We Found Love (Thread 4): ch. 81=Pg.141

sushmakryan

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Posted: 11 years ago

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virika-23

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Surbhi Jain

@surbhi1994

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Posted: 11 years ago

#353

Amazing update
Loved it
Mind blowing
Superb
Continue soon

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Nishtha Relan

@Nishtha.Relan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#354

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Di the update was
Speechless
Caring
Loving
Cute
Mindblowing
Awesome
Sweet
Romantic
Water scene
Joke
Masti
Out of tge world
Best write in the world ...
Di ur updates were to cute hayeee is meri jeevika preg ... Eeks cant wait for the surprise one two three... Di jaldo se dedo update cant wait... I know i should not say this bcoz i comment so late so sry... Par di seriously its superbbb and m really waiting for the surprise and the goa trip.. I wanna experice the romanticness of goa... I have never been to goa par kryan blow me off to go goa there pics and virika honeymoon hayee... And ur goa pics to so plshhh update jaldi seee
And thanks for sending me a pm... Continueee sooon eagerly waiting...
Love yaaa

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ashna1406

@ashna1406

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Posted: 11 years ago

#355

nooo!i hate suspense :(((

one two three u should have conpleted this part :((

hahahah the way viren was behaving with jeevika's changing behaviour was hilarious :P

continue sooon coz i cant wait for that secret to be revealed :P

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Kays94

@Kays94

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Posted: 11 years ago

#356

Chapter 59

v - "So now that you are dry, and seem to be in a good mood, can we talk about something"

j - "Not now"

v - "You're running away from something and you know I know"

j - "You know?"

v - "Maybe"

j - "What do you know?"

v - "You tell me what you're hiding"

j - "Viren"

v - "Jeevika"

j - "I'm not saying"

v - "Okay lets say it at the same time then. Ready?"

Jeevika nodded...

v - "One...Two...Three"

j - "Wait "

v - "What"

j - "Viren can we do this once we return from Goa?"

v - "Why?"

j - "Just because I just can't"

v - "Can't what?"

j - "I don't know. I need time right now"

v - "Time for what? I mean if you're pregnant... then you know I should know"

Jeevika's eyes blew up and she looked at Viren at shock. Viren didn't even realize when he had blurted out those words.

j - "You think I'm pregnant?"

v - "Uhm yeah. I mean that was the only explanation behind why you were acting to weird, and then"

j - "Then what" she said standing up

v - "Well when your dad and I went out together, he was telling he that we should start a family. And I thought that maybe you conveyed your message to your parents who in turn were telling me this"

j - "Wait a second. Why would I ever tell my parents to talk to you Viren? And anyways if I was pregnant don't you think I would tell the father of my child first?"

v - "Yeah, but"

j - "Okay, well lets get this sorted at least. I'm not pregnant Viren"

Viren breathed a sigh of relief. Jeevika in turn just smiled at him as she could see how stressed he was.

j - "Do you need some water? Someone seemed to be really panicked"

v - "No I'm fine. So if you're not pregnant, then what is it?"

j - "It's not that important"

v - "Hello, I'm your husband. I deserve every right to know"

j - "And you will know but just not right now. Right now we have to pack for Goa because our flight is tomorrow"

v - "Jeevika is it something serious?"

j - "Viren trust me please" she said holding his hand

v - "Fine, I trust you"

j - "Okay I'm gonna finish our packing and you go print out our flight information"

v - "I love you" he said kissing her cheek

j - "I love you more"

Next morning...

Viren woke up bright and early and went to shower waking up Jeevika before. As soon as he got out the bathroom he saw Jeevika sitting against the bed with her eyes closed. He went and sat on the bed and kissed her face making her smile.

v - "Sleepyhead, go shower. We have to leave in twenty minutes for the airport"

j - "Why? Let's just stay here" she said getting comfy in Viren's lap

v - "You can do this in Goa. Anything you say. Just please get ready fast or we will miss our flight"

j - "Ughh fine" she said getting up

Within sometime the two were finally off to their next destination, and probably the most awaited part of their trip.

v - "Jeevika wake up. We're about to land"

j - "Huh" she said waking up suddenly

v - "We're almost here"

j - "When did I fall asleep?" she said rubbing her eyes

v - "As soon as the flight took off" he said smiling "I told you to go to bed early last night"

j - "I was talking to my friends Viren"

v - "You can talk during the day, like normal people do. And sleep at night"

j - "Or I can be fun and not boring like you and do something"

v - "Why do you all complain of me being boring. You know I can be very entertaining and fun"

j - "Viren thats the funniest joke you have ever cracked since I met you. You and fun can never be used in the same sentence"

v - "Excuse me? I am very fun. You just don't know"

j - "I don't know? Me, Mrs. Jeevika Viren Vadhera doesn't know? Please give me a break"

v - "If the next three days we're in Goa and I make you have the time of your life and prove I'm the funnest guy to be, then you will fulfill my one wish"

j - "That's never gonna happen"

v - "Well if it doesn't then I will have to fulfill ten wishes of yours"

j - "Deal! We all know you're going to loose seriously. This is not your piece of cake Viren"

v - "You will see now"

j - "We will see" she said smirking

After another ten minutes, the plane landed and Viren and Jeevika were finally in Goa. They quickly got their baggage and left the airport.

j - "Where are we staying Viren?"

v - "Patience Jeevika. You will see in ten minutes"

j - "So why can't you just tell me"

v - "Honey theres a lot of things I'm not telling you. Remember I'm gonna win this bet of ours"

j - "Actions speak louder than words Viren"

v - "You have Viren Vadhera's word... Just watch and be amazed wifey"

Finally the two arrived at their resort. Not any resort, but the best one in Goa, Alila Diva.

j - "How in the world Viren did you manage to get bookings here especially right before New Years?

v - "See I'm already on a winning streak towards our bet. Someone is impressed by me?"

j - "Not going to lie, but I am quite impressed. But this doesn't prove your fun Viren"

v - "Atleast we're on a good start" he said holding her hand. "Lets go inside now"

Both of them went inside their resort and Viren went to the counter to get the keys to their room. Jeevika on the other hand was looking aroud seeing all the amazing facilities at the place. She was most excited about getting inside the pool with Viren. The pool and in the ocean. Kissing her husband at midnight. She was just getting excited by the minute and ran to fnd Viren.

v - "Ready to go upstairs to our room?"

j - "Yeah of course!!! I'm dying to get out and get to the beach. Lets quickly go drop our bags and change"

v - "You know Jeevika I got us a deluxe suite... do you really think we're going to come out of that room so early? And I told you before hand that you're under my control in Goa"

j - "Viren keep your naughty mind to yourself. I want to do my fun things too"

v - "Well you're gonna have fun, but more like Viren Vadhera style. Now lets move it" he said walking towards the elevator.

As soon as the elevator shut, Viren came in front of Jeevika whose back was against the elevator. He took her face in his hands and started pressing his lips immediately onto her. She slowly moved her hands to his waist trying to hold him tightly. She was loving the passion ignited him all of a sudden. Viren slowly moved his hands down to her back which sent chills down her body. This was the effect he had on her. With her clothes still on, his touch on her body just took her to paradise. As soon as they took a break from each other, Viren smiled at her knowing he was totally winning the bet. More than the bet he was loving his newlywed status which he hadn't enjoyed much of before. He scooped his girl in his arms and right as the elevator opened he took her out. Jeevika who was still in his arms, opened the door with the key card. Viren and Jeevika entered and Viren in the smoothest way possible shut the door with his leg. Viren placed Jeevika on the bed and said "Welcome To Goa my love."

Suspense is still not out yet 😆... Get ready for the next BIG UPDATE 😃 Enjoy and please do comment and like! Thanks ❤️

Edited by Kays94 - 11 years ago

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Marzii

@Marzii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#357

Yaaa I'm first babbyyy Be jealous Zainab aka nautanki, told u I will be first and not u muhahahaha 🤪 After so long I'm first on ur story peeni. Me missed all this 😃

Update was super long and super duper awesome. Oh my God, why is Viren so naughty and so good? I love him so much man 😳 He's so cute, just loving his naughtiness... They're in Goa finally, was waiting for this update for so long and finally here it is. Wonder what the suspense is?!😕 If she's not prego than what is she hiding from our handsome hunk Viren?😕😕 OMG the KISS in the elevator😲 So hott☺️Lol. Now I can't wait until the next update. Hope it's very soon, cuz I can't wait to read more of VIRIKA VIRIKA and VIRIKA. Thanks for the update peeni.. Love you loads and loads babbyyy

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Nishtha Relan

@Nishtha.Relan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#358

gonaa read it sooon ...

but looking so awesome di..

big update i am ready and di u get ready for this update comment a huge one.. if i could bcoz i always goes writeless and speechless.

Read and this is my reaction:

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Hayeee seriously loot gayi and mar gayi... i recieved a mail and its said private message from you my pyaari di, and i was so excited well i was in chinese class, and it was a free period i was happy that i could read and comment fast... and i did (shsssh dont let my teacher know) 😛

And here its goes reaction after reading the ur update:

The update was

superbbb

romantic

full of surpirsee (waiting for the big one eagerly)

cute

loving

sweet

love

virika

Goa (my dream place)

mind-blowing

out standing

out of the world

the best story WFL in this universe

suspense

Di, pata nahi how do you write so romantic update which maybe i can think but could not express and its a really hard work and hats off to you... muwahh... I am always speechless after reading ur update, i can read it more than 2 times, and i will feel so excited and cant express my feeling... it is always a pleasure to read ur update and waiting for a new update..

The way viren kissed jeevika in elevator was so cute and superbb se bhi upar romantic mar gayil.. (shy) very very shy.. i was actually reducing the size of the website when i was reading or else you know what will happen.. par koi nahi it was supperbb fun reading updates during free classes or boring classes.. haha .. to much of my buk buk.. i am stopping bcoz i noe i am writing with having grammar or silly mistakesss.. ..

DI continue soon and waiting for the surprise update very soon.. continue soon and i cant wait i hope you understand because it was so romantc 😆😆😆...

Thank for the PM and i love youuu di...

Edited by nishyrelan - 11 years ago

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