer...hats off 2 u dear and thank u so much for giving us this world's best story about friendship and love as i believe that friendship between 2 people is must for their good relation...thanks again dear
Edited by meerab147 - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: niki795

will comment latter...
right now going to sleep


good night dear...

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