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Posted: 12 years ago
hi guys , so i have done a short update.. i have habit when i start something i complete it .I cant leave it unfinished .Don't know how many of my readers continue to read it.. .If you have read please comment or hit the like so i can understand how many are reading it,here is the next part-

part 15:

Jagya woke up early in the morning ,he started searching for the file which has got all the details of the medical equipement which he ordered few months back.For which he had to search his almairah.He just put the books on bed with out paying much care and some fell on the ground in the process. His room looked messy,"Where are you file??Now I am irritated to core,"he walked to otherside of the bed and just found a old photograph of him lying on the floor which might have fallen from his books .

"Hmm well i look quite funny here.."he smiled looking at his childhood chubby cheeks in the photo. He turned back just to find Ganga who was peeping into the photo with a cup of tea in her one hand and other hand she folded backwards as if she was hiding something and kept smiling at him,"why are you smiling from ear to ear? what's in this to laugh.."he questioned. She supressed her laugh but she failed big time, she handed one more pic of him which she found and left the room instantly.
"what the hell.. oh no Ganga,"he ran out of the room. "You shouldn't have payed this much attention on that picture of mine ,dear friend."he walked towards her room briskly.He knocked the door continuously and Ganga kept laughing in a controlled tone. "Mannu is sleeping so don't try this trick doctersaab"she said .
It was his childhood pic in which he was clothless. He was embarassed to top and thought how that pic has come out of the books.Then he recollectd the incident where he hid them or treasured them when he was leaving to medical college few years back.That days were difficult for him a pampered kid ,the ladesar he was and staying away from his family was a punishment to him and he missed his school days a lot.All his childhood memories flashed in his mind and he was overwhelmed.
The constant knocks stopped , Ganga was surprised, she opened the door and saw her doctersaab with tears almost the edge of his eyes."Doctersaab."she said and looked at him with her big eyes with full of concern, "Come I will show you my school.."jagya said. "What?!?!"she exclaimed. "But no one are at home.." she added.
"what they cant just leave like that without informing me and that at this time."he said ."what do you think the time is?"she asked because she was sure that he wouldn't have payed attention to the time.He looked at the wall clock which hanged on the wall infront of him. "God!! Is it ten at the morning? You know when I woke up at 4:30 . But where did all the people go?" he asked. "umm well dadisaa,kakusa, Nandu and taisaa went to visit temple in the next village.Kakusa and tausaa received a call and they also left , only you , me , mannu are here. Makhan kaka is busy for in preparation for the pooja tomorrow.
"Ok so what please Ganga it won't take whole day we will just go and roam around have that piping hot jalebis and return.I am asking it as a friend" he said. Looking at his childlike face which was full of excitement she couldn't say no. She asked Makhan kaka to take care of mannu till they come back. He finished his drinking tea and they left.
At the school:
Everything has changed ,the teachers ,the Head-Master, the whole furniture if there was anything familiar left in his was play-ground. "I was a good cricketer," he said observing all the changes in the school."Hmm... " she said and looked around, she felt something unusual as if someone were following her.Thoughts of Ratan singh's attack entered her mind . "What happened to you?"he asked her putting a break to his endless blabbering which was left unheard from his friend.
"Nothing you said jalebis.." she said for which he laughed. "Are you hungry?"he asked. " I din't eat anything since morining."she said ."why?"he asked for which she replied, "I thought both of us will have a breakfast together.. but.." she said.He dragged her to the stall when he heard this, "you are so stupid Ganga.." he said handing over the jalebis.She smiled on hearing his words."you are laughing , you are unbelievable.."he said.
A car stopped infront of him,"Hello Dr.saheb" Rajat singh spoke. "Ghani khamma.. collectersaab,"Jagya replied politely though he din't deserve it." You shouldn't be eating this roadside stuff, whatever it is you are from Haveli right.. no problem if common people eat it.."he said these words looking at ganga who was busy with her jalebis, she dint pay attention to his words at all.
"I know what should be avoided Rajatji, what about the Anandi's school?"he questioned."The problem and issues are resolved dr.saab , I have talked with anandi and she agreed."he said,"well i have to leave,"he added.
"Shall we go now.."he asked her.Well the new collecter's presence was enough to irritate him."Now.."she said with a low voice.. the jalebis were tasted too heavenly for her and why wouldn't they she was hungry for hours.. "Bhaisaa one more plate please.."he said and laughed looking at her, she pouted innocently but ended up smiling.
"You know Anandi's school problem is resolved." he said. "Solved cool , you were so worried right.. nice to hear that it is solved."she said."How you know that i was worries about the school?"he asked her in surprise. "Dr.saab you can't hide your emotions, what you feel for the person can be known easily just looking at ur face while you are talking to them."she said.
"Nice observation Ganga."he said. They returned home . Ganga ran towards Mannu, she kissed him on his forehead and took him upstairs.Jagya went to his room,freshed up himself and slipped into thoughts.The problem might not be school or troubling us but something more he thought about the collecter.
Ganga took out the her bag , since morning she had an unusual feeling, she held mobile in her hand and squeezed it thinking about the thought of Ratan attacking the haveli anytime.
"Wish i could talk to Ratna singh once.."she thought.
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so howz it?
Edited by sushiani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow Sush Great updatešŸ‘šŸ¼ Sigh i so wished Jagya would show Ganga all Jaitser including his school in serial but cvs never fulfilled my Wish but glad you did šŸ¤—
Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
sush,after a long time you updated...while reading it only sriti was in front of my eyes and thats a big thing...

This it getting so interesting...

Ganga saw dactarsa cloth less...naughty girl...šŸ˜†

waiting for the next one...and thanks for not stop writing...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sidra08

Wow Sush Great updatešŸ‘šŸ¼ Sigh i so wished Jagya would show Ganga all Jaitser including his school in serial but cvs never fulfilled my Wish but glad you did šŸ¤—

Loved it

thank you sidšŸ¤—
glad i fulfilled ur wish😳 but cvs are cruel
they just destroyed beautiful story of JaGan with their so called creative ckt sanchi🤢
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shankythebest

sush,after a long time you updated...while reading it only sriti was in front of my eyes and thats a big thing...

This it getting so interesting...

Ganga saw dactarsa cloth less...naughty girl...šŸ˜†

waiting for the next one...and thanks for not stop writing...

shanky yaarašŸ¤—
you know i have almost completed half of it and i returned from college sat infront of pc to complete it and sriti's exit news came i was likešŸ˜­šŸ’”šŸ„ŗ
sriti's face flashes everytime when i type ganga.. i managed to type few lines thank god atleast now
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update sush.. Read it with sriti as Ganga.. Beautiful..
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Posted: 12 years ago
sush šŸ‘šŸ¼ so he saw his old clothles photo šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
sush awesome update yaar
naughty jag an this track getting very interesting.
waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: saba113

Awesome update Sush

thanks sabašŸ¤—
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Libra123

Awesome update sush.. Read it with sriti as Ganga.. Beautiful..


thanks ramašŸ¤—

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